ALL FOR YOUR SMILE-RN fic-[imp note-pg 149]24/05 - Page 47

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Posted: 16 years ago
wowww..... both part 15 n 16 r just awesome.... 👏
Raj understood naina felt bad abt his comment....!!!! hmmm....
the mall fiasco ws so funny...raj really doesnt know anything.... its true as Aryan said..he needs a training..hehehehehe...
naina also cudnt controll herself... 😆 ..ghumne ke liye mall??hehehehe...
so naina wants raj to choose a color of a kurta for her..but yaha pe bhi raj... 😔 ..dono le lo..ohh god... 🤣 .. kya hoga raj ka??hehehehhe....
so some stranger girl is trying to flirt with raj n naina got jealous...so sweet.... 😉 ... she cudnt controll herself...n told her that SHE is Raj's wife..poor that girl..hehehhe..uska chance gaya..!!..n upar se naina ka gussa .. 🤣
so aryan ko laga shayad abb use hostel bhej dege..liked the way raj made him understand... 👏

ohh god poor naina ws trapped again...her sasu maa is so... 😆 ..kaha naina ke muh se SIR nikal gaya raj ke liye... Raj's mom got angry with Raj..that its his fault n he asked her to call him SIR..what a funny scene..poor raj... 🤣
naina is getting attached to Aryan... so cute...
naina scared of rat..hahahahaha.... n raj kept reminding her..she is a soldier...hahahahaha... n naina got irritate... 🤣 🤣 ..raj bhi na...abb bhi use ek student ki tarah treat karta hai...
woww..abhi ne kya advice di raj ko...soo true..raj ko hi apne kadam naina ki aur badhane hoge...he will have to make her realise ki he loves her... 😳 ..wow..now lets see how he will do that..!!!
naina hurt herself..n she is scard of antiseptic lotion..hahahahah..raj commented again.."tum army se ho....hahahhaha..naina ko gussa aa gaya... aana hi tha..raj bhi na.. 🤣
raj cudnt controll n put tape on her mouth..ohh no... 🤣
raj ne apni zid puri kar hi di n naina kuchh bol bhi nahi paayi...
liked the whole scene..well written..as raj for the first time did something which stirred naina n increased her heartbeats..soo romantic...thanks to abhi 😉 ...naina is in shock..hhahahaha..
woww..soo raj ne sorry bolne ke liye teddy present kiya naina ko n the same kurta which she showed his previous day in the mall.. woww..n woh bhi with note... white looks beautiful on u..how roamantic..!!!.. 😳 ..so raj improve kar raha hai..not bad.... 😉
lovely parts.... awesome..... 👏
waiting for the next part.... 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
For ud 16
very sweet ud again...😃 😃 😃
raj ne bilkul sahi kaha ki aryan ko tang khinchne k liye sirf raj hi milta hai...ab samne itna smart banda ho toh voh kyoun kisi aur ki khinchai karega...???😆 😆 😆
vaise raj ki mom ka mall ka naam sun kar jo xpression tha voh mast tha...!!! naina ne sahi tym par SIR bola...!!! tabhi toh use apne seniors se orders pass hua ki aaj k baad voh SIR nahin balki RAJ kahegi...!!!😆 😆 😆
wash room ka scene baht hi jyada funny tha. lagta hi nahin hai ki yeh vohi Naina hain K.M.A wali. chuhe se daar gayi aur xplanation diya ki 'chuha humain kaat sakta hai...par hum chuhe ko kaat nahin sakte'...😆 😆 😆
& now abt d bandage scene...wow...!!! raj ko naina ka pair bandage karne k liye strict bhi hona pada aur romantic bhi...!!! mujhe voh scene sab se jyada achha laga...!!! Abhi ne sahi kaha hai Raj ko...aur raj bhi apne kadam badha raha hai...aur Naina bhi ab apne feelings ko dhire dhire samajhne lagi hai...😳 😳 😳 😛 😛 😛 😉 😉 😉
vaise baht romantic aur cute gift di hai Raj ne...😃 😃 😃
cont soon.😊
Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
beautiful update!!
thank god Abhi ne Raj mein kuch akal daali!
so now ab Raj kadam badhayega naina ki taraf.....
wow!!
Aaryan teasing Raj was so funny!
Raj ki mom as usual super hit!
washroom waala scene was😆😆😆
Raj tying bandage to naina was soooo romantic...
such a cuuuuteeee teddy! haai!!😳 wat a gift! and a perfect way to say sorrry!
waiting 4 more!
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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry for bein late.....

it was fantastic......
loved d way d whole situtation was handled....

n den my fav part was rn1 wer raj is fabulous.....

convo btwn abhi n raj was awesome n too good

n den d surprise for naina was again mindblowing......

gr8 to see raj changin....hope rn will be 2gether soon..

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello dear,

Beautiful update.👏
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Aryan aur Raj ki ma ke toh kya kehne, humesha raj ko kahin na kahin fasa dete hain.😆😆😆
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But Raj ki tarah mai bhi surprised hun. Ye Naina hai, Naveen ki behen, Raj ki protegee aur KMA ki best cadet aur itni darpok???????😲
😲 Lagta hai Raj ko usse iss baar chuhe aur chipkaliyon se ladhne ki training deni padegi. Aur antiseptic lotion ke jalan ko sehne ki bhi. BC ko pata chala na toh wo apna sar fod lenge.

Raj ka toh apna hi nayab tarika hai maafi maangne ka. Abhi_Raj convo was too good. Aur Raj ne Naina ko gifts laake diye aur Naina khush bhi ho rahi thi aur blush bhi kar rahi thi. Raj washroom se bahar aaye toh kuch acha lage. Warna Naina blush jiske liye kar rahi hai wo washroom me ghusa rahe, its not happening.

Update soon. And thnks for the pm.


Love

Guglu


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Posted: 16 years ago
the update was very good.
Abhi has been a perfect friend...explaining raj that there was nothing to regret about..that naina is happy with him
The scene in he bathroom was just fabulous...aise thode aur accidents hote rahe...and that might jsut dot he trick for these two.
Raj ka maafi mangne ka tarika bahut hi badhiya tha...raj bina movies dekhe bhi aise ideas sooch sakta hai...
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
HIII KAISI HO?
WOW WHAT A UD JUST WONDERFUL
HASTE HASTE LOT-POT HO GAYI
BAHUT HI MINDBLOWING
FULL OF COMEDY
JUST THE DIALOGS
ALL SCENES WERE SUPERB
JUST TOO GOOD
KYA KAHU I M SPEECHLESS
OKAY WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY
UD SOON

LOVE
DEEPA

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Posted: 16 years ago
hiiiiiiiii the ud was...........
awesooooooooome..............
superb...........
excellent............
mind blowing.............
fantabulous...........

but i am angry ki tumne mujhe is baar PM nahin kiya............
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Posted: 16 years ago
when will u update
waiting for it eagerly
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Posted: 16 years ago
please update soon.....waiting😍

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