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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: fungrl

As usual Z, wonderful update............loved the relationship between the sisters...........you know I have always been happy with my one and only annoying brother.....but after this update I kinda wish for a sister.............anyhoo...........I really wanna see male bonding time between Preet and Prem. Not to forget that I want Heer to threaten Preet that if he does anything to break Meher's heart she would eat him alive............(well I would say and do something like that, but Heer is not me............so i gotta stop wishing that)

Question, are we getting a romantic first date or first date with alot of funny mishaps..............can't decide which one would be more fun to read..........but I guess if you are writing, it'll be awesome as usual


btw I always forget to thank you for the PM

adios muchacha

Hey Arpita! Good to see you! I was just about to post the next part and I saw your comment! 😃 Thank you so much! 😳 Oh yes- brothers *rolls eyes* I know all about them! 😆 I have an older brother, who claims he is 21 years old, but I swear he behaves like a 10 year old! 😆 And do not get me started on my little brat of a sister! 😆 Anyhoo, LOL, OMG, How did you know??!! I will not tell you what you got right, but you will see in the next chapter! 😉 You will see what kind of date it will be very soon! 😉 Thanks again Arpita and no need to thank me for the PM! 😃 xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: JCluvs srk

hehehe i love the 2 sisters....n reading about meet was so nice...*sigh*...missing them on the show...i love wat meher said....they both fell for the juneja brothers....heheheh...damn right girl!...the juneja brothers are just that SEXY...lol...cant wait to read more....lookin forward to premeer's date..

Gosh I just saw this now too! 😆 Thanks JC! 😳 I'm glad you liked the chapter- and yes I miss Meet on the show too, hopefully these rumours about Preet dying are false and we get some cute Preet and Meher scenes in the show! 😃 Oh yes- they are the sexiest! 😳 Thanks- next chapter with their date shall be up soon! 😳 xx
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Hey guys- see I didn't keep you waiting! 😆 Thank you for all your comments on the last chapter, I loved reading and replying to them! 😆 And also a big thank you to all those who asked about my health, I am much better now thank you 😳 Here is Prem and Heer's much awaited date, well the start of it at least! 😆 Hope you like it and please do leave a comment to let me know what you thought of the chapter! 😳


Chapter Twenty-Four

'I should be going now,' said Heer, making sure that Meher had eaten every inch of the food on her tray before she sought to leave. 'Didi...good luck,' grinned Meher, winking at Heer. Heer rolled her eyes, yet knew that luck was something she certainly needed tonight. As she left the room, she bumped into Preet who gave her an awkward smile. 'Heer Di...' he started but Heer interrupted. 'Thank you Preet' she said, to his surprise. Preet looked at her in stunned silence. '...for being there for her and taking care of her...She really loves you...,' she continued and he nodded. 'And of course, if you hurt her then I am sure you know that you will have me to deal with,' she grinned, playfully grabbing one of his ears. 'Aaah...Heer Di!' he yelped and she let go, grinning broadly. 'I won't ever hurt her...I promise,' he told her. 'I know...I trust you,' Heer said warmly and beckoned him to go back inside to his Meher before she left the hospital.

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Heer placed the key through the lock of her hotel room, expecting to see Prem waiting impatiently for her inside. She turned the doorknob and stepped inside, taken aback to see the room empty. Her eyes flitted across the room, checking it to see if he was around and frowned to see that he was in fact not there. What was it with him and disappearing? She frowned as she noticed a small note placed on the bed, walking up and picking it up. 'There is a car waiting for you outside. Don't be long. Prem,' she read and took in a deep breath. And there went her hopes of there being no date at all- he so was not going to give up easily. Heer's body slumped as she opened her suitcase, wondering if she had bought anything decent to wear with her. She fumbled inside her bag, hopelessly failing in trying to find something good to wear. Choosing something to wear was never this hard.

Rummaging through her bag, she noticed something catch her eye. She reached down and pulled out the soft fabric, smiling as she stroking it between her fingers. She remembered buying it out of inquisitiveness, captivated by the simple yet exquisite broidery. It must have ended up in her suitcase by accident when she had hastily stuffed a lot of her clothes into a bag after hearing the news about Meher's accident. She decided that it would have to do and began to undress, taking a shower before getting ready. After changing into her clothes, Heer opened her purse and took out a pair of gold pear drop earrings that her mother had given her when she was young. She smiled in remembrance, sadly wishing her mother was with her today to share her happiness. She slowly got up and walked to the mirror, hoping she did not look as different as she felt. She was not at all used to dressing up and going out.

Heer sighed as she looked at herself in the full-view mirror, scrutinizing herself. The lemon chudidar looked even more beautiful than she had imagined. It fit her body like a glove, fitting each curve perfectly, the bottom flowing stylishly. She gently adjusting her earrings and applied a thin layer of lip-gloss. She opted for a natural look, her make-up kept to a minimum. She left her hair loose, the natural curls at the bottom still intact. She confessed to herself that blowing Prem away was something that she hoped for, despite knowing that her appearance wasn't really a significant factor in their date. She trusted that Prem knew the real her by now. But still a nagging feeling itched at her and she was unable to rid herself of it. Taking in a deep breath, she slipped on her healed shoes, grabbed a shawl and stepped outside.

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As Heer walked outside, the warmth from inside the hotel was soon replaced with the cool breeze of outside, causing goosebumps to appear across the skin of her arms. She pulled the shawl closer around her arms and looked around, noticing a sleek black Mercedes parked just meters away. She hesitated, slowly walking up to the car, the black windows intimidating her. She almost jumped as the front window lowered down to reveal a formally dressed man sitting in the driving seat. 'Heer Maan?' he asked pleasantly. She nodded, for that was all she was capable of doing at the time. He came out, amiably opening the door for her and she slid in the back seat. Her shoulders slumped, crestfallen to see Prem not there in the car with her. 'Mr Juneja shall be waiting for you at the meeting spot,' said the driver, as if in tune with her thoughts. She nodded slightly and thanked him. 'I hope I didn't keep you waiting long,' she said softly.

The driver shook his head and laughed. 'No...not at all. You came so soon it surprised me...Since Mr Juneja had said you may take hours,' he chuckled lightly, concentrating on the road. 'He said that, did he?' Heer asked a little embarrassed, muttering it more to herself, already riled up. This was so not how she expected their first date to start. Her mouth suddenly fell open as the sound of 'Let's Get It On,' by Marvin Gaye hit her ears. She stared at the CD player and turned to look at the driver. 'Whose idea was it to put that on?' she asked him sceptically, pointing to the CD player. The driver glanced back for a second and spoke. 'Mr Juneja gave me instructions to play this CD,' he answered simply. Heer glared out of the window, shaking her head incredulously, for she should have known this would be down to him. The line 'if you feel like I feel, baby, then come on, oh, come on, woo let's get it on,' had her body stiffening and she quickly turned to the driver.

'Is it possible to turn it off, please?' she asked the driver and he nodded obediently. 'As you wish Ma'am,' he said, clicking the CD player off. 'Let's get it on,' she thought to herself, rolling her eyes and scoffing. Why did he have to be so irresistibly cheeky? She looked out of the window staring at the passing roads, a feeling of uneasiness swooping through her stomach. She sat in silence throughout the journey, having absolutely no clue where she was being taken. As the driver announced they had arrived, she could feel her heart doing double speed. The driver remained rooted in his seat, yet the door managed to open by itself. She soon realised that is was in fact opened by the one person who was responsible for inflicting blissful chaos in her life as he stared down at her. 'Hey,' said Prem huskily. He gave her a smile that made her go weak in the knees. It was a good thing that she was sitting down otherwise her legs would have given way.

Prem held out his hand for her and she wholly placed her hand in his, the sight of him producing butterflies in her stomach. His crisp white shirt and suave black trousers had her short of breath already. The way his shirt moulded over his perfectly broad shoulders down to the way it tucked neatly in his trousers did nothing to alleviate her sudden lack of oxygen. And who could forget the hair- in all its sleek and shiny glory. She gently stepped out of the car, her hand still in his, and looked down coyly at the gasp that she heard escape his mouth. Prem stared at her dazzling figure. It felt as if he had just had all the air deflated out of him. Her dress was elegantly simple, yet showed off her curves in exactly the right places that she almost exuded beauty. Whilst he tried to piece together the right words to say, a timid 'Hi' was voiced by Heer. Prem's gaze rose from her body to her eyes.

He did not appreciate her looking at the floor and gently placed a finger beneath her chin to lift her head up. 'I'm up here,' he grinned and she bit her lip in order to hide her smile, all fears slowly melting with him around. 'You...Ur...You look absolutely stunning,' he said, scanning her, hoping he did not sound like a babbling idiot. 'Are you trying to kill me?' he added impishly, leaning his head forward. Heer took a step closer to him. 'Why? Is it working?' she asked with similar playfulness. He closed his fingers around her wrist, bringing her hand up to his lips. 'You have no idea,' he uttered as he kissed the back of her hand, absolutely loving the blush that crept up her cheeks. 'You should be glad I'm here on time, seeing as you thought I would take hours,' she said intently. Oh how she wished to give him a piece of her mind for having been such a typical chauvinistic male. Prem laughed, bending down to kiss her cheek.

'Come,' he whispered by her ear, and everything was forgotten in an instant. 'Where are we going?' she asked as he tugged at her arm, leading her through a crowd of people. He turned to grin at her and pointed to the sky. She frowned and looked up in the direction of where he was indicating. 'The London Eye' he simply answered her unasked question. 'Ummm...Did I mention that I am scared of heights?' she asked timorously, her eyes widening at the big wheel like building that they were supposed to be spending their date on. 'I learn something new about you every day,' Prem teased and quickly gave her hand a squeeze as she pouted at him, the fear clearly evident in her expression. 'It's not frightening at all...' he said in an attempt to ease her, '...and I'm here...you can hold on to me...I won't mind one bit,' he added cheekily, earning himself a strike across his arm. 'It's not funny' she shot at him, yet unable to prevent the slow smile that played at the corner of her lips.

Yes I know I am ebil Niti! 😈😆 Will continue with the rest of their date in the next chapter! 😉 For those who do not know about the London Eye, look it up, otherwise it will all start to seem very confusing! 😆 Can't wait to read your comments! 😳

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Am I the first one to comment.............no way hose..........r you sure *batting my eyes*

I am first, yo soy primero...............ok done gloating,😳

let me uncurl my toes..............all right all done..................awwww................I loved how cheesy Prem was with the song selection, but hey Heer liked it I liked it so its ok...............btw was it fate or Heer's subconscious making her pack a dress that would knock Prem's socks off.............I wonder...........hmmmm..........

So you can see all thoughts of Preet just vanished when it comes to Prem.....anyhoo, Preet handled the sisterly grilling pretty well, but then our Heer di is not a drill Sargent, nonetheless, I believe our Preet is ishmart and would not do something stupid like making Meher sad.....or is he opposite of ishmart....hmmm....lets ponder

Thanks Z for making my Prem wear a dress shirt, I am tired of his turtle neck tees in the show, I bet he look absolutely dashing, very scrumptious for his date..........I wonder how long it took Prem to get dress.........cuz guys take forever, my brother's second home is bathroom, so the whole thing about Heer taking a short time to dress made me wonder about Prem's dressing time, I am pretty sure looking hot is not something to be done in a jiffy

we could have a competition on who can dress fast Lallau, Preet, or Prem.........my money is on Lallau😆😆😆 who does he need to impress, Jungi likes him just the way he is

awesome update Z..........can we have the next one soon
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how about now.............where is the update????
Edited by fungrl - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

uffffffffffffffffffffffffffff...

first of all Prem's msile in 2days epi made me totally🤪

and den ur update😆

aai hai marjawan Prem in white shirt.....will it rain😆

i'm sure heer doesn't need to dress up..prem is already bowled by her😳

so the date has jus started now

loveeeeeeeed heer's reply to prem and her stepping closer to him😃

oooo y did u stop here

as u mentioned in ur update u r really EBIL😈

but the updates are worth waiting😃

PS:i hope u r allrite now...😊

Edited by nitzi - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok i loved it..all...so the date is on the london eye...poor heer shes like me...im scared of heights asweell..and lucky prem...hes got heer to hold on 2 him all the date time...anywyz yes u r evil...u left it there..coudlnt u have carried it on till the date has finished...*tries prem wala pout*...did it work?....
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Posted: 16 years ago
i loved every bit of today's update,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
keep going .....................😊and write the next one asap..
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow what a lovely update......
it was beautiful n mesmerizing......
the way u describe Heer getting dressing up and her emtoions in car were amazing.........her nervousness was too cute.......
n what to say about Prem he is the best......
i could understand heer situation no one can be spare from his charm.......
if i was in place of Heer i wud have faint😆
coz he looks too HAWT N SEXY in white☺️☺️
Yaar i really really like ur ff the way u write i could feel it that everything is happening in real.......there is definately some magic.....
yaar seriously i dont know abt London Eye😆
i have to find abt it coz i really dont want to get confuse.....
m really looking forward to their date scenes..
as u told that it was on heights n Heer scared of heights so it will be great to see their romantic and passionate scenes😳
plz update soon i cant wait more😉
plz PM me when u update...


with lots of love
Deeksha
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Posted: 16 years ago
Excellent, waiting for the next update
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Posted: 16 years ago
my spot! 😳

*edited*

I loved it!!!!! *squeals* I want Prem! *pouts* He's so adorably perfect it makes me cry....I'm never gonna gonna fulfill my crazy dreams like this! 😆

Anyways, I loved the whole bit between Preet and Heer! 😛 I loved it! 😃 It sounded so devar-bhabhi like! 😳 And then Heer getting ready for the date, was awesome.! The best bit had to be the CD!😆😆😆 It's so like Prem to do something like that!😳😆😆

*sighs* why did he have to take her somewhere I'm dying to go? Literally that and Madam Tussauads is like the only reason I wanna come to London1😳

Anyways, continue soon! 😃

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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