MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 19

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Posted: 16 years ago
daksha i want to write my comment but i will add it later
nice update
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Posted: 16 years ago

UPDATED: Part V

Jo jo log intezaar kar rahe hain ki Mayank kya soch raha hoga…….. unke liye ek dukhad samachaar hai ki Mr. Mayank Sharma so rahe hain………

He was tired of his long journey so he slept as soon as he entered the bed……..

Par aap logon ko shayad ye sun kar khushi hogi ki…….thodi der baad room ki light jalti hai…..aur Samrat enter hota hai……… He takes out a chart which was hiden under the bed………

He opens it and…….

S: Ye hai mera fool-proof plan…….kal dekhna Nupur Bhushan…… kal to main tumhein dhool chata kar hi dum loonga…………. Bas kal subah mujhe thoda jaldi uthna padega……..tayaari jo karni hai……hahahahahaha…..

Next Morning………

Samrat is the first one to enter into the class-room……..He tied strings between the seats so that…….you know what he meant………

But what about rest of the class………lets see………

Samrat is very clever…… he knew that Nupur would understand if whole class would be quiet so what he did was he told everyone to sit on the front benches and last ones to remain empty……now what is the proof that Nupur will pass between those seats only…….

Gunjan and Nupur entered……..as always Nupur aage aage Gunjan peeche peeche…… to make sure Nupur goes between those seats only…… Samrat and his friends put their legs between the passage…… aur jaisa ki aap log Nupur ko jaante hain……wo wahin se jaayegi……usska aur Samrat ka chattees ka aankda jo hai…….

Everything was going as Samrat planned……..Nupur's foot 2 inches before the string……and she got struck in them and she felt……….her eyes closed in fear of falling……..and then……when she opened her eyes she founded herself in Mayank's arm……… arre yaar hero ko toh aana hi tha……you must be waiting for the same thing right……….

Nupur got up from his grip………no eye-lock….. no background tune…….nothing magical haan…… because its Nupur's story…….

Aur kya…….peeche gaana bajta "tujhe dekha toh ye jaana sanam"……… na to main Kajol aur na hi wo Shahrukh Khan tha…….main Nupur hoon…….. main logon ko nahin log mujhe copy karte hain……..

Poori class toh humein dekh kar aise hans rahi thi maano……… koi picture chal raha ho……… par koi insaan tha jiske chehre se hansi gaayab thi…..wo toh aap jaan hi gaye honge it was none other than Samrat…….. bechaare ke dost ne hi uski dushman ko girne se bachaaya……..

Normal voice mein Mayank se maine Thank You kaha…… par mere mann ke andar ladoo phoot rahe the……. Mera score 3-0 hi hai……..aah……. kum nahin hua……..

Khair phir sab apni-apni seat par baith gayye……..

Samrat ki awaaz mujhe yahaan tak sunaai de rahi thi…….

S: Mayank…..kya zaroorat thi……usse pakadne ki…….mera poora plan chowpat kara diya…..tu mera dost hai ya usska……..

Ye kaisa question pooch liya Samrat ne…..isska jawaab toh mujhe bhi chahiye……..

M: Samrat……galat baat hai…….tu ek ladki ko giraana chahta tha…….thats not fair haan….. ek mature ladke ki tarah soch…… bacchon ke kaam kyun karta hai……. aur baat dosti ki nahin hai…..wo gir jaati to wo tujhe chod deti……ladaai badh jaati…….humein ladaai ko khatm karne ki sochna chahiye na ki badhaane ki…….. she is a nice girl aur tu usske peeche haath dho kar pada hua hai……

Kya main……main nice girl……good thoughts Mayank Sharma……… (and Nupur smiling)

In the canteen…….

Both Mayank-Samrat and Nupur-Gunjan have decided to talk to each other and to finish that unwanted fight……

Nupur and Gunjan were getting up from their chairs when Mayank and Samrat came……….. Nupur collided with Mayank……and……her bracelet got struck in Mayank's shirt………

This time a slow background tune……..but still no eye-locks or nothing magical………

N: I am sorry…….

M: Its OK….. main nikaalta hoon……

And he removes the knot between the bracelet and his button…….

M&S: Humein tumse kuch baat karni thi…….

N&G: Humein bhi……..aao baitho……

M: dekho…..hum ye bekaar ki ladaai ko khatam karna chahte hain……. Faltoo ki ladaai se kisi ko koi faayda nahin milta……….

N: Hum bhi yahi kehna chahte the………. Koi ladaai jhagdaa nahin……….

S: Ok…….so friends……..

N&G: Friends………

And everyone shakes hand……….

FRIENDS ?????? Kya aisa hona chahiye tha………. Dekhne ke liye bane rahiye humaare saath till then…….hava a nice day………..

That's it for now guys……..sorry for late update……

Actually I was in a dilemma…..my school friend read this FF and she told me badi ajeeb si story hai….. Do you also think the same ki story kuch gadbad hai ya ajeeb si hai…..please sach sach bataana…….please……..

Please do comment ki ye part kaisa laga……criticise bhi karoge to bhi mujhe khushi hogi….

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Posted: 16 years ago
fantastic dear loved it and ya dear koi gadbad nahi hai 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
NO YAAR..its a nice story...continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
gr8
thanxxxxxxx 4 d pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Daksha

Awwsome update dear

loved it dear

So they are friends now

cant wait for the love to blossom.......

do continue soon

luv
Nidzy
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Posted: 16 years ago
koi gadbad nahi :)
sab saaf saaf hai:)
its fun!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great update!!!
thanx for the PM
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part girl and please don't worry as to what your friend thinks, its a great story
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update
kuch gadbad nahi hai
its very nice story
do cont soon

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