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reepicheep

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Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Am so sorry payal for the late comment...OMG this was such a cute chapter...loved the naughty veer and jealous ayesha...hmm is veer gonna propose to ayesha in the hotel? very cute fic...looking forward to the next chapter ⭐️

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

CHAPTER THREE

Its already been an hour that Veer and Ayesha were waiting for Ishita..
With every passing minute Ayesha grew more and more restless....but Veer looked cool and composed.

Aye: Sir....are you sure ki aapki woh dost aaj aane wali hain?
Veer: Haan...haan Ayesha..
Aye: Per Sir...aapne usse ek baje bulaya tha...n its almost two now.....

Veer: (blushing a little bit) Woh..kya hain na....Ayesha...khubsoorat larkiyon ko taiyyar hone mein thora waqt to lagta hi hain...( Veer almost giggled within...as the expression in Ayesha's face changed instantly)

Since their Simla trip Ayesha had sometimes picturized herself with Veer. There had been instants when she felt that even Veer felt the same towards her....even in their fight for Nihaal's custody....Ayesha had felt Veer's presence n his support.....she always felt that he wanted Nihaal but not on the cost of Ayesha. She often found it quite difficult to think that she could be with Veer forever.....often she found herself fiddling with certain silly thoughts like how would they look together...... she had always figured out that she was too short to Veer....she had always hoped that she had been a bit more taller....rarely hoping that Veer would have been a bit shorter.

Khubsoorat larkiyon ...the word struck in Ayesha's mind....she went back to her thought land picturising several fictitious pictures of that Ishita.....she must be very tall....fair and smart. She must be the one appropriate beside Veer...the one like putting on smaller clothes...completely westernized....But at one point she found herself happy thinking that Veer wanted her suggestion before choosing that girl....may be somewhere down the line...even shez important for him....barely knowing that Veer had already chosen his life partner....

Veer: Ayesha...!!! u okay..??
Aye: (snapping out of her thought) Yes...Yes Sir...
Veer: hmm...u look lost....what's the matter!!??
Aye: K..uchh...kuchh nahi Siir....just...
Veer: Hmmm...got it...must be getting bored...
Aye: (hesitantly) Y...hhh...

Veer: Ohkay.....hmmm...hmmm...kya kiya jai!!!!! (Moving his eyes in all directions) Hmm...Let z dance....

Aye: (her eyes wide open) Jiii???!!!!
Veer: Haan Ayesha....let z dance.....n now no bahana...mujhe pata hain ki tum bahot accha dance ker leti ho...I have seen u in the Christmas party!!!!!!!!

The flashes of the Christmas party shrouded Ayesha's mind....she remembered that evening when Nihaal looked so much happy with his maasi and Chachu....she remembered how they kept bumping into each other.....those looks of Veer.....she remembered Pammi.....all her loved one....her lips broke into a small little curve...

Aye: Siir....aapko...y aad hain.... ussdin...hamara Nihaal kitna khush tha....
Veer: Hmmm......
Aye: Sir....vaada kijiye ki aap Nihaal ko hamesha itna hi khush rakhenge.....(her eyes get moist)

Veer: Ayesha.....tumhe pata hain....uss din Nihaal itna khush kyun tha....(putting his palm lightly on that of Ayesha's ....their eyes meeting)..kyunki...uss din uski maasi aur chachu ek saath the...

Ayesha could feel the lump in her throat....Veer's eyes brimmed with those hot tears....they looked into each other's eyes...trying to take away all the pain from each other......Veer's grip on her palm got firmed....Ayesha looks got more intense....until she moved her eyes in some direction unable to meet his passionate gaze....

Veer: (softly) Jaana zaroori hain..??
Aye: Sir.....(wiping off her tears).....mujhe nahi lagta hain...ki Ishita aab aayegi....so...letz leave...

Veer: Jawab do Ayesha .....Shimla jana zaroori hain??
Aye: Haan ..... aur waise bhi...main yahaan Mumbai aayi thi...Nihaal ke acche parvarish ke liye....(tears drop down her cheek) ...aur aab jab Nihaal...ka khayal rakhne ke liye aap ho....to main kyun.....yahaan....

Veer: Aur....mera Khayal.....mera khayal....kaun rakhega Ayesha??!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

With one jerk Ayesha moved her hand from Veer's....n in the next moment she ran out of the restaurant....

Veer heaved a sigh of relief.....he was sure now that she loved him.....as much as he loved her.....only he needed to make her confess.....Wiping off his tears.....he headed towards his car.

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Sorrie for A SHORT UPDATE....but guys am all open to constructive criticism....so please comment...

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hena

@mayur-tasha

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

why so so short ??????😭
i was abt 2 get exremely xcited n u just closed it .....mmmmm its not just fair
it was so much cuteness in it n so very adorable😳
awesome n gr888⭐️
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update it fast cant wait .........i am waiting restlessly !!!!!!!😊

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Thanks buddy....thanks for those lovely comments...I will surely update .....quickly.thanx yaar

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CanadaKudi

@CanadaKudi

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Hey dat wz gr8 ho sake to kal ek chota sa likho na. Plz

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

CHAPTER FOUR

The way back home was quite silent...Ayesha had been continuously looking out of the window..avoiding any eye contact with Veer...However Veer had made several attempts to lighten the situation ... but Ayesha looked too serious to lighten up. Her eyes looked red and her face looked firm and dull .... Veer was not able to read her mind.....he couldn't make out what exactly was bothering her....he had never expected Ayesha to react in this manner......yet he decided to keep silent....n talk to her when she feels okay.

The journey back home was silent for Ayesha too.....untill she broke the silence...

Aye: Sir..
Veer: (with an excited look...turned towards her) Haan....Ayesha....
Aye: Sir....kya...aap mujhe ........................................... Airport chor(drop) denge????

Veer got the shock of his life....She still wanted to leave.....despite knowing the fact that he loved.....................

Veer: Per...Ayesha.....Main...tumm....
Aye: ( Interrupting) Koi baat nahi......main taxi se chali jaungi.......

"Maasi....chachu aap log aa gaye...pata hain main kabse aap dono ke liye wait ker rahe tha..." said Nihaal.......with a super excited smile....looking at Veer....to confirm the success of their plan.........

Aye: Haan beta......lekin abhi maasi ko jana hain.....wapas ghar.....

The smile vanished from his face within no seconds....he looked at his maasi....n his chachu....he couldn't make out what exactly was going on......as his eyes got watery...he could see those tears in the eyes of his chachu too.....but his maasi looked like a stranger to him.....he had never her this different.... she was trying to hide her tears...fighting with her emotions...masking her face with a fake smile.....but Nihaal could make it all.....but what bothered him was that his Maasi was disturbed....she is lonely....she is alone.....and there is no him with her infront of whom she could cry her heart out.

Veer had expected Nihaal to cry and shout hearing his Maasi leaving him.....but he stood there.....stronger than himself.....Veer was spellbound seeing that bond between them.......they both kept looking at each other.....silence followed but their eyes spoke volumes....Veer himself looked left out infront of them. Realizing that they might need some time alone....Veer left the place.

It was almost half an hour later when Veer came to check Nihaal......He looked upset.....his eyes inflicted the pain of their separation.....yet he controlled himself....he did not want to show his tears to his Maasi......n Ayesha....was packing her last minute things.....her red eyes revealed the mental torment she was going through.

Veer: Ayesha....I think...tumhe aab nikal na chahiye...nahi to....time...pe
Ayesha nodded her head.

For the last time she looked at Nihaal.......Stretching her arms she asked him for a hug...Nihaal's eyes filled with tears....n Ayesha wiped them off....

Aye: Nihaal .... ..beta....aapna khayal rakhna.....(looking at Veer) aur ....aapne chachu ka bhi....
Nihaal: Ji...maasi....aur aap bhi aapna....(he looked down to hide his tears)
Aye: (Lifting his face up) Nahhhh....beta....rote nahi....Brave boys don't cry....hainna....aur aap to brave ho na.....maasi ne aapko...brave banaya hain na....

Nihaal nodded his head to a little yes
Aye: Aur.....issiliye...aap bhi nahi royoge...(Looking at Veer) Hainna.........(Veer looked down to hide his tears....n wipe them off) ...Maasi ko abhi jaana hi parega.....beta....

Nihaal: Per maasi....mujhe aapki bahot yaad aayegi.....aapse door main....kaise...
Aye: Nahii...Nihaal.....main aapse door thori ja rahi hoon...jab bhi aapko meri yaad ayegi....aapne aankhe bandh kerke....mujhe bulana....Maasi turant aapke pass aa jayengi....(She smiled back n kissed him on his cheek)
Aye: Bye....Nihaal....(n she left the room without looking back)

The way to airport was also filled with Silence.....Veer tried to concentrate on other things....but each time he looked at her.....his eyes filled with tears.....He was literally frustrated at her behavior.....she was so silent.....but Veer wanted to speak.....wanted to know what exactly had compelled her to leave Nihaal and Mumbai.

Parking the car at the entrance of the airport....Veer came up to open the door for Ayesha. Ayesha looked hesitant....avoiding looking at Veer....Coming out of the car.....she had started walking...when Veer held her back by her hand.....

Veer: (Ayesha's back facing him)(In a firm voice) Ayesha......mainne...kabhi nahi socha tha ki tum itni badal jaogi....itni badal jaogi....ki aaj...tum unlogo ke aankhon mein aasu la rahi hoon....jinhone shayad tumse sabse jyada pyaar kiya hain....Jis Nihaal ki ek khushi ke liye tum aapna poora zindagi kurbaan ker sakti thi.....aaj ussi koo dukh de kar....ussi ke aankho mein aansu la ker.....tum aapna zid poori ker rahi ho!!!!!!!!!! Haan....chiina hain ...mainne Nihaal ko tumse.....aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hain......ki...tumne yeh faisla issiliye kiya hain...taki...tum mujhe saza de sako....lekin...issmein uss bacche ka kya kasoor hain.....Pehele hi court mein usko mere hawale kerke...tumne uska dil dhukhaya hain.....aur aaj.....usse wapas...chorr ke ja rahi ho....I don't get it Ayesha......akhir kya ho gaya hain tumne....????? Kyun ker rahi ho tum yeh sab......

Aye: (still her back facing him.....in a trembling voice) Siiir....mujhe nahi lagta hain...ki aab in sab baaton ka koi zaroorat hain..

Veer: Zaroori hain....Ayesha....bahot zaroori hain.....U can't do this to Nihaal...aur akhir aise kaunsi wajah hain....jiske liye.....I mean.....bas aapna zid...poora kerni hain....to theek hain....mujhe wapas chiin ho Nihaal ko...mujhe manzoor hain...lekin aise...chorrke mat jao..(his voice gets interrupted by his tears)

Aye: Sir....mere liye aaj Nihaal ke saath saath kissi aur ki khushi bhi bahot maaiynne (matters) rakti hain.....aur jahaan tak Nihaal ki baat hain.....I noe he will be happy.....

With a sudden jerk....she made Veer leave her hand....n started walking....

Thoda teher, thora teher

Ayesha walked past Veer....keeping him looking at her with tear full eyes...

Sun le zara, sun le zara

Suddenly Ayesha stopped and looked back at Veer....

Dil keh raha, Dil keh raha

Veer nodding his head indicating her not to leave....the tears rolling down his cheeks...

De na sazza, yun bewajaa

Ayesha's eyes...turning down...hiding her pain....remembering those flash backs...how she enjoyed her days with Nihaal and Veer...those dancing moments from the Christmas Party....

Root ker mujhse na jaa abhi...

Nodding her head...she wiped off her tears forcefully.....making some light scars on her face....

Bhool ker shikwa gila sabhi pyaar ka

Turning back she started walking towards the airport......Veer froze for a moment...

Aa jao meri tamanna
(meri tamanna)

Veer called out Ayesha for the last time.....his voice full of pain....

Bahoon mein aao

She stopped for another nanosecond to look back at him......her eyes....brimming with tears....

Ke ho na payee judaa hum
(payee juda hum)

The last and the final call for the security checking was announced for her flight.....startled by the announcement.....she controlled her emotions...

Aaise mujh mein samaoo

Picking up her bags....she started walking.....He saw her going away......her figure getting more and more distant from him.....She looked back for the last time...before going for Security Checking......the distant Figure of Veer was almost shimmering as her eyes filled up once again with those hot tears.....

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Payal

Edited by paaal - 15 years ago

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

Hmmmm...Guys...I have updated it again.....I have tried making it a bit long....sorry for torturing u alll again 😛

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shonaveer

@shonaveer

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

payalllll.. whoppie.. me first.. hehe..

loved the part a lot yaar... waise.. kuch karo yaar in donon ko.. ayesha ko mat bhejo na shimla... aur rona dhona nahi.. waise.. show mein toh wohi chal raha hai na....

but the part was fabulously written..... jaldi next part update karna and yeah.. long part was a gift and not a torture.

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Payal

@paaal

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: loyal-kashian
payalllll.. whoppie.. me first.. hehe.. loved the part a lot yaar... waise.. kuch karo yaar in donon ko.. ayesha ko mat bhejo na shimla... aur rona dhona nahi.. waise.. show mein toh wohi chal raha hai na.... but the part was fabulously written..... jaldi next part update karna and yeah.. long part was a gift and not a torture.

Thanks a lot dear...dis means a lot to me.....yhhh...letz c if I can change the tract of the story or not....yhhh....show is getting all rona-dhona types....I will try to make it interesting...Thanks for the comments darling----- Love ya a lot

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