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fahi

@fahi91

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#311

Mich... loved it all from start to end! 👏👏👏

Loved how u showed AN's worry for the boy and then not wanting 2 leave him..... feelings tugging at their hearts! 👏

Abhi telling Nikki who is Aryaan to them and the statement hurting him as well as her!! Really a great job!! 👏

Loved the ending... they gettn married and adoptin lil Aryaan... 😃😃😃

Nikki not proposing but ordering marriage!!! 😆

They will b such a picture perfect family with the addition of mini Nikki!!! 😃 but poor Aryaan... what will he do for a girl now?? 😆😆😆

Great ending Mich altho i wish u would continue..... 😃

Thanks! 🤗

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#312

Thanks a lot Honey, Shachee, Annie and Fahi......Quiet relieved you all liked my end, because as Annie pointed out it is a very sensitive issue. Of course, didn't really work towards it to be ending that way, but then when I journey with AN through a scene, the next course of action automatically springs up... So I went through the whole process of AN realising Aryaan is very close to their heart and that he has become a part of them.

I am very happy you all liked AN's decision to adopt Aryaan... In a way, Abhi has managed to get Aryaan off his Nikki 😆😆😆 but his drive twds mini-Nikki is stil very much on his mind 😃

Yes Annie, Abhi always wants to give the best to Nikki but his life is always very complicated and it makes things more difficult for her. However, for Nikki, Abhi's love is all that really matters, everything else will fall in place...

Thank you all once again

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ANfan

@ANfan

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#313

Originally posted by: mich09
Thanks a lot Honey, Shachee, Annie and Fahi......Quiet relieved you all liked my end, because as Annie pointed out it is a very sensitive issue. Of course, didn't really work towards it to be ending that way, but then when I journey with AN through a scene, the next course of action automatically springs up... So I went through the whole process of AN realising Aryaan is very close to their heart and that he has become a part of them.

I am very happy you all liked AN's decision to adopt Aryaan... In a way, Abhi has managed to get Aryaan off his Nikki 😆😆😆 but his drive twds mini-Nikki is stil very much on his mind 😃

Yes Annie, Abhi always wants to give the best to Nikki but his life is always very complicated and it makes things more difficult for her. However, for Nikki, Abhi's love is all that really matters, everything else will fall in place...

Thank you all once again

U wont cont the scene then?I wanted to see mini Nikki 😭n their journey b4 having mini Nikki😛

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#314

Hey Shachee,

When I started with the Orphanage part, I only wanted to show AN making up after their separation and them being in the orphanage. I myself, didn't think it would end with Aryaan's adoption.

Maybe some time later if I start a new series on AN maybe then I'll incorporate their mini versions too 😃

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clarita

@clars

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#315

Awesome end to this beautiful story 👏and now That Aryan is a part of their lives Iam sure both are happy esp Abhi he got them both ,the love of his life and his Tiger😆.......so its decided what abhi wants ,abhi gets no 2 ways abt that 😉.

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Michelle

@mich09

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#316

Thanks so much Clars, Glad you liked the end.....

You are so right : The Tiger is so happy... He got his Tigress as well as his cub and one on the way 😆😆

Thanks once again

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ANfan

@ANfan

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#317

Originally posted by: mich09
Hey Shachee,

When I started with the Orphanage part, I only wanted to show AN making up after their separation and them being in the orphanage. I myself, didn't think it would end with Aryaan's adoption.

Maybe some time later if I start a new series on AN maybe then I'll incorporate their mini versions too 😃

@bold, I hope u start ur new series very soon,I'm waiting n rem to incorporate my req😛😃

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Aisha

@Aisha202

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#318

Hey Michelle!!! 😃

Totally loved it to bits parts 3 and 4 of your AN story - soo sweet - enjoyed every part of it - Thank u sooo much!! 😃

*Hugz*

Aisha

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#319

Everyone I updated part 10 of my FF Covenant of Love

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Ivy

@Ivy9

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#320

**Writing by Erutan99**

FICTION 17

(A short random scene I wrote ages ago and decided to go ahead and post now. It can take place after they get married, because I'm still too mad at Abhi to let him near Niki until he marries her😆. Basically just a oneshot about Abhi trying to get Niki to forgive him even though the fight originally began with Abhi being mad at Niki😉.)

Abhi gave up...he was exhausted emotionally and physically...who had he upset up above that he was going through all this...why did he have to fall for this stubborn girl of all the girls in the world...how did he end up with the most bone-headed girl in the world! Slowly he walked over to where she stood angrily glaring at the wall with her back to him refusing to acknowledge him. Tired and just wanting it to be all over with he wrapped his arms around her waist and pulled her close before burying his face into her neck. "Alright, alright...I'm sorry...Please, please forgive me. I can't take this anymore!"

Niki smirked to herself in smug victory before allowing herself to melt into the frustrated arms of her husband. I told you, you'd be the one begging for forgiveness in the end and not me, my dear husband, she thought to herself triumphantly. Finally taking pity on him she pulled away slightly and tilted his face down to look at her. Smiling teasingly she pecked him on his cheek before once more snuggling into his arms. "Apology accepted, Pati dev," she whispered as she reveled in the feelings of warmth and safety that being in his arms brought. In reply Abhi simply rolled his eyes in defeat and tightened his hold on the precious girl in his arms. Briefly the thought that he was the one who was suppose to be mad and she the one begging for forgiveness flitted through his head before he dismissed the thought too tired to pursue it. Besides it never worked that way anyways...somehow she always got her way...but standing there holding her tightly after having fought with her for almost a week the idea didn't seem to bother him so much. She could have her way to an extent, as long as he got to hold her like this at the end of the day...

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Edited by Erutan99 - 16 years ago