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Posted: 16 years ago
wonderrrrr ful !!!! 👏 👏 👏 👏
awesme.... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
wat a way to show an exit of parth... ws so deep..👏
wil be waitng fr him to be back.... i mean junhui wil be waiting😆... n we al too !!!
😍
He looked at her in surprise and his gaze dropped down to the bracelet. A round wooden bangle. 🤪 🤪
poor parth..cant go beyond dem!! 😳 so sweet!!
She leaned and gave him a one armed hug, he reciprocated briefly and then he disentangled himself gently.
He gently pushed Deepika towards him, whose face was now hidden by her hair. She leaned on his sholder. 😳
true frenz dipi n parth must be... dnt knw wht happened in past in college.... wil hav to wait 2 knw dat... 🤔



thanks fr update yar..... it satisfies our hunger.... helps us in keeping patience to wait fr ur updates.... keep putting up.... 😃 😃
well done!!!
waiting fr moreeeeeeeeee!!!!
😍

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Posted: 16 years ago

😭 Path mera Parth jaa raha hai! 😕 Junhui se baat tak nahi ki... I mean thoda bahut... Sirf uska naam seedha saadha liya aur.... Gaya.... Ooo.... Jaane wala.... Wapas jaldi aa.... Jab tu aayega tab yahan koi tumhara raah dekh raha hoga.... Hope so by that time she has sorted out her feelings! 😕

Loved the way Parth ji handed over Dipi's responsibilty to Aru dearest..... Haiii 😳

Kuch naa kehke sab kuch kehke jaa raha hai mera yaar.... jaldi wapas aane! 👏

The feeling of seperation is greater when the person is not around... Untill you really realise he is no more around.... Want to see Junhui's feelings... I know soon we would be seeing her part of feelings captured in diary or PDA or definitely some other innovative way 😉

Good parts.,.... Great writing... Waiting for more! ⭐️

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena..

wow wow pooja....its awsome updates yar thnx
👏

parth revealed his past by diary thts a gr8 idea pooja👍🏼....

and todays update its wonderful but whats this😲,,, parth is leaving😕....
offcorse on a new mission but can't he stay here in SS?/

we'll definately miss him😔.....

ohh and deepika feel sad for him haan😔 but junhui ka kya ho ga ab....i mean she loves him na and he too love her then why dosn't he told her??

well i enjoyed reading ur update...choti hai thu kya ho no need to say sorry pooja...thnx for the update😊.....

update soon😛...want to know more about it😉

😳

oho not to worry in the least! maharaaj jaldi wapas padharenge!!!!

ur unke aur junhui ke beech.........

yeah will update soon dear

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: keep-smiling

wonderrrrr ful !!!! 👏
awesme.... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
wat a way to show an exit of parth... ws so deep..👏
wil be waitng fr him to be back.... i mean junhui wil be waiting😆... n we al too !!!
😍
He looked at her in surprise and his gaze dropped down to the bracelet. A round wooden bangle. 🤪 🤪
poor parth..cant go beyond dem!! 😳 so sweet!!
She leaned and gave him a one armed hug, he reciprocated briefly and then he disentangled himself gently.
He gently pushed Deepika towards him, whose face was now hidden by her hair. She leaned on his sholder. 😳
true frenz dipi n parth must be... dnt knw wht happened in past in college.... wil hav to wait 2 knw dat... 🤔



thanks fr update yar..... it satisfies our hunger.... helps us in keeping patience to wait fr ur updates.... keep putting up.... 😃 😃
well done!!!
waiting fr moreeeeeeeeee!!!!
😍

thanku thanku😳

thanx for w8ing 4 him!!! Weel, you will have some fireworks on his return, i promise!😉

will be updating soooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

😭Path mera Parth jaa raha hai! 😕Junhui se baat tak nahi ki... I mean thoda bahut... Sirf uska naam seedha saadha liya aur.... Gaya.... Ooo.... Jaane wala.... Wapas jaldi aa.... Jab tu aayega tab yahan koi tumhara raah dekh raha hoga.... Hope so by that time she has sorted out her feelings! 😕

Loved the way Parth ji handed over Dipi's responsibilty to Aru dearest..... Haiii 😳

Kuch naa kehke sab kuch kehke jaa raha hai mera yaar.... jaldi wapas aane! 👏

The feeling of seperation is greater when the person is not around... Untill you really realise he is no more around.... Want to see Junhui's feelings... I know soon we would be seeing her part of feelings captured in diary or PDA or definitely some other innovative way 😉

Good parts.,.... Great writing... Waiting for more! ⭐️

okay, parth aapka ho gaya! par agar janhavi ne aapko kiya, jaise wo T-....mujhe mat batana plz!!!!😆

okay a journal is coming up soory 2 rite, tis nt junhui's :( .....

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Pooj@

okay, parth aapka ho gaya! par agar janhavi ne aapko kiya, jaise wo T-....mujhe mat batana plz!!!!😆

okay a journal is coming up soory 2 rite, tis nt junhui's :( .....

Pujja ji.... Junhui jab tak confess nahi karti, tab tak Parth mera... 😳Confess karne ke baad, I will gratefully you know, sacrifice him.... Isi bahane se agar jaldi dil ki baat zubaan par aayi, to credit mera hua naa!? 😉

As for journal... I am waiting... And not required it must be Junhui's... You have your story planned, so I know it is going to be good.... So no sorries! 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
great great great update dear👏,but but but parth going me not feeling happy😔😔,why is he going dear,Junhui yaar usse toh atleast ek baar baat karna tha naa parth,dear you love her❤️ naa uska dil tut jayega💔 ,

oh my Deepi
🤗

He gently pushed Deepika towards him, whose face was now hidden by her hair. She leaned on his sholder. 😳
yarra jaldi aana re aake phir naa jana re..................................😛
will be waiting for more and more😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Pujja ji.... Junhui jab tak confess nahi karti, tab tak Parth mera... 😳Confess karne ke baad, I will gratefully you know, sacrifice him.... Isi bahane se agar jaldi dil ki baat zubaan par aayi, to credit mera hua naa!? 😉

As for journal... I am waiting... And not required it must be Junhui's... You have your story planned, so I know it is going to be good.... So no sorries! 😊

Alrite wo aapka okay???? are sacrifice wagera karne ki jaroorat nahi hain....u can u know share him or something?????

so an update coming up!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ruha

great great great update dear👏,but but but parth going me not feeling happy😔😔,why is he going dear,Junhui yaar usse toh atleast ek baar baat karna tha naa parth,dear you love her❤️ naa uska dil tut jayega💔 ,

oh my Deepi
🤗

He gently pushed Deepika towards him, whose face was now hidden by her hair. She leaned on his sholder. 😳
yarra jaldi aana re aake phir naa jana re..................................😛

will be waiting for more and more😛

😳😉😆

posting!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Okay so an update coming up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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