MayUr FF *Phir Milenge* (Last) Part 19 @ Pg 147 - Page 12

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

yupiee i am the first one to comment i like the first thing is nups telling the story very lovely effort or he bai kahani bhi start to karni hein

an so story start or to or nups ke first aane wali baat be true hein really jab hum second aatein hein or hamari best friend first aati hein to thoda bad to feel hota hein lakin phir hum bhool jaatien hein na so sweet arre yaar nups to veg he to vo mayu ka achaar dal ker kha nahi sakti thi.......

lovely dialouge ya life aasan nahi hein daksha your this ff contain childhood 's fact lovely thoughts of nups ,it just remind me that we also do the same thing .jassie he koi new intelligent boy admission leta to ye soctein ke jassiae koi mahan person aa gaya hein.......

lovely days sam art kya jarurat thi usse chikne ke .......l

o ab kha liya na maar nups se...... happy ke nups ne usse marks gain kiye maynk ke gf or vo bhi 10 th mein nahi yaar usse to study mein consentrate karna chayia tha you are right nups ye stupid boys they are not have mind and nor sense tooooo......
i like this dhoobi pachad ........
i appriacte nups thought lovely ff ,pata hein tera writing style se aisa lag raha hein ke tu rajasthan se belong karti hein did you belong to rajasthan ,if you don't mind then tell me ok very beautifully written i love this

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi Daksha
At first i want to say i loved ur writing style.
it was really very nice and different.
Or mujhe nupur ki bate bahut acchi lagi.
And i also loved mayur competition.
But what is this- mayank have a G.friend-yuck.
Plz aisa kuch maat karo.
Or jo kehna tha wo adi keh diya. so main or jaida kuch nehi kahungi.
I loved the whole part.
it was wonderful update sweety.
keep it up.

Originally posted by: Karan.P.Rocks

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Doodiii our Daksha 😆

Kaha thi...? 🤗

I feeeeeeelt like flying when i recived ur PM 🤪

Kya idea hai yaara?

Nupur tum tohhhh bohut mehnat dali ham sabko samjane ke liye :D

I just loved how u start the story from childness but not tooo much xxx

Its really DIFF idea,

OMG! I enjoyed everything about Mayu too,

Mayur 1st meet, Congrating herrrrr,

YAAY!! Just love this,

Sam linee wasssss OMG ⭐️

It was supeeeer dupppper update,

Ur editing KILLS me 👏

Keep rocks Merrri doodi,

I mustttt My one of besttttttt FF writer ,

I know next part will be more intersting,

You'll add new fresh parts 😳

Kya pata kya hoga? Kyon ki tumne kaha tha ''Phir milenge'' 😊

PM me as always,

With love,

Aisho .

PART II

Beete kal se humko seekh jaana hai……….

Naye kal ki kal-kal se har pal sajaana hai……….

Ye line to suni hogi aapne…… arre gaane ki line hai……….

Aur kya future ke baare mein bhi toh sochna tha………… Mayank chala gaya tha doosre shehar aur main………. Main usske peeche thodi na jaaungi………. Mujhe to ek successful insaan ban na tha…… uske liye mehnat maine apne hi shehar mein ki…………. Jiske liye Mayank bade shehar gaya tha……….. sach mein wo ek intelligent bewakoof hai……………..

2 saal……..masti ke………mauj ke……..dosti ke…….yaari ke……tv ke………picture ke……..aur sabse zaroori……..padhaai ke……….

Finally competition ka din bhi aa gaya……….. bhagwaan ka naam le kar competition bhi de aaye…….. aur 2 months baad jab result aaya…….. to apni mehnat ka phal (fruit) mila……

Me and Gunji both were selected in the best college of India……….

Ab kya ab toh ho gayi line settle…………. Best college…….. matlab best padhaai…….best job…….aur mast future………….

Ab toh Mumbai jaana tha……… mummy-papa se door……..ek hostel mein rehne……. Sirf main aur meri Gunji……….

Sab saamaan pack karke……..pohonch gaye THE EXCEL COLLEGE (don't compare it with the college of MJHT where there is no study………)

Gate mein enter huye……… yaar thoda toh darre huye the…………har koi dara hota…….aakhir pehli baar "college" mein jo enter huye the………….

Yippee………mera aur Gunji ka ek hi room tha………..

Sab saamaan rakha…….aur nikal pade college dekhne………. Arre excitement mein yaad hi nahin raha ki "RAGGING" bhi to COLLEGE mein enter hone ka ek part hai……….

Seniors aur juniors ka phaasla yahi toh tay karti hai……….. Khair aajkal zyaada Ragging nahin hoti…… Juniors complaint kar dein to seniors ki shaamat……….HAHAHA

Tayaar ho kar pohonch gaye pehla class attend karne………. Excited haan……jaane kaise lecture honge…….kaisi padhaai…….ooohhh…. seat par jaakar baith gayye……..

Ab hum idhar-udhar dekh rahe the………. Dekha Samrat enter ho raha hai…….style jhaadta hua……

Me and Gunji……… Hey bhagwaan iss langoor ko angoor kaise mill gayye…….. Phir yaad aaya…… Ameer baap ka ameer beta……. Padhaai ke dum pe to aa nahin sakta……. Paise ke dum pe aaya hai……….

Ussne humein dekha…….. aur humne usse………..

Main aur Gunji ek saath: Tum………..Tum yahaan kar rahe ho……..

Samrat (style jhaadte huye…….. trying to attract girls towards him): Excuse meeeee…….. Do I know you……….

Maine to pehle hi kaha tha musibat kabhi peecha nahin chodti……… aur mere gusse ka sample to aap log pehle bhi dekh chuke hain………..to mujhe to gussa aana hi tha NUPUR se aise baat karne waala aaj tak paida nahin hua…………

Samrat aage badha nahin ki maine apni tangdi laga di (forwarded the leg so that Samrat could fell)……

Dhadaam……….wo gira…… main hansi…… Gunji hansi…….. poori class hansi……… aur Samrat jab utha to he looked me as if ki mujhe kaccha chaba jaayega……. Aur mujhe to aap jaan hi gaye honge ek Victory mere naam register ho gayi………..

Lectures shuru ho gayye…….. accha khaasa padh rahi thi………par mujhe kuch uneasy lag raha tha…….pata nahin kyun……….

Wo to tumhein kabhi pata hi nahin chala Nupur…….. agar pata chal jaata to kya baat hoti………

Hi main Daksha…….Nupur was expecting ki iss college mein to Mayank zaroor aayega……. Because for best students it was the best college……….

Chalo dekhenge………wait zaroor karna…….

Kyunki unhone kaha tha PHIR MILENGE

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Daksha