QUE SERA SERA II Part 47 posted on pg149 (14/5/10) - Page 61

Originally posted by: kweetrockstar

i dont know if u're elder than me, but something tells me u r

so

hi di

are u even for real

i mean, its hard to believe

the part was once again a heart stealer

riddhima in such a bad condition, and armaan rushing this badly to her, i just cant stop falling in love with them again, especially obviously Armaan

i am so loving the story

awesome

ps, thanks for th pm

Originally posted by: ~sumedha~

heyya sharada,
first of all i'd like to say a huge big sorry to you as i have never read ur fic although you kept pming me about them!!!
when i finally read all the parts i realised it is completely my loss!!!!
i have fallen in love with the brilliant and emotional story you've woven.....each character and scene is so well written and rounded!!
the emotions that run thru this fic are amazing they take a reader for a real rollercoaster ride!!!
i especially fell in love with the story because of the very tamil malayali feel to it.....you see i am a bengali who lives in chennai.....and i too hav been to kochi and coimbatore and all number of times and i can literally feel the atmo you try to bring out!!!
everylittle thing you mention makes me adore the story more....the puli inji, the lemon rice, the mundu for ridsi, the avial(i looooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvveeeeeee avial!!!)....
and the other thing is the way you quote from songs its just perfect i love ur choice of old songs becoz of u i hav recently heard so many old tracks i wud never hav heard!
i dunno how you update such big and fabulously detailed parts so fast, its unbeleivable!!!
i like the way you did not let abhi become a negative character....wish that happens to sid in dmg too.....armaan riddhima scenes are just sizzling with chemistry!!! the waterfall scene was like resounding in me!!!
keep it up, i hav enjoyed reading this fic more than i can explain to you in words....
love
sumedha

Originally posted by: ssh57

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Hi Sumedha,
You are not going to believe this but its true.Only this morning when I was sending the pms I thought the first name on my list is yours. I just thought this girl never comments, perhaps she doesn't read it at all. And today you read and commented too.I have very few people on my buddy list so I just send pm to all on the list. I'm not aware how your name came on the list if you have never read this ff. Probably I might have read an ff written by you and sent you the buddy invite.Anyways friends by accident is also fine.
I think you read from part I. Nice to hear such lovely comments.Believe it or not making vms is my first love. After I made many I thought I have only limited clips of KaSh so how many more vms can I make. I love trying something new. So I started writing this ff only to feel I have also written an ff.But as many writers of this forum warned me the story starts growing on you. Day in and day out you can't think of anything else. That's how this story grew and continued as part II after I tried to stop it once. I make special effort to be regular becoz when I read a ff and it doesn't get updated regularly I get irritated. I'm writing this for people to enjoy not to wait and get impatient. Both the parts I began with a bank of 10 episodes, but now I'm out of stock. So after part 20 my dear readers may have to wait for 4-5 days before I post the next part. 😔😔😔😔😭😭
I'm so glad you liked my southie feeling. Though I'm a Tamilian I have been totally brought up in Mumbai. My in-laws are at Coimbatore so my visits there are only a couple of weeks each year. Kochi is my favourite city as my husband was posted there for some months.I just love that place.I'm glad you liked all the foodstuffs I named and the beautiful mundu of Kerala.
I think this reply is becoming like one episode, so let me stop. Thanks for the wonderful comments.love ssh57

Part 20

A: Riddhima, Main yahan hoon na. Sab theek ho jayega. Pehele rona bund karo..Hamari Princess ko kuch nahi hoga agar tum shaanth ho jao to. If you cry she'll also become sad.

R: I'm sorry Armaaan…mujhe zid nahi karna chahiye tha…I'm sorry…

A: shhh…Yeh sorry, sorry kya laga rakkha hai? Bus, stop crying first..

She clung to him tightly and said "Armaan mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai mujhe chod ke mat jaana".

A: Main kahin nahin jaa raha hoon. Yeh lo thoda sa paani peelo.

He made her drink a little water. He was holding her closely against himself. When her cough subsided a bit, she began fidgeting with his shirt buttons and asked "When did you get here?"

A: two hours back.

R: Di told you?

A: ya, yesterday evening.

R: How did you manage get here so quickly?

A: I went by road to Bangalore and took the first flight this morning.

R: I'm always causing problems for you.

He could feel her tears wetting his shirt.

A: Sweetheart what is this? Tum ne phir rona shuru kar diya?

R: I hate myself.. She took his hand in hers and started slapping herself "slap me when I don't listen to you…"

"Riddhima…" he said angrily and pulled his hand away.

R: Really Armaan I shouldn't have come back into your life at all, you were better off without me…

A: I think you are delirious…

R: no Armaan I mean it. You haven't had a day's peace since I've come back…..

A: Why do you feel so???

R: I know so. From the time you joined MSHC how much leave have you taken? Now see how much leave you are forced to take. All because of me. I'm spoiling your career also…..

A: If you have finished can I say something? Before you came back into my life I was living like a robot. Doing all the work perfectly and mechanically. I had no purpose in life. Now I have a loving wife, an adorable son and soon my Princess will also arrive…

He affectionately pressed his palms against her stomach.

R: Armaan hamari baby ko kuch nahi hoga na???

They suddenly felt a flutter against his hand and looked at each other surprised.

A: Dekha na Princess ne khud bata diya ki woh theek hai.

She laughed at his remark and her coughing bout started again. He could do nothing but just hold her rubbing her back. Once her coughing stopped she said "You were right. I shouldn't have come to Mumbai at this stage. I only ended up giving everybody problems, especially you…." She touched his cheeks with her palms and said very sincerely, "I won't ever be adamant again. I promise. You only know what's best for me."

He bent down to kiss her lips but she covered her mouth with her hands. She tried to get out of his hold.

R; Armaan Kya kar rahe ho? you might catch the infection…..

A: I'm not very susceptible to infections but even if I do I can take proper medicines unlike you.

R: No harm in taking precaution na?

A: A few minutes back you only said don't leave me and now you are yourself moving away from me….

He purposely rubbed his chin against her cheek because he knew she got irritated when his stubble pricked. And that's how Atul found them when he entered with their breakfast.

At: ahem ahem…. Arrey bahar do not disturb board to laga dete, to main aisey andar nahi gusta…

Riddhima was very embarrassed and tried to get out of Armaan's hold, but Armaan seemed in no hurry to let go of her. He slowly made her sit and adjusted the pillow behind her.

At: saali sahiba, now I understand the reason for your illness……Arrey if you wanted to get Armaan to Mumbai why fall sick, you just needed to call him and he would have come saying "Tumne pukaara aur hum chale aaye.. Dil hateli par le aaye…."

R: Jeeju…Maine yeh sab jaan bhujke nahin kiya..(blushing)

At: Hey, I was just pulling your leg. I could see how sick you were. (Then to Armaan) Par kasamse in her delirium she didn't call out to anyone except you…

Seeing both of them blush he said "Chalo I'll make a move. Duty calls"

That reminded Armaan that he had not informed his seniors. He called the hospital and explained the problem. He said he would be available on his cell 24x7.

Armaan was very hungry. He opened the tiffin and was happy to see alu parathas. "Wow, Alu ke Parathe!" he exclaimed like a small child. Riddhima couldn't help smiling seeing his expression. She picked up a piece and fed him. He gulped it and opened his mouth for more. "Kal se kuch nahi khaya na?" she asked. "Tumhe kaise pata?" he asked sheepishly.

R: I know you better than you know yourself Dr. Armaan Mallik….

A: Achcha yeh baat hai? He picked up a piece of the paratha and fed her. Keeping a glass of water ready in case she started coughing and she surely did.

R: Nahi Armaan tum khau. Main juice peeti hoon.

A: nahi Riddhima you need to eat something.

Just then the door opened and Dr. Keerti came in.

A; Good morning Dr. Keerti, kaise hain aap.

K: Hello Armaaan, aap kab aaye?

A: Ji aaj subah..

K: No wonder my patient is looking so cheerful. You should have seen her last night…..

Both she and sr. Lovely, who had come with her, started laughing. Lovely proceeded to check her temperature and it was 100 degrees only, down 3 degrees from last night. Lovely had gathered from the hospital grapevine that Riddhima was now Armaan's wife and was happy for them.

A: Dekhiye na dr. Keerti, kuch kha nahi rahi hai.

K: Don't force her Armaan. Give her lot of fluids. Let her eat whatever she feels like, whenever she wants. Anjali told me she's just getting out of her morning sickness problems. At this rate she should be fine by evening.

R: dr. Keerti the baby is Ok na?

K: The baby seems to be fine. I don't find anything to worry about but we should taking a sonography in a day or two to confirm that everything is fine. You need to relax Riddhima, your worrying will only cause problems. Be positive and above all trust in the almighty.

Riddhima nodded.

K: If your fever comes down further, we can discharge you in the evening. The cough may take 10 – 15 days to subside, but it should be under control with slight medication.

R: Dr. by when can I leave for Munnar?

A: What's the hurry Riddhima? You get well first..

K: We'll decide about that after a few days seeing your progress.

After she left riddhima had the fruit juice and forced Armaan to have the paratha. Then they called up home and spoke to all. Akshat was thrilled to know that his dad was back and with his mama. After speaking to Riddhima he wanted to meet her. Somehow she managed to convince him that she would back home soon, so he should be good boy and be with nani and nanu.

Riddhima was discharged that evening but was advised bed rest for the next few days. Armaan was taking total care of her. Her parents were bereft of words seeing their son-in-law pamper their daughter even more than they ever had. Shashank regretted having forced Riddhima to marry Abhi for his selfish reasons while Padma was grateful to God for bringing Armaan back into her daughter's life and rectifying the mistake they had made as her parents.

The next day Ridhhima's fever was completely gone though the cough persisted. Two days latetr she went for the sonography and was thrilled to know that the baby was fine but still a little underweight. Dr. Keerti asked her to wait for few more days before leaving for Munnar, as the change in climate may aggravate the cough.

It was Friday, Anjie and Atul had invited them to stay at their house for the weekend. They chatted for a long time catching up on all their internship days. They were shocked to know about Armaan and Riddhima having confessed their love so much before she left for Chandigarh.

An: Ridzi how could you? Tune mujhe bhi nahi bataya.

At: Hum log bhi kitne buddu the. We didn't even guess. We saw only your superficial quarrels but missed out the deep love.

Armaan regaled them with his valentine day pizza boy anecdote. Finally around midnight they retired to bed. Riddhima was woke up by Armaan's phone ringing. He saw the caller and started talking when she pulled it out of his hand saying "Please ask them to call later na?" "One minute Riddhima", he said and pulled the cell back from her.

A: Sorry, tell me…No, no, no that's ok.

Then he walked out to the balcony. Riddhima was very angry to be disturbed. She didn't realise it as already 7 o'clock. She felt it was still middle of the night. So she turned the other way and went to sleep on the edge of the bed. She knew Armaan would come and apologise to her. She would pretend to be angry first and then they would kiss and make up. She felt him come and lie on the bed , but didn't make any effort to come near her. She was disappointed and turned round to see him lying on his back, his arm across his forehead and staring at the ceiling.

She guessed there was some problem. She went close to him and asked "Kya hua Armaan?"

A: Nahi kuch nahi tum so jao.

She put her hand on his cheek and turned his face towards her and asked ever so chweetly, "mujse apna problem share nahi karoge?" He couldn't look into her eyes. She bent over him and held his face in her palms, saying "Meri taraf dekho Armaan, Ky baat hai?". He was compelled to look at her.

A: Hospital mein problem hai, mujhe jaana hoga…..

R: Theek hai. No problem you book the tickets by the earliest available flight, main tab tak packing kar leeti hoon…

A: Nahi Riddhima, Dr. Keerti ne tumhe….

😊Awesome part!!!