New SS: Tanhai Part 9 pg69 Dec 27 - Page 8

Originally posted by: Kamal_23

*unreserved*

wow that was amazing i actually thought it was veera-nihaal but premeer is better

though prem better be alive 😆😆😆😆...no comment one way or the other 😈

i was shoked at the jodi though RISHABH-kulraj and NIHAAL-MEHER told you they'd be weird/surprising 😉

anyways i can't wait till the next update coming soon 😳

Kamal

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I'm going save this spot and edit both right now 😊

*edited*

The comments for the prologue or on pg 1😃saw it and loved it....ill go back and find it then reply...later...gotta do this so i can update tonight 😉😉😉

20 PAGES??? 😲 DAMN GIRL!! 😲 I'm in shock, not cus of the length, because your parts are always long, but that you updated sooo quickly! 😃like you already know...im totally into this story so im on a roll...which is maha good for you all...nahin 😉😉

You're going to hate these comments Jaz, so I promise the ones for the next part shall be loads better! 😊i LOVE them!! your comments always rock 👏👏👏

But wow! 7 years? I love when you do flashbacks and stuff, makes the whole story more intriguing! 😃 Just like in Sau Dard, which I want continued soon again btw! 😉😳 he he....havent checked sau dard...did u comment...anyway...lol...this ff is full of flash backs since there is no prem 😉😉

Wow....The whole atmosphere in the Mann house 7 years ago seemed like such fun! 😃 until course the wedding stuff was mentioned! 😔 I also loved the relations you put in....just lemme know that Preet hoga! Kyunki agar Preet nahin hain to main nahin parungi! 😔 But I trust you...as always! 😉 And ohhh I loved the Nihaal and Meher, cus if they weren't siblings I see it! 😊 And Rishab and Kulraj...did take awhile to get used do, I'll admit it! 😛tu aur teri Preet...hey Ram!!! lmao...Preet hoga...but ill leave it up to you to tell me if you like him in this ff or not 😉😉😉...thanks...i thought Nihaal and Meher was a stretch but its all fake anyway...he he...it was originally Manmeet and Kulraj but i thought Manmeet was younger so he is paired with someone else 😛😛😛

But I love that Heer and Maya are so close! 😃 It really seems like a good relation! 😊 And aww Heer's so upset, (for good reason) ya...maya is based off of my favorite bhabi!! she is awesome...she is like my sister more...😃😃😃 i was on her side when she married my brother 😆😆😆

😲😲 She said it? 😲 And Awww I knew Maya would've know! 😃 I'm glad they tell each other everything, but god.....I don't wanna know what'll happen now! 😔 i love that you comment as you read...lets me see the true reaction...always comment like that...its my order...wait wait...dont wanna be mean...its a request 😉😉😉

I knew I was right in not wanting to know! 😔 That sounded horrific...😔 I can't believe her family can't understand it! (although kudos to you Jaz 😉 That makes it really realisitic! 😃) thank u 😳

Would you believe my heart started beating faster when Premeer came together? *hides face* I'm hopeless! 😆 But omg...the way you described his voice when he asked about the mark on her cheek and him going to the door...*shudders* I loved it! 😃i know what you mean..i was blushing myself as i was writing it...im as hopeless as you are...koi baath nahin...dono saath saath muh chupayenge 😆😆😆...and the voice...*swoon* cuz i could totally picture it!!

Awwww Maya is AWESOME!! *claps* I love her already, (until you might decide to change her) 😳 But wow...she's been hurt in love too 😔 Poor Maya! 😳 But I'm glad she's doing this for Premeer no no...my promise to you...Maya is good all the way...really there is only one villain...but you will see soon enough 😛😛😛

WOW GO Maya! 😃 She rocks! 😉 And awww she's pregnant? too cute! 😳 Seriously Jaz, you described the wedding soooooo amazingly well! 😃 I felt like I was watching it! 😳 And ohhhh I loved them walking home together...only thing I didn't like was what happened! 😔 you know...saachi bolooon...i wasnt happy with the wedding myself...i thought i was missing something....but as long as the readers liked it...i guess that all i can ask for 😃😃😃...

I......don't want to say anything about everything that happened after the night came out...*shakes head* Ignorance is bliss 😔 😔😔 I still can't believe you'd do that....it's unfathomable...but you've said to trust you....so I'll try...?😔 yes babe...trust...haar dosti ki buniyad 😉😉 have faith in jaz..have i ever let you down 😉😉😉

The last few paragraphs were heart wrenching Jaz, I nearly cried, it was so beautiful...I just NEED to know like NOW what happened to Prem! 😔 Warna...I won't be able to sleep all night! 😔hope you have been sleeping yaar 😆😆😆....

continue soon, love you, love you too 🤗

Meera😳

P.S. The blackmail shud work! *narrows eyes* haila...😲😲😲 main toh daar gayi....🤣

Originally posted by: nuptalie

Very sad.
Plz continue it.
Waiting for the next.

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

it was an emotional update.. I really had tears in my eyes.. it's so sad for heer and prem.. will wait to read wat the story is more abt...

You are an awesome writer....

will wait for the PM..

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Reserved... I will write my other comment before i write my comment for this chapter!!

Originally posted by: lovely_lady

oh my..

thats so sad..

great update btw..

Originally posted by: NNOOO

OH MY GOD I am feeling like crying

Nahii yeh nahii hosakta prem ko wapas ana he hoga

i amm feeling very bad

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice update.........first of all a really long one i just cant imagine myself writing it n that too so fast..........with so many emotions............really u r brilliant writer.................n thanks for the pm.plz update soon eagerly waiting for the next part

Originally posted by: resham12345

Hey
Thanks alot for the pm for this wonderful update
Prem better be alive, you can't kill him. he he...creativity is all mine...so Prem dead or alive...who knows 😉

And the couples you madee
haha meher and nihal
and kulraj and rishabh :D i told it was going to be completely unique 😃

That was a long update, but sadly it wasn't 20 pages :( umm...i dont know how you can say that considering that you didnt write it and i did...it was 20pgs on micorsoft work...maybe 19.5 or so...but u cant say it wasnt because you didnt write it....thats just not fair...its like you are saying i lied
anyway it is a really gud concept
Prem heer should be together in the next part. Please
Will be waiting for your update
lots of love, thanks for reading 😊
resham

Originally posted by: --Sarah--

beautiful and amazing update Jaz...you are such a brilliant writer...
beautiful concept...and story line..enjoyed reading it...
it is great to see maya and Heer share a strong relationship at least in your story...
how cruel are heers brothers...poor heer....
you can't kill Prem..and if Heer believes he is alive then he is surely...
can't wait for their reunit...and prem can be with a bang..i mean a big business tycoon..even richer then Heer's family....
waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: aati1492

oh.. it was so painful and so sad.. waiting for next update... Is prem really dead

Originally posted by: stunninstar

i have no words...seriously..your update simply took me into a new world...man..i just loved the story...oh..i cant believe .. prem is no more...? i know he must have been saved by someone..poor heer..and a different set of chararcters..i can really feel prem n heer slove..as if they are living with me..oh god...i cant wait for your next part....

Originally posted by: cute_bear

omg...

thats was so bad

i feel so sorry for prem and heer

and i hoping prems alive

awww

obviously hes alive

where heer is thats where prem is na

continue

Originally posted by: shabo24

Wow. well...hello to you too 😛😛😛

That was really...wow. 😆 20 pages? How do you guys have the patience for all of that? Meera once wrote something that was like.. 30 pages. Even like 5 pages is long enough for me. 😆its not about the patience...its more about the ideas and the inspiration i feel for this story....😳 i tend to get a bit carried away when i have a new idea 😳
😳
So much information to take in, I don't know where to start. Her family first sounded so nice, three brothers, a younger sister, loving bhabhi's, playful parents and than you had to throw this twist in. Well, I kinda expected this (not what you wrote - I expected something drastic) to happen, but how it happened, really just...wow to read. 😆i told you...part one was jam packed...everything that happened...needed to happen...and come out in the first part to have the effect i wanted...😉😉😉...he he...shabbo...love you...you know me so well...drastic = jaz...kyun? 😛😛

I think Maya has got to be my fave because she was the only one that made an effort to help Heer. I think I felt worse for her that I did for Heer, when her story about Prashant and all was revealed. Unexpected, but from you, that's what I expect. :) yup....my fav character at this point too..i have one more...but you will see her in the next part...im sure you will love her as well 😉...u expect the unexpected....😭 *happy tears* you learned...im so proud....

And when he died. I loved how it started raining the instant that life leeft his body. Such a good part, and how can her brothers be so, so cruel? God. I don't even have words for them right now. SIGH. im sure any words you have for the brothers are not appropriate for IF...he he...are you a bit calmer now 😛😛😛

Continue soon, next part tonight 😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I didn't think it was possible to hate four fictional characters so viciously before. Now I know differently. I hate the Maan men! God, the way you've characterised them is like they do not care for their family, rather money, status and power is everything. I would throttle him if they were real. he he...hate is such a strong word yaar...are you sure you hate them 😉😉😉 im only teasing...after what they did...im sure you want to kill them 😆....the Maan men will be dealt with eventually...phir batana 😃

And poor Heer, and poor Maya as well. How on earth would have Prem managed to survive such an attack though? That is something I cannot wait to read. who says that Prem survived 😈...

Update soon Jaz! its coming 😃

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: fungrl

alright lets gussa you over hurting my Prem😡😡😡, I hope nothing major has happened to him and if you killed him which I am pretty sure you didn't b/c story would cease to exist l..... Prem will come back b/c after all everything is possible in hindi stories....you cruel inhumane person and beechara Prem sooo hurt haye...mere saath gussa...maine kya kiya 😉😉😉...*running away* 😆😆😆...haye...cruel and inhumane....😭 now thats not fair *hmph*
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all better after venting this out....now back to good part, brilliant writing, your story telling capabilities are superb, I mean the whole update went from happy, sad, happy and ultimately sad routine but it seemed so natural.....will wait for your long update next week, until then let me figure out some torture techniques for the Mann man lmao...nice ranting...but i was on the receiving end...not much fun for me 😆...it was a rollercoaster...i know...the next updates wont be so much twisted...just wait and watch 😃next part up soon...and im officially running...😛😛😛

Originally posted by: maha_k

i dont have words to describe yar it is just tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good amazing lovely etc...........👏 thank uuuuuuuuuuu 😃😃😃

i have a feeling that prem will be alive and become a great business tycon after 7 year .but i am still confused about it😕😕 one thing ill tell u about me...things are never what they seem...and who knows if prem will even come back 😛😛

but really amazing i was crying on the start.😭😭 haye...but some of it was fun naa 😃

plz i dont want any preet-heer story for short time😆

i am become addicted to this story.after reading this part i was like🤪

plz update soooooooon

and add me in your pm list he he...thanks yaar...im glad that you liked my stuff...will add you...next part will come up later tonight 😳😳😳

maha

Originally posted by: 9rpatel

Vey Sad!!!!!!!!!!
please continue asap!!!!!
waiting for the next part!!!!!
Prem better be alive!!!!!!!!!!
thnaks for the PM
PM me when u update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: Garima93

O-M-G! Jazz Di!!! *comes running to tackle Jaz Di into a BIG HUG* 🤗 Ahh! I missed you! Its been ages since I've commented on your FF's! Im so sorry about that! *kaan pakading* It's just that sometimes I get REALLY lazy, and I mean really lazy! But from now on I promise to leave a comment every time you update...or atleat try too! 😆O-M-G!!! missed you so much too yaar 🤗kahaan the tum? well im happy to know that at least you have been reading....yeh hi kafi hai...but yes...do try cuz i love your comments 😳😳😳

Now on to the update!...Omfg! 20 FREAKING PAGES?!?!?! What...are you super girl or something?! 😆 How do u do it Di? I mean 20 pages worth of perfection! Hats off to you man! You are brilliant without a doubt! 😳 aww...you are too sweet....making me blush!!! ☺️

But the update was FABULOUS! Like no joke! The story, the concept, the emotions, everything was so perfect! Awesome job Di! 👏 👏 👏 Teen taalian's for you! I loved the concept of Prem and Heer being best friends since childhood and falling love! That's so sweet! i use the phrase "no joke" as well...i actually use it a lot 😆...yup..after all...they say the basis of any good relationship is friendship...so...there you go 😃😃
😆
But the flashback was so heart wrenching! 😔 And I have to tell you...I HATE all three brothers and Heer's Bauji, how could they do such a sin?!?! They killed Prem?!?!..But I still believe that Prem's alive, if Heer is, the he definitely is! Right? you and everyone else...they are ready to kill the four Maan men...he he...is prem alive...hmm....we will see 😉😉😉

I really like the relationship between Maya and Heer! Its so sweet! She so nice to let Heer go off and get married! Thats really nice of her! She's so caring! I was so happy when Prem and Heer got married, but then the stupid three musketeers came in and murdered him! I was so about to cry at that moment! 😭 How can someone be so cruel!?!?! I felt EXTREMELY bad for Heer! I hope Prem comes back! One question...so did Heer have to marry Rajveer? 🤔 Im guessing she didn't but still.... like i was telling someone else...Maya is based of off my badi bhabi...love her to bits...she is just like Maya...except for the whole lost-love thing...she got her love...my bhaia 😳😳😳...nope...i can assure you...Heer did not marry Rajveer...you will find out what Heer's been up to in the next part 😳😳😳

Otherwise, I LOVE the story Di! Please do continue soon! Can't wait to read it! 😳 Byee! *waves* 😉 😆thanks for reading and commenting 😳😳😳

Luv,
Garima 😃

Originally posted by: Momana

omg it's soo sad they killed premm...
nd thnxs for the pm
anywazz awsome part....
plz pm me wen u update the next part...
thnxs