ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140 - Page 69

Originally posted by: zummi03

it was really good dear...continue..

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Madz! Awesum uodate yar! Too gud! Mayu jealous of Aakash! Cool! Thanx for the pm!!

Originally posted by: shalika

nyc part.............

plzzz nupur aur mayank ko saath le aao jaldi.....

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

Hey huni,

I jus came across ur ff, being a mayur fan an all...
and i jus read it all from start to end....
i loveeee itttt..... i love everything, from the story to the characters sketch...
i love all the mayur scenes, nupur and aunty shilpa scenes rock! and all the caring frens, sajan... its jus awesome yaar!!!!
i lovvvveeee it.....
ive sent u a buddy req...plz add me 2 ur pm list... and updateee realll soon... dis ff is very addictiveee!!!!!
hehehehehe
love loads
Zoe
xxxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: Bewafa_Behan

hey madz...!!

atlast i m seein sumone has update...cool update by the way...!!

i luved it..!!

well i dont know mein kis k liye soory feel karo rabz mishu n vishu k liye k dey were dancing akash or akash k us ka pala hum se parah hai..!!😆

mayank gettin jealous cool cool..!!!

buh nupur ko kia hua hai...!!

n ending mein kia tha?? asusaual so much suspense...!!n dont tell me tum ne bhi abhi tak nahi soocha ase hi likh dia.😛😆...!!

Originally posted by: mayur.forever

hey,it was awesome yaar madhvi!!!😛that "jao naa" song sequence was superb😃...kya baat hai,mayank is getting jealous!!!! 😆wow am very happy that mayuis realising his feelings for nupur!!!!!!😳on d whole,superb tha yaar......chak de phate!!!!!😆

Originally posted by: Anthara

Yaar acha hi tho hai...

Par thoda short tha... Mujhe reason jaana hai *bangs head on wall*..

Boldo... Pleeeejjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj... MN ko saath laao.........

Originally posted by: rose.mn

hey dear great part👏.so mayank is feeling jealous i just love it.

hope thy will soon together i m waiting 4 that.

n thanks 4 pm😊

do cont soon

Originally posted by: Navi_44

love this part..

i hope tat they soon will be together!!!

Originally posted by: -madhvi-

Thnx zoe
for appreciating it
love ya😃

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

heheheh ur welcome.... ab jaldi update karo!!! hehehehe
xxx