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Posted: 16 years ago
that was too good

please update sooon
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Hi
oh so u again kavya i think i should give some negative comment so moulika 'll beat u but i cant coz update was amazing
loved the every bit of it.its was soooooo sweet & cute.
Kavya i'll not gonna leave u next time with this update i was helpless coz it was really awesome
wait 4 the next
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wow!! i really liked it!! awsome!!
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Originally posted by: yasu09

very nice.............................👏

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that was a great update on prem and heer kavya thumbs up!

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hiiiiiiii loved it yaar awsome update update soon

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hiii kayva didi
awesome update
loved the kitchen scene!!
I love that song!!!!
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Originally posted by: nuptalie

Achcha mere liye.😉
How sweet of u kavya🤗
Anyz once again great choice of song, u have always chose the correct song on your ff like the last time😆
Why did u say in the begining that don't know whether people will love it or not.
this so awesome ya, romantic too😳
But a little short, i wish it was a bit longer, coz i can stay in PH world a little bit more.😆😆
Anyz keep up the good job and thanks for the quick update and the pm.
Waiting for the next.

haan tumne hi toh kaha your expecting a romantic update 😉. acha ab naughty se sweet ban gayi. good improvement na😆.. jisko batana tha mein usse bataya nahin isliye
thank you 🤗. isse long teek hai next tym if i get chance i'll try out.
next part toh mein nahin kar sakti becoz i've no idea what she wants to do
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Originally posted by: cuteangelgirl95

awesome loved premeer scene do continue soon thanks fore the pm me

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Awwww amazing update yaar!!! Thnx for the pm!!

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Too good. I loved it👏

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that was too good

please update sooon

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Originally posted by: -fsn-

Hi
oh so u again kavya i think i should give some negative comment so moulika 'll beat u but i cant coz update was amazing
loved the every bit of it.its was soooooo sweet & cute.
Kavya i'll not gonna leave u next time with this update i was helpless coz it was really awesome
wait 4 the next
update asap
luv
Fatima

hiii haan me again
😆
thank you 😃
acha don worry i'll not post anytym soon again unless its' left on premeer.
next update is moulika' s

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wow!! i really liked it!! awsome!!

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Edited by premeer4rever - 16 years ago
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great update solely focussing on premeer.....loved it...continue soon!
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update ur fic plzzzzzzzzz waitingggggggg asap with long part asap.
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Thank you guys for your nice comments...😊😊
i'm sorry i am late this time.....
hope u all wil like this part...

Chapter 9


The next morning prem got up before heer.he wants to give her a surprise too.he went to bathroom,got freshen up and came outside in 10 min.while he came out,heer is still sleeping.he saw heer n smiled at her.he jus closed his flat door n went somewhere n returned after 30min.

He came to his flat and thought

He entered his flat n went to his bedroom.she is still sleeping prem gave a smile,went up to her n kisses her forehead n says

Prem:ab mein tumhe surprise doonga'.

After 30 min heer got up n is surprised to see her bed room.

It is filled with orchids everywhere.infront of her stood prem'.

Heer:prem yeh sab'

Prem:maine kiya'..surprise sirf tumhi de sakti ho kya??

Heer smiles and comes and hugs prem'.

After sometime they get separated and prem tells heer that he has to search a building for the office and kunal is also not there as he is out of town for some work'

Heer:tekh hai tum ready ho jao mein breakfast tayar karti aur mein bhi tumhare saath chalti hoon waise bhi mein din bar khali hi tho baiti hoon'

Prem:tekh hai teri marzi..

They both have their breakfast n goes in search of their new office'

All the day they goes to every nook and corner of the areas they have gone but couldn't find a perfect place'

Finally they reach the flat.prem sits on the couch thinking

Heer:prem tum phikar mat karo aaj nahi tho kal milhi jayega..

Prem suddenly takes his phone out n dials a number..

Heer:prem tum kisko phone kar rahe ho???

Prem:hello Rishi'.

Rishi:haan prem tu...

Prem:kaise hoo??

Rishi:mein tekh hoon.tu kaisa hai??

Prem:mein bhi tekh hoon

Rishi:toh batha kaise yaad kiya..

Prem:1 month pehle tumne kaha tha kit um delhi shift ho raha hai aur yaha ka ghar rent pe de raha hai..

Rishi:haan

Prem:kuch nahin..kya tumne who kisiko diya??

Rishi:nahi'kyun???

Prem: woh ghar mujhe chahiye '.

Rishi:tujhe???par kyun??

Prem:who sab mein tumhe baat mein bata tha hoon bas mujhe who ghar chahiye'

Rishi:tekh hai lelo.

Prem:tum phikar math karo mein har mahine rent pay kar doonga.

Rishi:kya baat kar raha hai tu.tune kitni baar mujhe financial support diya'

Tu rent ki phikar math kar jab chahe de dena'

Prem:thanks Rishi.tujhe nahin pata tune aaj meri kitne mada ki..

Rishi:thanks ki kya jaroorat..acha tekh hai mujhe kuch jaroori kaam hai mein rakhta hoon.byeee..

Prem:bye

After talking to rishi prem is very happy and it is shown clearly on his face

Prem:heer..

Heer:mein samaj gayi..tumhe office keliye building milgaya na'

Prem:haan heer'ab 1 week ham kaam shuru kar sakte hai'

Main abhi kunal ko batata hoon ki hame building milgaya..

Prem calls to kunal n tells him everything,they both talk for 1 hour discussing about the new business'

After talking to kunal, prem n heer have their dinner n goes to bed.

THE NEXT DAY

Juneja mansion

gayatri comes down saying

Gayatri:ramu,breakfast tayar kiya tune'

Ramu:ji nahi mem saab bas 15 min mein ho jayega.phikar math kijiye'

Gayatri:yeh ramu bhi na ek bhi kaam waqt par nahi karta.

She goes by the mandir and sees that aarti is not done(before heer used to do aarti after her kulraj did.but now as she is also not there the aarti is not done)

Gayatri(sad):agar heer hoti tho sab se pehle uthkar,aarti kar ke sab ko Prasad deti hai'

Then bauji comes there n stands beside gayatri

Bauji:aur agar woh hoti na tho ab tak breakfast ban gaya hoga.

Waise bhi maya bhi is ghar ki bahu hi na who kya kar rahi hai.woh kar sakti hai nay eh sab kaha hai who??

Gayatri:who kabhi 9:00 se pehle uthi kya jo aaj uthkar ye sab kare..

Bauji:kya??heer ki tarah who bhi is ghar ki bahu hi hai par kitna pharak hai un donon mein'

Gayatri:haan'hamere prem aur heer jaisa is duniya mein aur koi nahin

Bauji:tekh kaha tune'

Meanwhile the phone rings'

Gayatri goes n lifts the phone

Gayatri:hello..

After listenin to the person otherside g3 is very happy bauji is shocked seein g3 happy as she had never seen her smiling after prem left the house..

Gayatri:tu aa raha hai 1 week mein'.

By now bauji understood who is on phone'

Gayatri:tekh hai mein intezaar karungi'

By sayin dis g3 puts the phone down

Gayatri:ap ko pata hai kaun aa raha hai..

Bauji(smiling):haan mein samaj gaya..

Gayatri:lekin mujhe ek hi baat ka darr hai.ham use prem ke bare mein kya bateye'

Use nahin patha ki prem ghar chod kar chala gaya'

Bauji:haan mujhe bhi isi baat ka darr hai.woh tho sabse jyaada prem se pyar karte hai'aur agar use patha chal gaya harman ne prem ke saath kya kiya tho patha nahin woh kya kar baitega'.

Edited by kkmouli - 16 years ago

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