|| Kabhi Kushi Kabhi Ghum II || Pg.37 Jan.7th - Page 16

Originally posted by: tasnime

U said to just press the like button so I'm not commenting 😆

it was very depressing yaar ..plzz turn it gud and romantic as before

Your chapter was excellent!And don't worry I'm not mad at you at all because most of your FFs' are sad because I know that you will always leave a happy ending to a story and make everyone happy!And you ROCK girl and don't care if some people don't like some chapters because you are you and I know that you have confidence that you are brilliant and an excellent writer and that's the truth!Always have confidence in your writing and you'll ROCK ON!And you know what that's the saying I take in my life and I think that I'm me and that's all I can be,so keep on writing and your FFs' will blossom more and become number one everywhere!Belive me!And sorry that I didn't comment on some of your FFs'!I was actually watching Mom at Sixteen movie on Youtube which some people posted,so I'm sorry!Anyways,you ROCK AND ALWAYS!YOUR AN EXCELLENT WRITER! ⭐️

awesome part...
and the VM was too good...

regards,
Suhana.

Originally posted by: xoHarshaxo

What ever you wish 😳

arrey was just joking , didn't want to just write "my spot!" once again .. anyways I'll either comment tonight or tomorrow 😛😆

Tazi your more then welcome too why r u asking me i thought we were sisters

awesome loved the part continue asap thanks for the pm me

Hii Guys Finally updated and killed the suspense.

Soo thankyouu for your comments and PM's really appricate them. Sorry i never got to replay to Comments but i really think the link gets messy like that .. So please forgive.

Here is the suspense killer....

Next Part

ReCap

- Prem takes Heer away because Taj didn't change he kept hitting on Heer.

- Heer and Prem get in a fight about how he doesn't care about her happiness.

- Prem buys tickets to india for Heer so she can be happy.

- Heer is shattered after seeing the tickets.

- Heer tells Prem that this is the first time I regret marring you and would of married my enimes instead of this life.

- Prem is heartbroken.

Next part

Heer leaves his hotel while tears roll down her cheek.

Heer thought of their bridge scence, first night and soap scence. She sat in the car and drove to no where. She just kept going straight without even knowing where she was headed too.

Heer rememberd what Prem said ealier and how he kept stuff from her.

How he didn't care about her happiness anymore?

How he didn't care that she was even pregnant?

Prem on the other hand sat on his chair looking at a picture of Heer while tears formed in his eyes.

Prem – "Kya mein itna bura hoo gaya hoon Heer." He said holding her pictures close to his chest.

Prem – "iloveyou … Heer iloveyou." He said closing his eyes.

*************

Night had come and still no sign of Heer. She hadn't come back. Prem was dead scared because he didn't know where she went after the incidendnt in the office.

Preet and Meher also dead updset. Prem tried her number but she didn't pick up.

Prem – "Pata nahi kahaan chali gayi hai?" he said hanging up.

Meher – "Na kuch batya or kuch kaha pata nahi kahaan chali gayin hain."

Preet – "PB phone karein."

Prem –"Kab sey kar rahaa hoon pata nahi kyun nahi pick karrahi."

Prem's phone rang and he picked it up before the bell even finished.

Prem – "Hello."

Sapna – "Prem where the heck are you?"

Prem – "Home why?"

Sapna - "are you serious … Heer is at the hospital."

Prem – "Why … What happened?"

Sapna – "She said she wants a abboration."

Prem – "WHAT?" he said hanging up and running towards the door.

Prem – "Heer tum … Heer." He said trying to get the words out but the pain inside of him didn't allow that.

He drove as fast as he could to the hospital … he was sure he drove threw a red light but that didn't matter to him.

Prem parked his car and rushed inside. The front desk person told him where Heer was.

Prem rushed towards the room.

When he got there he saw Heer, Sapna and …………… her.

Prem stood their hell shocked to see her. He couldn't move his legs.

He looked at Heer. Her eyes red probably from crying, her face had so many emotions playing over them expect for Happy and loved.

Tears rolled down her cheek as she held her hands together.

Girl – "Hii Prem." She said getting up. She came and hugged Prem. Prem didn't move and neither did Heer. She stayed on the chair facing back to Prem and tears rolling down her cheek.

Sapna – "Heer." She said placing a hand on top of hers.

Heer pushed it away wiping her tears. The girl smiled eviliy as she moved back from Prem. Prem stood their like a staute not moving.

Heer got up and turned, but didn't meet Prem's eyes. She walked past him leaving.

Sapna – "How disusting." she said looking at Prem and leaving.

The girl looked at her nails blowing on them.

Prem – "Tumney asa kyu kiya Geet?"

Geet – "Its called personal choice." She said patting his cheek and leaving.

Prem followed Heer and went to the other room.

He saw Heer waiting on the benches for the doctor.

Prem – "Heer…" he said but she didn't respond.

Prem pulled Heer up by her arm to face him but in return Heer slapped him so hard that his whole cheek turned red.

Heer – "Don't touch me." She said in a angry voice and shoved past him leaving.

Sapna gave Heer time to think about the aboration and plus she wanted Heer to think about what was all of this going to cause.

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Prem came home. Geet and Sapna came too. Preet and Meher were shocked too but mostly Meher to know it was Geet.

Chahat was asleep so she didn't know what was happing.

Prem – "Heer…"

Heer – "Meray paas mat ana." She said moving back as he tried to talk to her.

Heer – "Chuna mat mujhe." She said backing away from him.

Prem tried to hold her by the shoulder but she pushed his arms away.

Heer – "Haat na lagna." She said as tears rolled down her cheek.

PRem – "Heer meri baath samjho."

Heer – "Kya samjhoon, Bolo KYA SMAJHOON." She yelled at him.

Prem – "Meiney tumhein batna chaha thaa liken …."

Heer – "Nahi batya Prem Nahi batya … Phir sey nahi vishwaas kiya tumney phirsey." She said pushing him away.

Prem – "Heer mujhe majboori thee."

Heer – "MAJBOORI sharam karo Prem tum ek baap ho phir bii kisi or … Mujhe tu bolnay mein sharam ati hai or tumney .. tumney." She said running her hands threw his hair.

Preet – "Bhabi app…"

Heer – "Tu chup kar … tujh sey meiney kuch nahi poocha." She said in anger.

Heer – "Tumney mera parivaar, mera desh mujh sey door kiya meiney kuch bolo, nahi na tu phir aj tumney jo kiya kyun kiya Prem KYUN?" Prem looked away from her as she sat on the bed crying.

Prem – "Kabhi tu mera yakeen kiya karo Heer." She got up from the bed in anger and pulled him by the arm. Heer took Prem downstairs to where Geet was sitting.

Heer – "Yeh kon hai tumhari, kya lagtai hai, kya rishta hai tumhara issey … koi jawab hai tumharay paas?" she said letting go of his arm.

Prem – "Heer Please meri ek baath baar suno."

Heer – "Meiney ek sawal poocha hai agar jawaab nahi hain a tu mujhe kuch nahi sunnana."

Prem – "Heer…"

Geet – "Heer listen har koi ek biwi kay saath hamisha nahi rahta okay, he moved and you need to stop this whole nonsense and suck it up for god sakes."

Heer looked at her in anger.

Geet – "Wooow Attitiude Mrs.Prem… I mean Ms.Heer Maan .. or koi or hai tumhari zindagi mein."

Heer walked upto her and was about to slap her when Prem caught her hand.

Geet – "My PERSONNEL body guard." She said looking at Prem.

Prem turned around and span Geet to face him. He slapped her so damn hard that she fell on the floor.

Prem – "Get out …. GET OUT." He said pulling her by the arm.

Geet stood up.

Geet – "Do you what will happen if you throw me out?"

Prem – "ya I do and you know what I don't care."

Geet – "We'll see … One day you will come to me asking for forgivness and also you will be the one who will want me to be yours." She said in a evil way and left.

Prem shut the door in anger and went to Heer.

He held he by the shoulder.

Prem – "Yaa thaa joo meiney nahi batya issliye nahi kaay mein ussey pyaar karta hoon … liken issliye kyun kay mein majboor thaa."

He said in anger.

Prem – "KOI JHOOT NAHI BOLA MEINY." He said yelling.

Prem – "Or kya bool rahi thee office mein … hamari shaadi sey kush nahi hoo … teak hai jis seey kush rahoo ghee na ussey kar lena … joo tumhein pyaar karay ghaa na ussey kar lena." He said letting go of her.

Prem – "mein tumhein kushi dena chahata thaa tumhari kushi lena nahi … liken tum kya samjhoo ghee choti choti baath ko sar pay utha leti hoo or hamray rishtay ko todnay chal pardti hoo." He said looking sad and angry.

Prem – "Geet ney mujhe itna majboor kiya thaa kay agar mein uski baath nahi sunta woh hamien Hamisha kay liye juda kar deti. Liken tum meri baath kyun manoghee mujh peay tu tumehin vishwaas hi nahi hain na." He said in anger. Heer looked at him with tears rolling down her cheek.

Prem – "Jayo joo tumhein kushi deaay ghaa na ussey shaadi karlo … liken ek baath yaad rakna jitna Pyaar mein tumhein dhoon ghaa na koi nahi deeay sakta KOI NAHI."

He said in anger and left the room. Prem went to the guest room slamming the door shut.

Heer fell on the sofa crying.

Meher and Preet sat beside her.

Preet – "Deka bhabi PB ap sey kitna pyaar kartay hain or app ya soochaanay lagi thee." He let tears roll down her cheek.

Heer – "Galti meri hai … meiney APNAY prem ko galat samjha … or uss Geet pa vishwaas kiya." Meher wiped her tears.

Meher – "Didi who baatein chodanin or jaa kay jiju sey baath Karin."

Heer – "Prem bohat duki hai … meiney usko bohat duk diya … kabhi ek achi patnai nahi ban saki." She said crying.

Preet sat in front of her.

Preet – "Bhabi PB ap sey kabhi naraz hoo saktay hain … woh app sey bohat pyaar kartay hain or bhabi yaad hai unko jab ap or raj kay baray mein misunderstanding hui thee or wasay hii aj hui … bus ap PB sey baath Karin." He said wiping her tears.

Heer nods. PReet and Meher leave. Heer looks toward the guest room.

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Heer slowly opens the door and sees Prem laying on the bed with his eyes open and staring at the roof. He notices the door opend but doesn't seem to care.

Heer walks in closing the door. She slowly walks towards the bed but before she could do anything Prem gets up and faces her.

Prem – "Kuch points miss hoo gay kya … abhi insult baqi hai … woh bii karloo mujhe tu much nahi hoo ghaa mera dil jo nahi hai." He said without looking at her.

Heer – "Prem mein woh …" Prem didn't let her finish and walked away going to the window.

Heer looked annoyed.

Prem – "Sorry bolnay ayi hoo na tu mein maaf nahi karnay wala." Heer couldn't help but smile a bit.

Heer – "Mein kab sorry mangay ayi thee." Prem turend around surprised.

Prem – "Acha …. Tu phir kyun ayi hoo."

Heer – "Pillow leaney." She said picking up the pillow.

Prem looked annoyed by her behavior.

Heer took the pillow and was about to turn when Prem caught her by the waist and pinned her against the wall, smashing his body into hers.

Prem – "Acha tu sara drama kya thaa?" he said moving his body closer to her.

Heer – "koi meray pati ko apna samjhay … mein drama nahi tu dance karoon." She said as Prem's eyes fixed on her lips.

Prem – "acha … tu tumhari shaadi bii hui hai?"

Heer – "Haan kyun?"

Prem – "Nahi meiney soocha Ek akeli lardki raat ko meray kamray mein … kuch khass baat na hoo."

Heer – "mujhe koi aur nahi chiye … mera pati duniya ka best husband hai to mein ussey bohat pyaar karti hoon … or haan agar meray pati na tumhein yeh kahtay huay sun liye na tu asa makeover deaay ghaa jo kabhi change nahi hoo sakta."

Prem smiled as Heer said that.

He brought him self closer to her fixing his lips with her and finally feeling like he had his world back with HIS HEER.

The kiss was passinote and different. This kiss was one of those many moments which they would never forget.

As Prem's lips moved with Heer's the moons light got brighter and shined on the blessed couple.

But there was someone still out there who will come back to take over their lives and maybe ruin the love they share.

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Okay that's all guys.

I know you all must be wondering GEET …. But when the story

Is reveled behind Heer and how she gave more happiness you will be shocked.

For now enjoy Premeer and Meet.

Also there will be Premeerhahat scence.

Heer gives birth soon and Harhu arrives into their lives which blossoms their love even more.

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great


i m confused
how GEET could give prem MORE happiness

thanx 4 the pm


update soon


Kamal