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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
hey lina..nice FF..
So its their last day of colllege..aww..n Mayank is going to Goa..n he likes Nupur..thats nice!..
cant wait to see the fun they have there..
do PM me wen u update
-aish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#82
nice ff lina
keep it up
thanx for the pm
sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 5

Samrat hearing Gunjan's scream went to the room again. He opened the bathroom door.
S:Gunjan?
She saw him and race towards him. She was crying. Samrat put a hand aroung her waist.
S:Gunjan kya hua?
G:Samrat.. woh.. woh.. ek woman... lying... lying... blood...Samrat.
She hugged him tighter.
S:Mein dekhta hoon.
G:Samrat nahi.
He gave a sign to her, which seemed "Its ok I am here".
She was behind him, they were closer and closer. And....
S:Yahan koi nahi hai Gunjan.
G:I promise Samrat. Woh women-
S:Gunjan lets go.
They looked back, the whole gang was there standing.
N:*worried* Gunjan kya hua?
G:Kuch nahi di.
The servant came again.
Servant:App sab kya nichhe aa rahe hai?
M:Hum abhi aaye.
He went away.
M:Gunjan are you sure?
G:*Smiled* Yeah Mayank, I am ok.
They all went downstairs. And they all took a seat. Uday got a plate which was covered with another plate, he removed it.
U:Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Servant:Kya hua?
U:Yeh kya hai?
Servant:Insaan ka haath.
U:Kya?
Servant:Arre mazaq kar raha hoon.
He looked back down, it was rice with some type off beans.
U:Mujhe bhook nahi hai.
B:I thought I would never hear that in my life.
U:hahah very funny.
G:Mujhe bhi bhook nahi hai.
D:Me too.
S:Guys it was a joke, "hahahha challo khate hai" keh ke khallo.
M:Yes I know.
Someone:Rammo?
Servant:Aya.
He went away. The gang got up with their plates, and out the window everyone threw all the food. They all sat back, when the servant came back.
M:Mummm, it was delicious.
S:I know.
M:Appne itna acha khana banaya.
Servant:Shukriya.
M:Waise yahan ke malik?Mera matlab hai iss haveli ke malik?
The servant's eyes grew wider, and he was starring at Mayank in such a scary way. Gunjan saw that. and to distract him.
G:Samrat, dekho tumhare pichhe koi hai.
S:Really, I am scared, hahahah so funny.
G:So toh mein hoon.
She start gigleing. The servant went away, and they all went to the room again. Each one sitting in a bed.
M:Kitna ajeeb naukar hai na? Tum loogo ne dekha kaise mujhe ghur raha tha?
G:I know.
U:Guys tell me something, tum sab ne saara khana kyun phechah?
S:We saw it too.
G:Haan, I know, at first we all saw it.
M:It did look like a hand cutted off. Oh god, yeh kya ho raha hai?
S:I think yeh jagah bohat weird hai,
M:We all do Samrat, and I think humhe soona chahi hai, it's 10:45 and humhe appni imagination ko control mein rakna chahi hai.
D:Yeh you are right.
They all closed the lights.
N:Mein kahan hoon?
People:Bas tumhari hi kami thi Nupur.
Nupur couldn't see their faces, and she was so terrified she ran away from there, upstairs to a big room. She went inside and locked the door. She went near a window. And start looking outside to find a way to escape. She noticed someone beside her, behind the curtains. She went start walking back still facing the curtains. She bumped into someone. It was Mayank.
N:Mayank?
M:Nupur kya hua?
N:Wahan curtains ke pichhe koi hai.
He checked.
M:Wahan koi nahi hai.
She turned back, crying.
N:Tum mujhko believe nahi karte?
She heard no answer, so she looked back, no one was there.
N:Mayank?
She ran awya from the room, trying to find anyone. No one was there.
People sorrounding her:Tumhara waqt aa gaya hai, tum abb marna hoga.
N:NAHIN.
Nupur got up, she was still in bed. She looked at the time. It was 11:53.
N thinking:By god it was only a dream?
She was thirsty, she founded her bottle empty. So she got up to go downstairs to fill it,an a hand in her shoulder starttled her.
Phew so this was part 5. Do tell me how it was. Sorry, it was long, but hope u enjoyed reading it. Do comment, will be waiting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#84
hey sis, awesome yaar!
i hope this does not come in my dream now lol!
loved it!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey sis, awesome yaar!

i hope this does not come in my dream now lol!
loved it!

Me too😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#86
OMG THIS SOOOO SCARY!!!.....while reading i was continuously looking back!! he he he .......awesome yaar.....too good....u r really talented....because its really hard to scare people...through ff or novel....keep it up.pm me😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome lina
as usual crceepy
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

OMG THIS SOOOO SCARY!!!.....while reading i was continuously looking back!! he he he .......awesome yaar.....too good....u r really talented....because its really hard to scare people...through ff or novel....keep it up.pm me😳

Awwwww
Priyanka
cho cweet of of u.
Gonna cry gonna cry
Me too emotional.
This is such a.....
such a....
the best comment.
I swear
Me still crying.
Thank you sooooooo much Jani.🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoya_me

awesome lina

as usual crceepy
plzzz continue soon

Thanks Zoya.😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#90
awesome part Lina
just loved it
thnx for the pm
and continue soon
and please pm me

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