PEHCHAN (2) AR END&EPILOGUE pg 133- 12/21/09 - Page 9

Awwww that was an awesum part Bheegi very touching!

luved it bhegi! totaly awsome lke always! cont soon n thnx!

WOW!!!!!! Di, This is awesome And hats off to you........ 👏

I am JUST WOW!!!....

It is a very high point in the story. And so much confrontation and for good.

I m TOTALLY SPEECHLESS...!!

DI, EXCELLENT AND SUPERB PART.... !!!!!!!!!!!

Fabulous Update Massi....The way Armaan climbed to Riddhima's rrom...the way he talked to her was simply outstanding... Muskaan handled the situation so bravely yaar....a bigg clap for her👏👏👏

Hey di..very nice update..loved it..glad that Modi's are there to support riddhima now..never thought she ll go to jail n talk to abhimanyu like that..happy that she could threaten him not to harm armaan coz of those videos..smart girl i must say..then loved AR moments..they were awesome..was not expecting riddhima to open to armaan so soon..liked the last part where they discuss which movie to go for..KAMINEY already seen..lol..waiting for more AR now..continue soon..cant wait to read more..
thanks for PM..
love ya..

Heyy Bheegi!! Im kinda busy these days, so i missed that last three updates, i read them all now, and they're all simply amazing!! You seriously rock at writing!!

Update 24- I loveeed how you incorporated the lizard in Ridhima's hostel room! It was so nice seeing Ridz battle the insect herself!! I loveed this quotation:
'The only thing we have to fear is fear itself. fear is only as deep as the mind allows
It was definitely nicely used!

Dr. Keerti is soooo niceee!! Aww i think Dr. Keerti was just the person she needed in this sort of time!! The Armaan-Ridhima conversation and the window scene was CUTTEEE!! It was sooo sweet of Armaan to stand in front of her hostel..aww he's such a cutee premi!! lolz. Abhi is suchh a gross man, like seriously, instead of finding out where your wife is and if she's ok or not, you go and get drunk at Nikitas..what a retart! Padma-Ridhima meeting was veryyy niceee!! The part where Padma said that everyone in the house is finding their pechan was very nicely written!! I'm glad Anjali is not that rude anymore!! Everyone definitelly seems to be waking up in that household, except for Abhi. I love how Armaan was so strong when he saw Abhi, and it's greatt that he finds out about Shailendra, and him telling Abhi that she's in the hostel!! Let's see who gets there first!! Btw I love how you incorporated the song Ye Dooriyan in this part, gosh thats like one of my favorite songs, and it went so nicely here! Fab part!!

Update 25- This was a veryyy good part!! I definitely enjoyed reading it, especially reading the part where Abhi is taken away by the cops! Abhi has seriously grossed me out soo much, he always did and always will. "He's like Muskaan? Are you Rahul's fiance?" Gosh, Abhi is so caught up in himself that he's not even sure who Rahul, his own brothers, fiance is! Anyways, loved how Muskaan treated Abhi with her full strength, and I loved how when Abhi said that she won't get married to Rahul, she just totally didn't care who Abhi was and stood eye to eye to him! Muskaan truly has the guts, and I love her for that! Armaan climbing the walls for Ridhima was sooo sweettt...the time they spent together was chooo cuteee!! lolz. Loveed reading it!! Haha, loved reading the part where Abhi was taken away by the cops!! I would love to read to see this news on the newspaper!! lol. Again, you wrote an awesomeee part and did a fab job!!

Update 26- I feel like laughing at Abhi, this is what you get for trying to hurt Ridhima!! I'm sooo glad that Rahul and Atul are with their mom and that Shashank will change the will, and that he accepted AR!! Ridhima going to the jail was kind of shocking, but I loveeed how she went with full confidence, and that inspector making his sarcastic comments was disgusting! The Armaan-Ridhima scene was sooo beautiful!! Aww..congrats to Armaan for getting the contract, and aww his lucky charm is Ridzz!! Tooo sweet!! Haha loved the Love Aaj Kal vs. Kaminey thing! This was another awesomely written part!! Greatt job!!

Also, a biggg congratulations for the new thread!! Keep rocking with this FF!!

Awesome part as always di.. 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: missypatel

reserved...be back in just a bit! :)

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wohoo! that was a long update...am glad! :0 tons of action and drama with AR bits as well! sweet! good stuff bheegs..ridz-abhimanyu scene was nice...our own sati savtri turned jhansi ki rani..lol

cheers for the update!

- nijaL

thanks Nijal...yes the long update was the prelude to a big surprise in next chapter😉 yeah, jhansi ki rani..loved that😆

[quote=sweet_mittal]eserved wow di aweosme and great part [/quote]

thanks Mittal! yes, it's better that the real facts came out in truth. Ridz told abhi the truth which he never did....well abhi will get out of jail sooner as his offence was not that major

[quote=ridss]heyyy dear,
awsome mind blowing part yaar,
Riddhima daring was mindblowing
👏


love
Riddss[/quote]

thanks Ridsss

[quote=smriti.tweety] reserved *
Cheers to an update that looks quite long! Be back asap! : )

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Hey di!!!!!

That was one nice and long update! : )

I am glad to see that the males of Modi family are finally coming to terms about Abhi. Their prompt acceptance of AR relationship came as a pleasant surprise! Aradhana easily embracing the same and her assurance to Armaan regarding Shailendra was another welcome thing! With these two potential problems dealt with it gives a green signal to AR's love without any trouble on the family front :) * Clap! Clap! *

thanks smriti. This was done to hasten the process till the next phase of the story. Yes, i could have prolonged the family acceptance part but as u all know I would rather focus more on AR than the other satellites, i decided to write a longer part before next part's surprise

Abhi- Ridz confrontation left me with a satisfied smile on my face! Good to see Abhi get a taste of his own medicine : ) Wonder if he will agree to divorce Ridhima despite the change in the will; his bruised male ego may serve as a hurdle. Don't know if he has enough sentiment in him to feel deserted by his own family and realize his mistake. Ridhima certainly was quite the tigress; her love's life in danger serving to be an excellent propeller.

abhi will gradually realize what he has lost but not before he has ruined himself more by anger and hatred

One thing that didn't go down too well with me and I raise the point just in case I misunderstood what you were trying to portray: I wondered at Ridhima still feeling even fleetingly sorry for Abhi when she first sees him in jail. Was it written to bring out her gentle nature or any remnant emotion she might feel for him? I hope no offense is taken. Just a point I wished to clarify; for even though Ridhima was a devoted wife and it is difficult to completely detach yourself from an individual you almost worshipped for years, I felt surprised at her heart melting even for a second.

i think that's because basically ridz is a very tender hearted person. even though, she despises abhi right now, at one point in her life, she did respect and look upto him and not to forget he is still her husband. Great question

Ridhima's need to be with Armaan after her visit to the jail was quite realistic and sweet, so was the "forever love and friendship bracelet". Their romantic scenes are very cutely penned down! There's a certain refreshing youthfulness to them!

yeah, trying my best to get the AR magic through this extramarital affair lolz

All in all a great update di! It covered a lot of issues in a go; great going :)⭐️

Love

Smriti

p.s. Thanks for the pm! I am sorry I didn't realize the futility of sending me one last time considering that I had already reserved a spot for my comment. Makes sense :) You needn't send me one the next time if I've already reserved.

thanks again for ur loyalty and wonderful comments[/quote]

[quote=kashish]hey di that was a great p[art! go ridzi for standing up for urslef! and also padma! good to see atul and rahul going to help in AR union! wondre wat will happen next...please do conitnue soon! will be waiting for ur PM

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thanks kashish....a surprise will happen in next chapter

Originally posted by: janu1610

Bheegi aapne sab bheego diya .Really i mean it.This part left me tight-lipped.I was in ocean of emotions some time anxiety,some time only love was there and in next scene hatred take over.,I mean i was surfing on tides of emotions.

thanks Ritu....i am floored by ur comments dear

my eyes had shut and there was a pause when i read statement made by a great lady Padma.How nice she is ,still want her bahu back but all with her happiness.She has courage to accept the truth with whole heart.Even all members had no grudge except Anjie .Shshank made a right decision.Thanks to Padma again for knocking some senses in him.

padma is indeed a strong and unusual MIL

LOVE a very small word but if u wanna define it .Its not only care, it contain fear to loose some one,it has happiness to get some one specially meant for u,affection u shower,sacrifice of ur own self without any hesitation.And in AR relations i think they r compound mixture of all these emotions.This complicate love is so simple for them .They think about other rather than him/her self.

yes, their love is selfless and unconditional

Armaan called her sis just for her and on other hand she reached there to forbade Abhi to cause him any harm .even threatened him .How sweet. And this new improved Ridz is truly a darling.Yes she proved when a woman love some one all she care about is her be-lover.

exactly, they both confronted other people basically to protect each other

And Abhi He is a jerk.he is like a leopard can;t change his spots.and if there is Shelender also with him then only God knows what come next.They r chips of same block.@#@$%%

well all i wanna say is i was waiting for AR meet and when i read a small smile crept on my face .They r adorable and u too.

aww thanks Ritu...a big hug for you😊

Luciano de Crescenzo
We are, each of us angels with only one wing; and we can only fly by embracing one another.

thanks for this wonderful part.

love

ritu

[quote=aati1429]Hey Bheegi.. I just love the simple and pure romance between armaan and ridhima.. it gives some beautiful feeling!!!!

And wowow.. what to say.. ridhima was like a tigress man.. i loved the way u potrayed her against abhimanyu.. he is surely a B******.....

Also to mention the way u covered news updates was just so damm true.. news people actually harass people by thir questions..

loved it.. waiting for next bit soon[/quote]

thanks aati! I am glad u like the AR romance- yes their love is pure, selfless and unconditional Thanks again for ur wonderful comments😊

[quote=aish_punk]hey bheegi di..nice part..

So Abhi is all over the news!..m glad he's getting exposed slowly..!..m glad Shashank agreed 4 d divorce..Padma did a good job of convincing him..😉..

I'm glad Armaan cleared his doubts wid Aradhana..n also told her to convince Shailendra..i hope she manages to do it..

Ridz actually went there?!..omg..the police and everyone were def cheap! n she felt pity 2wards him?!..she cant!..he was craving 4 Nikki bt she did'nt turn up der at all..i guess she got a gud chance 2 run away 4m him..!

I hope Abhi gives her divorce..but m sure he wont do it so easily..!..n yeah Ridz has def changed due to him..!..m glad..

the AR moment in the end was cute..as usual ..they're teasing was really cute..n the bracelet n lucky charm part too..😉..

nice VM..but in the beginning is der no song..?

thnx 4 d PM

update soon

-Aish

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thanks aish...hope ur exams went well. Yes, a lot happened in this part. The song in the VM has music in the initial part and then i think the lyrics start...will check again😊

[quote=dazzling_armaan]muahhhhhhhhh [/quote]

thanks dear...yes they will be together soon😳

[quote=sunainaTM007]heyyyyyyyyyyy bheegi.... [/quote]