My first fanfic - It's all about love - Page 3

arrey we hve posted our comments...its very very gud....why don u continue??????

Hi guys, here is part 4
Part 4

Ashi is in her room, getting ready for her date.

Vrinda: Ashi, tum mujhe at least ye to bata do ki tum kaha ja rahi ho

Ashi: Mate, mujhe khud nahi pata ki wo mujhe kahaan le ja raha hai.

Vrinda: Waise ye wo kaun hai?

Ashi: (blushing) Ye wo Uv ka cousin Raj hai. Main aaj usse mili thi . He is so cute. Ab agar tumhaara interview khatam ho gaya ho, to batao, main kaisi lag rahi hoon?

Meanwhile in Uv's room,( In my fanfic, Uv & Ranveer haven't exchanged places)

Uv: Dude, aaj Raj aaya tha.

Sid: Alright! Kaisa hai wo?

Uv: wo to theek hai, par uski wajah se mera din kharab ho gaya.

He tells Sid about Ashi & Raj's date.

Sid: Par dude, iski wajah se tumhara day kaise kharab hua?

Uv: Sid bro, abhi tumhara brain Meher ke bare mein hi soch raha hai, tum chup raho. Ab mujhe hi is date ko spoil karne ke liye koi plan sochna padega.


I'll be posting part 5 soon. Plz plzzzzzzzz post ur comments.

Precap for part 4: What will Uv do to spoil the date? Keep waiting & keep reading.

wow....uv is gonna spoil the date i jus cant wait 4 the next part....im the 1st one to reply....4 more to go..... 😉

Its really awsome.......plz continue asap...

😆
bechara uv !!!!! har fanfic main use hi jealous hona padta hain !! 😉 😉 😉

Here is Part 5
Part 5

Uv: Band!

Sid: Band? Kaunsa band? Kiska band? Dude, tum kya bol rahe ho? Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Uv: Sid, bro, tumhari samajh mein waise bhi kuch nahi aata.Now listen, tum Ashi ke pas jao aur usse kaho ki mere Dad ko mere band mein hone ka shak ho gaya hai.

Sid: Dude, phir to tum bahut major trouble mein ho.

Uv: Sid, aisa kuch nahi hua hai. Tum bas Ashi ko ja ke ye keh do.

So Sid goes & tells Ashi.
Ashi then calls up Raj.

Ashi: Raj, kya hum aaj ki jagah weekend ko bahar ja sakte hain? Actually, mujhe koi zaroori kaam aa gaya hai.

Raj: Oh, sure. I'm glad u called me, kyunki aaj main bhi nahi ja sakta. Mujhe bhi kahi jana hai. To, Saturday ko milein?

Ashi: Sure. Well, bye, then.

Raj: Bye.

The next day
Arjun was making Ranveer's life hell by makng him sweep the floor.

Arjun: Yahan pe abhi bhi saaf nahi hai.

Ranveer: Saaf to hai.

Ashi is coming from the other side with a glass of cold coffee from CCD.

Arjun: Hey, junie. Idhar aao.
He shows her the floor
Arjun: Yeh saaf hai?

Ashi: Unless tumhari eyes mein 50 times wala microscope laga hai, yeh saaf hai.

He takes the glass from her & pours of it on the floor.

Arjun: Ab saaf hai?

Ashi: U psycho!
She empties the rest of the coffee on Arjun's head! 😆 😆 😆 (Sorry, guys. Couldn't resist!)

Suddenly a voice comes from behind them

Voice: Woof!


So guys, did u like it. I'll try writing soon, but I've got my exams coming up.
Anyways, keep posting ur comments.
Precap: Who does the voice belong to? What will Ashi's punishment be? So many questions, all to be answered in the upcoming part which I'll try to post asap.

This is really cool! please continue ASAP!!! 😛

I read all patrs together .
Its dam cool!!!!!!!!! 👏
Please write soo.

its vry good 👍🏼 continue soon

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