~The girl next door~ pt 29b&c pg 140&142 07/01 - Page 94

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hinu!!!!! Where are you??? Wanna read this... please please please....😳

Originally posted by: spln

:D LE

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yeh, much as i enjoyed reading the part in general, i maintain, what you now agree with, it would have been another level without us knowing what she had heard! :) haan na

nonetheless hinzi, u clever girl, still giving no in sight, no relenting signs of letting us into her mind, more ! :D :D

KD vs Armaan! such a battle!!! this would be like a historic case!!! :D (just something second made me think of how armaan in dmg after losing his memory had been in a way battling his won previous self, in winning people, eh?!!! :D ) yeh true,poor Armaan fighting his own self for himself ah!


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shukaran IF .. damn lets me edit now!!! oki... hiniyaaaaaaaaaa me read 28-B now.... OH MY GOOD GOD!!! dude.... i swear i was going mad laughing/shaking my head/trying to avoid one at a time... AND trying to decide ONE precise reaction!! kya funtush tha!!! :D ahahahahah 'Now your services are no longer needed' ahahahahahahah :D

'u naughty naughty girl' oh my god hinzzzz! i cant believe she didnt crack up herself at all his antics ahahahah banda is INSANE... makes his imagination decide a shirt for himself ahahahah (oh shoot, im laughing thinking it again too!) hahah ,now u've made me laugh too,only thing is i'm imagining u :)

had to, THE MOST innovative proposal EVER! (pinky swear on my blue-black foot) :D

hugz hiniya, innna sexy part tha!
~nj


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just said this on the chat and realized i MUST say it here...

hinz, i seriously mean this, if i had to chose one thing i read in my life n want to see as a movie, make that read and wrote... it would be GND
i can just IMAGINE watching it
with a real cast acting!!

:D :D :P

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

reserved

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helloossssss hinzi madam!! hello hello

I don't really know how much cooking is done in a BBQ but in your mind there is lots 😉😆!!! Cheers!!!!
man,there's loads to do at a BBQ and my head ?haha there too

A simple confused confession it is! nicely put The whole scene was so beautifully done. I Loved it! You have made AR still more cute 😛. Her excitement cum anger cum love is so relatable. ahem acha? He taking her as his imagination all through.. hahahaha.. add that to my list of most favs. trust me Pras that scene was written in a toitally diff way ,but something made me change it almost at the last moment And the last scene between them take away the cup.. simply superb! I am so very excited to know how will they react together now... you know them being FACE to FACE now.. hawwwwwww...😃😛!! hawww ,it can't be that bad :)

Originally posted by: aati1429

wow.. that was best part.. really liked it!!

Originally posted by: coorg.japan

Hoo God!!!! Why do you always stop at a suspense......... i know i shudn't do it too often I'm sorry ?
Now is Ridhima happy to know that KD and Armaan are same and she is still thinking that he lied to her!!
hmm,well lemme post the nxt part and let u decide
Hoo my Armaan was soooooo cute........ Day dreaming:) *sigh * i love him in that dreamy expression
Would look forward for more.

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Hey i chanced upon this FF just now, and i read it from the start, my my it is soooo cuteeeee. hey thanks so much and glad u stumbled upon this one And the way the suspense never dies yet leaves a fuzzy feeling inside after every update of yours is just too good. that just made me smile lots
And the last part keeps me blushing and waiting for THE MOST awaited part. Updaaaaate. And i like your writing style a a lot.

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey great updates loved them

Originally posted by: DMG fan

very unique way of confession-cum-confusion......its so not-out-of-the-box, only you could steered this one the path it is at. sweet simple yet refreshing....kudos!!!!

RT

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

superb part
just loved it
update soon..
i m going crazzzzzzzy
thanx 4 d pm

love
debadrita

Originally posted by: aishar

aweusm parts yar!!!!!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

:D u updated so quick this time! yay :D
im all grins today di, seeing u and nj updated today...u guys just made my day!
i seriously cant get over how wicked this part was...again (like usual) i did not see this coming! riddhimas reaction and armaans behaviour was completely unexpected but sooo unique and special!
poor ridz was too stunned to react...she was in such a daze! and now shes caught in a tug a war between her heart and mind. i dunno what i would do in her situation, but im sure this cant be easy! but the good thing that came out of this is she actually confessed to herself that she was in love with him!
and armaan?!!! imaginary riddhima!? hahaha seriously this boy is latoo, completely in love with her (or he has some psychological disorder lol)! but i find it incredibly sweet! and now he unknowingly confessed to her!!? oh wow i guess he doesnt need to practice or prepair for it!
really interesting way of doing this di, i really enjoyed it! and another thing i enjoyed was armaan in a towel after a shower ;) hehe
now lets see if riddhima will accept him...but his confession was really convincing, enought to melt your heart!
awesome part di, looking forward to the next one :D happy eid!

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

brillaint part hina di!!

Originally posted by: kash fan4ever

Hina di!!!!!

I never imagined such a confession. lol

Armaan confessing to an 'imaginary' Riddhima! Lol

i really wanna see what happens next! Wonder how Riddhima would react.

Do you have another running ff? If you do, can I please have the link?

Will be waiting eagerly for the next part!!!

Thank You for the pm.

Cheers,

Sakshi :D

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

reserved.. will be back sooon ;)

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heyyya hina !!...

that was a fabulous update... part a..hmmm..well, riddhima feeling shy and all in his presence and then her shock at knowing that armaan is KD...finally..she knows...

and the detective squad thinking abt the lovebirds and muski's regret was funny... she is one of a kind :D

and part b...armaan is sooo damn cute ;) they way he imagined her to be there and his convo with his supposedly imaginary riddhima was sooo sooo cute ... and her expressions were amazing :D and her thoughts abt his cheating but then the proximity making her incapable to think... and his soulful confession was really beautiful... and now that he knows that she really there... awaiting his reaction and her answer to his confession ;)

it was a beautiful and cute part !!..

thanks for the pm....

awaiting the next part... !! :)

Originally posted by: daring66

NO NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

I READ WOW
AMAZIN>...........

COOL REAL GOOD WAITING ................
U LITTLE BRAT WHY DID U FINISH

THERE MAN PLEASE CONT<>>>>>> SOON

LOVE HEAVEN