Mayur ff love at first sight. P18:Pg47 UpdSep22nd! - Page 6

Heyyyyy
Really nice ff
Mayank fell in love wid nupur without even knowing her
Plzzzxx cont soon
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Haye…..i am flattered with ur sweet comments……..with this happiness here is the 4^th part.

Part-4

Nupur is shy girl but she is very active and bubbly so she is helping her elders in marriage arrangements. She is shy only in front of boys and that to she wont make it obvious. Mayank is watching nupur all the day. Each and every time when she saw her she is busy in some or the other work. He was watching her continuously but she did not notice him not even once. She was so much engrossed in work. Even though he is convincing his heart " mayank tu baar baar us ladki ko aisa kyun ghoor raha hai, tumne zindagi mein pehli baar kisi ladki ke bare me socha so, concentrate only on that girl. Try to find out where is she….try to get the address of nupur….aur vaise bhi ye ladki muslim hai aur maa ka condition yaad hai na only traditional hindu girl. So find out where nupur is ya that what you have to do…" saying this he convinced his heart. He was getting bored so he is just roaming in the house. (Imagine morena house) as the house is very big and it is marriage celebration time. There are many works going on at one point of time. He is walking in the house and watching the children playing their games and without seeing he bumped into some one and he turned his head to see who is that and he screamed

M: gunjann….dekh ke nahi chal sakthi kya………

G: sorry jiju….wo kya hai na mujhe thoda urgent kaam hai is liye……

M: gunjan…mujhe pata hai ki tumhari shaadi ki tayyariya ho rahi hai…iska matlab ye thodi hai ki tum kisi ko bhi dakha maro and sorry bolo…………

G: jiju…please ab mujhe tang karna bandh karo maine sorry bola na………please ab hatiye ……..and she again said chalo dii….

M: oyee hello mein tumhara jiju hu…….vaise bhi tumhare didi ko aane ke liye thoda waqt lagega intezaar karna…….

G: she did not pay attention to his words and looked here and there trying to find someone …….and soon her eyes caught someone she screamed diiiiiiiii

G: diiii tum vaha kya kar rahi ho……….jaldi aao na…..

When she came towards gunjan mayank shifted his gaze towards the girl and shocked to find nupur…

M: diiii???........gunjan ye tumhari dii he kya?…

G: haan dii ye he mayank and jiju ye he meri sabse pyaari dii..aur iska naam hai…

Nupur spoke cutting gunjan in between

N: gunjan chalo na bohut saara kaam hai aur vaise bhi ye mujhe jaante hai aur mera naam bhi….hai na mayank……..she asked mayank to which mayank jus nodded his head in yes. Soon they went away talking to each other. Here mayank's position is worse…..he started thinking "agar ye ladki ka naam fathima hai tho ye gunjan ki di kaise ho sakthi hai…….kuch tho gadbad hai pata lagana hi padega……

Gunjan-nupur:

G: dii…….tum mayank ko kaise jaanthi ho…..vo tho engagement me bhi nahi aaya tha na tho tumne use kab dekha?

To her question she explains how she knew mayank even before the engagement because of that accident and she also tells that mayank mis understood that she is fathima.

N: pata nahi gunjan ye mujhe fathima kyun keh raha hai…….aur agar jab teri shaadi mein fathima aayegi tho use nupur bulayega kya.?...........and she bursts out laughing and gunjan also accompanies her………..

And she convinces gunjan not to tell her name to him and the reason because of which she wants to hide her name……

Here mayank is getting confused and decided to find out………..

When nupur and gunjan returned from their work they were going to their room and mayank called nupur from behind "fathima….fathima…." but she did not responded. So he ran and stood in front of them scaring them.

G: aap?...... aap aise kyun bagh rahe hai aur aise raasthe mein kyun kadhe hai……hatiye hame jaana hai………

M: ek min gunjan……..and he turned to nupur and asked her…….aapka naam kya hai?

N: aapko pata hai na………..phir bhi kyun punch rahe hai?….

M: haan mujhe laga mujhe pata hai magar aapka naam fathima nahi hai……aur aap bhi ye maan lijiye……….

N: haan mera naam fathima nahi he…..kush……chal gunjan………..

M: ek min. rukhiye tho sahi……….aapne mujhse jhoot kyun bhola?........

N: ha….maine……yaad kijiye maine aap se nahi bataya ki mera naam fathima hai na hi kuch aur…..vo tho aap kudh hi tair kar liya……..maine kuch nahi bola tha…she said confirming again. Aur aap tho kudh ko bade smart bhi samajhne lage the…..ku.ch…..yaad aaya…………

M: remembering everything how he concluded himself as a stupid……..he spoke…..haaaaaan………tho aap tho bol sakthi hai na ki aapka naam kya hai……..

N: main kyun bolu…..mujhe koi zaroorat nahi hai..and yes now also I am not going to tell my name and if u really want to know my name then find it out by yourself………you are so smart……….right? she said in a sarcastic tone making him regret his mistake………

M: ok main apne aap ko prove karunga ki main smart hu…..bet?

N: ok bet?.............she said without thinking anything……..aur kya hai bet…….

M: hmm….ab tho pata nahi magar bet jitney ke baad dekh lenge……….

N: done…

M: ok..done……

And mayank went away from there leaving nupur gunjan behind………

G: dii aapne ye kya kiya aapne bet kyun lagayi agar baad me kuch gadbad hogaya tho…….

N: kuch nahi hoga gunjan…..chal ab jyada pareshaan mat ho……….

Mayank pov:

Iska matlab ye ladki muslim nahi hai and on the top she is hindu and my going to be relative……… tho ab mujhe chance hai…….kya chance hai…….mayank you've lost it tumne kya decide kiya tha…….ki tum sirf aur sirf nupur se hi pyaar karoge aur usi ko apnaoge……magar kya karu…..ye ladki kuch zyadaa hi attractive hai aur upar se mujhe challenge bhi ki hai…….. oh god please help me……in ending up this mind vs heart war…….please help me……..

He immediately calls benji….

M: benji kaha hai yaar tu…..main tho idhar mar ja raha hu aur tune nupur ka pata lagaya ki nahi?

B: mayank……saans tho le……aur mein kal aa raha hu and nupur ke bare me kuch pata nahi chala…….

M: ok bye………he hung up the phone before benji could say anything……

He slept fighting with his mind and heart…………

Next morning…….

He woke up yawning, stretching his hands out and saw nupur entering his room with a cup of coffee in a tray………

N: good morning mr. ye lo coffee………she said handing him the cup

M: good morning miss. Mallika…….

N: what??....that's not my name you again failed……

M: jaantha hu…..ki vo tumhara naam nahi hai……..he said sipping the coffee……….vo kya hai na jab se maine tumhe dekha hai tum kisi na kisi tarah meri khayalon mein aake mujhe disturb kar rahi ho is liye maine tume apna manpasand naam rakha hai……..meri khayaalon ki mallika……he sang the song in a dramatic way shocking nupur……..

N: ohhh tho aap mujhe line marne ki khoshish kar rahe hai right?.........agar aapka yahi iraada hai tho SOCHNA BHI MAT SAMJHE……… she screamed in his ears and went away taking the coffee tray without waiting for the cup………..

M: wah……..mr. mayank Sharma……wah aaj tho tune kamaal hi kar diya…….aaj tak tune kisi bhi ladki ko aankh uta kar bhi nahi dekha aur ab bina kisi sharam ke tu us anjaan ladki se flirt karne laga hai??…..pata nahi vo kya soch rahi hogi tere bare main……….ab galti ki hai tho bhogtho……….ab use manana bhi padega aur uska naam bhi pata lagana hai…….hey bagwan please mujhe bacha le……….

He came out of the room after getting ready and started searching nupur……….suddenly he got an idea…… " samrat ko puchtha hu…..vo hi mujhe bata saktha hai ki ladki ka naam kya hai…………wah mayank tu tho sach me smart nikle".

He goes in search of samrat………..finally he got samrat.

M: samraaaat………

S: haan mayank kya kaam hai…………..

M: vo kuch nahi…….mujhe actually tum se kuch puchna hai………..

S: haan pucho……tum kab se mujhse kuch punchne ke permission lene laga hai…….

M: samrat tumhari hone wali saali ka naam kya hai?......he asked instantly…..matlab gunjan kid ii ka naam………..

S: ahem….ahem……..college ke champ……jo ladkiyo ko aankh utha kar bhi nahi dekhtha hai ………aur aaj vo kisi ladki ka naam punch raha hai……..chakkar kya hai dude…….

M: chakkar vakkar kuch nahi hai mujhe pareshaan karna bandh karna bandh karo aur mujhe ye batao ladki ka naam kya hai…..

S: ladki ka naam hai………….

Guys I am tired of typing and sorry for stopping here………and keep reading love at first sight to know whether samrat told nupur's name to mayank or not………..guys do comment and hit the like tab if u liked the part………and ya from next time I will update soon . I know I was a bit late this time……..sorry…dil se sorry………and bye………………

hey pls make mayu realize that her name is nupur....plz..great update yaar...

wow.......

Hi Neetu,
lovely update.
but its not fair-u stopped at crucial point
loved mayur convo and confused mayank.
but i m little bit confused why gunji called mayank as jijiu?


Awww so now mayank trying to find out nups name.
it seem interesting.
but ur update was wonderful
keep it up

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Neetu,
lovely update.
but its not fair-u stopped at crucial point
loved mayur convo and confused mayank.
but i m little bit confused why gunji called mayank as jijiu?


Awww so now mayank trying to find out nups name.
it seem interesting.
but ur update was wonderful
keep it up

hey actually dont know that what should we call husband's brother. so for my convenience i made it as jiju..but please do tell me what we will call such type of relationship.....please do tell me........

you call your husband's brother devar

lovely update
pls update soon
cant wait