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Posted: 16 years ago
Okay....so this is the end...and I hav to say its beautifullllllll!!! I hav so many fav parts from this UD.....hehe.😆😆 Copy karte karte thak gayi hu...😆😆...and isiliye kuch aise hi mention karungi....😆😆


maine aisa kya kaha that u r crying more'


Firstly I loved this line.....It was sooooooooooo cute....and then he says...."He is more classy n smart"....how cute again!! I'm sure it wud be gr8 if this happened in the serial...😆😆....but then I love reading it here as well....😃😃

Now the confession part....the way they talk bat thinking 'seriously' n then skip the movie....but Nupur takes a promise that Mayank will give her the movie treat later on....and then they go to Marine Drive....Nupur compares him wid a tender coconut....but he points at being thrown away....😆😆.....it was alllllllll soooooo gr8 yaar.

I loved Nupur saying this:

I can read ur eyes and I know ur eyes have me in it'


And Mayank's ans was actually classy:

as u know I am smart and classy' I would love to have ur permission too'

I loved the way he proposed....and that revind wala part.....I really enjoyed it Bhoomi....all's well that end's well...and this end is extremely well....😃😃....Mayank's mom revealing all her planning n they celebrating their anniversary twice a year.....all soooooo gud na.😃😃😃

I loved this story Bhoomi....gr8 job dear!!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my GOD..this ff was 1 of the best ff i have ever read in my life...simple but sensible...i could conect reallyy well with our mayur...everything was so perfect....awesome..u r really a genius..gonna miss this 4 sure...
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Posted: 16 years ago

SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY... really dilse.. for such a delayed response..

5th Update:-
I really remembered that scene from Rab ne bana di jodi when the heroine (i forgot her name in the movie) rides the bike and Suri paaji was sitting behind her and holding her purse.. Man, I would love to see this scene in the serial too... with Nupz riding and Mayu sitting behind and enjoying the roller-coaster ride.. and yeah that dream where Nupz tells aunty about being a pillion rider with a guy.. is so damn sweet and adorable...
and I so loved the "odd and even".. "prime and composite".. together whole numbers till Infinity... bachpan ke din yaad aa gaye.. at tht time, i used to struggle with composite numbers when we learning this chapter.. Here I remembered that part of the song from Mere Haath mein tera haath ho from Fanaa
Adhoori Saans Thi Dhadkan Adhoori Thi Adhooren Ham
Magar Ab Chaand Poora Hain Falak Pe Aur Ab Pooren Hain Ham.....
PRIME UPDATE!!!
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY... see the number of sorry is increasing with every update too.. par srsly yaar..
6th Update:-
Yeah.. Shopping with Nupur Bhushan is a dangerous task.. and bargaining.. WOW!!!.. I love to bargain... and certainly.. sometimes, ppl alongwith me do have expressions like"OK-I-AM-NOT-WITH-HER".. but then in the end, I do end up buying the stuff at the price I bargained it for and not at the shop keepers rate.. and sometimes, bargaining is very much needed...So, i can sense that quality of Nupur and very well identify with her.. And even when I go to see a movie, I dont like to miss the ads also..
And the gift they bought of eachother.. one a chain.. without knowing that its the chain that's going to make their bond stronger and another.. a watch.. without knowing that this watch is going to be a proof for their timeless love.. which is so pure, and both of them just starting to realize and feel that love.. And sometimes, in silence you feel like talking so much and conveying so much.. but at the same time, words ditch us...
They are just starting to feel the love.. Song for this situation..
Pehla Pehla Pyaar hain, pehli pehli baar hain
jaanake bhi anjaana, aisa mera pyaar hain...
and then.. kya yahi pyaar hain, bin tere dil kahin lagta nahin.. waqt guzarta nahin..
This is just the perfect update and this feeling and the gift were no less than PERFECT!!!!
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
bhoomi this fic was really awesome loved it cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY........... kaan pakadke.... par dilse haan.
7th Update:-
Bhala ho sakta hain ki Nupur Bhushan ki baat karen.. aur woh abhi tak giri nahin.. PHD ki hain girne main... and that fall.. i knew it hurt both of them.. but somewhere I felt this fall was really needed to make them fall for eachother.. and that sprain and backpain really hurts man.. But the best thing I liked about the fall was the brief eye-lock they shared... I so love their eye-lock sessions... And again the sprain segment reminded me of the scene in the serial, where Nupz sprains her ankle and our Hero Mayu lifts her up in his arms and walks with her.. not breaking that intense gaze which both are deeply into. And then the way they both try to justify their acts in the name of friendship.. was just really cute... and the Bike Ride.. made me all smile.. i so love bike rides... I would love to see a bike-ride scene also in the serial...
Song I would love for this part:
Aankhon ki gustaakhiyaan maaf ho... ek tuk tumhe dekhti hain
jo baat kehna chahe jubaan, tumse voh yeh kehti hain.
Rocking Update!!!
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY - uthak-baithak karke.. par dil se sorry
8th Update:-
I can so understand Nupz feeling to hold him from behind and Mayu's longingness to be held by Nupz.. kaise ajeeb se daur se donon guzar rahe hain.. chup bhi nahin reh sakte aur mooh kholke bol bhi nahin sakte...
At this point, inke liye ek hi gaana hain mere dimaag mein:-
Gum hain kisike pyaar mein dil subah ho shaam
par tumhe likh nahin paoon mein uska naam.. hai raam
And the possessive Mayank is another trait i like in Mayu.. hez always like that with her... and that language Mayu used.. reminded me of Arjun Bijlani's character of ""AAlekh, he played in Left Right Left.. i haven't seen the serial.. but a few scenes.. and that Mayu learnt it from Shilpa Aunty.. shez the best mom in the world.. and yeah.. Mayu does get naughty and weird thoughts at times...
Superb Update!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
I finished reading it..........nd i must tell u i loved it 2 much 2 xplain..........that was soooooooooooo beautiful................plz plz plz do write more on mayur.........nd pm me if u do that...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY SORRY... kaan pakadke aur uthak-baithak ke saath. (tumhe aisa toh nahin laga.. mein yeh updates padhna bhool gayi).. agar laga toh bahut galat laga...
9th Update:-
Those school days.. with red/black ribbon and plaited hair.. is something I can never afford to forget.... and it does hurt when you see your beloved in tears.... and ner expressions do lite up his face.. and hez been in denial for such a long time... and I m so glad hez acknowledging his feelings for her and she also reciprocates...Its such a nice feeling to be loved by the person whom you love.. and I knew that Shilpa aunty was playing pranks with him so that they realize their feeling jaldi se and confess it at the earliest.. aakhir shez also Nupuz would-be-mom.. shez also filled with nautanki and masti just like Nupz... And the convo between them was something I would like to see in the serial.. emotional bonding!!
For the old golden days, I have a song,
yeh Daulat bhi le lo, yeh shauharat bhi le lo,
bhale cheen lo mujhse meri jawani
magar mujhko lauta do bachpan ka sawan
woh kaagaz ki kashti woh baarish ka paani
This was really THE UPDATE!!!
Edited by Divya_kaldivya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Aww..........Bhoomi.............lovely ff.............simply amazing...........

i loved each and every bit of it...............plz write more................

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