I love u too much to lose u(Rajeev-FF)LINK Pg-147 - Page 98

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Hi sumaiya..how r u dear?? Hey Shona....I'm f9....how r u?? see again i m late..sorry... 😔 Dont be dear....main kaunsa super fast hu???😆😆 Dekho....tum late comment karti ho...phir bhi mere UD se pehle karti ho....so this implies to wat....u realize na...😆😆
update ws sooooo lovely..So finally the engagement is over.... liked Asmi-Ayaan's scene... soo romantic..ayaan is really v romantic than Asmi's imagination...!! 😳 Awe......I'm glad u liked the update n the slight romance of Ayaan-Asmi....I've tried my best wid the romantic thing....and am glad u liked it.😃😃
So Ayaan took Asmi to meet her papa.. so nice of him..n Asmi accepted her dad again.. thanks to Ayaan...!!! Yeah.....Ayaan was a sweetheart in that case....and in every other case as well....😆
woww..so Mr. Ayaan Rathod ke paas words nahi hai Asmi ki taarif karne ke liye..but asmi likes it.. his own style... 😉 Yeah....finally Mr. Ayaan Rathod is speechless....but u put it correctly....Asmi likes this unique style of his!!😃
their lovely dovely convo on phone ws so sweet..!!...hmmm.. newly engaged..!!!! Yup....may be thats why u found the convos so sweet....😆
fantastic part..Thanks dear....😃pls continue soon... 😊



Thanks for ur sweet comment Shona....I'll be continuing soon dear.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Reply for Part 25:

Hi Sumi...Whoa Guglu....I actually thought u hav replied wid that Esha comment only....😆😆....HII anyways....😆😆

I know m late par wadaa kiya tha so came back with the replies. Atleast I can say that I hv kept my word. How sweet of u....😃😃

Okay... I will start with Ayaan...Arre wah....tum bhi meri tarah Ayaan (Raj) se shuru karne lagi....😆 Though now I know ki Ayaan aor NS ke bich kya baatchit hui thi par iss part ko padhte wakt mai wakai mai ye soch rahi thi ki Ayaan ne aisa kya jadoo kar diya apni hone wali saas par ki wo iss rishte ke loye maan gayi...Yeah...and I was so tensed thinking tum logo ko wo convo achha nahi lagega....😆😆Waise Ayaan to hai hi jadugar...Truly said...😍 Loved the convo between the mother and the daughter. Pehli baar NS ka itna affectionate rup dekhkar acha laga.Yeah....maine kuch hostile kar diya tha I guess...😆

Mauli aur Asmi ka convo bhi bahut badhiya tha but what I loved the most was Asmi's confidence on AYaan and at the same time her concern for him. Awe....I'm glad u liked it...😃

Mauli herself needed an assurance and then invited their senior for the engagement. Lovely...Thanks dear...😃

Asmi is waiting for Ayaan.... I know the wait will stretch long...Yeah....u knw it all now...😆

Finally Ayaan was back in his house which had been been his home. The entire scene was so beautifully penned down that it literally brought tears to my eyes. Awe....i certainly donno if I shud feel happy abt that....😕All the flashbacks of Ayaan and his convo with the picture was so nice and heart touching.I;m just glad it cud touch ur heart....😃

But even in midst of that he didn't forget to send the ring... I loved him for that... though I love him for everything...U knw wat Guglu....mujhe ye reply padh kar laga as if main kisi aur k fic pe reply kar rahi hu....😆😆.....coz even I say "I love Raj for this/that"....and then I say...."I Love him for each n evrything"....😆😆....wat to do yaar....we cant help it ryt??😆

26th part ke baare me kya kahun... jab bhi likhti hun Esha aur Priya ke comment yaad aa jate hain aur mai itna hasne lagti hun ki kuch likh nahi paati.Hehe....I can understand that much😆😆....and sach kahu...Priya is always soo sweet n funny wid her comments....but I was surprised wid Esha's comment...she was reallllly sweet wid that....😆😆 With htis I hv caught up with ur fic... Right??? I never thought u r behind....😆

Okay now update soon...

Love
Guglu



I seriously shud salute ur patience yaar....u managed to comment on part 25.....I mean....uss part me kya tha kya nahi....ye janne k liye u had to go thru that page once na....so much patience yaar....hats off n thank u soooooooooooooo much!!😃😃 And yeah.....I'll be continuing soon.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

hiiiiiiii dear,Hey Madhu....was missing ur comment hehe....😃😃

main late jarur ho gaayi hu, but I am back, u know the reason naa.Yeah....and its perfectly alryt!!😃
wow,wow,wow
update was outstanding,kya likha hai yaar Thank You....it feels nice to read such praising words...😃😃
amazing,
dil ko chu liya tune, actually u know one thing, main naa bilkul romantic nahin hi, log kehte hai mujhme emotions ki kaami hai,
but honestly dear it touched my heart Ahh....then thats a huge compliment for me....😃😃....thank u sooo much dear!!😛
Ayaan & Asmi's scenes were fantastic
very cute & romantic
beautifully written
completely exceptional Awe.....am glad to hear that....😛
superb update
great going
zyada kuch nahin likhungi,tu samaj le hehe....maine samajh liya....u dont worry....apne bare me achha achha sochna mujhe achha lagta hai....😆
continue soon



Thank u for sooooo many adjectives....of course gud ones...😆😆....for me!!! And am glad u cud make the comment!! Am continuing soon anyways!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

hey Sumi Hi Sur....I was abt to quote ur reservation yaar....how cum u r always on tym??😆😆

great update! Ayaan is such a sweetheart! although ye baat kafi obvious hai fir bhi likhna achcha lagta hai na! Hmm....ye to aisi baat hai jo bolna aur likhna hamesha achha lagta hai....and we can never get tired of repeating the same....😍
It was really thoughtful of him 2 take Asmi 2 her dad. Now she can start her new life without any second thoughts or regrets, however deep they maybe. Yeah....its necessary to get rid of past guilt or regrets....if u wish to start afresh!!😃😃
the way he tried 2 lighten the atmosphere was superb. When she kissed him, uska reaction was like- ab mai kya kahu? ye koi aam insaan nahi, Mr, Ayaan hai! Hehe....I'm glad u thought it was 'khaas'....😃😃
Finally Asmi ne chaandse zyada importance dena sikh lia. uska call bahut cute tha.Yeah....she finally gave him more importance....😆😆....and am glad u thought the call was cute....😛
aur ek baat batao, tumne sari dates mujhse pooch ke rakhi hai kya? cuz i cant remember telling them 2 u! 26th mere uncle ka birthday hai. now thats coincidence! Awe....ye to sach me co-incidence hai yaar....6th was ur bro's bday....and now 26th ur uncle's....😆😆....waise 26th ko PGKS release hone wali thi na...so I chose it....😆😳😳😳....and its also our Independence Day!!!😃
Ayaan Asmi ko jhatke dene ka koi mauka nahi chodta seems like- shadi date nahi like letter me? god! Hehe....thats our jhatkedaar Ayaan....apni shaadi ko lekar mast hai....jisse shaadi karni hai usiko nahi bataya.....😆😆....one piece hai na ye??😉😉
Ayways shopping trip remains an interesting thing 2 look forward to- I hope Ayaan ko zyada maar na pade Arre nahi nahi....mere rehte usse kuch nahi hoga....I'm one of the most biased persons of the world....when it cums to Rajeev!!😳😳😳
now us asap(mujhe pata hai tum karne wali ho ;) Yeah....it will cum up soon....😃
tc
bye
Sur



Thanks for commenting Sur....I was like....ab ye reservation quote karne hoga😆😆....but u were on tym....glad abt that dear!! 😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
@Tina (tina_1234), Sruthi (psruthi), Esha (esha143) & Surya Dii (sun_423):

Thank u soooo much for reading the part n liking it guys!! It was really encouraging for me!! Thanks!!😃

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part # 29

Its morning tym…..and after breakfast Asmi is kinda w8ing for Ayaan……as she knws he'll be cuming to let the others knw abt his shopping plan!! She is looking at the door in intervals while they were all sitting in the living room. Now Asmi's non-attentive nature was not supposed to be missed by Mauli….

Mauli: Asmi….baar baar darwaze ki taraf kyun dekh rahi ho??

Asmi: Main?? Main kaha…

Kinjal: (cutting her) Kisika intezaar hai kya??

Nishant: Asmi….tum to desperate ho gayi ho yaar!!!

Mauli: Hmm….kal puri shyam 'unhike' saath to thi…..phir bhi dil nahi bhara? (she stressed on 'unhike')

Asmi: Ab do mahino ki kasar ek shyam me kaise…(she suddenly blurted out in irritation as they were trying to tease her….but then she quickly stopped realizing wat she was saying)

Mauli: Arre….ye kya?? Ab tum bhi Ayaan ki tarah jawab de rahi ho……ye to bahut ghalat baat ho gayi….ab kya hamein khichayi ka mauka tak nahi milega?

Ayaan: Not in this case Ms. Dutt!! (he said this just entering)

Nishant: Achha hua tum aa gaye…..bas tumhari hi kami thi….

Ayaan: I knw….isiliye to aya hu….(he smiles looking at Asmi while she blushes) Waise….aunty kaha hai?

Kinjal: Kya baat hai…..aaj kal ate hi….mom k bare me poochhte ho….wo bhi Asmi se pehle….

Ayaan: Arre iska bhi reason hai….pehle batao aunty hai kaha??

Mauli: Bad luck Mr. Rathod….wo ghar pe nahi hai…..(Ayaan gives her a not so pleased look)

Kinjal: Yup….Samay aur Mom…Dad se milne gaye hai….(she says this looking consciously at Asmi…..but to her surprise Asmi was smiling)

Ayaan: (to Asmi) Tum mujhe bata nahi sakti thi kya?

Mauli: (even before Asmi cud speak up) Ohh….to aap dono me already baat ho chuki hai?

Ayaan: Of course….tumne kya socha tha…..hamein mobile use karna nahi ata??

Kinjal: (shaking her head) U r impossible Ayaan…..waise tum kuch loge kya?? I mean breakfast kiya bhi ya nahi?

Ayaan: Haan haan…..kar liya Beautiful…..warna tumhari nanand mujhe phn k thru hi maar dalti….

Mauli: Ab kaam ki baat kare? I mean….yaha kis liye aye ho??

Ayaan: Arre wah….kya tone hai poochhne ka!! Dekha Beautiful!!

Kinjal: Okay Mauli….Mr. Handsum ko pareshan nahi karte….(she says this as if scolding a child and then turns to Ayaan) But Ayaan….even I want to knw….actually tum kaafi tayyar hoke aye ho to…

Asmi: (murmurs) Shopping pe jane k naam se hi tayyar hone lagta hai….huh!!

Ayaan: Actually…

Just then Samay n NS (Nitya Shergill) enter….

Samay: Hey Ayaan……wats up??

Ayaan: As of now….everything is up……(and they embrace after which Ayaan goes to NS) Namaste Aunty…..(and he touches her feet)

NS: Jeete raho beta…..(and she blesses him….but then quickly goes to her room)

At this every1 became a lil worried…..

Ayaan: Kya hua Samay?? Any problem??

Samay: Arre nahi….its just….(after a pause) she is f9….

Ayaan nods his head…..but then gives a look to Asmi which told her to follow NS……and she did that…..most willingly!! After sumtym Asmi returns from NS's room…..and assures Ayaan thru eyes that everything was f9.

Asmi: Achha guys….we need to get ready….abhi hum shopping pe jaa rahe hai…

Nishant: Shopping kyun??

Mauli: I just knew it….ye sawal sirf tum hi kar sakte ho….arre shaadi ka ghar hai….shopping nahi karenge to aur kya karenge?? Kitne betuke sawal poochhte ho tum!!

And she leaves to get ready while Nishant keeps standing quite confused. Every1 else were just giggling to see his face….

Ayaan: Don't worry….ye koi bahut badi baat nahi hai….wo kuch aisi hi hai….u go and get ready…..(and now looking at Asmi) am w8ing!!

And then after 15 minutes Asmi returns getting ready!!

Ayaan: Arre kitna waqt ho gaya….ek dress pehenne me itna tym lagta hai kya??

Asmi: (raising her eye-brows) Mr. Ayaan Rathod ye baat keh rahe hai??

Ayaan: (looks down embarrassed) Arre akele akele w8 kar raha hu…..bore ho gaya tha yaar…..lekin pata nahi sabko itna tym kyun lag raha hai??

Asmi: Abhi bas 15 minutes hue hain Ayaan….wo to shukr manao main jaldi aa gayi….

Ayaan: Isme shukr manane wali kya baat hai….I mean….mujhe to pata hi tha….tum jald se jald mere pass aa jaogi….(he winks and tries to hug her)

Asmi: Tum na aaj kal bahut badmash ho gaye ho……kahin bhi kabhi bhi romance karne lagte ho….

Ayaan: Kya karu….tumne bataya hi nahi tha…romance k liye ek special jagah hai….aur waqt bhi…. But don't worry…..aage se ghalti nahi hogi……(he says sarcastically)

Asmi: Gosh……baccho jaise naraz kyun ho rahe ho??

Ayaan: Ab tumhe isse bhi problem hai?? Hey Bhagwan……ab kya hoga?? Maine to suna tha biwiya shaadi k baad badal jati hai……lekin meri wali to sagai k baad hi….(and he starts his drama to which Asmi cant help laughing)

Asmi: Ayaan….stop it baba!!! Tum na……

Ayaan: Pata hai…..bahut drama karta hu….(and he suddenly pulls her closer)

Asmi: Ayaan….koi aa jayega…

Ayaan: Tumhare ghar me ye 'koi' kaun hai?? (he gives a naughty smirk)

Asmi: Tumse baat karna hi bekaar hai….(she looks away to hide her blush)

Ayaan: Achha baba….(leaving her) Abhi no badmashi….tum baitho aur batao Aunty se kya baat kii?? I mean….wat happened to her??

Asmi: Nothing…..its just…wo Dad se milne gayi thi na….to unhe bahut achha laga ki tum mujhe kal Dad se milwane le gaye the….

Ayaan: Ohh…this means she was emotional….

Asmi: Hmm….waise Ayaan….even I must thank…

Ayaan: (cutting her immediately) Asmi mujhe paani mil sakti hai kya?? (she smiled as she knew why he cut her suddenly)

Asmi: Achha baba….nahi kahungi….tum bhi na bahuuuut cute ho (and she pulled his cheeks much to his horror)

Ayaan: Asmi!! Ye mere gaal hai gubbare nahi jo khich rahi ho….

Asmi keeps laughing hearing his words as he keeps making faces….and just then Nishant cums out….

Nishant: Ohh….to aap dono ka romance jaari hai?

Ayaan: Obviously….main tym waste me blv nahi karta…..(at this Nishant just shakes his head)

Just then Samay also cums out!!

Samay: Arre Asmi….tu to kaafi jaldi aa gayi….apni Bhabhi ko kuch sikha yaar….kitna waqt leti hai tayyar hone me….

Nishant: Yeah….ladkiyan sach me bahut waqt leti hai….

Mauli: (she just comes out) Tum aisa isliye keh rahe ho…..coz tumne kabhi Ayaan ka w8 nahi kiya hoga…..warna aisa nahi kehte….

At this Nishant rolls his eyes….as if to say….. "how is this girl always ryt on tym…..when it cums to speak against his statement?"

Ayaan: Ab isme mujhe kyun khich rahe ho??

Asmi: Jab baat ready hone ki ho….tab tumhe nahi to aur kisse khichenge?

Ayaan: Arre….tum saaf saaf kyun nahi kehti…..har baat pe mera zikr hona zaruri hai….warna baat adhuri lagti hai….hai na?

He looks at Asmi in such a way that she cant help agreeing to him….

Asmi: May be…..(and she smiles looking at him)

Every1 starts 'coughing' at this…..thats when Kinjal cums much to Asmi's relief….

Asmi: Hey chalo…..Bhabhi bhi aa gayi hai….waise bhi kaafi late ho gaya hai….

Samay: Arre tu fikr mat kar….hamare paas pura din hai….waise bhi sirf kapre hi to lene hai….

Asmi: Yehi to problem hai bhaiya….kapre lene hai…..wo bhi Ayaan k liye!! (and she moves ahead smiling to heself)

Samay: Iska kya matlab hua?

Ayaan: Arre kuch nahi…..ye to bas aise hi….chalo….nikalte hai!! (and he also leaves quickly…..leaving a smirking Mauli n confused others behind)

After a while they reach the mall….

Ayaan: Hmm….so hum pohuch gaye….ab tum log apni apni shopping karo…main aur Asmi hamari shopping karte hai…..

Mauli: Hum apni apni shopping kare….aur tum romance karo?? Jee nahi…..aisa nahi hoga….Samay Bhaiya aap kuch bolo na…..ye aapki behen k saath romance karne ki soch raha hai….

Ayaan: U shaitan bandariya….tujhe mujhse kaunsi dushmani hai?

Samay: Umm…jo bhi ho Ayaan….hum saath hi shopping karte hai na…maza ayega….

Ayaan: Achha? Jab tum Ms. Beautiful k saath akele akele shopping kar rahe the….tab to tumhe sabke saath maza nahi aya tha….aaj kyun ayega??

Samay: Arre ye tum….(has an expression of getting caught)

Ayaan: Main batau kya puri kahani??

Samay: Arre nahi yaar…tum bhi kya….(just then sumthing strikes him) Tumhe koi kahani kaise pata?? Uss din to tum hamare saath aye hi nahi the na….

Every1 tries to suppress their laughter at Ayaan's bluff!!

Ayaan: Well….u r right….main uss din nahi tha….aur na hi mujhe koi kahani pata hai…..but tumhare expression se hum sabko ye zarur pata hai….tumne kaafi enjoy kiya hoga….apni kahani….along wid ur shopping session….hai na??

Kinjal: Samay isse jo karna hai karne do na……apni Bhaichara shuru mat karo….lets move….…. Bye guys….kharidaari ho jaye to call kar dena….hum yehi milenge….(Kinjal quickly drops the topic for her own gud….and moves ahead wid Samay)

Mauli: Hmm…kaafi chalu ho…Samay Bhaiya ko bhi bhej diya….

Ayaan: Yeah….mujhe pata hai main kaafi smart hu….aur saath hi ye bhi pata hai….tum kaafi dumb ho….

Asmi: Ayaan!! Tum bhi na…. (to Mauli) Mauli hum chalte hai….I hope….hamari shopping aaj hi puri hogi…

Mauli: (giggles) With him (Ayaan) around….I'm not so sure….anyways…best of luck….(she winks and leaves…..and yeah….Nishant follows her)

Ayaan: To meri shopping ka mazak udhaya jaa raha tha??

Asmi: Mazak nahi….hum to bas sach bayan kar rahe the….(she smiles to herself) Ab chale?

Ayaan: Chalo….maine thodi rokke rakha hai? (and they start moving)

Asmi: Waise….Bhaiya k samne yu andhere me teer kyun chhora??

Ayaan: Kyunki Samay ko main kaafi achhese janta hu…he is a very romantic guy……usne kuch na kuch badmashi to zarur ki hogi….and of course…along wid that…..Ms. Beautiful bahut achhi hai….usne tumhari tarah 'no badmashi' 'no badmashi' nahi kii hogi….(he pouts and she wonders….if its really necessary for this guy to catch every single topic n hold on to that)

Asmi: Tum sach me kisi bacche se kam nahi ho….khair…ab ye batao….pehle tumhari shopping kare ya meri?

Ayaan: Mujhe kya pata??

Asmi: Yeah….waise bhi tum shopping ko lekar kuch zyada hi confused rehte ho….so pehle tumhari shopping khatam karte hai….meri shopping jaldi ho jayegi….

And they move towards men's fashion houses. Selecting a sherwani for Ayaan was way too difficult….he had at first crossed out colours like….off-white, black, pink n maroon…..so choices were very limited….and Ayaan's taste was sumthing extremely difficult to match!! They were roaming around for abt 2 hrs….to buy at least one sherwani….but they were having the hardest luck!!

Here Samay-Kinjal were enjoying together…..they had bought their own outfits….both for shaadi and other rituals…..and now they were searching thru other necessary stuffs!! Actually Kinjal had forbidden Samay to call and disturb Ayaan-Asmi…..she knew they were bound to take a lot more tym…..after all she was experienced!!

And on the other hand….Nishant n Mauli decided to stick together and help each other wid the choices….but it cant be surely said whether this proved to be fruitful or disasterous!! However they had bought one outfit each for one function….and now they were looking for their outfits of the 'wedding'.

So at the end….it was the lovely couple of Ayaan n Asmi who were lagging behind!! And Asmi was really exhausted!!

Asmi: Ayaan….kuch to pasand karo yaar….its been 2 hrs….and we r still roaming!! Sabki shopping khatam ho gayi hogi…

Ayaan: Arre nahi….warna wo log phn karte na….aur phir main kya karu agar wo log mujhe bakwas sherwanis dikha rahe hai to….and tum hi batao….waha mostly off white sherwanis hai na?? To main kaise le sakta hu??

Asmi: I really donno off-white se kya problem hai tumhe?? And I also wonder saare achhe sherwanis off-white hi kyun the??

Ayaan: Mujhe kya pata?? (he makes a face) Waise….tumhe bhukh lagi hogi na? Main kaafi waqt barbaad kar raha hu na? (he says this making a cute sorry face….and Asmi cudnt help melting…..she cudnt dare otherwise)

Asmi: Ahh c'mon yaar….shaadi baar baar thodi hogi….ek hi mauka hai….jitna chahe utilize karenge thik hai?

Ayaan: Mera ye puppy face always work karta hai….hai na?

Asmi: Yup….any day!!

Ayaan: Hmm….achha hum pehle kuch khaa lete hai….and then we'll resume….ok?

She nods n they leave to hav sum thing!! Now they r sitting at the caf…..and Ayan oes to order food!! After sumtym the waiter serves the food….and Asmi is surprised to see less food n more ice-cream for Ayaan!!!

Asmi: Arre ye kya?? Khane se zyada to ice-cream hai!! Aur phir ye almost lunch tym hai….abhi ice-cream thodi khate hai??

Ayaan: Firstly….its dark chocolate flavour….I just cudnt resist!! And secondly ice-cream k liye koi waqt nahi hota dear……its eternal!! (he says this taking a spoonful….and closing his eyes out of satisfaction)

Asmi: Ayaan…..abhi no ice-cream…..pehle jitna bhi khana hai usse khatam karo….phir ice-cream!!

Ayaan: Kya betuki baat kar rahi ho?? Tab tak ice-cream mere liye w8 karegi kya?? I mean melt nahi ho jayegi??

Asmi: Jo bhi ho….u r not having it before ur food!! That's it!!

Ayaan: Tum to mom se bhi zyada strict ho…..huh!! (and he quickly has his food….in super fast speed)

Asmi: Aur tum ek chhote bacche se bhi zyada hyper aur impatient ho!! Waise……saare mat kha jana……mere liye bhi chhor dena kuch!!

Ayaan: Wo to tumhari speed pe depend karta hai….jitni jaldi tum khatam kar paogi….utna hi zyada milega…aur agar bahut slowly finish kiya then u cant blame me for not getting anything!! (and he continued having the ice-cream wid utmost pleasure)

Here Asmi just shook her head…and stared at him for a while as he concentrated on his ice-cream….she smiled and quickly finished her food….after all even she wanted her share!!! And then…..they both enjoyed the ice-cream together….as Ayaan fed her along wid himself…….they were having cute arguments like who had a bigger share….and sum other baseless things like that!!

And as Ayaan-Asmi were enjoying their lunch cum ice-cream session….Samay n Kinjal were passing by that side….they stopped to see the couple enjoying in each other's company!! They looked heavenly perfect!!

Kinjal: Kitne pyare lag rahe hai na??

Samay: Hmm…..kyunki wo ek dusre se bahut pyar karte hai!!

Kinjal: Yup….aur din pe din Asmi k chehre pe iss pyar ka rang aur zyada nikhar k aa raha hai….

Samay: True….pata hai…main har din yehi sochta hu….ki maine Asmi ko isse zyada khush nahi dekha….and every next day….she gets even more cheerful!! Aur pata hai….sagai wali raat….Ayaan Asmi ko Dad k paas le gaya tha…..

Kinjal: That's extremely sweet of him!!

Samay: Hmm……it surely is!! Aur aaj mujhe bahut proud feel ho raha hai….kyunki iss jodi ko banana me maine bhi thodi help kii….(he grinned)

Kinjal: Sirf tumne?? Wat abt me?

Samay: I never thought I need to mention u individually!! Hum ek dusre se alag thodi hai!!

Kinjal: U r very gud wid flirting!! I'm really pleased!!

Samay: Pleasure is all mine ma'm!!

Kinjal: Ab chale…ya yehi khade rehna hai?

Samay: Aap chaliye….hum apko follow karenge….as usual!! (and they left wid a smile)

Here Nishant n Mauli were going thru dresses…..but Mauli was having a hard tym selecting her dress….and was quite irritated!!

Mauli: Tum bhi na…koi suggestion tak nahi de sakte kya??

Nishant: tumhara dress hai….tum jano kya lena hai kya nahi….main tumhari choice thodi janta hu??

Mauli: Koi idea tak nahi hai na tumhe?

Nishant: Mere kaha lakho girl frnds hai jo mujhe ladkiyon k outfits k bare me idea hone laga….

Mauli: Oh yeah….how can I forget?? Lakho ladkiyan thodi pagal hai jo tumhari girl frnd ban jaye!!

Nishant: Ajeeb ladki ho yaar….tumhe apna mann pasand dress nahi mil raha…….isliye mujhpe bharak rahi ho….now how does that make any sense??

Mauli: Huh….bare aye sense ki baat karne….chalo chalo….aage badho….uss shop me kuch dhundte hai…… (and she went ahead almost ordering him to follow……he wondered at her behaviour….but however followed her!!)

Now Ayaan n Asmi…..

Asmi: Ayaan….abhi jaldi karo….hamein at least kuch to kharidna hoga….warna sab sochenge hum shopping ki jagah romance kar rahe the….

Ayaan: To sochne do….achha hai na?? They'll think we r soooo romantic!!

Asmi: Pls Ayaan…..seriously dhundo na kuch!!

Ayaan: Arre tumhe kya abhi tak ye lag raha tha ki main mazak mazak me shopping kar raha hu?? C'mon yaar Asmi….main apni shaadi ki shopping ko lekar bahut zyada serious hu…..ek hi baar shaadi hogi….to tayyari bhi perfect honi chahiye na….

Asmi: Mr. Perfect……agar shaadi karni hai to kuch outfit select bhi karo….warna….kya pehenke shaadi karoge??

Ayaan: Hmm….gud point!!! By the way….abhi se hum jiss bhi shop me jayenge…tum waha jate hi keh dena….mujhe koi off-white sherwani na dikhaye……warna main usse goli maar dunga!!

Asmi: Kisse?? Shopkeeper ko??

Ayaan: Arre nahi….sherwani ko!! Ab chalo....

And they move ahead together….while she laughs at his thoughtful expressions….he was actually very serious!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
Finally maine Ud kar diya....I knw I'm not so early....😆....and am utterly sorry for that!!🤢

And abt the part.....donno wat to say....maine itni jaldbazi me kabhi part nahi likha tha....😆....so I seriously donno isme kya achha hai kua nahi....but yeah....its surely not a small part guys!! Agar small lagta hai....then I cant help it....and agar neend aa rahi hai...then again I cant help it....so jana!!😆😆

Btw....I donno....main kitni frequently UD kar paungi....mere pracs xams start honge....aur mujhe to theory bhi nahi pata....bas kuch din pehle PHY chapters k naam yaad kiye...andar kya hai I donno...🤢😆😆....so am pretty tensed abt everything....😆😆

Anyways....thnx every1 for reading and liking the previous part!! Hope u enjoy it....sumhow!!

Luv,
Sumaiya (Sumi).😛
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 16 years ago
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summuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu kya har baaaaaaar mere muh ki baat chinna zaruri hai????????????????😡😆😆 maine socha tha sabse pehle yahi kahungi part bahot chota thaa😆😆 khair abb aise "coincidences" ki adat si hoo gayi hai soo abb bura bhi nahi lagta shock bhi nahi lagta.. 😆😆 All the very best for ur pracs.. 😆 waise mera personal experience yeh kehta hai ki viva main bhale hi kuch na aye par chapter ke naam zarur pata hona chahiye.. kafi impression padhta hai yaar.. 🤣 waise mera personal experience yeh bhi kehta hai ki prac main agar bina preparation ke jao to prac sabse acha jata hai.. 😆😆 waise mera personal experience yeh bhi kehta hai ki bhale hi kuch na aye par kisi bhi keemat par khud ko lowest sabit mat hone do.. 😆😆 haan to yeh to hui kuch gyaan ki baatein.. 😆😆 abb ate hai UD pe..

mam ek to inna chota UD uppar se keh rahi hai UD chota nahi tha?? ek to chori uppar se sinazori.. 😳🤣 my cutu ayaan was as always toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ☺️ i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ayaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnnnnnnn ☺️

well asmi perfectly suits himmm 😃 i loved that scene wen ayaan made a cute sorry face and asmi melted.. muaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh 👏 🤗 😃

yaar yeh nishaitaan ko itna importance mat de.. i just feel irritated.. 🤢🤢 tu kyu nishaitan aur mauli ko pair kar rahi hai?? mauli ayaan ki sis jaisi hai tujhe uske liye koi aur better ni milaaaaaa huhhhh!! 😕

kinjal n samay are perfect bhaiya bhabhi.. 😃

i loved this part sweetuuuuuu 😃 bhale hi jaldi jaldi likha magar compromise kahi nahi kiya.. 👍🏼😃 well done summu 👏

mujhe bahot tension hoo rahi hai.. ofcourse ayaan ki.. 😆 pata nahi woh kuch choose kar v payega ya nahi.. 😆 par asmi hai har problem ka solution 😃 iss part ka har dialogue was mindblowing.. hats off to u.. 😃

ek baat batau mujhe kabhi bhi kisi bhi serial ya fic main female character perfect nahi laga.. even near to perfect v nahi.. par asmi perfect hai.. 👏usne hamesha ayaan ko puri tarah samjha aur uska saath diya.. asmi main koi kami nahi hai she is the best.. 👏👏



love
Nandini 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi Sumaiya

How r u???
Update was really gud..👏👏..It was full of masti n sweet moments...😛
Ayaan ki sangat mein rehkar ab Asmi bhi logon ko chup karana seekh gayi hai...😆😆
Every1 was trying to tease her but she was lost in her own world n replied in a hasty way..
Sabhi log pareshan hain ki Asmi n Ayaan ko tease kaise karein..😉😆
Ayaan aajkal apni mom-in-law ko kaafi impress karne mein laga hua hai...Asmi se pehle woh ab unko poochhta hai...
Mauli har baat pe Nishant ko kitna sunati hai..Woh bechara chupchap uski sunta bhi rehta hai..😆😆
Asmi's mother was happy coz Ayaan cares for her daughter so much..She is happy to have him as her son-in-law..
Ayaan ko romance aata hai aaj yeh confirm bhi ho gaya..😉 Bechari Asmi kaafi blush karne lagi hai..😆 Ayaan kabhi bhi drama karne lagta hai..Poora nautanki hai..😛But I love him like dis..
Samay is a perfect brother ..Uski pol na khul jaaye isi liye usne Ayaan n Asmi ko alele shopping karne diya...😆😆..
Shopping mein Ayaan kuchh zyaada hi time leta hai..Bechari Asmi to pareshan hi ho gayi..Sach agar koi girls ko shopping mein competition de sakta hai to woh Ayaan hi hai..😃
Ice-cream n khane mein zyaada accha to ice-cream hi hai n I fully agree with Ayaan..😊.
I hope next update mein sabki(especially Ayaan ki) shopping complete ho jaaye...😉
Continue soon
Bye
Best of luck for practicals baaki gyaan ki baatein tumhe Nandini ne bata hi di hain..Follow her instructions n u'll pass with flying colors...😊
Edited by suhana_dixit - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Lovely part !!
Best of luck for your papers !
Continue soon !!

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