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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

hey di!!!!! 😃hi hinna😃

im soo sooo soooo sorry for the laaaaaate reply!!!!!!!!!!! never mind.mention not dear
Part 43:
woahhhhh!!! 😲 👏 amazing part di!!! 👏 👏 👏 so heart-wrenching!!!! 😭thanks
Aww poor kasturi crying so much!! feel so bad for her!! 😔let her cry for one or two days.uss nay robbie ko bahuth rulaa ya hai
robbie kaha chale gaya?!! 😔...ummm😉
oh no!!! she set fire to the saree!!!! 😲she let out her anger on the saree
poor tiku confused as to what's happening!! 😕true
ooo thank God robbie turned up!! 😊as i mentioned earlier he is particular in his profession.
awww the song went very well with the situation di!!!! 👍🏼 could feel robbie's pain in the song!!!! 😒 bechara!!! thanks for listening the song.it was a superb son.i love it
nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yeh kya ho gaya!!! aag!!!!!! 😲 omg!!!!! i hope everything's fine!!!!! 😕heee...hope so
excellent part!!! 😛 and brilliantly written!! 😃 each and every word seemed so realistic!!! 👏 👏 👏 thank you soooo much dear
gna catch up with next part!! 😛go ahead if time permits😛
and once again di soo sorry for late reply!!! come on.don't say again again .that hurts me😭
hehe do yu like it!! ^^^ yep i do😉...funny it is😉
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

Part 44:
OMG all i can say is 👏now it is my turn to saw WOW 57 claps!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omg!!!!!!!!!!!.thanks will be a very small word for you.
wow that was a fantastic part!!!!!!! 😃 😛 😲😭 👏take a bow!!!!😃👏
i'm speechless di...don't know what to say!!!! lol me too speechless.don't know how to thank you
omg robbie's eyes!!!!!!!!! 😲 oh nooo i hope he recovers soon and there's nothing wrong with his eyes!!!!don't worry he will😊
poor kasturi man!!!! she can't do anything to help him and now he wants her out the house!!!!!!! 😲 oh noooo!!! ab kya hoga?!!!! 😕ummmm...read my next part to know about it
this part was just too good di!! i could literally see everything happening right in front of me and i think a tear even escaped my eye!!! 😭 lol okay let's not get emotional but seriously......mind-blowing!!! 👏are you sure!!!!!! tear escaped from your eyes!!!!! thank you sooooo much for getting involved with my ff
i have no words yaar!!! jus excellent!!!! ⭐️thanks again .you are not less than a ⭐️
update soon!!! 😛 i will very very very very eager to know what's in store!!!!!!!!.most of the readers already guessed the next track.let us see how it comes out?
🤗this is from me 🤗
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ..-..RoKa.._..

hey di i've updated my comments on page 95!! 😃

i was eagerly waiting for that.thanks 😃
Hinna

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Posted: 16 years ago
Wowwww di
omg those two parts 😲
just wowwwwwwww
omg robbies really angry and furious, and kasturi really does love him, not eating or drinkign anything getting worried soooo much for him. she really does care for him. As usual di i never know what to expect in the upcoming parts of your FF when i read it thats why its sooo awesome. Robbie comign to the conert performing on stage but whys he drinkign soooo much. and i was soo shocked when he ended in the hospital his eye sight omg i hope its not tooo serious. The ending bit of Part 44 omg how can robbie send kasturi home. WOWWWWWWWWWWW. i wonder what she must be going through and how much it must have hurt robbie to say that. I hope everyhting gets better
Di you have to update ASAP (when you can)
Keep up the great work 👏
Love
Hummy
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PART-45

alaana and kasturi were shocked when robbie said to send kasturi to chawala house.

alaana:'issa kyun kaha raha hai?...😲'


robbie:'dii...please...mai nahee cha hatha wo muchay iss haalath mai thay khay...'

alaana:'teek hai ....teek hai...don't be tensed...'she said looking at kasturi meaningfully.

by the time they clear the hospital bill and complete other hospital formalities it was around 8pm.ajay and robbie went to sabarwal house with dhonds.kasturi went with alaana in her car.after reaching sabarwal house ajay took robbie to his room and made him sit comfortably on the bed.

robbie:'thanks...😊'

ajay:'thanks! for what?....come on robbie muchay paraaya math banawo...aakir mai thumaara saala hoon...honay wala jiju bhee hoon...dtho dtho rishthay hain...😊'

robbie:'🤣...'

alaana:'kya ho raha hai...?😊...'she entered looking at robbie.

ajay:'ummm...that is between me and robbie...😉'

robbie:😃....

ajay:'nice to see you laughing....'she sat on the bed beside robbie and took his hand in to hers.

alaana:'such mai...for the past two days we had tough time...ufff...god only knows...'

ajay:'day after tomorrow i will come to take you for the check up...till then take care...'after a formal talk he left him in his room and came down with alaana.

alaana:'ajay bahuth thaayr ho chuki hai.have dinner with us and go...😊' from yesterday he was also busy in the hospital.did not had his proper meal.

ajay:'no...it is ok...'

alaana:'please....😃'

ajay:'not today...some other day...'he tried again to avoid.

alaana:'why not today?.you may be missing shaantha's cooking.don't say no....just a minute i will call kasturi too...'without waiting for his reply she ran up to kasturi's study room.

alaana:'kasturi....😊' she entered her room.kasturi came out of the wash room wiping her face with towel.

alaana:'chalo...ajay is waiting for you...😊'

kasturi:'i don't want to go...😡'she refused immediately.

alaana:'don't say that.come he is waiting for you....'

kasturi:'no...i don't want to go with him.yahee maira ghar hai.mai yaheen rahoon gee...'she said firmly.

alaana:'😃......thum nay sahee kaha.yeah ghar jithna maira aur robbie ka hai wothna thumara bhee hai.....ajay is waiting for you to have dinner with you....😉...ab tho chalow...'

kasturi:'oh!...i thought you are sending me to chawala house with bhaiya....'

alaana:'robbie ka dhimaag ghoom ga ya hai.maira nahee...😃'

kasturi:'i am sorry...😊' both walked out together.

dinning table:

shaantha:'robbss ji ka dinner ho ga ya?...' she asked while serving dinner to them.

alaana:'yep.he had hospital diet.i don't think he will eat again.before going to bed i will give him milk.that will be enough ...'

ajay:'bahuth dino kay baadth thumaara haath ka ghana ghanay mai maza araha hai...'he enjoyed eating food.

alaana:'shaantha kasturi ko serve karao...dtho din say kuch nahee ghayee hai...'

ajay:'kyun?...'he wondered.he was not aware of the drama.

alaana:' poocho math...such mai thumaari bayhan muchay bahuth thang kar thee hai...'she verbally compliant about her.

ajay:'kasturi...issa kyun...?😕...'

kasturi:....she could not answer,maintained silent.

ajay:'i thing you people are pampering her too much...😊'

alaana:'you are right.aaj kay baath thayk na,mai haath mai chade lag kar ghoon may waali hoon...😊'

ajay:'omg...kaheen muchpay tho nahe laga thogee...🤣' after two solid days they all laughed loudly and ate stomach fully.

after ajay left alaana and kasturi went to robbie's room.robbie was yet to sleep.still sitting on the bed.

alaana:'have this milk...😊'she sat beside him with the milk cup.

robbie:'nahe dii.don't you know that i don't drink milk?...'

alaana :i know that.aaj tho peelo...'she forced him to drink. kasturi stood beside her silently. while he was drinking.

alaana:'robbie...tomorrow i am going to office.shaantha will take care of you...'

robbie:'no problem....'alaana took the empty cup from him and helped him to lay on the bed and kasturi cover him with the blanket.

alaana:'one more think...shaantha is keeping mouna virath...wo nahee bolayge...'

robbie:'😲...issa kyun?

alaana:'i don't know.it is her personal . i don't want to know about it...'

robbie:'it will be difficult for me then....'

alaana:'tho kya karayn?...thum hee tho kasturi ko chawala house bhayj theya...beechari wo rothee huwe gayee...'

kasturi:'😲....

robbie:'dii...wo yahaan hoge tho bhee royeah gee.much pay tharas ghayeah gee...muchay kissi ki humdardi nahee chahee yeah...'

alaana:'i understood that...but kyun mai nahee karoon gee hamdardi?....
robbie:'dii you are different...you love me...'

alaana:'she too loves you...'she supported her.

robbie:'i don't think so...'he immediately refused.

alaana:'ok fine .i don't want to argue with you.sleep now...' they left him and went.
kasturi:'kya...shaantha aunty such mai mauna virath hai?...'she asked while they were walking in the corridor.

alaana:'wo nahee hai.par thum raho gee....'

kasturi:'mai kyun?...😕'

alaana:'yeah hee ek raas tha hai thumai robbie kay paas rahay nay ka...'

kasturi:'par kaisay dii?😕...😔'

alaana:'that is your problem. you should act smart...'

kasturi:😔'

after they left robbie realize that he is lying in the middle of the bed after so many days.he touched with his hands both the side of the bed and checked.it was empty.'ummm...😔''he sighed with depression.

next day morning:
kasturi's study room.around 7am tiku was still sleeping on her bed.kasturi got down from the bed with out disturbing tiku.as because she was scared to sleep alone in her room she brought tiku to sleep with her.by the time she fresh up and came out of the wash room tiku too woke up.

kasturi:' aray...thum jaag gayeah?😊...'
tiku:'haan...😛'he rubbed his eyes.

kasturi:'go and brush your teeth .i will bring milk for you...'she send him to wash room and went down.after some time she came with hot milk and tea.

tiku:'dii...i don't drink tea...'

kasturi:'i know...this tea is for uncle...'

tiku:'oh!...then give me the milk..'

kasturi:'not here.come with me to uncle's room.i will give you there...'

tiku:'wahaan kyun?😕...'

kasturi:'you come with me. i will tell...'

tiku:'teek hai...'both came out of the room and walked towards robbie's room.

kasturi:'thumai patha hai na mai uncle ki dhee huwe saree jalaa thee...' she said looking down at tiku.

tiku:'haan...😛'

kasturi:'wo ghalath tha na?'

tiku:'haan...😛'he walked fast with his small food steps along with kasturi.

kasturi:'iss leyeah uncle nay much say bahuth naaraaz hai.he is katti with me....'

tiku:'such!!!...😲'

kasturi:'haan...unn honay muchay bolnay say mana kiyaa hai...'

tiku:'tho????😕'

kasturi:'tho kya tho?....thu bolay ka...teek hai..'

tiku:'teek hai...😛'they entered robbie's house with tea.

robbie was still sleeping.

kasturi went and kept the tea tray on the side table.

kasturi:.....she pat her own cheek and showed tiku in action to wake him.

tiku:😛.....he nodded his head.with the help of kasturi he claimed the bed and sat beside him. robbie's sleep got disturbed.

robbie:'who is that?...'he woke up and sat on the bed.

tiku:'uncle utto...' raised on his knees and pat his cheek as kasturi showed him to do.

robbie:'oh! tiku thum.i already woke up.sitting on the bed .can't you see that...'

tiku:'he woke up...' he whispered to kasturi looking at her face.

robbie:'kissay baath kar raha hai?....'

tiku:'wo....'he looked at kasturi with his eyes wide open.she shook her head side ways as a sign of don't say.
robbie:'thumaari mummy hai?....' again tiku looked at kasturi.

kasturi:.....she moved her head up and down as a sign of yes.

tiku:'haan...haan...'he said quickly.

robbie:'achcha... batha time kya hai....'

tiku:'😕...he got confused again.he don't know how to see the time.he gave a confused look to kasturi.

kasturi:...she showed eight fingers.

tiku:'aat bajay...'

robbie:'oh...i woke up so late!...'he wondered.

kasturi:.....she took the tea cup and gave it in his hands.

robbie:'thanks...'he thought it was shaantha.kasturi gave the milk cup to tiku.both sat on the bed side by side and had it.

robbie:'tiku do you want to have tea?...'

tiku:'mai peera ha hoona milk...'

robbie:'good...'

after drinking milk tiku got down from the bed and ran out.

kasturi:😲...........'omg! he ran away.i need his help'she said in her mind.she went to wash room and brought tooth brush with tooth paste on it and gave it in robbie's hand.

robbie:'paste and brush!...shaanthu mai srif thayk nahee saktha.take me to wash room..'he tried to got down from the bed.kasturi quickly moved forward hold him to help. after he got down from the bed kasturi slowly and gently hold his palm with her's to guide him.

robbie:'😲.....'yeah haath tho kasturi ka hai'he immediately realized her touch. her touch conveyed her love to him.but 'issa kaisa ho saktha hai?.wo tho yahaan nahee hai.shaayad mai har waqth ussi kay yaad may raha tha hoon.issileyeah muchay issa lag tha hai...'he went along with her thinking.she took him to the wash room helped him to open the wash basin tap,brush his teeth and wash his mouth.soon after she gave the towel.

robbie:thanks...'he said while wiping his hand and mouth.

with the help of kasturi holding her hand he came back to his bed.

shaanthu:i am feeling hungry and i am fed up of hospital food.i want to have a good break fast...'

kasturi:'ummmm...'she left him and went.came back soon with break fast.

robbie:'so soon you came!...'he found out with her foot steps and the food smell.she went and sat beside him.took the bread sandwich and gave it in his hand.

robbie:'ummmm....egg bread sandwich...'he bit and enjoyed it.the taste and softness made him remember kasturi.

robbie:'patha hai shaanthu?...issa hee sandwich kasuturi bana thee hai.shaayad thum say seeki hogee.it is my favourite...'kasturi looked at him eating sandwich with passion.her eyes became wet,she wiped her eye corners.she gave the orange juice glass in his hand and she gave one more sandwich...for third one he said 'enough...'.but she did not leave him .she tried to feed him.

robbie:'mai nay mana kiya na....'he hold her wrist to stop feeding him.'so thin wrist!!!!😕...it cannot be shaantha's...'for a second he was confused.

kasturi:...was speechless.she gently moved her wrist and took back her hand from him.

robbie:'bring the comb...i want to comb my hair...'kasturi silently went to the dressing table and came back with the comb.she stood in front of him supported his cheek with her left palm and combed his hair with her right hand.when she touched his cheek a feeling of chillness passed on to him.he recognized it.it should be kasturi.no doubt.'but how can it be?...muchay baar baar isaa kuyn lag tha hai...har waqth kasturi ko kyun mayhasoos kar tha hoon?...😕'he was still confused.with doubt he placed his hand on her upper part of the palm which was touching her cheek.'muchay kyun...achcha lag tha hai...'he wondered.

robbie:'thanks...'he said confirming that it cannot be kasturi.it is shaantha.'yeah shaathu bhee na...abhee issay mauna virath rakna tha?...ufff...'
kasturi combed his hair neatly and for a second she admired his look with slight stubble whith bandage on his eyes .he was looking hot and attractive with innocence face.'yeah kith na ander say khoob soorath hain wooth na he bhahar say bhee hain...'she desperately wished to kiss him on his cheek.she deeply regretted that she cannot.

after she helped him to relax,she went down in search of tiku.'yeah tiku bhee na...where he went? with out him it is very difficult to manage robbie...'she went in search of him.she went to kitchen.

kasturi:'shaantha aunty...tiku kahaa hai?...'

shaantha:'ussay chutti yaan hai....isleyeah kahee ither wother khayltha hoga...'kasturi went out in search of him.

kasturi:'nandu kaka...thumnay tiku ko thay kha?...'

nandu:'wo bhaahar garden mai khayl raha hai...'she too went to the garden and shocked to see tiku sitting flat with his cross legs in the mud and playing.

kasdturi:'tiku...yeah kya kar raha hai?...'he was mixing mud with his both the hands. his whole dress became dirty with mud.

kasturi:'omg!😲...what the heck you are doing...'she pulled him up.

tiku:'😔..... he raised his head and looked at her unhappily.

kasturi:'why are you playing in the mud?...'

tiku:'dii...it is fun...thum bhee try karo😛...'he put mud on her hands too.

kasturi:'chee...chee...chee... kandha bachcha...chal mai ray saath...'she brought him in dragging . took him straight to the wash room and gave him shower.helped him to wipe his body and head and gave him other dress to wear.when he was wearing the dress she remember that robbie too wearing the same dress from yesterday.

kasturi:'chal mai ray saath....'she again took him to robbie's room.

kasturi:'mai uncle kay leyeah achcha sa shirt dhoongee.thum uncle ko madath karna payhan nay kay leyeah...'

tiku:'kyun...? thum karona...muchay mitti mai khaylnee hai...'

kasturi:'mai bhee saath rahoon gee idiot....aur thu mitti mai nahee khaylay ga...'

tiku:'mazaa aatha hai...'😛

kasturi:'mai thumai modeling colour clay ghareeth kar thoon gee ghaynay kay leyeah....'

tiku:'such....😃'he jumped with joy.

kasturi:'ussshhhh...'she kept her index finger on her lips and showed him to keep silent because they were nearing robbie's room.as soon as they reached the door tiku left her hand ran towards robbie and jumped on the bed.

robbie:'thu aagayeah!😊...'

tiku:'haan...thumai shirt change kar nee hai na? issleyeah...' by that time kasturi brought a clean un buttoned shirt and in action she told tiku to tell him to remove the shirt.

tiku:'uncle shirt wootharo...'

robbie:'kyun?...😲

tiku:'doosri shirt pay han na hai....'

robbie:'oh!...'he stood up ,undone the button,removed his shirt and exposed his strong chest and biceps. around his neck there was a thin and plain gold chain glittering.slight black hair on his fair chest showed him more masculine.

kasturi:....swallowed the saliva. she moved closed to him, helped him to put his hands in to the shirt's long sleeves.while fixing his collor she tried hard to avoid looking at his chest. she was standing in front of him. she carefully put up his buttons without touching him. by mistake her fingers touched his chest and disturbed both of them.

robbie:😕.....this time robbie was confident ....i cannot get this feeling if it was shaantha...ewwww...for sure it is kasturi..'he confirmed in his mind.'but how come it is kasturi?.dii cannot lie to me.shaayad mai hee ghalath hoon...'he tried to convince himself.

around 1pm kasturi brought lunch to robbie's room.

tiku:' uncle utto...'

robbie:'what is the time now?'he asked while getting up.tiku looked at kasturi.she showed one finger to him.

tiku:'one...'

robbie:'oh!...'

kasturi brought a small table and kept it near the bed and placed the food plate on it.

tiku:'...uncle ko mai kheelawoon?...' kasturi nodded her head as a sign of no.she mixed baasmati plain rice,desi khee and masoor ki dall seasoned with cumin in to semisolid and fed him with spoon.

robbie:'ummmm...'he enjoyed the taste and smell of baasmati rice with desi ghee and dall.kasturi gave a papad in his hand to eat with rice.

robbie:...😕...'yeah tho mai ra favourite combination hai.yeah srif dii aur kasturi jaan thay hain.shaantha nahee...'

kasturi:....wiped the food stuff sticking near his mouth with her finger tip.

robbie:😕.....baar baar muchay kyun kasturi ki hee yaad aathe hai...muchay ki issa lag tha hai jai say kasturi may ray kareeb hai.har ek pal mai kyun kasturi ko may hasoos kar tha hoon?'

tiku:'mai bhee khawoon😛...'he disturbed his thoughts.

robbie:'come and sit on my lap and eat...'he made him sit on his lap to enable him to reach the food table easily and gave the papad to him.kasturi enjoyed feeding both of them simultaniously.

evening when alaana was back from office robbie was sleeping.

alaana:'hi kasturi😊...how was the day?...'was her first question as soon as she saw kasturi.

kasturi:'good...tiku was helping me😊 ...'

alaana:'.that was great.he did not find out isn't it.one or two days try to manage like that.till then we will find some solution.

for the dinner robbie told alaana to take him down to the dinning table.
dinning table:

as usual shaantha served the food to them.alaana helped robbie to eat while kasturi was in the kitchen helping shaantha to serve the food.

shaantha:'robbss ji dam aalu aap ka manpasandth hai na?...aur thoda lo.....'she said in a loud voice and served more dam aalu in his plate.robbie was surprised to hear her talking.'what happened to her mauna virath?...😲'

robbie:'shaanthu ...kya thum bol sak the ho? 😲....'

shantha:'mai tho bachpan say he bol thee hoon...😊'

alaana:'thodi thayr phaylay ussnay mauna virath thod thee hai.aat bhajay kay baath wo virath thod thay thee hai...'she immediately interfered.

robbie:'issa kyun?😕...'

alaana:'issa he hai.thum kya har ek baath mai issa kyun ?...issa kyun poochay gay?...'

robbie:'😕.....some thing is wrong'he said in his mind

kasturi:'😃.....was standing in the kitchen and giggling.
Edited by robbii - 16 years ago
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@ Innocent02, thanks for liking my previous post part 44 on page 93😃
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i'm sooooooooooooo happy to be first dii.....after a long long time!!!so so so so so so sos os oooosoosososo happy dii!!!😃

really....i'm soooooo happy today coz my xams will get over tomorrow!!!!!
n after dat 2 months of full enjoyment!!!
really dii......i'm waiting for tomorrow 10.00 AM as my exam is form 7.30-10.00AM!!!
ohhhhhhhhhhh wat a suppperb part dii!!!!
really no words to describe!!!!!
suuuuperbb!!!!i was really shocked wen i heard robbie said "KASTURI KO CHAWLA HOUSE BHEJO".....i really thought dat he was angry wid kasturi!!!but u managed it very well dii!!!
ur writing is asusual suuuppperrrbbbb1!!!!
ooooooo....roka scene were superb.....chai scene....lunch scene....shirt scene....n all!!!
yep!!!robbie feeling dat kasturi is near him!!!
i love tikku dii.....he's soooooooooo nice!!!
he's soooooooooooooo cute!!!!
he sos so sos nice!!!!
suppperbb dii!!!!
maun vrath idea is suuuuuuuuuuuppperb!!!!
appreciations to alaana!!!
4 thinking superbly for making roka closer!!!!
thank God ki kasturi sed no to go to chawla house!!!😃
from tomorrow i'll be a regular on ur ff dii!!coz from tomorrow i'm freeeeeeee like a bird dii!!!!!
Love u!!!
Update Fast!!!
n yes dii 2morrow dnt luk at da sum as it is SOLAR ECLIPSE tomorrow!!!
Take Care!!
Continue fasssssssssssssssssssssstttt!!!! fassssssssstttt!!!! fasssssstttt!!!
Nechu😛
Edited by RoKa PraNeev - 16 years ago
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Part 45.

Hey dii sorry!! vry late..was busy wih big-big classes...

well..loved this part dii..no words to describe...👍🏼

woww loved to see kasturi taking care of robbie n vo b maun vrat rakh ke...😆

awww tiku sooooooooooooo cute....helping his kashu dii...😛

omg robbie wanted to send her to chawla house coz he didn't want kasturi to see him in that condition...hw adorable...😳

n whenever she touched him, he felt like kasturi bt got confused again n again...😕

lol...bechara shaantu ko kuch keh b to nahi sakta...😆

vry eager to read the next part now...😊

so reading n commenting on it...😛

love ya...🤗


Edited by mini1roka - 16 years ago
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Part 44:
Fabulous part di!!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Absolutely loved it!!! 😳 😛 😃
Aww nice to see them all laughing after soo long!! 😊
Haha kasturi thought alaana was going to send her to chawla house but she meant come and have dinner with ajay!! lol
Oooo maun vrath...interesting!!! clever alaana!! 😉
Wow kasturi taking care of robbie without his knowledge!!!! 😳 hmm i can imagine some good scenes coming up!! 😳 😉
hehe i always love this tiku..he's such a cutie 😛 and the way yu describe him i can totally imagine him!! Excellent work di!! 👏 👍🏼 Aww what a cutie pie!! 😃 playing in the mud and all!! 😛
Kasturi telling tiku what to do...kool!! 👍🏼
Uh-oh robbie can recognise kasturi's touch!!! wonder if she gets caught out soon!! 😕
Ooooo kasturi getting restless with her feelings towards robbie...well she deserves it after all the suffering she gave to robbie!!
i cannot get this feeling if it was shaantha...ewwww... haha true! i'd be worried if he was getting those feelings from shaantha!! 🤣 good line di!! 👏
shantha:'mai tho bachpan say he bol thee hoon... hahaha this line cracked me up!!!! 🤣
ooo hoo hoo good cover up alaana!! 👍🏼
Fantastic update di!!!! Loved reading every bit of it!! 😃
Keep up the professional work!! 👍🏼 👏 ⭐️
Love ya
🤗 🤗 🤗
this one's for yu!! this one's for robbie!! and this one's for tiku!!
Hinna xx
Edited by ..-..RoKa.._.. - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg!!
wat a hillarious part
bechara robz-itna confused
hehe

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