|| Ashlesha's Assets ||* Eternal Journey * PG 61 - Page 12

Originally posted by: mireen19

helloo..madam..aah finally mera shot mujhe mil gaya....😃.thanks so much*hugssssss*but bhut tarsaya mujhe..😡😆 lekin tujhe maaf kiya cos tarasne ka result acha mila😃..n sorry for late commenting..*kan pakding* kaamchor woh toh tu hamesha karti hain, haan I m just too good frnd unlike someone😡

ok now back to the shot.aqsu😲 u wrote such a romantic shot just for me..yes sweetheart considering you Ms. Hardcore Romantic aww thanks so much*hugs*..loved the start actually i reli like heer's attitude in the starting..lol..n thn whn prem's enter n premeer romantic scn..😍😳 tht scn u express so beautifully👏..n the part whr premeer comfrnting echothr tht part was awesum.. the way prem justifying himself...haila😲 kiya dream house tha heer ka..😍..my imagination, so maybe myn I wanted that way ☺️luv it..last part was reli cute but thoda or romantic ho sakta tha...😉 😛 😆sudhar jaa beshram🤣(bas bas bhang mat mujhe merna ke liye apna danda lene)😆just kidding..😛ovrall it was reli,phantastic,phtabulous,n this is ur bst n most romantic shot as far as my beta said..(hota hi afterall mere liya tha)😳thankss dear, Glad you loved it, well even I loved my work in this😊

btw beta tu zyada jealous mat ho..apni mama ke bare mein aise baat kerte hai dande padege...mil tu mujhe..😡 😆 😆

yh aqsu nxt time add more n more romantic scns but tht part only for me ok..cos usper sirf mera haq hai...cos woh part sirf meri demand per add hua hai..😆 😆haan aur kya chachiye tujhe gandi, isse zyada nahi milega😛

thanks again..oh sory thanks likha meine😲 i kwn tu bhut gussa hogi...but abhi edit nhi ker sakti kaamchor huh..na..😛..so tu khud edit kerde n thanks ki jagah luv u kerke ek baar fir read ker le..😆 😛aalsi,dumbo,daffar,kaamchor,lazy lump

luv

amreen Ashlesha

Originally posted by: meeshti.

hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii ash

awesomeeeeeeeeeeee os

loved it

it was really romantic and loving .................................

specially prem's dialogues......................................................

keep it up

Originally posted by: blueocean_787

great update!!!!

Originally posted by: p.ggreeshma

mine

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hiiiiiiiii ashlesha.......................hiii greeshma
that was spectacular..................loved each and every point of it right from the top to the bottom. thankss dear

personally i can say that it is the best of all ur works i have ever read................... well thankss my fav too😊

prem's dialogues were fantastic.................

and coming to ashlesha maan' i hate her, so i tried to imagine ur face there..............but i don't know whethr it matched with ur face. well dear i m a big fan of ashpreet, well don't even try to😆😆

well done my freind thankss

love
greeshma Ashlesha

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

wowwwwwwww.....

ashelesha.....that was spectacular as usual!!!!! ⭐️Thankss dear

prem's dialogues were fab.....and the premeer scenes were fantastic.....each and every one of them!

it was too cute and too romantic yaar.... glad u lykd it

waitinggggg for the next one!!!well here it is

Originally posted by: maha_k

finally i am here to edit😃finally Miss. Maha managed her busy schedule fr me😡

i know i am stupid but sorry dear. well yes that you are

now hmmmm how can i forget tu ny mujhy kitna ullu bnaya tha na about the start of this OS😡 sigh shukr hy that it was just a joke😆yeahhh, I can seriously still remeber your face and each n every smilieys aftr wht i told you🤣

whar a start dear 😆 awesommmmmm and very romantic☺️and very well writen👏👏.the way u describe heer's emotion was just perfact.⭐️👏Thankss dear, well I m just the best😛

but stupid prem😡 he was at mistake and still expecting that heer will welcome him with great happiness😆and what did i do how sweet na😲but i really liked heer character yar 👍🏼 again every line, emotions everything was just too good👏👏Thankss, well i made her, yeahh indeed stupid Prem😆😆

but one thing that i want to say in this OS u perfactly described the difference between a girl or boy's love.love is equal but their meaning is little bit different for both.thankss, ahhh I never knew my maha is so very deep thinker about love *suspecting * prem leave her for his career but just beacuse of his trust on her that she will understand him.😊so cant blame him. well their love was that much strong

but atleast he realized his mistake na and comeback(took too much time)hmmm Prem always does it

and yar i think this is your best OS so far after 1st one.in this OS you explained everything beautifuly.was just perfact specially heer and prem emotion part every line was just perfact.👏👏Thankss dear I even loved it very much

and a really nice finish 👏👏well it took me time to think about it as i thought to associate with New Year

overall it was awesommmmmmmm OS 👏👏thanksss

waiting for next one😃darling its up but you are only not here😔, missing you very much, jaldi aa naa

Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii aqsa
see atlast i m back 😃ahhh finally n i knw wht i have to do to brought you here😛 i hate to type anything thats why always forget to editmy comments i knw but you can't go in my case baby
but as i knw u so for my dear life i m editing all my comments on urs stuff 😔good u better continue in future if i continue so and your such won't be helpful😛
ok back to os it was really awesome i think already told u this well don't remember *scratching brains*
for this os i wait sooooo long means read more then half long ago & y'day atlast u complete it well yes and you know reason fr its delay also
good girl but u take too long time. i knw sorry but was helpless
after yaz u r the one who attack on my sanity means i m v innocent *battling eyes*shut up, i m no where to yaz romantic stuff even I have to protect my sanity while reading her stuff🤣
gosh romantic part was just amazing 😳 *hope my mum never read this* thankss, hope none in my family otherwse they'll kill me wrtng this n frst of all wrtng a story only i would be so dead
stupid prem left her for 2 years for his ambition 😔
but the way he describes his pov was fab.the way he said all the things well i described
told her what he thought & all was superb.
heer forgive him so easily coz noone gets ever angry on prem for long 😳ahmmmm whats cooking fatty😆😆
whole of the things u wrote sooo beautifully.thankss
ok where prem thought he is v lucky to have heer & all it remind me last scene of vivah 😳when, last scene was their consummation, tujhe yahaan par woh kahan se yaad aagaya
i like all the dialogues v well written. thankss *raises collar*
like how u describe their house decor. well my dream house
ending was great that how those happy new year thingy goes
just loved it i loved it too as wanted to associated it with New Year so took tym to think over and glad that you liked it
do write more soon i m waiting baby written n posted also but you are nowhere😒
luv
Fatima Ashlesha

p.s:i think this comment is enough for u *tired face* kaamchor, door raha kar ammi se

Originally posted by: Nitty2910

awesome OS... Really enjoyed reading it... It was romantic and emotional,.