~*~AN Fiction Thread 2~*~ - Page 17

Nice one michi...I loved the way how u made Abhi speak out everything...Well done Michi..waiting for more...go ahead..plzz write..

Awesome... Though yesterday I was saying I dont want Atul to interfere but the way you made him do it was awesome... I hope the actual scene turns out to be same too :) have you by any chance joined back as DMG writer ;-)

Hey Himanshu, Shahchee, Clars, Honey and Ratz,

Hey Pri, 😆😆 Wish I could join the team, I wouldn't let my AN go through so much trash 😉 So glad you liked it.... Thanks so much....

Hey Mich,

Originally posted by: mich09

Hey Pri, 😆😆 Wish I could join the team, I wouldn't let my AN go through so much trash 😉 So glad you liked it.... Thanks so much....

I feel instead of being a thorn and overprotective friend verbally, Atul can actually understand AN's issue and help them out....

Thanks once again Pri

I think thats why I liked the Atul in your scene better I guess.. he is doing something to help rather than giving some random suggetions..

@ Hey Annie so glad you liked it... Thanks so much...

Ratika

Thanks Pri, for taking out ur time and commenting.

Dirty Dirty Jiah..!! 🤢 Chii CHiii Chiiii....!!!!!!

Nikki who is packing her bags to leave the city, picks up a photoframe containing a picture of Abhi and hers. She breaks down and slips to the floor. "I wished I could have died before you asked this to me" she thinks and speaks with pain in her voice " how easily u asked me to leave everything.....?? Why do you this to me everytime Abhi...what wrong have I done in my life to get pain always and it never ends.." and she shouts in anger her heart breaking.
" You can take him Jiah, but not my love" replies Nikki with confidence.
" What love are you talking about..??love that only gives pain to you and nothing else..!!' questions Jiah..
" Atleast, my soul is satisfied Jiah, I do not run behind anyone to beg for my love or STAB ANYONE FROM BACK" Nikki explains.

" Really Nikki...??" Giving Nikki an evil look, raising her eyebrow, taking out something to affect Nikki badly once again, revealing the thing in her hand..

Nikki shocked and opens hers mouth, widens her eye.
( Like she always do and we get scare of her that look..😛, daro mat..kuch nahi hoga tumhe..ab story pado😛)

" This.....??? Bhains wala injection" pointing towards the injection, shocked Nikki asked.
" YES..!!" Jiah says..

" R u out of your mind Jiah..?? U have no idea, this is even more dangerous than that Chopper" Nikki got scared as Jiah proceeding towards her with that Bhainswala injection.

Nikki stepping back falls on the bed and shifts towards the wall....speaks " NO Jiah...don't come close to me.." Jiah follow her on the bed.." Ab tumhe mujhse kaun bachayega nikki"
"No jiah Nooooooooo.................." Niki Shouts...

" OYYEEEIIIII MAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA................................." screams..

(DARO MAT DARO MAT.!!!!!!!!.😛)

Nikki open her eyes and see Jiah staring at her, looking at Jiah's hand, injecting the solution on her Butt..

Nikki nervously asks " what are you doing Jiah..??"

Jiah with pain in her voice since she injected her Butt speaks " You know Nikki, I don't care about love, aare bhad mein gaya pyaar.......I want to learn the way u do ZOOBIE DOOBIE with Abhi.........I have taken everything of yours and now I will take ur place in Zoobie doobie dance also...HuhHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAA!!!!" Jiah laughs evilly..

"Now I will get ur Butt with this Bhains wala injection...and We will be complete.." Jiah about to faint....