mayur the loving birds..; prt 23 pg 53 last part - Page 34

Originally posted by: A-N-S-H-I-K-A

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Originally posted by: wind453

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part 22

then he woke up nupur......

m: nupur......

m: coffee........... its tym to wake up shona..........

m: its 8 now.......

m: hmm ,,,,,,,,

then he moved to the bed, placed coffee on the table,,,,,, took nupur into

his arms and took her to bathroom.........

m: npur hum yaha enjoy karne aaye hai,,,,, sone nahi...

m: cmon nupur......

she washed her face..... and then drunk the world's best coffee........

m: ya surre......

after sum tym,,,,,,,

she came out wearing chudidaar anaarkali salwaar kameez with

sleeveless kurta and wet hair,,,,, water dropping by her sholder,,,,,,,,,,

she was lookig damn hot.............

n: mayank.......

n: to kya program hai?

he moved closer to her.. and closer and closer...

m: tumhe kya lagta hai.....

m: oh really.........

nupur was just blushing hard...............

pulled her closer...

he put her wet hair coming betweenn them aside and kissed her eyes

then cheeks..

and finally he was making his way to her lips.......

nupur to responded,..

and they were out of breth now..........

except him

they were still too close..........

n: hm,, (trying hard to speak)

n: (blushed felt embarrased or wat) (not able to speak)

and then he hugged her...........

they were in the car..

m: hmm,,, lets see.........

m: nooooooo.............

m: ok fine........

but mayank bought something else....... he hid it from nupur..

m: ghar chalte hai na..... phir bataata hoon...........

it was 11:30 now...........

n: nahi.........

n: par........

m: kuch par war nahi........ iss polybag mein swimming costume hai tum

pehen lo

and wat else....... nupur wore that swimming costume........ it was

she went to the pool...

she saw mayank already in the pool waiting for her,,

m: nupur itna uncomfortable mat feel karo yahaan sirf hum dono hi

hai... (smiling evil)

m: aur wese bhi mein to tumhaara HUSBAND hoon na...........

m: ab tym mat waste karo.......... jaldi aa jaao.......

n: mayank seriously mujhe bilkul bhi swimming nahi aati,,,,,,,, mujhe

darr lag raha hai.....

NUPUR walked in the pool finally..........

(and you can imagine how romantic it wud be)

and he made her learn swimming........

and nupur......... gosh she was all red........

mayank was smilng hard,,,

and they ate there dinner cooked by nupur,,,,

in the room,,

and nupur came,.........,,,

and nupur slipped....

he held her upright theu her waist.........

and took her to the bed.................

he kissed her...........

i will just say two souls were united............

nupur was just standing up from the bed...... wen mayank held her

pulled her

and nupur was on mayank now........

n: ab chodo mujhe nahaane jaana hai........

m: you need some company.............

n: mayank.........
and she ran towards the bath room........

mayank just smiled..........

at 1.00 pm...

they were having there lunch wen mayank's cell buzzed..

m: hello.....

suhaani: hello bhai........

m: haan suhaani bolo.......

s: wo actually....... wo wo..

m: kya hua suhaani? tum ghabraai hui lag rahi ho......

s: wo wo maa......

m: maa? maa ko kya hua? maa thik to hai na.......

s: maa ka accident ho gya hai bhai........... wo hospital mein hai.....

m: kya???????

s: bhai jaldi aa jaao bhai plz............

m: mein aata hoon............

he cut the phone.............

n: kiska phone tha mayank?

m: nupur nupur...... maa,,,,,,, maa ka accident ho gya hai......

n: wat? kese?

m: pata nahi.......... humme ghar jaana hoga........

n: haan mein packing kar leti hoon...... tum tickets dekho,.....

m: (he was still)

n: mayank jaldi.........

m: hm,,,,,,,,

and they rushed...........

they reached mumbai again to their house......... and then to the

hospital.....

in the hospital.....

m: suhaani maa kaha hai?

s: wo udhar i.c.u mein..........

m: kya.......

they move to i.c.u........

mm was lying there,,,,,,,,, wrapped with wires.........

n: suhaani yeh sab kese??

s: wo maa car drive karke ghar aa rahi ti aur unka ek ruck se accident

ho gya........

n: mayank.......

he stoood still....... not moving ......... gazing his mother..........

n: mayank.... mayank sab thik ho jaaega.......

and he fell on his knees............

and cried.......... or rather burst into tears............

n: mayank,.,, sambhaalo apneaapko........ (even she had tears....)

the whole day they were in the hospital.......... the doctor told them

that the condition was critical and they were trying their best..........

s: bhai bhabhi aap dono ghar jaakar fresh hoke aajaao mein hoon

yahan,,,,,

n: par..

s: bhabhi plz.........

n: thik hai......

they looked at mayank who still lost.......... tears were still rolling down

his cheeks......

n: mayank chalo........

m: nupur par maa........ (still lost)

n: chalo mayank....

they reached home.........

they took a shower and were ready to go back to the

hospital..

wen they were abt to leave......

in the hall

mayank fell on the ground......

cried cried cried cried and cried........

nupur rushed to him and consoled him

she was standing and mayank was on the ground...

mayank hid his face in nupur's waist...

and his arms were wrapped round her waist...

nupur just consoled him lyk a mother,,

her hands were movng thru his hair....

a tear fell from nupur's eyes too

but she wiped it quickly

bcoz this was the tym to take care of mayank,,,

m: nupur maa thik to ho jaayegi na,,,,,,,, (still sobbing lyk a child...)

n: hmm,,,,,,, ab khade ho jaao mayank,,,,,,,, humme hospital jaana hai

m: hmm,,, (obeyed her lyk a 4 year old kid...)

they reached hospital......

suhaani infomed them that doctor said that mm's condition was

improving ,,,,,,,, and she will be f9 soon......

after sum tym...

doc: aap mein se koi ek unse mill sakta hai,,,,, wo hosh mein aa gyi hai.

m: mein.....

n: nahi mayank tum nahi..... tum maa ke saamne apneaap ko sambhaal

nahi paaoge aur maa tumhe aisee condition mein dekh kar aur bhi dukhi

ho jaayengi........ tum mujhe jaane do........

m: thik hai......

nupur went in the room,,,,,

mm was lying on the bed,,,,,, now with less wires round.....

n: maa......

she opened her eyes.....

mm: nupur.........

she sat to the seat placed next to the bed..........

mm: mayank ko kehna zyaada roye nahi..... agar royega to use bukhaar

aa jaayega..

n: hm.. (shocked at how well she knows her son,, and afterall he wa her

son)

mm: aur tum usse sambhaal lena.......

n: hmm.. (smiled a bit..) aap jaldi ghar aajaaoge aur phir hum mayyu ki

khoob taang kheechenge..

mm: haan,,,,,, sorry,,,,,
n: sorry?

mm: meri wajah se tumhaara honeymoon,.....

n: maa plz aap aisa kehke mujhe aur mayank ko sharminda kar rahi

hai......

mm: par......

n: bas maa....... plz.......

mm: aur haan tumhe ab mayank ko ek maa ki tarah sambhaalna

padega..

n: hmm,,,,,,, (lisneing carefully)

mm: ek married girl ko apne husband ke liye ek wife banana padta hai

ek maa banana padta hai aur

kabhi kabhi ek teacher bhi banana padta hai,,,,,,,,, aur mayyu to ek

baccha hi hai abhi.. bhalehi usme

kitna hi dimaag bhara pada ho par dil bahut naazuk hai,,,,,,,,

n: haan maa,,,,,,,

mm: accha thik hai....... wese tumne kya kya kiya apne honeymoon pe?

n: humne bahut maze kiye...........

doctor arrives......

doc: ab aap baahar jaaiye..... humme kuch tests lene hai.......

n: jee......

she moves out......

m: nupur maa ne kya kaha??? wo thik to hai na,,,,,,

n: mayank maa bilkul thik hai,,,,,, wo jaldi recover karlengi aur phir

humaare

saath ghar aa jaaengi,,,,,,,,,,

m: haan,,,,,,,,,,,, (and he hugged nupur......) maa ne aur kya kaha.....

n: ab wo to saas bahu ke beech ki baat hai......

mayank smiled at this........

after 15 days mm was discharged from the hospital.........

and she was taken home,,,,,,,,

but still she was not completely fit..........

at sharma mansion:

n: maa khaana khaa lo plz,,,,,,,,,

mm: nupur meri bilkul iccha nahi hai...

n: maa plz thoda sa dekho mein khila deti hoon aapko,,

mm: accha bas ek bite......

she took one bite and then stopped........

n: maa bas ek aur...... aapko dawaai bhi to leni hai......

while this conversation was going on mayank was standing at the door.

gazing the two most important ladies of his life........

how caring and understanding was nupur......he thot...

after sum tym mayank went to mm's room........

m: maa ab kesa feel ho raha hai?

mm: much better..........

m: dawai lee...

n: arrey lee kya zabardasti pilaai,,,,, by god mayank ab mujhe pata

chala

tum itne ziddi kyu ho.........

all giggled at this........

after sum tym in nupur's room,,,,,,,,,

mayank was waiting for nupur,,,, wen nupur arrived.....

she sat on the bed......

m: thank you nupur.....

n: kisliye?

m: wo tumne maa ke liye..

n: mayank wo meri bhi maa hain,,,,,,,,

mayank hugged nupur and so does nupur...........

it was late 3.00 am now..........

mayank woke up and found nupur not there,,,,

he moved out of the room and started looking for nupur.....

and she was in his mother's room,,,,,

he saw that his mother was asleep......

and nupur was applying sum ointment on his mother's legs...

he went closer and

m: nupur....

n: arre mayank tum,,,,,,, itni jaldi uth gye...

m: tum kya kar rahi ho.......

n: wo doctor ne kaha tha ki maa ke pero mein muscle crampp hua hai

aur iss wajah se mein ointment laga rahi hoo

m: abhi?

n: aur nahi to kabhi?

m: par tum yeh kal subah bhi to laga sakti thi na.....

n: mayank iss se dard hota hai.. aur maa ko neend ka injecion diya hai

isliye maa ko dard ka ehsaas bhi nahi ho raha hoga........

mayank was speechless................. he loved her for this...
after few days..

doc: she is absolutely fine now........

m: thank you doctor........

and the doctor leaves...

then mm calls mayank to her room..

mm: mayank betho..

m: haan maa.. (and he sits next to her)

mm: beta aaj mein bahut khush hoon ki teri patni nupur hai,,,,,

m: (smiled) haan maa.......

mm: beta wo bahut acchi ladki usko tu hamesha khush rakhna,,

he nodded..

mm: aur haan wo sabko kitna khush rakhti hai ab teri baari hai

tu uska khayaal rakhna.,,,,,,,,,

they have there dinner....... cooked by nupur..
mm: nupur bahut hi accha khaana banaati ho......

suhaani: sach bhabhi its lovely..... mujhe to aapse coking classes leni

chahiye..

both suhaani and mm looked at mayank now..

expecting him to say anything........

mayank did not understad anything.....

m: wat??? why are you both gazing me??

s: bhaiya wat do you tink abt the food???? (finally she asked)

m: oh.... its gud........

both suhaani and mm kick his leg from their legs below the table...

m: ouch,,,, wat?? ohh,,, its fabulus , amazing, gret, lovely, awesome,

mind blowing..

nupur laughed heartily at this.....

n: mayank rehnedo,,,,,,, (still laughing)

at night...

in mayank's room...

nupur arrived in the room,,,,,,,,,

she sat on the bed..

and suddenly mayank held her from back,,

his chin on her shoulder,,,,,,,,,

m: khaana sach mein bahut tasty tha.,,

n: thank you......

m: bilkul tumhaari tarah..(and he kissed her.)

they were kissing... mayank's hands on her waist pulling her more

closer...

and her hands were on his shoulder moving towards his

hair,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

(and the rest you imagine yurself)

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.heyya guys,,,,,, so this is the maha update...... i tried my level best to step yur expectations... i hope its huge enough....... but there is a bad news..... i will not be able to update it for a few days....... i m moving out of station...... but nyways plz comment... i have worked hard on this update........

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

hey i am the first one to comment! yes you are,,,,,,,,👏

this is grt!

nupur looks hot even in a salwar suit..........

and they even kissed.......

hey yeh line tune bhi daal di "mere touch se shiver...." yupp...😉

aur mayank ne nupur ko swimming sikhaayi........

hey to that happened! 😳

yaar tune ma ka accident kyun dikhaya? to show how pure love can be,,,😳

yaar tumne mayu ko kitna rulaya........ sorry

but i am happy that ma theek bhi ho gayi........

and nupur is sooooooo caring.........

i loved that ointment scene.......

and i loved each bit of it..... i m glad...😊

do continue soon.....i will try to😛

Originally posted by: mayurarti

Awwwwwwwwwsome update Princes thank you

Loved it i m glad that you loved it

Mayurare so cute😳 😳 😳

you rock 👍🏼

MM's accident but im glad she recoverd

All because of Nupur she is soooo caring

ohhh your not updating for few days😭 😭 😭

anywayz you enjoy your journey...................... thnx once again

luv

Nidzy

Originally posted by: shaaranya

am so speechless nthn 2 say it was awesome superb lovely gr8 evrey praise at it's superlative!!!!!!!! as usual waitin for ur next update

thank you sooooo much,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, i m glad that you lyked it............😳