RN ONE SHOT GALLERY update page 17 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii guglu n preet... 😃
pata hai pata hai ki main late hun...par thoda adjust mere liye kar hi sakte ho...hai na...😃
tho...aap dono ne tai kiya hai ki ab se one shots ki bahar le kar aayengi...!!! baht hi achha aur behtarin idea hai...!!! is bahane kai sare naye stories padhne ko mil jayenge...wid siggies...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
sab se pahle...yeh OS kaisa tha voh bata deti hun...!!! vaise tum dono ko toh pata hi hoga ki mere paas dimag ki kami hai...aur Mana is baat ki certificate bhi de chuki hai...isiliye jo bhi likhne ja rahi hun...bass dil me rakhna...dimag mat lagana...varna bacha kucha bhi ghoom ho jayega...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
beautiful...romantic...n well xpressed...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
tum ne RN dono k dil ki baat itne bahtarin tarike se describe kiya hai ki...samne hote toh jhappiyan jarur deti...par yahan par emoticon se kaam chala lo... 🤗 🤗
costume...jewellery....sab kuch perfect tha...sirf VM ko chod kar...!!! mujhe pata hai tum dono ne badi mehnat se use banaya hai phir bhi maine aisa kyoun kha...aur tumhe dukh bhi hua hoga...par yaar main bhi kya karun...voh VM dikhai de tabhi toh tarif karun na...!!!
shalini hamesha se mujhe pasand hai...jabb dekho...RN ko milane k chakkar me rahti hai...!!! matlab Raj ki taraf se toh voh sachhe dosti ka farz nibhati hi hai...😃
alekh ne sahi kiya...huda ko le gaya...tabhi toh RN thode tym k liye akele rah gaye...par naina ko dekh kar...raj k hosh ka ghum ho jana...mujhe LRL k kai sare scenes ko yaad dila gaya...😃
sabhi scene baht hi beautifully describe kiya tha tum dono ne...par mera fav scene tha...dancing scene ....saza...n raj ne jab ring diya...AWESOME job...👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏
dushre OS ka wait kar rahi hun...isiliye MENTOS...khayo...dimag ki batti jalao...aur ek OS post karo...😃
Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22

Its wonderful

everything was awesome

do write more

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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: khushi909

ur one shot is very gud yaar keep it up ab to itna read karke main bhi soch rahi hoon ki ek rn ff likh hi do😉



Thanks a lot Khushi... I was waiting for your RN ff... Aur ab tumne usse shuru bhi kar diya... But thanks for liking this OS...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: shiropa

WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooooo



Pehle to ye bata Shiro ki iss "woao" ka end kahan hai???😉 😆 😉
😆Waise itne lambe chaude woao ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavaad...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi Guglu !! Hi Preet !! 😃 Hi Mana...
Happy valentines to both of you ! Thank you and same to you too...
First of all a pat on both of your backs for such a wise thinking ! RN ONE shot gallery !!! Wow !! Thanks again...
Hang on !!! tum logo ne dimaag chalaya??? 😲 Ab tumhari DDPA ki membership khatre mein hain !! 😛 Humne dimag nahi chalaya hai... wo dimag ulta hang ho gaya tabhi to ye outcome tha na - "RN OS Gallery" Ab to khatre me nahi hain na DDPA ki membership???
BUT.....
Kyunki main GS hoon, I control the things oer there...
aur kyunki tum dono mere friends ho, aur tumdono ne DDPA keliye apni eligibility kayee baar saabit ki hai 😆😆 I can help you guys out, but you have to undergo one punishment.... Thank you so much GS sahiba. *Fingers crossed* we are waiting for the punishment. Please jyada difficult punishment mat dena...
And that is....You have to write such beautiful shots very often( hamare Patience ka anth deke bina....this is esp. for Preet) , if you want to retain the membership...😛 Oh No!!! Preet... tum sambhalo isse...
Ab bakwaas bandh karti hoon aur shot pe aati hoon... waiting for that...
It was AWESOMEEEEEEEEE !!! 😃 Thanks yaar. Ye pura reply thanks kekte kehte nikal jayega.
First of all the plot was superb ! 👏 Thanks again. Maine kaha tha na... thanks hi kehti rahungi...
Raj's feeling and thoughts were beautifully shown...👏 👏 Thanks again...
Actually kya kahu tumlogo ko??? costume se leke jewellery, party ka decor, song selection, VM everything was PERFFFFFEEEECCCCTTTTTTTTTT !!!! 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ Thanks a lot...
Naina ka guilty feel karna was obvious, but just one gesture of Raj made her feel better ! 😊 Ab wo Raj hai toh usse pata hai ki kaise Naina ko better halat me laya jaye...
Yaar tum dono toh multi talented ho !! Beautiful VM !! Gurumata , tutorjee !! Mujhe yeh bhi sikhna hai ! 😛 Sure balike... anytime...😆Tongue😆
Shalini toh kamaal hai !! agar woh nahi hoti, toh hum RN ki lovestory ko aage kaise badha paate??😊 She is the cupid in every story...
But I liked the way Raj complimented her in front of everyone....a compliment in disguise 😉 He he he... it sure was...😉
The song was nice ! Thanks again...
And so was Raj ki Saza !!! 😃 Actually that was a brainwave... m glad u liked the sazaa part...
I liked the way he proposed to her and then....Finally MY CUP OF HAPPINESS IS FULL after reading this beautiful shot !!! He he he Thanks a lot Mana... chalo tumhara cup bhi bhar gaya...
Waiting for more beautiful shots from you both ! Sure... the next project is in pipeline...
luv,
aapki pyaari aur agyakaari shishya 😉
mana 😆

Love u too
Tumhari gurumata aur Tutorjee...😉 😆 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Edited by preet09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks Shaina...

The line is very nice and perfect for Raj and Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks again...

Naina is always with Raj in his heart, in his mind and in his soul!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Yes... but why are you blushing???😉

Naina is too precious for Raj to lose but he doesn't know how Naina feels about him!!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕 Naina has never told him... has she???

Shalini ne Valentine's Day party ka kya master plan banaya hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Ab wo shalini hai... kuch to karegi hi...

Raj is looking so handsome and dashing!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Well... he always looks like that... especially if the setting is LRL...

Naina is very excited and her heart is beating very fast!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️ I think your heart is beating faster than Naina's...😉

Lagta hai uske dil ko pata chal gaya hai ke aaj usse uski manzil milne waali hai!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 You definitely know a lot about these things...😉

Shalini and the cadets made Raj and Naina come together to the party!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 Well... yes...

Shalini is the perfect Cupid and what would Raj and Naina do without her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 Nothing... they would be struck in their respective places...

Huda toh Naina ko Raj ke saath akela chhodne ko taiyaar hi nahi tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Yeh abhi bhi Naina ke peeche pada huya hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 Tum Huda ko apne comment se omit nahi kar sakti thi... waise wo huda hai... kabhi nahi sudhrega...

Thankfully the others dragged him away saying Naina ka khayal toh Raj rakh lega magar unki madad kaun karega!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 Well... its true... isn't it?

Naina is looking beautiful and Raj is mesmerized to see her in this white attire!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 He always becomes mesmerized even when she is in a simple uniform...

Naina had seen the look of adoration in his eyes and knew that he loved her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Well... yes... she finally knew...

But she is too guilty over her past behaviour with Raj and knew that she has hurt him a lot!!!!! She ought to feel guilty...

The song is very nice and just perfect for Raj and Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Thanks...

The Videomix is beautiful and just perfect!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks again...

Raj kissed her hand and complimented her partly to keep her away from tears!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 Itni sweet ki kahin diabetes na no jaye...

Raj spent half the time staring at Naina during the journey and then offered her his arm and was happy to see her accept it!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 Even small gestures make him happy...

The party hall was beautifully decorated and Raj was simply enchanted by the decorations!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Shalini is hell bent on teasing Raj and wants him to compliment Naina!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊 She is like that... isn't she?

I loved the way Raj asked Naina for a dance!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 I'm glad you loved it...

The song is very nice and perfect for them in this situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Thanks...

Raj and Naina are lost in each other's arms and Naina is blushing!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ It seems u r blushing more than Naina...

Raj saw that Naina is feeling sad and guilty and came to a decision!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina asked Raj if he could ever forgive her and asked for punishment!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 Shouldn't she...?

Raj came up with the perfect punishment for her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

He kept teasing her ke woh puri nahi kar paayegi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne kaha Naina se ke usse apni saari zindagi uske naam karni padegi aur uske saath bitani padegi!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳Haaaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ It seems u r more happy then naina...

Naina is astonished and can't believe ke Raj ne sach much usse yeh kaha hai!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Well... it was a bit unbelievable...

I am happy that Raj does not care about others now as its high time he thought about himself and Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 I'm glad that even you think so...

The garden is beautiful and a very romantic place for them to be alone together!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Naina rightly asked ke yeh sazaa hai ya tohfa aur Raj ke naam apni puri zindagi kar paana se badi khushi aur kuch nahi hai uske liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina is crying now and saying ke woh ish khushi ke kaabil nahi hai aur uska Raj par koi haq nahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 She was feeling guilty...

Raj said ke uske alawa aur kisi ka koi haq nahi hai uspar aur woh Naina ka tha, hai aur rahega!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ Rightly said... don't u think so?

Usse pyaar karne ka haq bhi Naina ka hai aur nafrat karne ka bhi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina hugged him and cried her heart out, and Raj held her protectively and let her cry as she had to take it out!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The way Raj proposed to Naina was beautiful and very romantic!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thank God you found it romantic...

The ring is superb and completely signifies their love!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj kissed Naina passionately and she reciprocated to his demands!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

She had got the biggest gift of her life and she was his forever!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 never to be separated...

Now her cup of happiness was full!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊



Thanks for commenting Shaina...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a lot golu...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏


simply awesome and amazing......😳😳😳

totally romantic and beautiful.......😳😳😳

amazing dress and accessories .......d ring was awesome. 😳




Thanks a lot for liking this OS dear... I'm happy that you found it romantic and beautiful... and also liked the dress and other accesories...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: strawberrychip

that was beautiful........



Thanks a lot dear...

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