A poem which may suit SR

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Okay guys I wrote this poem some 6 months back when I was in a difficult situation,but it really fits SR situation right now!
So thought of sharing
The tears ,The immortal tears drops unexpectedly as you go,
watching you leave this place,this land..ME for ever,for returning never
breaks my heart..breaks my soul in pieces you could never hold,
but wait I want to tell you atleast now...atleast today,
the reason you are my life and soul
don't stop me today cause I never know if again I will say,
the three words I wanna say,the three words my heart aches to betray,
I love you..please stay..please don't leave me in this world so stray,
I don't know if I"ll survive.
I wanna live,I wanna live once..
I wanna enjoy life as it comes..
Please give me a chance just this once...
Okay guys plz its a request don't turn it into a bashing post
but plzz give your views😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Beautiful Parul!


you're an awesome poet!👏👏👏👏👏


the words aptly describe Sid's emotions and feelings right now for Ridz!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, you wrote that😲👏

Thats beautiful yaar 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Amy,naksh fanatic and lennie🤗 I wrote that when I was feeling really really low!! and I still sometime cry while reading it!!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey,am Missy.am an AR fan bt i must say,u wrote this poem beautifully.

Thnx 4 sharing.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: MagicalKash

Okay guys I wrote this poem some 6 months back when I was in a difficult situation,but it really fits SR situation right now!

So thought of sharing
The tears ,The immortal tears drops unexpectedly as you go,
watching you leave this place,this land..ME for ever,for returning never
breaks my heart..breaks my soul in pieces you could never hold,
but wait I want to tell you atleast now...atleast today,
the reason you are my life and soul
don't stop me today cause I never know if again I will say,
the three words I wanna say,the three words my heart aches to betray,
I love you..please stay..please don't leave me in this world so stray,
I don't know if I"ll survive.
I wanna live,I wanna live once..
I wanna enjoy life as it comes..
Please give me a chance just this once...
Okay guys plz its a request don't turn it into a bashing post
but plzz give your views😳

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nice creative skills
Edited by abhinickiluv - 16 years ago

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