FF: Dil Ke Rishtay - Part 35 Page 57- Feb. 7th - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: darshana23

Bobbie, my sentiment is same as Rosh......... why did you stop there??
You should have continued rather........... waiting for next update....

Alright this part is for You and Rosh.. Happy?
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Faiza_sam

Bobbie ,

Last two updates were really awesome .. 👏 Thank you.

I love the way your story is progressing . I am glad you are enjoying it.

Specially liked the ending of this part but why did you stop there ? 😔 I want to read more .. 😛 Ok here is what you all been waiting for.

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Posted: 16 years ago

Dil ke Rishtey ' Part 13

Yudi woke up in the middle of the night as he heard some noise. He sees that Rani is having a nightmare. Yudi picked her up close to his chest and carried her in his room. Rani woke up and tried to take in her surroundings . Yudi kissed her softly and deposited Rani on the large bed. Without breaking the kiss, he crawled in besides Rani. He grabbed her arms and pulled her towards him. Slowly every inch of clothing between them ends up on the floor. Everywhere he touched her she felt a sizzling burning feeling, and her breath kept coming in shorter as more seconds ticked by. From the way their hands were moving, it was easy to tell how much they had missed each other. Yudi felt a passion in Rani's touch that he never felt before. He reached up and pulled her deeper into the covers with him, into a never-ending abyss of pleasure and desire.

The next morning Rani woke up cuddled against Yudi's bare chest, feeling nothing but bliss and satisfaction. The bed felt soft and endearing under her body while lying against his stiff frame and using his arm as a pillow was much more comfortable and preferable. She tried to get out of bed before Yudi woke up but she felt his arm tighten around her waist and he whispers in her ear, "hume maaf kar degiye Rani, hum se bahut badi bhool ho gayi. Hume Imli se shaadi kabhi nahi karni chaheye thi."

Rani looks in his eyes and covers his mouth with her hand and says Nahi kunwar ji sub se badi galti toh hum se hui hai hume itna bhavuk nahi hona chahiye tha ki hum apne jeevan ki sab se kimti cheez daav par laga de. Hume aap ko Imli se shaadi ke liye majboor nahi karna chaheya tha.

There is a knock on the front door and Rani panics. Yudi hands her a tee-shirt and tells her to put it on while she goes and takes a shower and he will answer the door. Rani tries to object but Yudi is already putting on his tee-shirt and gone to answer the door. She quickly slips on Yudi's tee shirt and runs in Yudi's bathroom. Once inside the bathroom she realizes that she does not have anything to wear. Yudi knocks at the door and tells her that he has put her clothes on the bed and he will go and use her bathroom to take a shower.

Rani comes out of the bathroom and sees a green outfit on Yudi's bed. She does not recognize the outfit but does not have a choice but to put it on. It is a sea green salwaar kamiz and along with the outfit there is matching jewelry. Rani tries on the outfit and it fits her perfectly highlighting every curve of her frame. She puts on the matching bangles, necklace and earrings. She stares at herself in the mirror and feels confident that she looks beautiful. She picks up the dupaata and drapes it over her shoulder. She goes in the family room and sees Yudi setting the table for breakfast. As she enters the room and he looks up at her and his eyes move over every curve of her body. He tells her that he will be right back. He goes in her room and comes back. He goes to Rani and puts sindhoor in her maang. He looks at her and says, perfect. Rani tries to divert his attention as she is feeling shy. She asks what he has made for breakfast and he says today they are having gourmet milk and cereal and they both chuckle.

Yudi tells her they have installed a phone in the house and that the maid will come to clean the house and do the laundry. He asks her if she needs to talk to Amma and Munna she can come in later as he has some paperwork he needs to finish. Rani tells him that Gauri should be coming to meet her any minute. Yudi says great then I will see you in the office. Gives her a kiss on her forehead and leaves. Rani calls Amma, Dadi and Munna and they are all happy to hear her voice. She tells him that kunwarji is staying in the same house with her and that they are working on the project. Amma asks her if she is happy. Rani tells her mom that she is very happy and Amma says that she can hear that in Rani's voice. Rani puts the phone down.

Gauri rings the door bell and Rani opens the door. Gauri lets out a whistle looking at Rani and Rani tries to play it down. Rani tells Gauri that Yudi is her husband and that she will tell her details some other time. Gauri tells Rani she had a feeling that there was a deep bond between Rani and Maharaj. She knew that when Yudi got possessive seeing Rohan's arm on Rani's shoulder. The girls hug each other and leave to go to school.

Edited by bobbiedhillon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
😍 i have nothing else to say
but bobbidi i was hoping that Rani will tell her heart out to you-know-who before surrender
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bobbie..................sensational!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yaar, you have also truned as great writer.............. plz dont seperate YuRa.......... Let them stay with each other..........

Must say whole part is giving me many butterflies in my stomach.... keep rocking in same way................
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Posted: 16 years ago
MINDBLOWING!
It was just awesome dear!
YAY! Meri aur Darshu ki farmaayish puri ho gayi!
Yaar you keep doing this and we keep wanting more...Not satisfied how much ever you write....Kya karen Dil mangey more!
Keep it up..Waiting for more of sterling YuRa scnes!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: usmrasul

😍 i have nothing else to say
but bobbidi i was hoping that Rani will tell her heart out to you-know-who before surrender

Usma,
Keep reading there is going to be a twist in their relationship. 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oyeeeee Bobbie,kya likhti hai??? 😍
☺️

Nightmare ke baad dreamy night??? 😉 This was so hmmm.........(proceeds till infinity!)
What a mindblowing part,yaar!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bobbie ,

Yaar yeh kya kia ? ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Ab main kya karun ? 😳 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bobbie you are so talented as a writer and just enjoying the way the story is going and as Darshana said please do not separate YuRa and it is okay to get them to feel a little jealousy here and there but want their romance to flourish.

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