Dhoka - A story;new link-pg147;pts 1-22 pg-148&149 - Page 80

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Waiting for the next update...

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very interesting and shocking,

Hey, thanks for your comments... and glad you found the update interesting... the shock part.. well.. it will be resolved soon... 😆😆

So Raj and Naina are getting married and both Shalini and Sameera will be the witness.

BC is angry that he is not able to throw naina out of KMA..he feels helpless because despite of know that Nina is naveen's daughter he is not able to do anything, He cares for raj and is afraid that naina might hurt him. He was shocked to know that Mishra was a traitor and he was the one who framed Naina but still he is not able to trust Naina ..He is sure dat she is hiding something.

Just being Navin's daughter made Naina a suspect in BC's eyes.. but somewhere in some corner of his heart he knows that Naina can never be that bad to use Rajveer or Chitra... that was why he allowed Chtra's friendship with Naina but still he couldnt accept the facts...

It was a change to see the romantic side of BC..now here is something that no other writer has explored.

hehhe.. thanks a lot.... everyone has a love story in this story... 😆

Major Nair is annoyed because he was not allowed to take over Mishra's case from Raj and he knows that Raj is sure to fail his plans..

he has to be more careful now but who is he kidding.. he is against Raj.. sure Raj will nab him soon enough... 😉

Naina is shocked to learn that Raj is in KMA to protect nuclear triggers as she has come there to keep an eye on him only.. But how is she to spy on him? I think Naina is some undercover agent who has been sent by Col.Shakti Chandra..

good guess.. but let us see if its right in the next update... 😉😉

Waiting to know what happens next please continue soon sure.. will do..

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

ok u r such a gr8 one!!!! am readin ur fic since aftrnoon!! frm te vry beginnin!! so ya!! am soooo hooked up wid tis!!

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ps. eeeks!! ur fault!! i ve an exam day aftr!! ve nt studied anythin!! cos i cudn stop readin ur fic!! :( lol..... its ok!! u r simply aweosme!

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Raj is shocked with Mishra's last words!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Mishra who could answer a lot of Raj's questions is dead!!!!!

Even I had thought that how come the cyanide capsule was not caught in the medical examination!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Shalini steps up to examine Mishra's body and give her medical judgement for the report!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini's statement on the death of Mishra was superb!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj had a lost and thoughful expression on his face and Shalini could understand how big a blow Mishra's death was to Raj's investigation!!!!

Mishra had opened a Pandora's box with his death and created even more mystery for Raj!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina was waiting for Raj at the entrance of the special ward and Raj was shocked to see her there!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina decided to talk to Raj before BC does anything to send her away from here!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She does not want to lose the great chance to obtain information for both her missions!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Why does she say both her mission??😔 😔 😔 😔One mission is to prove Navin innocent then what is the other??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina was happy to see Raj but as she spotted his exhausted face she wanted to soothe all his frustrations away!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She had to control to keep herself from soothing away the lines on the forehead!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is surprised by the feeling of trust, care, concern and perhaps love she feels for Raj and tries to justify them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj's anxiety and weariness vanish with her sight and he is pleased to note the worry in her eyes for him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He felt a sense of peace and calm prevail over him and he stared into Naina's eyes basking in the visible concern there!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

He had never had a lot of people to care for him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj was concerned for Naina and she was overwhelmed at his concern and affection!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She looked into Raj's eyes and knew that something is troubling him!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

She is surprised with herself that she can just read his eyes to know his innermost feelings!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina tried not to tell Raj anything about her fear as she did not want him to worry about her too!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj looked into her eyes and understood her fear!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina was shocked that how did he find out!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Raj consoling Naina and trying to drive away all her worries was very sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He assured her ke woh hai naa aur woh uska saath dega aur BC uska kuch nahi par payega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It hurt him to see her crying and she looked so lost and vulnerable that his heart twisted at the sight of her forlorn face!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina was touched at Raj's care and concern for her and ashamed of herself for doubting him for even a few seconds!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I am glad that she has decided to give Raj a chance to explain his side of the story!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina savoured the warmth from Raj's touch and forgot all her missions now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

All that mattered was that she would drift away without the anchor called Rajveer and would be totally lost in the sea of uncertainty that her life had become!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

She has more than one mission it seems!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔But what is the other??😕 😕 😕 😕

When she asked him ke woh usse jaane ko nahi kahega na and he said kabhi nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

She felt so light, so free, so cared for and so loved!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Shalini kept looking fondly at them for a while until she realized that they were becoming a spectacle to the cellar guards!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Shalini is surprised to see that Raj is not concerned about anything in the world when he sees Naina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Rajveer was a very closed person, who never expressed his emotions in public and who never let anyone read his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The same Rajveer now forgets the whole world when he is with Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

He no longer hesitates to express his emotions for Naina in public!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He doesn't even hesitate to seek physical contact with Naina even in public and that is so unlike Raj according to Shalini!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj's only concern had been to remove all her worries and make her eyes twinkle the same way it had when she first saw him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Shalini accidentally said about Mishra aur Naina toh uske zikar se bhi darr jaati hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

This was the same place and all those memories came back as the wounds are still raw!!!!!!!

Raj and Shalini supported her and Raj assured her ke woh kuch nahi kar sakta and told her that Mishra has committed suicide!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina thought there was no way now to prove her innocence but Raj assured her ke sab theek ho jayega aur woh usse kuch nahi hone dega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

He gave her a light side hug and she knew that if he said it then he will make everything alright and never leave her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗

Raj and Naina are in love and as Shalini said these two duffers are not even aware of it!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Seeing them together Shalini is more sure than ever that they are made for each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Shalini started thinking about her plan to get them together and Chitra is there to become her partner-in-crime!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

Sameera is happy to have received such a warm welcome and meet such friendly people!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda is gone for ever and seems to have truly fallen on love with Sameera!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is at a loss of words!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Pata nahi aaj suraj kis disha se utha hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

He has never been in love and thats why is now explaining himself!!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪

Love is definately in the air and KMA seems to be becoming a love-nest now!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

I think that guitar belongs to Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is seeing Sameera almost after a decade and is shocked to see her in KMA!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

At Raj's recognition Sameera flung herself at him and sobbed on his chest!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

So Sameera or Sherry is Raj's sister!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Why is she thinking that Raj is still angry at her??😕 😕 😕 😕

I waiting see Sameera's reaction once she meets her bhabhi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Weekend's gone...!!!

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Thanks Shaina.... Glad you liked it.. and nice to see you trying your best to catch up with the updates.. 😛

Raj is shocked with Mishra's last words!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Mishra who could answer a lot of Raj's questions is dead!!!!!

That is indeed a big blow to Raj's plans.. but these things wouldnt deter him in the long run... 😃

Even I had thought that how come the cyanide capsule was not caught in the medical examination!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

It was masterfully placed around his tooth enamel by surgery.. and there are materials that can escape detectors; moreover xrays dont really show everything in the teeth part unless its a big cavity (personal experience.. 😆😆)

Shalini steps up to examine Mishra's body and give her medical judgement for the report!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Shalini's statement on the death of Mishra was superb!!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Thank you.. even though Shalini was shaken by the events, she acted professionally..

Raj had a lost and thoughful expression on his face and Shalini could understand how big a blow Mishra's death was to Raj's investigation!!!!

Mishra had opened a Pandora's box with his death and created even more mystery for Raj!!!!😕 😕 😕 😕

Misra's death is indeed a temporary setback for Raj.. but Shal knows that he will soon find the remaining things needed to unearth the big treachery going on in KMA.. and moreover even she was shaken by Mishra's revelation... who would have thought there is a traitor inside KMA... 😕

Naina was waiting for Raj at the entrance of the special ward and Raj was shocked to see her there!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

Naina decided to talk to Raj before BC does anything to send her away from here!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She wants to assure herself that she has Raj's full support and that HE has no plans to send her away.. she is very insecure and vulnerable at the moment..

She does not want to lose the great chance to obtain information for both her missions!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Why does she say both her mission??😔 😔 😔 😔One mission is to prove Navin innocent then what is the other??😕 😕 😕 😕

That will soon be revealed... in part 17 and 18 I guess...

Naina was happy to see Raj but as she spotted his exhausted face she wanted to soothe all his frustrations away!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She had to control to keep herself from soothing away the lines on the forehead!!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

She is surprised by the feeling of trust, care, concern and perhaps love she feels for Raj and tries to justify them!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

she could not bear to see a tired and almost-defeated looking Raj.. he has always been a pillar of support for her and she feels its now her turn to be his rock of support..

Raj's anxiety and weariness vanish with her sight and he is pleased to note the worry in her eyes for him!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He felt a sense of peace and calm prevail over him and he stared into Naina's eyes basking in the visible concern there!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

He had never had a lot of people to care for him!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

it is true that he did not have a lot of people to care for him in the past.. but he himself distanced himself from some people who were willing to care for him... such as bade papa and Chitraji.. he just wasnt ready to trust and open up to people.. but now with Naina in his life we may expect some changes.. 😉

Raj was concerned for Naina and she was overwhelmed at his concern and affection!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

It's been a while since Naina had someone to care for her too... Her Nanaji and Chitraji were indeed there but with Raj it was different for her.. Hope I make sense here.. 😆😆

She looked into Raj's eyes and knew that something is troubling him!!!!!! 😔 😔 😔 😔

She is surprised with herself that she can just read his eyes to know his innermost feelings!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hota hai hota hai. pyar ka pehla ishara... 😆

Naina tried not to tell Raj anything about her fear as she did not want him to worry about her too!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj looked into her eyes and understood her fear!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏Naina was shocked that how did he find out!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

What? Did she think only she is the one bitten by the love bug? 😆

Raj consoling Naina and trying to drive away all her worries was very sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

He assured her ke woh hai naa aur woh uska saath dega aur BC uska kuch nahi par payega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

It hurt him to see her crying and she looked so lost and vulnerable that his heart twisted at the sight of her forlorn face!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

He would never allow a third person to dictate his relationship with Naina.. chahe woh BC ho ya koi aur.. 😉 he knows that he is not able to stand her forlorn look and her tears.. he just doesnt know why it hurt him so much....

Naina was touched at Raj's care and concern for her and ashamed of herself for doubting him for even a few seconds!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

I am glad that she has decided to give Raj a chance to explain his side of the story!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

she knows that a person who is accepting and helping a stranger such as herself could never have been indifferent towards Navin who was his mentor and very close to him... she now wants to learn the truth directly from Raj..

Naina savoured the warmth from Raj's touch and forgot all her missions now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

All that mattered was that she would drift away without the anchor called Rajveer and would be totally lost in the sea of uncertainty that her life had become!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

even though Naina is a strong girl there is some vulnerability inside her after Navin's death.. and at moments like this, her vulnerable side comes out starkly... and only Raj can provide the support and solidarity that she so craves for internally..

She has more than one mission it seems!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔But what is the other??😕 😕 😕 😕

All in good time 😉

When she asked him ke woh usse jaane ko nahi kahega na and he said kabhi nahi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

She felt so light, so free, so cared for and so loved!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

She knows that there is someone in the world she can call her own... someone who will be there for her!

Shalini kept looking fondly at them for a while until she realized that they were becoming a spectacle to the cellar guards!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Imagine their open mouths seeing Captain Rajveer engaging in PDA... 😉😉😉

Shalini is surprised to see that Raj is not concerned about anything in the world when he sees Naina!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He forgets everyone around I say.. 😉

Rajveer was a very closed person, who never expressed his emotions in public and who never let anyone read his eyes!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The same Rajveer now forgets the whole world when he is with Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

his world has now shrunk to just he and Naina... 😉

He no longer hesitates to express his emotions for Naina in public!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He doesn't even hesitate to seek physical contact with Naina even in public and that is so unlike Raj according to Shalini!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

with Naina he forgets that he is in public.. so why would he hesitate?? 😉😉

Raj's only concern had been to remove all her worries and make her eyes twinkle the same way it had when she first saw him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Shalini accidentally said about Mishra aur Naina toh uske zikar se bhi darr jaati hai!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

she is still yet to recover from the trauma... the fear is still there inside her..

This was the same place and all those memories came back as the wounds are still raw!!!!!!!

Until now she was solely concentrating on raj.. but now she has realized where she is... 😕

Raj and Shalini supported her and Raj assured her ke woh kuch nahi kar sakta and told her that Mishra has committed suicide!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina thought there was no way now to prove her innocence but Raj assured her ke sab theek ho jayega aur woh usse kuch nahi hone dega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Now this is another motivation for him to gte to the bottom of the case, no? 😉😉

He gave her a light side hug and she knew that if he said it then he will make everything alright and never leave her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗

That is her trust on him... she knows that he will take care of her.. 😃

Raj and Naina are in love and as Shalini said these two duffers are not even aware of it!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Ab kya kare.. at times even smart people like Raj and Naina are reduced to blind people in love.. 😉😉

Seeing them together Shalini is more sure than ever that they are made for each other!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Shalini started thinking about her plan to get them together and Chitra is there to become her partner-in-crime!!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

and sure, her plan is damakedaar one... 😉😉

Sameera is happy to have received such a warm welcome and meet such friendly people!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

she was nervous about her entry into KMA.. but she is happy metting the friendly bunch of our cadets there and of course Neelu.. 😆😆

Huda is gone for ever and seems to have truly fallen on love with Sameera!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

He is at a loss of words!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Pata nahi aaj suraj kis disha se utha hai!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Love brings even the arrogant and headstrong Huda down on his knees... 😉😉😉 it will be very interesting to watch him grapple with these emotions and try to get Sherry... 😆😆

He has never been in love and thats why is now explaining himself!!!!!!🤪 🤪 🤪 🤪

Love is definately in the air and KMA seems to be becoming a love-nest now!!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Indeed... everyone has a love story.. even BC.. 😆

I think that guitar belongs to Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

good guess.. it does 😃

Raj is seeing Sameera almost after a decade and is shocked to see her in KMA!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲

he never thought in his wildest dreams of meeting Sherry again.. that too inside KMA..

At Raj's recognition Sameera flung herself at him and sobbed on his chest!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

So Sameera or Sherry is Raj's sister!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Why is she thinking that Raj is still angry at her??😕 😕 😕 😕

Sherry is a very innocent and naive young girl.. she thinks Raj never came to meet her after bade papa's death as he was angry with her.. more on Sameera-Raj past in subsequent part..

I waiting see Sameera's reaction once she meets her bhabhi!!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😊 😊 😊 😊

I am sure she will love Naina, no? 😉