*Dream Girl* AVINA FF* Completete* Thank you* - Page 7

Originally posted by: RaDev_addict

hey devika..how r u

loved ur ff just finished reading all the 9 parts and it was amazing yaar loved it .it was awesome

plzz add me in ur pm list thank u!!

Lovely Devika do continue😃

Originally posted by: jyothika09

thanks devika now waiting for tomorrow

Originally posted by: chalhov

Lovely Devika do continue😃

The next day morning at Sasthriji's house...

Sathriji:..Devkiji ,aaj PB house mei beda pooja ayojan kiya hei...mei chahtha hum ke aap sab bhi mere sath aye...

Devki: sab...aisa kaise ho saktha hei....ghar mein tho koi hona chahiye na..

sasthriji: uski koi avasyaktha nahi hei...vaise he, ye PB house Vrindavan mei hi heina...aur syam ko hum vapas bhi ajayenge...

hearing this Amma

Amma: Lalla..Devki theek kah rah hi.....tho hum ye karange ki hum sab jaye aur Radhika ko yaha rehne de..she has to take care of the gosala too...

Sasthrji: i thought to take Radhika with me for sure because she will be able to help me out but i was doubting on all others.

Amma: eise kaise ho sakthe hei...Vishaka aur mein thumhari sath aa rehe hum...aur devki bhi..thume jo kuch madad chahiye..vo Devki aur vishaka karegi...theek hi..

Sathriji: theek hei maaji..jaise aapki marzi..

Amma: ye...chori thu ne suna na...thu gosala saf karde aur vo barthan sab saf kar de..aur uske bad........she gave unlimited list of works for

Radhika...Radh just nodded her head with obedience..amma end with saying...aur edhar udhar khoomne keliye math jana..yeha koi nahi hei...ghar sabhal...hummmmmmmmm

Amma: vishaka betiya thum thayyar hogayi kya...jaldi kar..achi kapada pehena..agar koi dekhe tho dekhthe rah jaye...

Vishaka: theek hi amma...mei kaise lag rahi hum?...coming out with a very fitted anarkali churidar ..looks like it is ready to tear off anytime if she take a deep breath...

Amma: bahuth sundar...ab chale...lalla hum thiyar hei...

Sathriji told Radhika to pray to kanha so that pooja finish uninterupted and with all the good results...she smiled and nodded her head...they all left..

Radhika went to the cowshed to clean it up and feed them...

PBV house:

Dadi: sab thaiyariyam ho chuki hena Vaisali..Sasthriji tho abhi athe honge..

Vaisali: ham maaji..aur mein Mrinalini ko dekhthee hum...after all this is specifically for them..so she needs to know everything...

Dadi: theek hei beta....thum jakar dekho...aur a Dev kaha hei..

Dev was standing in his room balcony...wearing a blue teashirt and jean and was enjoying the beauty of morning...he heard daadi calling him ..came down to meet her...ha daadi mei araha hum...

Dadi: thum bhi na...thume tho edhar hona chahiye na...dekhona kithni kam baki hei..

Dev: tho boliyena....kya karna hei?

Dadi: vo sab mei karoongi..thum bas Sathriji ki vaha phone kar ke poochlena ki vo vaha se nikale ya nahi ..number us phone book mei hei..

Dev: theek hei daadi..

Dev took the phone book and noted the numeber and dialed...started ringing....

Radhika:...phone tho bach rahe hei..kanha es vakth kaun hoga...but by the time she tried to take the phone ,the ringing stopped..she waited for a sec and walked with looking back at the phone..

Dev: dadi mujhe lag reha hei vo log nikal chuka hei...koi phone nahi udha rahe he..

Dadi: tho theek hei...

Dev was happy that means the girl also going to come who troubled him last night...whose thougt was making him feel happy , whose face was making him go crazy whose voice was waking him up all night and finally when he was able to sleep who came in his dream to give sweet moments....my DREAM GIRL.....she is coming too..i have to ask her why she is doing this to me..or is it only me ...is she feeling the same......number of questions flashed in his mind and smile crossed across his lips....

Purohith: Dev beta ek bar aur phone karke dekhlena....agar miss tho nahi hui...

Dev: theek hei dad..and started dialing again ...then Birju..

Birju: sathriji is here ..

Dev put the phone down and almost ran to the main door with a sparkly eyes which was starving to see the beauty .......

Purohith: ayiye ayiye...hame khusi hui ki aap sab log agaye...

Dadi: ha Sathriji ,purohith ne theek kaha hei..ayiyena..

Sasthriji: radhe radhe...and entered with a beutiful smile on his face...

One by one entered and Dev was looking each one of them..Devki, amma then..visaka...then...????oh...where is Radhika..his heart started beating faster and his eyes were looking outside still waiting for her entry,,,,,but...noone came after...

Dadi:...tho Devki..Radhika beti kaha hei..

Dev jerked at that question and looked at Devki for the answer,,

Devki: vo tho esliye...

Amma: vo ghar mei tho kissi ko hona chahiye na..esliye Radhika ghar ma hei...aur vise hi vo yaha akar kya karlega...

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Visaka was looking at Dev all this time and her eyes were fixed on him..drooling and gone to a diferent world..

amma saw this and was very happy...

Purohith: tho suru kare...pooja ke sthal vaha hei...

Sathriji followed Purohith and other members to the hall were pooja was arranged..Mrinalini and Vivek also was waiting for them at the pooja sthal...

They took the blessings of Sathriji...

Dev was very unhappy that Radhika didn't come so..he stayed back in hall thinking why she stayed back.....is she still angry with the incident or she really has something to do at home..

Birju: kaha kho gaye ho bhayya..avoona pooja suru hone vala hei..

Dev: hauu..ha..chale ..and they walked towards the pooja room..

Amma was talking and Visakha was in dream world and Devki was helping Sathriji with pooja arrangements...then Sathriji asked Devki to give something specififically..

and Devki couldn't find it anywhere ..

Dadi: kuch kami hei kya...kya miss hoga ya hei..

sathriji: ha ..aisa lag reha hei..lekin koi bath nahi ..ghar mei he....

Devki: mein jakar le avoongi..

SathrijI: nahi Devkiji..der ho jayegi..

Dadi: i can sent somebody to your home and get it..

sathriji: uski koi avasyaktha nahi hei...mei phone karke Radhika ko bathadoongi..vo lekar ayegi...aap zara phone deejiyena..

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Daadi: dev beta phone legakar dena .

hearing this Dev was so happy that he dialed the redial number and the phone started ringing on the other side...

Hearing the phone ringing again Radhika came running from the gosala to take the phone but again it stopped..she waited for few minutes..

Amma: i don't think she will be at home..may be roaming around...no resposibility at all.....only relaxing and walk around..koi kam bhi nahi karegi...

Sathriji: deta ek bar aur legadena..vo gosala saf kar rahi hogi..esliye udhane mei der ho rahi hogi...

Dev dialed again and this time Radhika picked the phone and she said:" hello"

hearing her voice Dev was so happy , no words came out from his mouth but just smiled..

he again heard her saying " hello"

Sathriji: beta ..kya vo phone udaya kya..

Dev :jerked and came back to reality..Ha..ha...she is on line.and gave the phone to Sathriji..

Sathriji: beta thu jaldi vo lekar ajana..pooja ka vakth hogaya hei...der math karna..theek hei..

Radhika.kept the phone down and washed her hands thoroughly and took the item and ran to PB house within few minutes...

Purohith:.may be we can sent a car to get it quickly...or v can

Sathrji: aap fikr math hojayiye..Radhika abhi ajayegi..ussse patha hei aur vo der math karegi..kyum ki vo janthe hei pooja ke subh samay ki importance..

Dev was actully looking for a chance to go and get her but didn't worked... but was very happy to hear that she is coming in few minutes to the house...

Sathrji: Devkiji..vo ghee yaha rekhiye..

amma ......how badly i tried to keep her away from PB house but ...anyway let her come ..i will sent her back right away...and she waited outside hall for sending Radhika back right away...

whereas Dev came to front door ..looking outside for his dream grl to appear in front of him....with a smily face

Visaka walked outside looking for Dev but she didn't find him..but she saw the well arranged halls and furniture..and so on and her eyes were wondering over all that...

There Dev saw Radhika coming running with something in her hand ....she was wearing a light pink churidar with her duppatta and her braided hair was swinging both side as she was running... as she reached near he saw the reflection of her dress colour on her face... She was not paying attention to the front door ..she was manily concentrating on reaching there on time....she started swetting too slightly as she was running .....

she reached near the front door and looked up and saw Dev satnding looking at her with a smily face ..she smiled back and he noticed still the bruice is there on her face eventhough it is faded little bit...and his smile fade away..

Radhika understood the reason and suddenly covered her face with circling the duppatta around her head...and she stood there..

Daadi: arre...Dev thu ye kya kar rahe ho?..sab log Radhika ka endazar kar rahi hi..aur thune usse bahar hi khada kar diya..

Dev: came back to reality..jee daadima...sorry sorry...andar ayiyena...looking at Radhika..

she tried to step in..then amma..

Radhika give that to me and you can go back..

Dev shocked to hear that ...he wanted her to stay,,...

Dadi: ye aap kya kah rehi hei....Radhika beta thu andar chal....pooja suru hone vala hei...agar thum bhi ajaye gi tho hum sabko ache legegi...ajavona..

Amma looked at Radhika angrily and went inside..

Radhika walked inside passing Dev who was still looking at her lovingly...she noticed his look but walked with a downcasted eyes towards Dadi..and went insdie with dadi to pooja room..

Sathriji: agayi beta,...dona..mujhe malum tha ki thum vilamb nahi karegi...aur yaha ajavo aur mom ko madad karo..

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Radhika: with a smile enetred the pooja room and started helping

Devki: acha huva ki thum agayi..dekhona vishaka kuch nahi karthi..

hearing this amma looked at Devki angrily and showed her eyes

Devki saw this and shut her mouth..

Sathriji did the puja ..and it went on for long and Radhika helped him getting things nearby as needed accordingly and completely into it..Devki slowly walked away and stood nearby as Radhika was helping with everything.

Dadi and Vaisali was watching this and said...how well she is doing everything and surprisingly sathriji doesn't have to say anything unless otherwise needed diferently....everything was handy for him ...

Dev was standing at a corner watching Radhika....Radhika in between with her runs met his gaze...but looked away with a smile as aknowleding his look...

Visaka was roaming around to see all the rooms and furnishing and amma was running around to check on vishaka as she was not in her sight....

At the end of the pooja..daadi came to Sathriji and said .." as i told you earlier this is specifically for Mrinalini and Vivek for their happy married life..they have everything except the blessing of a balgopal...so you have to bless them for that ..they did many tests and treatment and planning to go to America in next 2 months for some treatment....so this pooja bring them the happiness for their life"...Sasthriji listened and said everything will be alright maaji..aap chinta math hojayiye..dekhona pooja kithni achi se sampann hogayi hei....sab kuch acha hi hoga....

Raadhika heard this too and she felt sorry for Mrinalini and Vivek and prayed to kanha.." kanha enki sunna.....jo vo mang rehe hei...usse vo prapth hone dena.." she closed her eyes during aarthi and prayed whole heartedly to Kanha...

Sasthriji blessed the couple with" puthravathi bhav''..

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Mrinalini looked at Vivek and a small smile came across Vivek's face too...

They all went to the main hall...

Radhika started arranging back stuff in place and cleaning around so that the pooja sthal look nice and beutiful....

Dev: kya mei bhi aapki madad karum.

Radhika looked up and said...jee sukriya..mei theek hum...aap bas ye kah deejiye ki ye sab mei kaha rekhum?...

Dev: vo sab...aap yaha rekh deejiye.pointing to a corrner..

Vaisali: ye thu kya kah rehi he Dev...beta mei dikhadum thujhe....usse tho kuch nahi athi aur thu usse pooch rahi hi...

Radhika looked at Dev and he was showing a kiddish face as if he got caught ..

Vaisali and Radhika did all the work and vaisali was so happy and she never seen any girl at that age doing things with so much responsibility....

vaisali: ab mei samjhi kyum DM thume ethna pyar karthe hei..

Radhika: jee;;?

Vaisali: kuch nahi..jab bhi hum usse milthe hena..thab vo hamesha kuch na kuch acha kahethi hei thumhare bare mein...

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Radhika: ..kyom ki..vo bahuth achi hi esliye..mein tho kuch nahi karhi..vo tho uski badapan hei.

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Vaisali: mujhe aisa nahi legtha..mujhe legtha hai vohi sach hei..

Radhika just smiled and walked with vaisali to the main hall..

Dev ... arre mai bhi yaha hum..meri bhi fikr karo and walked faster to vaisali and radhika....

Amma saw pooja over and Dev walking behind radhika and vaisali ..felt angry....especially the smile on vaisali's face...

she is still looking for her pothi..and found her enjoying herself watching TV in a big room ..

Amma; mene kahatha na thumko vaha khadi hone keliye..aur thum yaha akar baithee ho..

Vish: kya pooja katham hui..mei tho bore horehe thi..acha huva ye TV on tha..

Amma: thum nahi samjhoki..avo mere sath..she dragged her to front hall..

Sathriji: tho ab agaya deejiye..

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Dadi: mei bahuth khush hum...mann kah raha hei..sab kuch theek hojayegi..

Sathriji: bhagavan par viswas rekhiye maaji...sab kuch prabhu ke echa....

Purohith: khana khakar jayiyena.....aap ne abhi thak ek glass paani bhi nahi pi..

Sathriji: uska koi avasyaktha nahi..hum theek hei..

vaisali: nahi sathriji aap log pehli bar aa rahe hei..mei khana lagathee hum hum sab milker khalenge,,,,

sathriji: jaise aapki marzi..

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Dev was so happy to hear this and he looked around for a chance to get Raadhika alone but she was with vaisali or devki or mrinalini....he felt bad....why don't she come and talk to me..

whereas vish was standing just near him trying to talk to him and talking like a puppet all the time...dev didn't pay any attention and was jsut nodding his head or saying ha ha....

amma was happy to see them together

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Part-11

PBV house..

Vaisali: Lunch is ready...please do come ...she invited everyone to the dining table. Radhika was standing behind the door watching everybody...amma walked towards her and told...

A: why are you standing here...Pooja is over..go home..

Radhika: looked up at Amma and nodded her head and about to leave...

Dadi: Radhika beta...avona...hamare sath baithiye..

Dev happy to hear this and looked back to see her coming..

Birju was helping to get everything on the table.

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Radhika: nahi dadima...mei theek hum..aap kha leejiye..

Dadi: aisa math kaho...Vishaka kaha hei..usse bhi bulavo ..aur aaja..

hearing this Vish: mei yeha hum..and ran to the table and sat on the chair next to Dev..The move was so quick that everybody just looked at her..including Purohith..

Purohith: Vaisali serve the lunch..see everybody seems to be hungry..

Dadi: radhika beta avona ..mere sath baitho...

Amma: mei baithoonki aap ke sath..vaise Radhika bad mei khalenge...

Devki: Ha..amma aap bithiye..hum bad mei kahloongi..

Dev was expecting her to come and sit opposit to him..but stuck with vish's corner look...

Vaisali and Birju started serving...the maid gave one bowl of curry in Radh's hand ..she went to put that on table...then Purohith..

Radhika beta..vo curry thoda dena...

Radhika looked up at Purohith who was looking at her with a smily face...she was happy to hear to serve and she started serving everybody...amma was trying hard to show her big round eyes to warn her but Radhika was more into serving everybody that she didn't pay any attention...meanwhile radhika came and unknowingly stood next to Dev.

.Dev looked at her:..mujhe bhi thoda curry milega?

Radhika with a smily face served him and then watched his plate and took another bowl and served him that...he felt the taste better now and started enjoying the meal...Birju noticed the small crack of smile on Dev's lips and smiled himself as if he caught something fishy.....

Birju commented.:."dev bhiya aaj tho aap ko behuth bhook lag rehe heina...kuch zyada kha rehe hei."

Dadi: ye kya bol rehe hei thu Birju..

Birju: kuch nahi dadima....

Dev looked at Birju and showed a kiddish face..

They all done eating and went to wash their hands.

sasthriji: maaji khana behuth swadisht tha..

Daadi: ji sukriya....

Purohith and sathriji started talking about diferent things and then sathriji..ab hume agaya deejiye ..mujhe Math thak jana hei..

Vaisali: aap Math ja rehe ho...humko bhi jana hei...Swamiji ko milna hei...parsom jane ki plan benaya humne..

Sasthriji: ha...mei hur sunday jaatha hum...Radhika beta chale..

Vaisali: Lekin vo tho kuch nahi khayi hena.

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Radhika: mei theek hum..mujhe babuji ke sath jana heii....

Dadi: lekin beta.kuch khakar javona.

Devki: vaise maaji...Radhika will eat dinner only today.

Dadi: vo kyum?

Devki: jab bhi uski Babuji koi special pooja karthe heina , she take the vrath so that everything go on perfectly and get the good result...and she is doing this for long...babuji pooja karegi..aur ye apne mann mei Kanha se prarthana karegi......

Daadi: ye tho bahuth khusi ke bath hei..Mei bahuth khush hum ye sunkar...aaj kal aisa ledkiya kaha miltha hei..

Amma looked at devki with her buring eyes....devki met her gaze and looked down as if she spilled something wrong unknowingly...

sathriji: tho theek hei..hum chalthe hai..Radhika beta avo..amma, devki hum syam ko hi vapas ajayegi..theek hei.

Purohith: dev beta .sathriji ko math chod kar avona..

Dev was so happy to hear this and went to get the keys.

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sasthriji: aap kyum thak leef kar rehe ho...hum bas chalkar javoongi..adath pat gayi na..

Daadi: vo sab theek hei..lekin aaj aapko hamara bath sunna padega...Dev beta jaldi javona..

Dev: jee dadima... and he lead them to outside..

amma was not at all happy to see this.'.why Dev should go.?..thodi der hamare pass bhi baido aur bathem karo...'..

dadi : devki aur Vaisali ko khanedena...by the time he will be back...

Dev walked fast to the car and then dadi..'Radhika beta..you like car drive...right?'

Radhika: looked at amma and looked down ..

Daadi: mei tho masak kar rehi thi...thu ja....

Radhika took the blessing and went along with Sathriji..

sathriji: radhe radhe..

Purohith: radhe radhe.. and they went inside..

inside the car...Sasthriji sat with Dev in front and radhika was sitting at the back...looking outside..

Sasthriji: how many yrs you were in America.

Dev: jee char saal.

S: paddayi keliye gayena..

d: ha

s: khatham hui

D: jee

in between his eyes were looking at the mirror to see the face on the back ..but noticed she is totally looking outside and not paying any attention to the conversation..

S: meine suna hei ..vaha bhi temple sab hei?..

D: ha...

S: acha ..aur yeha ke poojariyam vaaha bhi pooja karthei heina..

D: ha...aur vaha bhi krishna temple hei aur mostly almost everyGod ..

hearing this Radh: acha...tho vaha ke Krishna kaise dikhthe hei..

Dev surprised hear her question..he thought she is not paying any attention...he looked back and asked.... jee..?

S: Beta ye Radhika hei...krish ki radha..jab bhi koi Kanha ka naam lega na...thab usse niyandran nahi hothi......

Radhika:Babuji aap bhi na....and looked at Dev...' mathlab...kanha America mei kaisa dikhtha hei?'.

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S:Radhika beta ye kaisa sawal hei..Kanha tho vise hi dikhthe hei jaise thum dekhna chahthi ho..

Radh: nahi babuji..vo america meina..vaha tho humlog nahi heina...sab videshi hei..tho

Dev: tho kya thumhe kanha videshi jisa dikhna chahiye?

R: nahi nahi...mei tho pooch rahi thi ki...

S: radhika beta..bhagavan jaha bhi ho....vo hamesha ek hi hei..uska roop nahi badaltha..

dev:Actully they bring the moorthy from here and do the abhisheka and everything the same way ..but there is some diffrences but the idol and the pooja karmas are same like here. But always miss the atmosphere here...

radhika: tho aap vaha hamesa temple jathe the?

dev: ha ofcourse..vo tho dadi aur mom ne mujhe sikhaya hei...dev aur mandir na javum..impossible...

S: behuth khusi hei mujhe ye sunkar..ki hamare lok videsh jakar bhi hamari parambarayem nibhal rahi heina....Jai sri krishna...

and they reached Math..Sasthriji came out ..radhika was struggling to open the door..then Dev opened it from outside for her...

radhika: suskriya..

dev just smiled at her and walked with them to inside..then a call came on his cell...and it was Raj..

Raj: ye Dev where are you man?

Dev: jee ...ye..raj what's up?

raj: com'n fast we are waiting for you ..there is some surprise for you..

Dev: what?

Raj: arre jaldi ajana...DM also waiting for you..

Dev: jee theek hei..ek minute..

Dev: sathriji mujhe jana hei abhi,,,,,

s: theek hei beta..dhanyavad..

Dev: aap bhi na..ye tho meri farz hei...Radh eRadhe and he took the blessing and turned to leave but then looked at radhika met her thanking gaze.....and small chirping smile on her lips..

he smiled back and went to his car and drove away..radhika stood back and watched him going and went inside with sathriji......

Amma and Vish waited for Dev....

Dadi: visali usse phone karke poocho ki vo kaha hei...

Vivek: vo dadima...kya huva ke..Dev ko Raj ne bulaya...mujhe bhi bulaya hei..Mai bhi vaham jaa rahe hum...kah rah tha ki kuch surprise hei...

dadi: theek hei..birju amma ko khar thak chodkar ana..

Birju: theek hei dadima..abhi gaadi nikalthi hum..and he went outside..

amma and vishaka with a face went along.....

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Love and take care

Devika