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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#251

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Nila

Oshadharon update.

Khub e valo.

Eto shundor kore chithi ta likha hoyese j ki bolbo.

Chithi ta pore monta khub khrap legese. mayank er jonno beshi kharap lagse. Eta khub e emotional & feelings niye likha ekta chithi silo. ALLAH e jane eto shundor vabe kivabe likhso.

Nupur keno erokom korlo? O jodi Mayank er shathe kono relation a jete nai parbe tahole shudhu shudhu pk phn kore Mayank er shathe kotha bole Mayank er moddho ekta alada feelings keno toiri korlo.

Amar keno jeno nupurer upor rag+ dukkho 2tai lagse.

Jei reason e hok ' nupurer erokom kora motei thik hoini.

Jai hok tumi khub e valo likho eta ami agei bolesi ebong abaro bolsi- u r awesome writer.

Ei ff ta shesh hoye jasse bole amar khub khrap lagse.

Kintu ekdin na ekdin to shesh kortei hobe.

Tobe ending ta jeno happy ending hoy. Tahole khub valo lagbe.

Taratari next part update koro.

Valo theko.

Faria..I knew, not only you but other readers may have the same question that why did Nupur lead Mayank into feeling such way especially when she knew that this would not go anywhere. I tried my best to portrait Nupur's position so that she is understood better. I guess after the last update, things will be a bit clear. So update coming up...soon 😊

-Neela

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-SharNeela-

@-SharNeela-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#252

~~~~~~~~ Part 15 (Last Part) : Her name...~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

A Month passed by since that letter had been read which shattered Mayank into pieces. He was not sure how to react! Should he be angry that Nupur left without giving a clear reason as to why she came into his life and left him incomplete like this! Or should he be hurt that the only person he loved unconditionally, without ever seeing or meeting her, just disappeared from his life, may be forever. Has he passed the initial shock of what just happened as it is beyond his belief and imagination that someone came into his life like a storm, filled his moments with happiness and hope and dreams and then quietly left one day as if nothing ever existed. Mayank spent many of these days constantly asking these questions to himself..why would she do that? Did he say something to push her away like this? Was it his fault or may be he has some shortcomings that she was not willing to live with! After feeling angry for a few days, he was actually feeling guilty surrounded by remorse that it was all his fault. The confusion, the hatred, the anger, the guilt feeling was grasping Mayank day after day. Eventually, he came to his senses and was brave enough to open that letter again. It was all coming back to him now'the city where he was living was Bangalore'the cousin Nupur was talking about was Suhaani, the only cousin he has there and he used to go and visit her all the time. No wonder why Nupur was in Suhaani's wedding'.Suhaani must know who she is then!! He quickly packs up and prepares for his journey to Bangalore'thats where all his answers lie.

Mayank is seen getting off a bus. Suhaani is visiting her parents from her in-laws house. He reaches her house and hits the door bell. Suhaani opens the door

S: arre..Mayank kaise ho tum? aur kaise yaad agayi hamari bhai?? tum to itna busy rehte ho..
M: Mayank smiles..
S: aao..ander aao.

They do the usual chit chat..have lunch together. Mayank has to catch the bus in the evening and he wants to talk about Nupur but is hesitant as to how he should start the topic. His time for the bus is approaching and thankfully Suhaani, after seeing Mayank in some sort of dilemma, initiates the topic.

S: mujhe pata hai tum kis liye yahan aaye ho per shayed woh sawal karne me himmat nahi jutaa paa rahe ho

M: nahi Suhaani..woh'.

S: I know. per tum usse ghalat mat samajhna. maine dekhi hai tumhare liye usska pyaar..jo sirf ek infatuation tha shuru shuru me, kaise woh usske dil me panapta gaya. kisiko baghair dekhe, baghair bataye aur baghair anjaam jaane iss tarha ishq nibhaana koi usse sikhe. tum usski zindagi ka pehla pyar ho..aur baaki zindagi bhi tum hi usska pyar bannke rahoge jab tak usska dil dhadakna na bandh hojaye.

M: per ussne itna bara dhoka kyun diya mujhe Suhaani?

S: jisse tum dhoka kehte ho main usse ek bebas dil ki aakhri tamanna kahoongi. har kisiko haq hai marne se pehle apne aakhri khwahish poori hote hue dekhe'ussne bhi apne ankahee jazbaat ko apne hi dil me daffnaane se pehle ek choti si iccha zaahir ki aur usse poora kiya. usska aisa chahna shayed ghalat ho'tumhare liye na-insaafi ho per jissne saalo saal apne saare armaan saare sapne tumhare liye sajaye aur sirf tumhare liye khudko sanbhal ke rakkha baghair yeh jaane k agar haalat ne saath diya hota to kya tum usse apnaate k bhi nahi'yeh jaanna usske liye shayed utna ghalat nahi.

M: (Mayank slowly nods his head down and asks) woh kahan hai Suhaani? main sirf ekbaar usse milna chahta hoon'poochna chahta hoon ke kyun aisa kiya ussne mere saath? main to usske pyaar ko apnaa leta aur woh yeh baat jaanti thee, to phir kyun aise mujhe chhorke chali gayee baghair kuch bataye..kyun?

S: Mayank'pichle saal usski papa ne usski engagement karwa di aur aaj se 1 mahine pehle usski shaadi bhi hogayi hai. usske kuch dino ke baad hi woh apne husband ke saath US chali gayi hai'she has left now.

Mayank could hear his heart break into millions of pieces. He turns away from Suhaani and starts walking like a lifeless soul. Suddenly Suhaani shouts from behind and asks..

S: Mayank'
M: hmm
S: Kya tum usska naam nahi janna chahoge?
M: usska naam mujhe pata hai Suhaani. I know her name..

Mayank starts walking towards the bus station.

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Epilogue

Love has many ways and many forms. Some of us are fortunate enough to have witnessed this amazing feeling that changes our lives forever. Some of us, on the other hand, are not that lucky. We fall in love but the fear of being rejected or being hurt sometimes creates so much fear and insecurity that you'd rather prefer to gather all your feelings in your small heart and prefer to live with those unspoken words for the rest of our lives. But life itself has its own plan'it will move on and will demand its dues in the right course of time. We have to pay back no matter in what form or shape. Nupur was helpless in life and in love. Her father, whom she obeyed and respected more than anything in her life, made a decision on her behalf which she gracefully accepted as she had no other option. But she had dreams of a life with Mayank'a life with happiness, joy and love forever'a fairy tale perhaps. How could she just let go of all these feelings that she has been storing secretly for years just because she had duties to fulfill as an obedient daughter? What IF, what IF she could confess her love to Mayank during the bangalore days, what IF in one of those rainy days when she was following Mayank, she would stop him and tell how she has been feeling for so many years AND above all what IF Mayank said YES and there life would be spent in each others arms for the rest of their lives'What IF? she wanted to know..and when she contacted Mayank and was getting to know him and observed him gradually fallling in love with her, for a moment she lived that life that she ever dreamt of. Now she knows that it was a dream that could have come true with so much beauty and joy. She was relieved that she did not waste her life being in love with Mayank'and now she can move on with her life just by knowing that she can continue to love Mayank as long as she lives because its another life in parallel, although she does not have, but it could have been.

Now I leave it to the readers to come to their own conclusion as to what has happened to Mayank. Some may just think that he came over Nupur and found his real Nupur and lived his life happily ever after with kids n all. Some may conclude that he could never forget Nupur and lived rest of his life with her imagination and pictures in his heart. Some may think that he did get married but always lived a parallel life with his Nupur, just like Nupur is living now.

THANK YOU VERY MUCH TO ALL THOSE WHO WERE WITH ME ON MY VERY 1st FF AND CONSTANTLY ENCOURAGED ME TO CONTINUE TO WRITE. LOVE YOU ALL'

-NEELA

Edited by neelresh - 15 years ago

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SunshineGirl6

@SunshineGirl6

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 15 years ago

#253

Nice ending.........felin bad 4 mayank....plz do write a new ff.........

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x.Heena.x

@x.Heena.x

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#254

Mayank knew her name?? what was her name?? i didnt get that bit....
can't believe it had a sad ending....mayur ff should have mayur together :((((((

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#255

Nilaaaaaaaaaa
ami jantam tumi ekta sad ending diba.
tobuo mon theke chassilam ekta ha happy ending hok
tobe sad hok r jai hok ending ta valo silo.
kintu beshi valo na- tumi amar mayur k alada kore diyeso-
rag korle naki? ki korbo tumi mayur k alada korso ekhon tou ektu ei dhoroner kotha shojjo korte hobei.
kintu nups er maynk k sere jawar reason ta amar kase khub silly legese.
eita kono kotha holo. nups or abbu k raji korate parlona.
maynk k shudhu shudhu koshto dilo.
r ami parallel life lead kora ekdom posondo kori na.
so ami nups k kokhono support dibo na.
tomi onek gilo shombhabonar kotha boleso- tar moddho amar prothom ta imagine korte valo legese.

Ei tumi new ff start koro- kintu ebar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz happy,sweet-sweet, lovely-dovely, cuty-shewty type. kisuta different try korte paro kintu mayur k alada koro na. plzzzzzzzzzzzz

onek lomba bhashan dilam
ekhon tahole nejeke thamai- ki bolo?????//
take care.
will b waiting 4 ur new ff.
valo theko

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#256

Great part.....But Mayur separated😭
You write very well....
Pls do write more....

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kulsumd

@kulsumd

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#257

Haey..dear
Aap ne ff ki gamgeen ending kar di.?mujhe pichli update padte hi shak hogaya tha ke ff ki sad ending hogi..par phir bhi thodi umeed lagaye baithi thi k thodi tho happy ending hogi...wel update vz nice n very emotional..suhaani ne to mayank k dil ki baat bina bataye hi samajh gayi.
.suhaani ne bahut achi tarah mayank ko nupur ke baare mein samjhaya...par nupur ki shaadi ki baat sun kar mujhe mayank ke liye bahut bura laga....
Aur finally aap ka ff ankahe jazbaat" ek adhure khawab ki tarah khatam hogaya..
Mujhe umeed hai ke aap bahut jald ek naya ff shiru karenge...

Kulsum