PEHCHAN (2) AR END&EPILOGUE pg 133- 12/21/09 - Page 59

Diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Finallllyyyyyyy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Are you happy with the fact that you made me bounce on my chair ONCE more ???????????????? :D:D:D:D:D
By god, this part was THE amazing part that me (and lots of other people too ) were waiting for nai?
Well, to start off, loved the symbol of the bracelet that keeps them bonded even though they are far apart, and the way Armaan kept on holding it, was just too natural, and as if he didn't want to let it go just the way he let go off Riddhima.. :)
I am finally happy that at least he confronted Padma about his feelings. At least she is aware of what happened between Armaan and Riddhima that night, so that now, she can help more than she actually is !!! :) Plus, the last comment you replied to, I soo agree with it. Shanky is seriously spineless ! I mean come on, i just wanna shout at his face "GET A LIFE !! " He seriously thinks he can be seen as the "good and reformed guy"in many people's eyes, but that is going to backfire soon...Big time !!
Haha, I knew he wouldn't be able to resist going back, i mean, he was in such an emotional termoil, that he HAD to go see Riddhima again !!! :) Loved Padma's lines that said soo much to Abhi and Shanky- They deserved it !! aRrrrgh, annoying people both of them !
Loved all the efforts Padma and Aradhna are going through to unite the two lovers ! Why can't these two women get all the happiness in the world? Whey do they have to be stuck with Shanky and Shailendra?? I really want them to be happy in the end di ! :)
Ahh, Armaan and his sarcasm, hurts everyone !! But Padma was right in saying that when we are hurt, we hurt the ones we love the most, because we know that they are the ones who will stick by us no matter what, and understand us ! :)
Awh, the last bit was the best bit di ! :) I mean when Riddhima realised that she one of them would HAVE to take the first step and she did, but little did she know that Armaan ad already taken the step that was needed... Well both of them realised so that is good ! :) Thank you mother Nature, for the timely rain and hail !!! :)
So thanks to Mother Nature, and YOU di, these two have realised that their ego is going to get them nowhere, except for away from one another, and they should just kick the huge ego outta their lives ! :)
So finally, their patch up huh !! :D YAY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I cannot begin to describe how happy I am at this point of time !! :) The kiss was really sweet as well .. Duh ! and Loved the "real men wear pink" line !! :)) The song fit perfectly with the situation as well, and standing in the hail/ rain was such an Armaan-y thing to do right !!??? :) Well i am superduper happy with this part, and i think you can tell.. :)
Yay, can't wait to read the next part, and i hope Ridhhima confronts Armaan about her previous visit to Mumbai and her encounter with Shanky, but i guess she probably won't seeing that now the father and son are finally together..but i think she should.. Seriously, i mean Shanky will keep on doing these type of things throughout if Riddhima doesn't say something now ! And please di, will the twist separate them? Coz i do NOT want that to happen again !!! please no di !! I don't mind a twist as long as it doesn't separate them, and you gotta keep in mind what I told you .. :) Keep me in mind when you are writing the separating and twist parts !! :P
Cheers,

heyyy bheegi !!...

um still dreaming di.....!!AR scene ws simplyyy awsummmm...!!essence of love their craving evything ws depicted so well di....!!

Hiiiii di
Wasnt that Quick?????? 😆 I had to read two updates this time...
So firstly thanks.....coz both parts were AR oriented. AR initial convo at the aashirwad was promising.....because Armaan didnt totally ignore her......he was rude, arrogant and bitter but not indifferent....That was a sign in itself. Their sarcastic exchange of words further made chances of their union....Armaan's aashirwad visit was nicely explained. Their glances at each other, suppression of feelings, convincing words to themselves in the first part was their figh against their hearts only. You mentioned all that superbly. 👏
And The bracelet, it was the major highlight of the parts, i suppose...😆
I liked armaan's concern about her feelings when he found that bracelet.....he had not changed THAT much. Still somewhere he was the loving and caring lover!!!

and the second part, i was glad to know that padma n aradhana didnt leave the hope.....actually caring people!!! Armaan should have been shown the truth from other perspective and as always our lady controller, made him understand this thing.
Armaan's next visit to ranikhet was unexpected but in the end.............
Armaan will always be Armaan, our hero...!!!

He kept standing outside her quarter......can one please tell me why both of them do every work with a stubborness.........Love also and separation also....😆
And the last scene of their soulful meeting, aah i would call it bheega style.....😆
Totally your way of surprised writing and again i liked that. 😳

Well, now am really missing armaan's special lines......make sure armaan memorizes his dialogues well in next fully romantic update as u said....

My favorite lines were-
Both wore their sunglasses, further shielding their expressions from each other.
Aankehein bhi hoti hain dil ki zubaan!!!
He was glad that he did not fall for her 'crocodile tears' this time.
Time changes.....at a time, he could not see her tears and now he quoted them as crocodile tears!!!!!!!!!
Yes- He was going to forget and stop loving her- he convinced himself numerous times.
A lot of power is needed when we have to abandon something we love..........and here he was talking about the love of his life!!!! Making fun of his heart!!!

Great satisfactory parts di 👍🏼......loved them. 😊

Originally posted by: bheegi

Hi everyone

After reading comments from part 35 and also analyzing what I wrote in chapter 35, I am going to rewrite the second half of chapter 35 and include it in chapter 36. Even i was not too convinced with the quick patch up. You can just pretend that the second half (after she finds him in the rain) was a dream sequence like EKTA serials.lolz

And why is that????? U didnt change ur decision of shifting riddhima to AR house even after all d arguements, then why now?
Writers dont change their writings after knowing what readers expected......Readers read writers' works because its different from their own angles of seeing things. And it may have looked a bit early....ya convo was a bit short....but sometimes u dont need the whole length words!!!
U can compensate it in next update......and u can very well do that, i know.
But still if its ur decision, its ok with me. 😊

hey the update was amazing................sorry could not comment on the previous two parts............is this ff going to end soon..........pls try to make it as long as possible............thanks 😊

Hey bheegi di,I m ur big fan.i just luv ur ff. I have read all of dem.nd i have no words for this part, it is simply amazing...i have been silent reader for so long..nd pls add me to ur pm list..:-):-):-) Luv u!