'Its Your Love' :: AR Minni Fic Pt 3(A) :: Pg 37

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#201

hey deepa

that was gr8 part

loved it very much

now who is this new charecter

i hope not his ex

other wise ridhima is totaly going boil

updat soon

nruti

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@** L.U.S.H **

Navigator

Posted: 16 years ago

#202

heyyy i think u shud write like the following day this is what happened and if its like full events and stuff itc an overlap till nxt update and then u can just have the flow like that...and u can write like a lot of details in one day and the pace will sort itself out ...if u like my suggestion bt are unsure abou things pm me k x

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#203

luved it a ton!

Armaan abz hot body?!? duhhhhh! not stare! WAT! lol!

cont soon n thnx! who hig Ammy n Ridzy jelous! luv it!

❤️twinkle!

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Aakriti Mehta

@lil_desi_goddes

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#204

brilliant!! i love how armaan and riddhima are soo different from each other, and i loved how armaan says... opposites attract!

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saloni

@angelina_2005

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#205

hey amazin part...............do continue soon..........thnx for d pm.........

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#206

Hey Deepa ...nice part..

I liked the way AR are getting along!..Armaan in the gym is smtn i would die to see!..lol.

So Ridz so much time to shop..lol..he shud get used to it now!

They are sorta getting attracted to each oda..loved the gym moments..!..<3..dey were hot..

n i wonder who came n hugged Armaan?!...ugh..

i think this pace is pretty fine..i don hv a prob wid it..n i don mind d oda one also..

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-Aish

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maanu

@maanu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#207

hi deepa.........

lovely update.........

liked it very much........

but the pace of the story is very slow .......... i feel that.........

but its perfectly fine with me.........

liked the gyming session

do continue soon

thanks for the pm

bye

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#208

great part as always little more faster would be nice

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Sanna

@REDnBLACK

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#209

hey archita di........

this pace is perfect..........

everythng seems so perfect.......... & m enjyng da developing feelings......... its all so enjoyable/................everything is going step by step nd m likng it...........

so both are gettng attraction towards each other & bth are enjng each others company............

thts gr8........... m lovng it...........

& whose da one who hugged ammy .......... dont tell me her gf

lolzz

cont asap

m lovng it

love

sanna

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karans_angel

@karans_angel

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#210

awww sooooo cute......armaan was staring her....😳
loved it soooo much.....awesome work......
n nw ur quest-well anythng is fine wid me...its up 2 u.....
update sooooooooon n do pm me......
jaldi jaldi update kar plzzzzzz........😃