My first fanfic - It's all about love - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
Its very good and please write 11th part soon šŸ‘.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 11

Uv decides to go talk to Ashi about Raj, but Ashi has something else in plan, & she plans to murder both Uv & Raj & did I forget to mention the editor of Maurya Masala. Unfortunately for Uv, he was the first of the three ppl to meet her.

Ashi: Yuvraj Dev, main tumhe nahi chodoongi, aaj to main tumhaara murder kar ke rahoongi.

Uv: Lekin maine kya kiya?

Ashi: Kya kiya? Kya kiya? Hey bhaggu, is psycho ko thoda sa dimaag de do, isse mujhe bahut madad milegi.

Uv: Ho gaya? Ab bolo.

Ashi: Tum hi likhte ho na wo Maurya Masala, bolo, bolo.

Uv: Ashi, tumhaara dimaag kharab ho gaya hai. Main apne bare mein rumours kyun felaoonga?

Ashi: Haan, apni life mein pehli baar u're right. To phir agar tumne wo sab nahi likha, tophir kisne likha? Wait a minute, kal tumhaare saath date par kaun tha?

Uv: Main aur Shyla 'date' par nahi the…

Uv & Ashi: Shyla!!!




Precap: What will Uv & Ashi do now? Will Ashi murder Shyla, or will she, for once, think before acting? All of that in the next part 12.


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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
wow....but such a small one.......continue asap and haan plsssssssss make it longer.....
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 12

Ashi: Ab suno, kisi ko bhi iske bare mein pata nahi chalna chahiye, not even Sid. Get it?

Uv: Theek hai, wacko, aur tum bhi ja ke Vrinda ko sab kuch blab mat kar dena?

Ashi: Fine, let's get to work. Aur Shyla ko kisi cheez ke bare mein shak nahi hona chahiya.

Uv: Yeah, yeah. Ab chalo.

They go to the canteen & start talking to each other as if they r seeing each other as soon as Shyla & Latty come in.


Uv: Oh, Ashi, main tumhe kaise bataoon ki main tumhe kitna pyaar karta hoon.

Ashi: Oh, Uv, I love u too!

Shyla & Latty look at each other.

Shyla: Wo-oh! Ek aur story for Maurya Masala.

Shyla & Latty look at each other & smile wickedly, & seeing them Uv & Ashi do the same.




Precap: Will Ashi & Uv's plan succeed, or will they make fools out of themselves? Read part 13 to find out, & don't forget to keep posting ur comments.



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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
wow.............shriya thia is sooo cool.....continue asap
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
awsome totally plz continue soon.........
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
HEY dats sufi! šŸ˜† šŸ˜† šŸ˜†
i am w8ing 4 da nxt part.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 13

Uv & Ashi start following Shyla & Latty everywhere they go to catch thm red handed.

Ashi: Uv, tumhe kuch pata chala?

Uv: Ashi, Latty to kuch strange nahi kar rahi thi, aur Shyla?

Ashi: Kuch khaas nahi, except wo kisi se apne cell par bat kar rahi thi, keh rahi thi ki kaam ho jaana chahiye.

Uv: Zaroor apne liye make-up mangwa rahi hogi. Tum ladkiyon ko na aur koi kaam dhanda nahi hai, bas make-up ke bare mein hi sochti rehti hain.

Ashi: Excuse me, yeh Yuvraj Dev bol raha hai, wo Yuvraj Dev jise ladkiyon par jitna zyaada make-up laga ho, utni hi zyaada pasand aati hai.

Uv: Hey, Ashi, tum to chup hi raho, & now get to work, ab tum Latty ko follow karo, aur main Shyla ko follow karoonga. Wo Latty mujh paagal kar degi.

Ashi: Uv, paagal to tum pehle se hi the. Ab main jaa rahi hoon, bye.


Precap: What Ashi & Uv don't know is what Shyla was talking about, & who she was talking to, did it have something to do with them? Keep waiting for d next part to find out.


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Posted: 20 years ago
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Part 13

Uv & Ashi start following Shyla & Latty everywhere they go to catch thm red handed.

Ashi: Uv, tumhe kuch pata chala?

Uv: Ashi, Latty to kuch strange nahi kar rahi thi, aur Shyla?

Ashi: Kuch khaas nahi, except wo kisi se apne cell par bat kar rahi thi, keh rahi thi ki kaam ho jaana chahiye.

Uv: Zaroor apne liye make-up mangwa rahi hogi. Tum ladkiyon ko na aur koi kaam dhanda nahi hai, bas make-up ke bare mein hi sochti rehti hain.

Ashi: Excuse me, yeh Yuvraj Dev bol raha hai, wo Yuvraj Dev jise ladkiyon par jitna zyaada make-up laga ho, utni hi zyaada pasand aati hai.

Uv: Hey, Ashi, tum to chup hi raho, & now get to work, ab tum Latty ko follow karo, aur main Shyla ko follow karoonga. Wo Latty mujh paagal kar degi.

Ashi: Uv, paagal to tum pehle se hi the. Ab main jaa rahi hoon, bye.


Precap: What Ashi & Uv don't know is what Shyla was talking about, & who she was talking to, did it have something to do with them? Keep waiting for d next part to find out.


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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
hey come on guys, puhleez post ur comments, is my fic that bad?

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