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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#251

hey visma,

thank you for updating this FF..

Wow Jai looks like he's totally lost it, I wonder what he is using her for??

continue soon, can't wait to find out..

nadia

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Esther

@Ezther

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Posted: 16 years ago

#252

and about time!!

gosh I am speechless after reading..............I just love to hate Jai right now.....being cruel when in love just doesn't make sense to me at all...................

but hey,I guess I'm glad this is fiction yaar.........and not fact,though I know it does happen but up side is,I don't have to know about stuff like that.................😃😃

ahh,the rose tinted world na?😃😊😳

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kitkat_2002

@kitkat_2002

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Posted: 16 years ago

#253

gosh i am speechless..

why is jai doin tis...

please kuttu please update the next part soon..

n trust me as always tis part was gr8 too...

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Lunna_22

@Lunna_22

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Posted: 16 years ago

#254

Hi, read the whole story, its just fascinating.😃

Waiting with bathe breath for you to continue.😉

Thank you.

😃 Feels good to be free -- Lunna

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nema123

@nema123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#255

Hi Visma,

IT was wonderful update..! Poor Bani...
Jai's problem is that he is not sharing any info with her...! If she is so important for her .. he should communcate with her instead of scaring her.!

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Rockyy_

@Rockyy_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#256

Now I'm curious.

What did Jai ment when he told Bani he is very close to his

goal. Can't wait to find out.

Amazing chapter Kuttu and here's hoping all is better on the home front and with you.

Please continue when you have the time.

All the best, take care

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johnangad

@johnangad

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Posted: 16 years ago

#257

wat kind of revenge is jai taking????????

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Smitha

@smile4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#258

Hey Visma

that's an awesum part..........

poor Bani......... she's fallen in love with a very cold n heartless man............ Why does Jai want take revenge on Bani??? why is he behaving like this??? did he ever love Bani??? So now Jai's taken Bani to Mt. Abu.......... hope his not planning to hurt her........... can't wait to read the next part............... continue soon.............

Keep smiling 😃

Smitha

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#259

Oh no, JW has turned out to be a much bigger 🤬 than everyone expected him to be. 😆 He's so cruel. Wonder what revenge he's seeking from Bani and how Bani will get out of it. Please continue soon. 😃