*Love All the Way* (RM&YuNa ff) part3pg13 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: flamingo_aries

⭐️gud start pari...!! 👏update soon dear..!!! looking forward for ur lovely ff...!!! all d best..!! lv ya..😊

aww thanx for the comment maithz
will be updating soon
luv
pari

Originally posted by: Love_RM_MAYUR

lovely.....i loved ur intro.....its really nice that u decided to write ff shona.....love u......continue soon..........

thanx appy for the comment means a lot😊
luv
pari

Originally posted by: karangrover4eva

OMG bestie this is awesome =)) all the best love u heaps

aww thank u bestie😊
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Edited by pari_smile - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Love the intro!!

Do continue soon and please PM me!!

thank u for the comment radhika😊
will surely add you
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pari

Originally posted by: anjananazir

heeey my little sister🤗,

loved it the character sketch great job👏..please cont soon and don't start singing in your FF also😉...Love you...

aww thank u for the comment big sis🤗
updating soon.... hmm not singing bohut mushkil hai mere liye😆
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pari

Originally posted by: princessuma

Pari!!!!!! the intro sounds fabulous...I can't wait to read it....aww lol two of my favourite couples in one ff...lol I know I am going to love this!!

continue soon :P

thanx for the comment sumiiii😊
updating soon
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pari
Edited by pari_smile - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Starry_night

Hey pari,

The intro. is too good.....can't wait to read it....and it has two of my favourite couples in it.....continue real soon and add me to your PM list.😃

thanx for the comment pri😊
will surely add you
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Originally posted by: ilive2laugh

omg pari RM and YUVNA????

god i love you for this! lol sumi and i were
suppose to write one as well and we did...but then
i dont know where it is
thank god you have decided to write on RM and Yuvna lol
great intro! cant wait for your first chapter....update soon :)

aww snehu thanx for the comment😊
ya i luv RM and YuaNa
will cont real soon
luv
pari

Originally posted by: hunder

heu pari i didn't knew that u also write FFs, now do add me in ur PM list

bhaiyya yeh mera pehla ff hai😆
will surely add u
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pari

Originally posted by: ibdt2004

awesome pari! nice character sketch! :D

cant wait to read more!

thanx for the comment shilpa di😊
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Edited by pari_smile - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
Hey guys thank you all so much for the lovely comment🤗
Here's part 1 hope you all like it

There are two beautiful girls sitting on a swing in a very big backyard. It had all types of flowers, the girls were in some kind of a conversation. One was wearing a simple white and black colour salwar, her long curly hair tied neatly in a pony, whereas the other girl was in a jeans and top drying her wet hair.

G1: India aane ke baad bhi kuch adhura sa lagraha hai...I miss our life back in Australia.

G2: Are muski di aap aisa kyun kehrahe hai, we will get used to this life tooo aur waise bhi aapko tho hamesha se India aana tha na. So now we are here...

M: Mera matlab woh nahi tha naina I mean mamma pappa ki bohut yaad aarahi hai...

Naina stops drying her hair and becomes really upset, she really missed her parents, but tried hard to forget what happened in the past and move on. She knew that her di was more emotional than her and she would find it really hard to forget the incident that changed their lives forever. Their parents died in a car accident a year ago, and even though they tried hard living in Australia they felt very lonely so shifted to India a week ago to live with their bhaiyya and bhabhi, whom they never met before but just talked through phone. They were the only family they had left now, and luv them a lot.

Muskaan thinks : uffo phirse isse dukhi kardiya na maine. Muski tu bilkul pagal hai woh teri choti behen hai aur usse khush rakhne ke bajaye tu usse dukhi karrahi hai. Jo hua usse bhulja, aur waise bhi mamma kehti hai na ki jo bhi hota hai ache ke liye hi hota hai. Ab jaldi se kuch soch usse hasane ke liye.

M: Naina johua hum uske baare main kuch nahi karsakte hai, lekin ab mujhe bohut bhook lagrahi hai, aisa lagta hai ki pet main woh kya kehte hai...kuch daud rahe hai

Naina knew that her sis was trying to make her smile, so she put all her thoughts behind and smiled

N: choohe di choohe, tho phir chaliye na breakfast karte hai.

They both hug eachother and go inside. When they were together they always managed to bring smile on eachothers face when one was upset.

Meanwhile in a park two handsome guys were exercising. Oh wait it seems like only one of them is exercising the other is busy flirting with the girls passing by. One of the Guy starts running behind a girl when the other one pulls him back.

G1: Oye rahul tum kaha jaarahe ho uske peeche?

R: offo yuvi buddy dekho she feels as if she is so lonely so usse company denejaraha hun.

Y: oh common grow up rahul yeh flirting and alll....

R: hey main tumse bada hun so i shld be saying ki grow up yuvi, aur yeh flirting nahi hai I am just trying to be friendly... see I have a very friendly nature (gives his big cute smile which can make any girl go head over heels)

Y: jst by8 months, aur waise bhi agar bade ho then why do u flirt and before u again say ki thats ur so called friendly nature tho jaha thak main tumhe jaanta hun u r only friendly with girls.

R: Are yaar flirting ya friendly woh sab chodo u have to try it sometime...main tumhe sikhanunga big bro teaching his young one how to flirt ...umm i mean be friendly seriously u need it hamesha itna serious jo rehte ho. (rahul hits his shoulder and says it)

Yuvi is just giving rahul his angry young man looks

R: Dude chillax yeh tumhare angry young man looks na mujhpe work nahi hone waale hai.....

Ooooo look at that girl isnt she soooo....

Y: Dont even go their rahul (starts pulling rahul out of the park) Actually na kalse tum ghar pe hi exercise karo, yaha tum exercise kam aur flirting

R: are phirse flirting friendly....

Y: yaya wahi friendly nature and alll (he rolls his eyes, sometimes his bro can be soo childish)

R: I dont mind humari padosan hai na Rita main usse company dedunga (starts laughing and running away from yuvi and shouts) common buddy race you to the house....

Yuvi smiles at rahul and talks to himself: Tera kuch nahi hosakta, tu mera bada bhai hai ya main tera .

Edited by pari_smile - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Hey cool part di .

Muski and Naina part was a bit emotional and Yuvi and rahul part was really funny .

Do cont soon and thanks for the pm .

So this time I am the first one to comment .
Edited by nihakapoor - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

awesome pari

continue soon
i loved it!!!
it was awesome fantastic
niha u r the first to comment anyways no probs i m second
radz chal is baar bhi first comment nahi hai tera
niha ne first comment kar diya
lolzz
aur pari bangalor wali aur aus wali was funny
llz
@pari it was awesome@@!!!
well i m second to comment!!
no probs but again it was awesome
and continue soon
and pm me!!!
Edited by kajenfanpari - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice part pari....................update soon and send me a PM





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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesum blossom pari..........😃
well written........
yuvi-rahul part was so 🤣.🤣........................
very short update.........lolz!!i want to read more...
continue it soon!!😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Pari.....awseome update !!!
Muski-Naina part was so cute.....and Rahul-Yuvi one was funny......lolz.....he is being friendly with the girls and Yuvi trying to stop him from doing so....I just loved the way you have portrayed the love of the sisters and the brothers for each other.....so sweet !!!
Update soon and where is my PM...lolz..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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bestie this is awesome i loved it...keep continuing =)) xx

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