PEHCHAN (2) AR END&EPILOGUE pg 133- 12/21/09 - Page 61

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yayyyy first!!!!!! :D
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Well.. Well... Bheegi.. I liked both the parts (35 n 36) od their reconcillation. Both has its own flavour. Things have turned to be better now Shanky's position...ummm... benefit of doubt.. time for the real facts to be out. 😃. Enjpyed reading the part!! Armaan's pink kurta.. hehehe😆... that was so sweet!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yayyyyyyyyyyyy second
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Sorry for the late comments Massi...
Sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
Anyways i must tell u that part 36 was just awesome Massi..
The way u had written the rainbow of her emosions was tooo good...
Love that scene..
Finally Armaan Riddhima are together..and i m happy that Armaan is now concerned about her meeting with Shashank...
and i m sure he will soon find out the truth..
Thanks a lot for this awesome part massi..
Thank uuuuuuuuuu
Love u
Ankita😊😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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will be back soooon...
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heyyy bheegi !!...
i actually liked the previous part... but this one explains their emotions more deeply and maybe i like this reunion much better... it was beautifully penned.. loved it tons !! :D
her anger, her frustration, her pride and ego were reflected beautifully in this part... and that her life revolved around him even in his absence... and his guilt but ego coming in between was fab as well :)
and then the single touch arousing a million feelings in them and AR trying their best to not be affected by their proximity and her constant jabs at him this time expressed her state of mind really well...
armaan's confusion abt shanky's role in their separation..
and then riddhima's bottled up emotions finding an outlet at seeing his funny attire and then their reunion was perfect... loved it sooo soooo much :) their cute moments thereafter was really nice..
now i'm glad u penned this part... explains it more awesomely...
thanks a bunch for the pm !!...
and wonderful update again..
continue sooooooooon :D
Edited by SunainaTM007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

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yayyyy first!!!!!! :D
edit:
Well.. Well... Bheegi.. I liked both the parts (35 n 36) od their reconcillation. Both has its own flavour. Things have turned to be better now Shanky's position...ummm... benefit of doubt.. time for the real facts to be out. 😃. Enjpyed reading the part!! Armaan's pink kurta.. hehehe😆... that was so sweet!!!!



thanks Prasanthi. I am glad u liked both parts....part 36 just clarified their misunderstandings better😊 and of course all thanks to the pink kurta😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
my bad to have read 35 with such delay that i now read both parts together...

nonetheless, a reconciliation was the idea, n that we have... whatever comes with your conviction better! im guessing shashank can expect the storm to travel from nainital/ranikhet n strike down upon him anytime soon now... wonder if he'll know what hit him soon enough!

cheers,
nj
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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb update, all underlying issues , at least on a personal level resolved for AR. They were just fighting against their own selves, not against one another, as for the rest we shud sing....Pyaar toh hona hi thaaaaa, hehe, Remo style!
Love this FF.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

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will be back soooon...
*edited*
heyyy bheegi !!...
i actually liked the previous part... but this one explains their emotions more deeply and maybe i like this reunion much better... it was beautifully penned.. loved it tons !! :D
her anger, her frustration, her pride and ego were reflected beautifully in this part... and that her life revolved around him even in his absence... and his guilt but ego coming in between was fab as well :)
and then the single touch arousing a million feelings in them and AR trying their best to not be affected by their proximity and her constant jabs at him this time expressed her state of mind really well...
armaan's confusion abt shanky's role in their separation..
and then riddhima's bottled up emotions finding an outlet at seeing his funny attire and then their reunion was perfect... loved it sooo soooo much :) their cute moments thereafter was really nice..
now i'm glad u penned this part... explains it more awesomely...
thanks a bunch for the pm !!...
and wonderful update again..
continue sooooooooon :D



thanks for appreciating both parts sunaina. I think both needed time to cool down, vent to each other and then melt in each other's arms- i was hopefully able to convey thos emotions in part 36😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

my bad to have read 35 with such delay that i now read both parts together...

nonetheless, a reconciliation was the idea, n that we have... whatever comes with your conviction better! im guessing shashank can expect the storm to travel from nainital/ranikhet n strike down upon him anytime soon now... wonder if he'll know what hit him soon enough!

cheers,
nj



thanks NJ....yes the end result was the same in both parts- just the journey was different😃

yes, a big storm will def come but after some cute romance between the two lovers😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: caprigurl

Superb update, all underlying issues , at least on a personal level resolved for AR. They were just fighting against their own selves, not against one another, as for the rest we shud sing....Pyaar toh hona hi thaaaaa, hehe, Remo style!
Love this FF.



thanks caprigurl- ur right just fighting against their own selves, not against one another,

they should sing- jinko jinko hai....milna from u me aur hum😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey bheegi
i dont think i commented on part 35,well here's my view on both parts

yes the patch up in part 35 ws fast and unexpected,glad u wrote this one
everything sounded perfect and believable,had a feeling the kurta was gona play catalyst somehow and glad it did
like the parallels u drew between now and then and their emotional state was written awesomely well,always have liked your choice of words and apt descriptions...
thanks for this part ,now its Shashank's turn to repent ..like really..wonder if that will ever happen.updt the next soon

cheers
Hina

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