'Mom with U' ' Maa Oo Maa'page 80 - Page 56

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Khushi har gam ka chaader ban use dakhti hai,
Vishwas rakho zindagi khubasoorat bansakti hai.

Gam ka andhkar Bhi tab mitt jayega,
Bheeter mann pyaar paker nikhar jayega.
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awesome , mind blowing , great , superb , amazing , super cool

I am glad to read this poem this is true vishwaas mein hi jeevan hai aur jo log vishwaas ko apne andar zinda rakhte hai wi hi aage badhte hai .

Thank you Bhoomi My Sweet Friend & Sis You Make Me Proud Dear you are amazing writer 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Ohh....that was another lovely one Bhoomi!! Pata nahi tum itni achhi baatein kaise karti ho....aur usse bhi zyada achhese tum inhe poem ka roop deti hu....ab tumhara kya kehna yaar.....u r giving me tough tym wid adjectives....hehe. But it was awesum dear.....and I hope even this small saying of mine...conveys to u....how gr8 a writer u r!! Keep it up dear!!

Originally posted by: ssh57

Hi Bhoomi,
Rightly said, everybody's life has moments of joy and sorrow. Don't fret over the sorrows but rejoice the happiness, then life will be worth living.
Love ssh57.

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi bhoomi !!

i guess I missed to comment on previous one....

ummm....sorry yaar...kabhi kabhi aalsi hojati hoon...😛

comingt to this poem...

Well it was superrrb !!!

looking at the title, i thought it is something which had description of immense grief,pain and sorrow only...

But I loved the way it potrays ascent from darkness to light !

It does have grief....but it also urges one to have positive outlook and wait for a new dawn, that breaks after every dark night !

Dont know why , while reading this I was reminded of an incidence...It was, when I was just 10 yrs old...

I was attending "a Shivir", religious preaching you see...

When the afternoon session was going on, a peon there came running, and blurted out that a boy in the neighbourhood had hanged himself...

he was just 20 yrs old, a very nice human, who had seen tough times since a year since his father's death...

After the things sank through us and matters were sorted out, the preach there told us something similar....I dont remember exactly, since I was just 10 yrs old...and he also made us take oath, that whatever happens, we would never resort to this suicide thingy, coz we have no right to destroy something, god has bestowed us with....

Couldn't help mentioning this here, as even today I shiver at the remembrance of this incidence and cant help myself from asking, "Only if he had been little patient....he would have been alive today !"

I think i should end my bak bak with something....

" Kuch paakar khona hai,

kuch khokar paana hai,

Jeevan matlab toh,

aana aur jaana hai.

Do pal ke jeevan se,

Ek umr churani hai,

Mat kho iss anmol tohfe ko,

Ishwar ki den yeh pyaari zindagani hai !"

Originally posted by: seema.mittal2

Heyyyy bhoomi
Really amazing poems
Thanx for pm

Saath Jeevan Beetau Kadam Milau

Jeevan tum sang mujhe Bitana hai,

Isey Faydaa Nuksaan sey nahi jodna hai,

Jab tum sang ho, to sab kuch Mumkin lagta hai,

Tumbin har pal kantaa banker chubhta hai….

Jaanti hun tum saath to mere chalogey,

Har kadam thahar kar hi sahi saath jarur dogey,

Tumharey pairo ko baisakhiyon ka sahara lagta hai,

Mere manobal ko tumharey prem , vishvaas ka sahara rehta hai….

Mere Kadamo mey Raftaar hai,

Tumney daud mey peechey rehna kar liya Swikaar hai,

Peechey rehkar dard, gussa, majburi ,intezaar sab tumney dekh liya,

Suljhey dimaag, majhboot iradey sey manzil paakar hi dam liya….

Mere kadmo ki raftar pairoo key nas sey judi hai,

Dhadkan ki raftaar tumharey Dil key taarr sey judi hai,

Apahij pati hai , kehkar log kyon daya dikhatey hain,

Hastey, ungliyan dikhatey log, meri nafrat key patr ban jatey hain….

Pati sang chalney mey mujhey Khushi , garv aur thodi laajj Aati,

Sharabi kadam nahi ,jo sharmindagi mehsus hoti,

Sakhiyaan sawaal karti ,"woh tumhey bahon mey uthakar nahi chal sakta",

Main kehti ,To kya huaa Apni bahoo mey samakar palko par bithakar jo rakhta….

Saheliyaan Prash karti, " Aanand avsar par Langad to sakta hai Naach kar khushi vyakt nahi kar sakta,

Main kehti, "Kisi key liye who langadtey kadam hain, mere liye wah anand ki sargam hai,

Mere har harsh , ulhas unhi ki dein hoti hai,

Unkey shabdo mey geet, haath thamey hum to bajta prem sangeet hai….

Kadam holey hain lekin shram veeliin rehtey hain,

Pyaar aur dosti ko har rishtey mey Aham samjhtey hain,

Kadam hamarey ek hi disha mey,

Rahftaar ek barabar jab chaley haath thamey….

Tum sang Saara Jeevan bitau main,

Har kadam tumhey aur bhi chahun main…

………………………………..Bhoomikauttam