Mayur FF:SHATERRED IN LUV--REASON 2 LIVE.Upd:pg-42 - Page 22

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi everyone...!!! Thanx alot 4 ur wonderful comments...luv u all...🤗
Part-11:
Mayank knew he had 2 ask Nupur the main reason...nt bcoz he luved her n wanted her in his lyf bt also bcoz he nw knew that she also luved him!!!
Mayank left da house in a gr8 hurry...he didnt notice dt his mom was calling him 4m behind...2 stop him!!!
Nwz...he left da house n drove 2 Nupur's house...
Mr. and Mrs.Sinha had been away 4 a while n Gunjan had left 4 college...so Nupur was alone in da house!!
The bell rang..
Nupur opened da door n found Mayank in front of her..:"Tum?"
Mayank:"Ander aane ko nahi kaho gi?"
Nupur didnt say anything n jst walked a few steps to enter into da house...Mayank came inside the house n closed the door...then Nupur said:"Kyun aaye ho tum yaha?"
Mayank:"Kyun?Kia main tumhare ghar aise hi nahi aa sakta?"
Nupur turned towards him giving him a doubtful look n dn said:"Tumhein hoa kia hai?"
Mayank with a serious expression:"PYAAR HOA HAI TUMSE!!"
Nupur was taken aback by this...!!she turned her back to him n said:"Please Mayank...please...jao!!"
Mayank quickly walked towards Nupur held her by her shoulder n said:"Kyun?Jawaab nahi dogi?"
Nupur tried to ignore Mayank..she cudnt look at him:"Mayank...tumhein pata hai k.."
Mayank:"K kia?tum mujhse pyaar nahi karti?"
Nupur, looking away 4m Mayank:"Haan..nahi karti!!"
Mayank wudnt let her go...:"Toh theek hai..meri aankhon mein aankhein daal kar kaho!!"
Nupur tried to let go of him bt in vain:"Mayank..tum..ye.."
Mayank:"Haan Nupur..kaho...kaho u dnt luv me...kaho tumhein koi parwa nahi hai meri...tabhi us din hospital mein dauri chali aayi thi?tabhi tumhein apne dil ki baat mujhse karte hoye darr nahi lagta tha?Say Nupur...say it...say it..damn it!!"
A confused Nupur finally broke up..she said in a high tone:"Haan!!Haan!!karti hoon mein tumse pyaar...i luv u!!"
Mayank smiled..she finally managed to move away 4m him..she again turned her back to him n said:"Ab?Ab kia?Khush?Ab please!!Please yahan se chale jao!!"
Mayank again went towards her while he continued:"Nahi..itni aasaani se nahi...jab tak tum mujhe ye nahi bata deti k main ne kia kar dia hai?Kyun tum mujhse baat nahi karti?Kyun karti ho mujhe ignore?"
Nupur:"Mayank...hum is baare mein pehle bhi baat kar chuke hain!!"
Mayank:"Haan...lekin is baar baat karke sirf SACH sunna hai mujhe.."
Nupur closed her eyes:"Tum nahi sun paoge Mayank...aur main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon...par tumhein takleef nahi de sakti!!"
Mayank faced Nupur then:"Hurt toh tum mujhe abhi kar rahi ho Nupur..please...TUMHEIN MERI KASAM!"
Tears rolled down Nupur's cheek...she jst managed to whisper:"Mayank....main...mujhe brain tumour hai!!"
THE WORLD STOOD STILL....MAYANK CUDNT BELIEVE IT...HE WAS SILENT...NUMB!!HE FELT AS IF..AS IF HE CUDNT BREATHE...
Moments later he said, while tears were rolling down his cheek:"Nahi...tum jhoot bol rahi ho na??U r lying...sirf mujhe ignore karne k liye..!"
Nupur said in a higher voice..while she herself was crying:"Ye hi sach hai mayank...wo doctor ne.."
Mayank didnt let her complete:"Jhoot hai..jhoot bol rahe hai doctors..!!they r all liars!!"
Nupur didnt do anything bt jst hugged him...Mayank hugged her tite...as if..as if death wud cum now to take Nupur n Mayank wudnt let her go...Nupur hid herself in his shoulders....she luved him...she rly rly luved him...!!!
After a long time wen da two regained their senses...all Mayank did was took her cheeks in his hands n whispered:"Main tumhein kuch nahi hone doonga!!"
N he left...Nupur fell 2 da ground n cried...cried...endlessly...!!
Mayank sat in his car n was abt 2 strt it wen he received a call 4m Samrat...
Mayank:"Hello?"
Sammy:"Mayank..tu kaha hai?Hospital aa jaa!!"
Mayank:"Kia?Kyun?kaunsa hospital?"
Sammy:"Aunty serious hain Mayank...she needs u..."
Mayank:"Maa...kia hoa maa ko?main..main abhi aa raha hoon!!"
Part ends...
Comments please...
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Nxt update on pg-36
Cheers--Kiran😳
Edited by kiran--madi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG kiran it was too good..lekin brain tumor...pls nahi yaar 😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
kya kiya yaar tune?
nupsi ko brain tumour?
kaise kiya tune yaar?
BTW awesome update ,but toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short!
loved it!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: myownarea

OMG kiran it was too good..lekin brain tumor...pls nahi yaar 😭

Hey divya...i knw sweetie..ds's smth totally different...bt w8 4 da nxt few updates...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

kya kiya yaar tune?

nupsi ko brain tumour?
kaise kiya tune yaar?
BTW awesome update ,but toooooooooooooooooooooooooooo short!
loved it!
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon!

hey zoah!!
glad u lyked it..😳
Posted: 16 years ago
omg that was too good!
par brain tumor? plz do make her die!
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Posted: 16 years ago
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii...
yeh nahiiiiiiiiiiiii ho sakta....
nupzi and brain tumor... nahiii.. yeh sunne ke pehle mere kaan kyoon nahi fate!!!
BTW it was amazing... loved it.. but plzz dnt kill her !!!
thanks for PM
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kiran--madi

hi there little dragon(sry dunno ur name!!)---
m so glad u lykd my ff...will surely pm u nxt tym i update..😊

hey am priya.. sorry dint mention ma name !!!.. waise u r free to cal me dragon too..
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Posted: 16 years ago
HI kiran,

I am your New Reader!

Loved your ff and loved the way you are writing it!

Story is going great....

Do continue soon. I have added you in my buddy list please do PM me when you update next time!

Priya
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Posted: 16 years ago
brain tumour??????????????😲........

noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...............😭.....

u cant do lik this..............no yaar..........plzzzzzz........abhi abhi toh un logo ne confession ki....n agle hi pal mein u plannin to separate them??????????????😲............n btw mayu ke mom kya hua??by god saare tragedies..........ek saath.......mayu kaise handle karege yeh sab????😕...........

plzzzzzzzzzz jald se jald update karo.....plzzzzzzzzzz

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