New Abhi-Nikki FF~LOVE ME TENDER~ COMPLETED - Page 39

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Posted: 16 years ago
thanks 4 the great update. Abhi is getting jelous. I hope he confesses soon Con soon
thanks 4the pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part Honey!!!! ⭐️ OMG the kiss is soo HOT!!! 😳 😳 😳 The whole part after her dupatta gets caught in the chair was really well written!!! 👏:

She wanted to be in his arms, she wanted the kiss his eyes were asking for.⭐️ When he pulls her closer, his hands sear her skin through the fine cotton of her dress. She knew she was lost to his touch. 😳 😳

"Abhi" she gasps, her hands bunching his shirt. Abhimanyu comes closer, cups her face in both his hands and his lips claim hers. He kisses her extremely softly barely brushing his lips to hers and Nikki tugs at his shirt, wanting more. He smiles a little but doesn't give in to what she wants. Frustrated, Nikki's hands go to his hair and she pulls his face down and deepens the kiss. 😳

👏

The way you wrote it and the description was brilliant!! 😃 Brilliant passion filled AN moment!!⭐️

Abhi's thoughts at the beginning were really good, which showed how much he just wanted to be close to her; he wants her to remember desperately and doesn't want to jeopardize their relationship as he is not sure what her reaction will be when she remembers and if she will be able to forgive him, hopefully she will!! 😃 So he is very cautious around her! This part is really sweet!!


He was tired of fighting with himself. He wanted 'no needed her love, he needed it to give him strength. 👏 👏 👏


They both really need each others strength and support a this time though, especially Niki; she needs to know his true feelings for her as she has been through so much!

Pari's plan to make Abhi jealous is fantastic! I like Abhi when he is jealous and possessive of Niki! This may result in Abhi finally admitting his feelings for Niki, however, if he finds out the truth, as Armaan puts it:
"...there will be hell to pay" Abhi will undoubtedly be furious! 😉

I loved the sisters bonding, that was really nice! ⭐️ and Niki calling Gaurav
"Gaurav jeejs" 😆 So Niki has decided to get to know Pari, way to go!!! 👏

I love the way Abhi can't help but stare at Niki when she enters his cabin! I love Niki's thoughts here about Abhi:

His closeness was always her undoing. She needed to move away fast or she would simply melt if he kept looking at her with his molten chocolate eyes, which were staring at her with undisguised passion. 😳 😍

Oh, his eyes! He can say so many things through them! 😍 Both Abhi and Niki can never stay away or resist each other, no matter how hard they try! 😳

Honey sweets!!!! I just LOVED reading this part, especially the kiss!! 😳 Thank you soo much for a BEAUTIFUL update, can't wait for the next one!! 🤗
Edited by Aisha202 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
wooh..
wat a part!!
and long too =D
lol...
abhi.. he is soo different...
he thinks letting nikki remember on her own is a good thing but he doesnt realize what he is puttin nikki thru...
anyways..
loved the sister's reunion =D
nd also pari's plan.. lol
thx for the pm..
nd do cont soon =D
HiNaL
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks for the update👏👏👏.It was lovely seeing the sisters share their feeling, the abhi getting jealous was so cute, abhi nikki kissing scene was romantic good good.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Honey,
As usual great update..... I had a wide grin on my face imagining shy Guarav flustering as he tells Nikki about Pari's suggestion...and loved how the sisters found each other when Pari told the truth......
And the kiss was oh so HOTTTTT.....Felt on fire, myself with your lovely description..😃
I love Jealous Abhi....Makes him more hotter as he spews anger...
I am only confused a bit with Pari's suggestion......how would deliberate jealousy really work in this scenario???
Personally, I would prefer Nikki remembering Abhi on her own and then perhaps, bec of what he did, which led to her accident, she ganging up with Gaurav to make him jealous.... Don't really know how well Abhi getting jealous and blurting out his love for her would really impact and bring out Nikki's own love for him... ( It is she who has no memory of her love and their relationship) We all know of Abhi's love for her, everyone in Sanjeevani knows and have even told Nikki, including Gaurav and Pari. Even Nikki can see and feel it, so Abhi clamping up on his feelings doesn't necessarily negate his love for her.
But, I am sure you have something up your sleeve so I'll wait and watch...😃
Loved every emotion you showed about AN in this update.....Great Job ! Looking to the next one eagerly...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mich09

Hey Honey,

As usual great update..... I had a wide grin on my face imagining shy Guarav flustering as he tells Nikki about Pari's suggestion...and loved how the sisters found each other when Pari told the truth......
And the kiss was oh so HOTTTTT.....Felt on fire, myself with your lovely description..😃
I love Jealous Abhi....Makes him more hotter as he spews anger...
I am only confused a bit with Pari's suggestion......how would deliberate jealousy really work in this scenario???
Personally, I would prefer Nikki remembering Abhi on her own and then perhaps, bec of what he did, which led to her accident, she ganging up with Gaurav to make him jealous.... Don't really know how well Abhi getting jealous and blurting out his love for her would really impact and bring out Nikki's own love for him... ( It is she who has no memory of her love and their relationship) We all know of Abhi's love for her, everyone in Sanjeevani knows and have even told Nikki, including Gaurav and Pari. Even Nikki can see and feel it, so Abhi clamping up on his feelings doesn't necessarily negate his love for her.
But, I am sure you have something up your sleeve so I'll wait and watch...😃
Loved every emotion you showed about AN in this update.....Great Job ! Looking to the next one eagerly...


Thanks Michi...glad u enjoyed the update n the kiss!!

Ok I agree with everything u said esp Nikki rem ABhi on her own and thats why I have been making Abhi hold out till now....but the aspect I am exploring now is what if her memory never comes back (which isn't too much of apossiblity coz she is rem a few incidents) or if it takes a lot of time!!

So how long is she going to wiat....she also knows that he loves her but her battered heart is making her greedy to hear it and if she starts living her life without Abhi, that too won;t be acceptable to Abhi himself!!

That is why she is taking a chance.....to see if she can find love with him in spite of the tragedy which has occurred and I think she has a right to few answers which Abhi is not very forthcoming on...so she has decided to get them for herself!!

Also she has forgotten him but the feelings she has for him keep coming back strong and she is simply looking for answers to a life she knew she had.

I hope I have been able to explain what you addressed.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful parts honey.. I just had a marathon read of lot of parts ... story is surely picking up speed.. cant wait to see this pari-niki chemistry,,, with gaurav - niki fake relationship abhi is sure to get jealous and speed him up in realising that he cannot sit and worry about past... good good.. waiting for your next update :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Honey,
I hope you don't mind I raised that question...... and you explained it perfectly.... Its absolutely understandable coming from Nikki.... she is in a desperate state, wants answers and she was anyway very impulsive so would do anything to get Abhi to react... ( For that matter if I was in her place I would be doing the same.....😆😆😆) hope it doesn't complicate things further for her... something like backfiring, pushing Abhi away thinking she has actually forgotten him and is falling for Gaurav. Very, Very interesting situation.. Me likes it !

A jealous, fuming Abhi makes a relishing viewing anyday....😆😆
Eagerly looking forward to your next update....
Edited by mich09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Honey!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗 I missed you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗 But I'm back!!! And with me my essays are back too!!!
Ok let's get started.....goodness gracious!!! I'm a looooonnnngggg way behind!!!! Better get to work! Full steam ahead!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
Ok part 11:
He tried to calm himself down by telling himself that it might be something minor.
😆 😆 😆 He gets so paranoid!!!! I love him!!!

"If you did Dr. Nikita, we wouldn't be having this conversation" Abhimanyu tells her off and she makes a face at him. Exasperated at her childish behavior he simply walks out of the ward.

"Nikki'.he is right'.you need to take care of yourself" Muskaan explains to her and Nikki mutters softly, "He is always right'.that Sadu"

Sadu!!! Uf AN cannot be without Nikki calling Abhi "sadu"! But he's such a cute sadu!!! And he's always right, that's true...it can get on anybody's nerves! Mr.Perect!!!!! 😍

"He cares" Muski lets on

😳 This is for Muski...🤗

"The song'..I'.we'.Armaan we danced on it'..I just saw it" Nikki opens her eyes and looks at the two excited.

Why does she always remember everything related to Armaan?? What wrong has Abhi done? Her mind, body, heart...everything always seems to be against Abhi...why oh why?? But still, I'm glad she made some progress!

"Bhai?" he questions Ridzi and she nods her head and Armaan's excitement knows no bounds. Suddenly he likes the guy sitting in front of him a lot better than he liked him a few seconds ago.
😆 😆 😆
I'.I'came to meet Gaurav" Nikki says softly,
😲 Aur koi excuse nahi mila!!!! Uff yeh Nikki bhi na....kab sudhregi???!!!

He wheels her to her room and she abruptly gets up from the wheel chair, misbalancing herself as a result. Abhimanyu catches her as a reflex but she pushes him away angrily.

Okay...I know she's having trouble walking...but someone please tell me why she always slips or falls or trips or stumbles only when he is around to catch her??? 😆 😉

Why'..do you have a lecture on that too?" she asks in a tear strained voice and the next moment he is on his knees in front of her, her face in his hands.
What a cute position to be in!!! And Abhi on his knees....😍
"Nikki... I care" his anguish and care reflected in his eyes and a sob escapes her and a lone tear falls from her eyes. Abhimanyu wipes it with his thumb and she tries to get out of his hold.
Awwwwwwwww......sweet!

"You do such stupid things and refuse to listen to anything sensible'I want you to get well soon Nikki but your antics worry me" he tells her, his hands making lazy circles on her back. It felt good to hold her in his arms. His heart calmed at her presence.

😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
"If I get well soon'.you won't worry about me?" she asks looking up at him but refusing to get out of his embrace. It felt safe in his arms.
*laughs* She's so cute! When will she grow up? 😆
She wished she could remain like this. All pain and trouble seemed to vanish in his arms.
Of course!!! Aakhir baahein kiske hain!!!! 😳

"You should laugh often'.you look good" she tells him, tracing his smile with her thumb reflexively. When she looks into his eyes, she notices awareness creeping in them. He tries to push her away but Nikki holds on to his collar.

@bold....*sigh* True....he's got dimples!!!
@underlined....uh oh....She doesn't know what she's doing!!!
"Why do you run'.away from me Abhi?" she asks cupping his face.
HA!!! To finally pooch hi liya! Chalo Dr.Modi....itna bhav khane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai, aapse zyada uncomfortable sawal ar bhi log pooch sakte hai!!!!

"Lame try Dr. Modi" Nikki tells him playing with the buttons of his shirt, enjoying the effect she was having on him.

Honey tumne "Partner" dekha? Woh Govinda-Salman Khan wala? Wahan pe ek dialogue tha..."Museebat Bhaskar ke peeche nahi, Bhaskar museebat ke peeche bhagta hai"...is dialogue mein "Bhaskar" ki jagah par "Nikki" laga do....perfect hoga!

"Answer me Abhi" she asks, entwining her fingers in his and suddenly finds his hands in her hair and his face close to hers. She looks wide eyed at him and him and unconsciously her lips part.

"Is it a game?" he asks his voice husky and his grip stronger, pulling her closer, "You might not like where it leads Nikki" he tells her tracing her lips with his thumb. She closes her eyes in subservience, melting in his arms.

Hayye hayye Rabba!!!! Uffffff.......😳 😳 😳

"Nikki" he asks her one last time and then places his lips on hers, kissing her, unable to control himself. Nikki's arms go around his neck as she responds to his kiss but he pulls himself away.

Mmmmmm.....wah ji wah!!! Kya kiss hai!!! Me to blushing and blushing and blushing.....😳

"I have to'..I'.don't '..Please..'I don't want to hurt you more" he tells her and she is unable to understand his fear.

Yeh....ladka....kab....sudhrega....?????
*sings* Yeh ladka hayye Allah kaisa hai deewana!!!
Awesome update Honu!!!!!!!!! Lovely lovely lovely!!!!!!
Now....proceeding to the next update!!!
Edited by Khushboo_AN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
eeeee.....Khushboo........I love redaing ur essays!!!
Ab songs kab chunogi???

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