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Rituka

@rituka7

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Posted: 16 years ago

#271

damn cool
awesome
superb
i love this part
update soon

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 16 years ago

#272

awsome update

too good

so sweet & cute update

loved your fic

great going

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#273

The change is really awesum dear. I luv this new characteristics of Raj n Naina. Raj's mom is so cute n each n every scene wid her is wonderful. Specially Raj's reactions r gr8.

Luved the way u started Raj n Naina's convo. Nice one. And am glad dat Naina has a girly side in her also coz I guess every girl shud hav that. The last scene btwn Raj n Naina was really funny. Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Pls continue soon.

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manali

@Revolutionbreez

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#274

Itz Rockkking!!!!👏👏

what an update ! fabulous !!!👏

RAj screaming "nahinnnnnnnn" in a serial way and maa is happy on that !🤣

Raj ki mom simply Rockks!👍🏼

oh god that tel maalish!🤣

and then Parathe kaa " family pack "🤣

Raj imagining himself as suriji!!😆

Raj ki mom ka reaction after knowing ki woh ek Army officer hai!...that she is more

happy ki woh Ganga nahi monica singh hai....😆😆

And raj idiot ki tarah kehta hai, woh monica nahi Naina singh hai!🤣

Naina Raj ki help karti hai and khud phass jaati hai...😃

Raj uske expression ki photo le leta hai .... chooo chweeeet...😳😳

and then room mein woh uski pic se baate karta hai...😳😳

Naina observing her oiled hairs! i can imagine....as after my mom maalish my long hairs....mera expression bhi kuch aisa hi hota hai......😆😆

Raj freeing her hairs from mangalsutra was so sweet and romantic...😳😳

And then that khana banane ki rasam....🤣

Raj trying to act serious and laughing inwardly on naina's condition!!!

In the end when Naina starts crying...he can't control his laughter...🤣

oh god!! I can't wait....

Update soon!!!😊😃

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 16 years ago

#275

kya se kya ho gaya... bewafa... tere ud k chakkar me...😭 😆

maang kya kya mila...bewafa... tere ud k chakkar me...😭 😆

yaar ek kaam kar ...yahan par ek laughter club khol de ...😛!!! aur tu us ki president ban ja...😉!!! i promise u ki... mera registration sab se pahla hoga...!!!😃

aaj tak raj ko bas isi rup me dekhna baki tha...'nahinnnnnn'... kaan par bhi hath rakha hoga sayad us ne...🤣

kiron kher ko dostana me dekhne k baad...yahan par voh mujhe us movie se bhi jyada achhi lagi...👍🏼!!! kaash yaar...meri mom in se kuch sikh payen...!!! toh mere toh vyare nyare ho jayenge...😛

raj ne bilkul sahi socha ki agar aise hi roz parathe ka family pack khana pad jaye toh bilkul suri ji lagega...aur naina ko tab lolita ma'am bhi ban na pad jaye... 🤣

raj ki mom bhi serial type ka expression de rahi hain...matalb jis tarah se serial me khusi k scene me bhi pahle aise react karti hain jaise ki voh ek dam shocked hai...thodi der tak pata hi nahin chalta hai ki voh actual me khus hain ya nahin...!!! yahan par bhi kuch aisa hi mamla hai...🤣

raj bhi na ek no ka duffer hai... naina singh aur monica singh me farak nahin janta voh...!!! us ki mom ne bilkul sahi kaha ki voh un ka beta hai ya nahin...???🤣

bechari raj ko bachate hue naina faas gayi...!!! par ek tah se achha hua raj k mobile phone k pic gallery me ek aur photto add ho gaya...!!! pata nahin voh aise kab tak sirf naina k tasviron se batain karta rahega...!!!😛

naina aise hi zindagi bhar raj se takrati rahe toh hi behtar hai...!!! sab k liye...raj k liye...naina k liye...aur hamare liye bhi...

aur mangal sutrawala scene toh mangal mangal hi tha dear...😉

lo apne capt sir ko acting bhi aati hai...aur unhone toh naina ko pura dara hi diya yaar. par thik hai koi gal nahin is bahane naina aur rajveer me thodi duri toh dur hui aur raj k chehre par mushkan toh aayi...😛

ok...ab batati hun ki ud kaisa tha...!!! baht hi bekar tha...😲yeh kah kar main apne swargvaasi dadaji k naam ka apmaan nahin karna chahti...!!! toh isiliye sach bol deti hun...it's too gud...awesome...& mindblowing...👏 👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

cont soon😃

yeh comments indirect tha...kyoun ki main abhi bhi naraz hun...isiliye maine direct koi comments nahin ki hai...!!! dat's all...

Edited by srojaleen - 16 years ago

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strawberrychip

@strawberrychip

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Posted: 16 years ago

#276

that was awsome!!!!

loved all the rn parts..

i like the way u r describing naina's character.. every detail of the scene.. keep writing more......

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#277

awesome n too cute yaar.
Raj Naina ko aise hi dekhta rahega na humesha to khaana peena hi kya, mujhe to lagta hai sab kuch bhool jaayega ek din. Raj ki mom bhi itne filmy hain ki unko lag raha hai ki Raj Naina k saath khaana chahta hai naashta. My god parathe ka family pack, so funny aur vo bhi us me 5 bade spoons me ghee daal k paratha banaya Raj k liye my god vo kya , i think koi kaise khaayega?
Ek aur gossip k liye news mil gayi Raj ki mom ko ki Naina bhi Army me hi hai. Naina aur Raj ne mil k kya solid bahana banaya hai maalish se bachne ka par maa to aakhir maa hi hain na ek ko choda to doosre ko pakad liya. Raj bhi kya karta kaise bachata Naina ko apni maa se? Chalo accha hi hua na badhiya hai. Raj apna bach gaya aur Naina pe us ko hassi aa rahi thi tabhi to mauka paa k pic bhi le li us ki.
Room me bhi Raj Naina ki tasveer se hi baatein karne me laga tha, aakhir us k dil ki baatein vo kis se kahe? Naina k baalon ko maalish se bheega hua dekh k bhi Raj ko funny lag raha tha sab to bechare ne sorry bhi bola. Par Naina bhi jaanti hai na ki is me Raj ki koi galti hi nahi hai. Naina washroom se bahar aayi to Raj us k baalon k jadoo me kho gaya, hieeeee aur touch karne ka mauka bhi mil gaya janab ko.
Pehle Naina inkaar karti rahi but kaise door jaaye vo Raj se? Raj samajh bhi gaya ki Naina pareshaan hai kisi baat ko le k vow, good understanding. Naina ne aakhir bata hi diya ki us ko khaana banana nahi aata to Raj ne sharat shuru kar di aur us ko dara bhi diya ki maa gussa karengi. Poor Naina Raj k joke ko samajh nahi paayi aur dar k maare rone lagi,ab accha hai manano Raj jee, aise to bada mazak bana rahe the na us ka.
g8 work, continue soon.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago

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desaiprachi07

@desaiprachi07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#278

Sorry yaar ki maine pehle is par apna reply nahi diya hai.😆 Par maine abhi is k do ud's padhe hain i really like it's concept.😃 Raj Naina ko pyaar karne laga hai lekhin as like LRL keh nahi paa raha hai na itne asaani se keh paayega.😡 Naina ki passing out parade me bhi Raj ko apne cadets dekh k pride ho raha tha un pe 😊. Naina k maa papa ne abhi tak Raj ko maaf nahi kiya na. Ye Naina ka frnd kahan se aa gaya mere RN k beech?😕 Raj ne Naina ko kya gift diya hai ye jaroor dekhna chahoongi.😉 Raj ko kitna dukh ho raha hoga na ki ab Naina ko kabhi dekh nahi paayega aur us se mil bhi nahi paayega.😭

Edited by desaiprachi07 - 16 years ago

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vvdn

@vvdn

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Posted: 16 years ago

#279

Wonderfull update!!!

Rajveer pe bhi uski maa ka asar hone laga hai....his Nahiiiiin.......was fabulous😆
bechri Naina..Raj ki maa ke chugul mein faas gayi 😉
RN's first convo is soooo nice.

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Nisha

@nisha1984

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#280

Awesome update!!!!

Raj's mother is hilarious and Raj ki wajah se Naina fas gayee oil malish main 😆

Raj felt so bad but also he was laughing at Naina's state!!!!

Raj cares so much for Naina and he is constantly worried about her but when Naina said she couldn't cook it was just speechless and then Raj's drama too good!!!!!

Lagta hai aise bahut drame dekhne ko milenge hum ko aur upar se Raj-Naina romance dheere dheere hi sahi lekin hoga zaroor we know that.............

The update was superb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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