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-ananya- thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
rinky did u post ur OS in AJ thread

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Posted: 16 years ago

heyy dj

u found it good so post ur thought also .........i want all u share ur thoughts now ........i so wanted 2 no all ur real thoughts about it
i'm seriously pissed with sum randam discussions ........here there sumwhere don't no but now i want sum people should put there thoughts over it.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Piya's siggy won best siggy in AB's blog contest..................i m so happy......

"dances around CC..........."

and does Kajrare................

AJ was right..........HOL rocks indeed................
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Posted: 16 years ago
waaah piya won...i cant believe it....but am soo happy.....😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
phir se likh liya meine.achha nahin hua toh jootas are welcome....😃


Nupur sat down with a cup of coffee. The room was dark and she was feeling a little tired. It was past evening, the sun had set and a few strands of golden color was visible in the horizon. She looked at the minuscule amount of sky visible from her window and sighed. Was the Sun setting on her life too? She looked at her husband lying on the bed , he had very high fever and has been tossing and turning.. She had called the doctor and then Shilpa aunty. Doctor had assured her the fever would get better by tomorrow if it was a viral fever, Shilpa Aunty advised her to feed him tomato soup which was his favourite and to call her whenever there was any development.

Doctor had suggested cold bath, cold compress and regular washing of hair. Mayank even in this fever wanted to do all of it by himself. ….Sigh…..This man was so freaking proud……She wasn't mad at him for that, it just tied her heart in knots seeing him like this….

She was pulled into a whirlpool of unhappy thoughts. How was Gunjan? Was Samrat and Suhani taking proper care of her? How was Bauji? He had gone on a business tour to Puna and hasn't returned yet…..Now that Mayank's part time job was suspended how would they pay Samrat? She was too proud to stay on in his outhouse without paying rent. She was sure that matter was bothering Mayank too. Everything is so costly these days, prices are always on a high and on top of that this JD problem. …

It felt like a cloud of despair was setting on her. She always believed in happy endings, like they showed in cinemas...But life was a lot more complicated. Even the thought of Shah Rukh Kahn wasn't enough to uplift her mood.

Nupur……her husband called out. She went to the side of his bed…Kuchh chahiye Mayank? Mayank wasn't talking to her…he was murmuring in delirium. He had been murmuring for quite some time. She decided on washing his head again, maybe it will reduce the discomfort….but before that she had to make him eat something. She got some soup and slowly woke him up.

N-Mayank...slowly pushing him …Mayank….thoda utho Mayank…. Kuchh khaa lo…..

M opened his eyes and looked at her..his eyes were blurred and his face was swollen..he slowly nodded his head saying a "NO"…

N- Mayank meine soup laya hai….tomato soup…galey mein bilkul dard nahin hoga….

M- bhukkh nahin lag raha…

N- please Mayank thoda sa….nahin toh weak ho jaogey….please…

Mayank nods in assent this time and decides to get up…

Nupur adjusts him on the cushions and pillows and hands him the bowl while placing her hand beneath his for support…

Mayank slowly drinks the soup…the way he drank she was sure he was having throat pain…but he said nothing….just kept drinking..after finishing the entire content he handed over the bowl to her….She wiped away his face and asked him if he would want a head wash…

Mayank said-Yes….

She went to get the job done….After washing his head she slowly toweled his head while he lay half reclined on the bed with the support of cushions and pillows…His face was drawn…he looked haggard…But there was a certain childish glow on his face….A vulnerability which she hardly sees on his face…the strong confident Mayank was replaced by a man who wanted comfort love care and support..he hardly asked for it..But they way he called her name it was evident….

After wiping his face and head dry she thought of putting him to bed but instead adjusted his head on her lap. Mayank feeling the change in his posture of sleeping looked up…he smiled feebly at her…But that look and smile spoke gazillion emotions which could never be explained in words. It spoke of love, happiness, peace and gratefulness. She wondered how could he look like that with so much physical pain but yes he did look very peaceful. …

She slowly started running her fingers through his hair and Mayank flipped over to lie on his stomach and buried his face in her lap. He smelled in a breath of air and said- Tumahara yeh perfume mujhey achha lagta hai….Woh doosrey perfume se better hai….

Nupur- kaunsa ? black beauty?

Mayank- Haan..woh wala bilkul bakwaas hai…tumpe bilkul suit nahin karta…

Black beauty was Nupur's favourite perfume….But she said nothing…just a Hmmmm….

Mayank- yeh color jo tumney ab pehna hai…yeh achha hai…par bottle green bahut ganda color hai…

Nupur remembered she wore that color today and she wears that Salwar quite frequently..but she just said a …Hmmm…..

Mayank- Tum red pehna karo…tum pe achha lagta hai…U look like a beautiful bride…..

Nupur- Theek hai…

Mayank then looks up and says…Tum pe white bhi bahut suit karta hai….It took Nupur just a spilt second to understand why he said that but before she could answer he hid his face in her lap…

Then in a muffled tone he said….Tum mujhey bahut achhi lagti ho..Nupur…jaise bhi raho..kuchh bhi peheno….Par aaj kuchh zyada hi tumhey pyaar karne ko dil kar raha hai….he held her tighter….Mujhsey kabhi door mat jana…I can't live without you…

Nupur slowly bends down and places a kiss on his check and whispers in his ear…I will never leave you…

Mayank slips into a slumber and she places him back on the bed. She lies down next to him and looks at him. Just being next to him, here or anywhere gives her such happiness, hope and peace. She can go with him to any corner of the world and still be happy. Its like he is a part of her existence, an integral part. …She finally gets up to clean the utensils and cook something for the night. She had to eat to stay fit. ……..Cause Tomorrow was another day…


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Posted: 16 years ago
Rinky a big jaadoo ki jhappi to u for this.............

ah, what a lovely part..............please post all these in AJ's thread, we will do smthing then.............cant disclose here............LOL

If we get these scenes, i will dance...............else imagination................

LOL, plz do post, i m off to work now, will be back by 5............and i want all these on AJ's post
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok annie ji thanx for liking it...will post them on AJ's thread...when i find that ...i cant find it on forum...
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Posted: 16 years ago
rinky
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i'm just blown over 2 this.........no words 2 say how much i loved it
just loved 2 bitsssssss........
its cute ,emotional,adorableeee, filled with love
u have 2 post in future thread if u r not going post in another 10 mins i'm going post all on ur behalf u can't be shy u should be proud on writing them
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok will tanu....raat ko pakka

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