Aashna.......Sujal&Kashish.....Last Part....8/30 - Page 89

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -Aarti-

very fasht fasht update very good....dono hi part ache the phele wala mein divorce nahi hota toh acha hota lakin hogaya kya kar sakte hai koi baat nahi dillo ka rista hai kagaz pe sign karne se nahi toote ga........yeh wala part bhi amazing tha shuruvatt achi thi resturent wala scene was good.....aur jab light chali gai thi woh toh mindblowing tha inke ghar ki light humesha keliye cutva deni chhaiye.......fantastic update waiting fr next part plzz update soon........luv aarti.....

hey aarti sweetheart no than 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked both the parts....we knw u must be sad that they got divorced but it was needed as u must have realised...aur sahi kaha tumne....dil ke rishte kagazon ke mohtaj nahin hote tho jab thk unke dil mein pyar hai woh dono aik hi rahenge...we are glad u liked the resteraunt scene..😆good idea jaan, yeh light katwane ka kaam hum tumhe saunmp dete hain, we are sure tum ache se handle karogi isse😆no thanx once agen...will surely update soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
HI! Kashish,Summi that was great part. Thanks for PM. Please continue soon . BYE AND LOVE BOTH OF YOU😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Lovely part dear.. enjoyed it... liked the bit when the lights went of.. wish it could hve stayed for long.. also liked the lunch part.. it was cool.. Kashish slightly developing feelings for Sujal.. thts really gud.. hoping for the best in the future.. jus wish Sujal gets his luv...
Guys u r amazing n super cool.. didn expect an update so soon.. well thanx.. will b waiting for the next one...

hey shweta dear thank u soo much 4 ure comments!!...we are glad u liked this part...we are more than happy that u liked the part the lights had gone out...we knw it wud have been gr88 if it staye dthat way for longer par kya karen, u cant trust it...we are more than happy u liked the lunch part..yes she is slightly developing feelings for him which is gud...and like u must knw he has got his love....thank u soo much 4 ure compliments...will surely update soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah dear its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍superb plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"I remember how it used to be,
when nothing else matter but KASH and DMG,
KASH Salsa dance, KASH fight, and Basket Ball Match.....
I miss KASH, I wish KASH could see,
although KASH are here, I miss KASH and Original Armaan-Ridhima .
I remember when you both fight,
I remember when you both cry we also cry with u,
I miss those days when Armaan come to meet Ridhima
through Pipe at Night,
I miss those days when you both sit on fire escape and talk,
I don't want to see u again with same charm & passion.
I MISS KASH"



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Posted: 16 years ago

Part-28

Next morning,

Sujal and Kashish are still sleeping...Sujal is first to wake up....he opens his eyes and is suprised to himself sleeping close to Kashish......because his head was on her shoulder....and his arm was around her neck........he lifts his head from her shoulder but the sudden moment hurts his head...and he quickly holds his head.......he realizes that he has a hangover because he drank a lot the night before......he removes his hand which was around Kashish....his movement wakes up Kashish......she looks at him holding his head.......and puts her own hand on his head........

Kashish: tum thik to hana Sujal..

Sujal: haan...woh bas thoda sa sir me dard hai...raat ka hangover abhi tak nahin utra...pata nahin tum 7 peene ke baad bhi kaise itni fresh lag rahi ho

Kashish: kaun se 7...maine to kuch nahi peeya..

Sujal just looked at her in surprise...

Sujal: kya matlab tum ne pee nahin?...

Kashish: maine aaj tak ki apni zindagi me kabhi peeya hi nahi....tumne us din suna nahi maine Abhinav se kaha tha us raat club me ...main nahi peeti kyunki peene ke bad log apne hosh gawa dete hai..

Sujal remembers the moments from that day at the club...

Sujal: oh haan...main bhool gaya tha...lekin kal raat to tumne mere saamne pee thi...

Kashish: woh koi taqilla nahi tha...woh sirf paani tha...

Sujal: paani...woh paani kaise tha...bartender ne to hum dono ko diya tha na...to mera taqilla kaise hua agar tumhara paani tha to?

Kashish: Sujal..tumhe to kuch bhi nahi pata....jab koi ladki bartender ko wink karke order deti hai iska matlab woh apne partner ko pilake use nashe me utarnewali hoti hai......aur maine bhi wahi kiya.....aur woh bartender bhi samajdar nikla......aur tumhare nashe ke bad maine use jyada paise pay kiye aur main tumhe kitni muskil se yaha leke aayi.....ab samaj me aaya ki Girls are Smarter than boys...

Sujal stares at her..with a shocked expression......

Sujal: to yeh sab tumne jaan booj kar kiya...par US me tum weekend ko club me kya karti thi

Kashish: main akshar club me race ki agli raat jati thi....aur hamare college ke sabhi tumhe wahi pe milte.....usme pata chal jata ki kal kaun kaun race kar raha hai....aur phir jise muje lage ki muje harne ka khatra hai uske saath me peene ki shart lagati ....aur jyadatar woh log 8 se 9 handle kar lete the.....aur uske bad to woh log pure 24 ghante tak sote rehte....aur mera kaam aasan ban jata tha...muje sirf bartender ko 50 dollers dene padte the.....thats was so easy...

Sujal: iska matlab tum cheating karti thi?

Kashish: karti thi ka kya matlab Sujal....kal raat hi to ki tumhare saath...

Sujal: hmmm...to kal raat tumne khud na pee kar muje pila diya...tumhe cheating karne ke liye sazaa to milni hi chahiye...

Kashish: saza kis baat ki....maine to thodi si masti ki....aur Sujal tum hi to meri wild life dekhna chahte the...

Sujal: jaanta hoon...lekin tumne muje pilaya aur khud nahin piya...ab yeh kahan ka insaaf hua...thats really not fair jaan

Kashish: hmm...thik hai batao ...muje kya karna hoga...

Sujal: tumhe...hmmm...let me think...

Sujal takes his time...pretending to think about her punishment.......

Kashish: itna kya soch rahe ho...

Sujal: ab soch ke bataunga na...itni mushkil se mauka milla hai...aise kaise jaane dun..

Kashish: Sujal ...tum aise sochte ho to muje darr lagta hai..

Sujal just gives her a big smile........his eyes expressing the love he has for her.....

Sujal: main sirf mazaak kar raha tha...aur tumhari sazaa yeh hai ki tumhe zindagi bhar ke liye muj jaise pagal ke saath rehna parega...ab isse zyada badi sazaa aur kya hosakti hai...muje tumhare saath ke alawa aur kuch nahin chahiye...ek aur baat...main chahta hoon ki jaise tumne kal apni zindagi ke palon ko jiya hai...tum aage jaa kar bhi unhe jiyogi kyunki kal jitni tum khush lag rahi thi...utna khush maine tumhe pehle nahin dekhe...to bolo manzoor hai tumhe?

Kashish: agar tum apne aap ko pagal kehte ho to main to tumse bhi badi pagal hoon jo tumse paglo ki tarah pyar karti hai......aur yahi saza hai meri to muje yeh saza her janam me chahiye.....aur rahi baat kal ki to woh tumhare saath ke bina mumkin hi nahi tha is liye maine tumse kaha na ki jab bhi tum chahoge main woh wild life tumhare saath jine ko taiyaar hoon.....lekin meri khushi tumhari yeh choti si muskurahat me hai aur jiske liye main kuch bhi kar sakti hoon....yaha tak ki tum jaise pagal ko sambhal sakti hoon aur cheating bhi kar sakti hoon....

Sujal looks at her with his love embedded in his eyes.....then hugs her tightly....

Sujal: i love you so much Kashish...main tumhe bata nahin sakta ki mein aaj kitna khush hoon...tumne apne pyar se meri zindagi ko jannat bana diya hai...maine jab bhi bhagwan se kuch maanga to tumhara saath...tumhara pyar maanga...aur aaj jab muje dono mil chuke hain to muje aur kuch bhi nahin chahiye...meri duniya tumpe shuru hokar tumhi pe khatam hoti hai...isliye tumhara saath meri zaroorat hai...aur tumne mera saath hamesha nibhaya hai...

Kashish: Sujal....bhagwan se mangi her khwaish ko tumne tumhare pyaar se pura kiya hai....aur Sujal....main tumse bahot pyaar karti hoon... I love you jaan.....

Kashish turns her head and kisses his forehead.....while her fingers were still running through his hair........with every passing second Sujal starts to relax more...because to him her fingers were taking away all his pain......

Sujal: ek baat kahun...tum main ek khoobi hai...tumhare chute hi mere saare dard mitt jaate hain...sach me tumhare haathon me jadoo hai...

Kashish: to phir tum aise hi reh sakte ho...main tumhara sara dard durr karna chahti hoon jo kal raat meri masti ki waje se ho raha hai..

Sujal: hey...aisa nahin hai...kya tumhari wajah se kabhi muje dard ho sakta hai?...kya tum muje dard de sakti ho?...aur rahi kal raat ki baat to woh pal me kabhi nahin bhool sakta kyunki kal raat maine tumhara ek alag andaaz dekha aur muje woh hamesha hi yaad rahega..

Kashish: main janti hoon ki main ab kabhi tumhe sapne me bhi dard dene ka soch nahi sakti....kyunki bahot pyaar karti hoon tumse...I love you jaan...

Sujal: i love you too jaan...

He holds her tight....while presisng his lips on her neck...... Kashish closes her eyes living the moment.....a moment which only belongs to them.....she gently moves her hands on his back..He loves feeling close to her....he gently moves his lips along her neckline...then moves back and looks at her...her eyes were still closed...he kisses her eyes then both her cheeks...and moves closer to her lips......as soon as she feels his breath on her lips she closes her eyes tightly...he smiles at her reaction....moves near her ear and whispers...

Sujal: raat ka badla poora hogaya...agar kal raat tumne muje nashe me utara to abhi maine wahin kiya hai...

Kashish opens her eyes and looks at him....

Kashish: kal raat tumhe kuch yaad bhi hai ki nahi....bar pe hi tum to so gaye the...

Sujal: nahin...uske baad pata nahin kya hua...haan muje itna yaad hai ke aankh band karne se pehle maine tumhara chehra dekha tha...

Kashish: aur tumhare aankh bandh karne pe tumne muje ek pal ke liye bhi nahi choda...yaha tak ke muje change bhi nahi karne diya...

Sujal moves back to take a proper look at her...

Sujal: oh...i hope maine tumse kuch galat nahin kaha...and i'm sorry...tumhe raat ko kitni problem huyi hogi inhi kapdon me sone ke baad...muje sach me pata nahin tha ki main aakhir kar kya raha hoon...

Kashish holds his face and looks into his eyes....

Kashish: taklif muje tab hoti jab main tumhari marzi ke khilaf hoke tumse durr hoti....aur tumne aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya Sujal jiski waje se tumhe sharminda hona pade ya tumhe mafi magni pade.....aur agar tumne nashe me muje kuch bhi kaha hota to woh tumhara hakk banta hai.....Sujal main koi aur nahi tumhari biwi hoon.....tumhara mere kareeb rehne pe hakk banta hai.....muje pyaar karne pe hakk banta hai....is liye ple sorry mat kaho mujse....

Sujal looks in her eyes....and sees pure love and care for him....and only for him....

Sujal: theek hai...abse is baat ko lekar tumse sorry nahin kahunga...aur jahan tak tumhare kareeb rehne ya tumse pyar karne ki baat aati hai...to main chah kar bhi tumse door nahin hosakta...aur na hi khud ko tumse pyar karne se rok sakta hoon...kyunki tumhare kareeb rehne se meri saansein chalti hai...aur tumse pyar karne se meri dhadkan...isliye jeene ke liye muje tumhare kareeb rehna hoga...aur har pal tumse pyar karna hoga...

Kashish: manzur hai muje tumhara mere kareeb rehna aur tumhara mujse pyaar karna bhi....lekin abhi ke liye muje fresh hone jana hai...

Sujal: jaana zaroori hai...mera matlab tum aise hi itni khubsuarat lag rahi ho...

Kashish: tumhari nazar me to main hamesha khubsurat hi rehti hoon...lekin ab muje sach me change karna hai....

Sujal just smiles and moves back...

Sujal: jaao change karlo...raat ko bhi meri wajah se tum nahin kar paayi...tum fresh ho jao main tumhare liye coffee order karta hoon...

Kashish: thik hai main bas abhi yun gayi aur yun aayi....

Kashish gets up from the bed and straightens her dress.....she walks to her bag and takes out her clothes....she was about to go to washroom but goes towards dresser....she puts her clothes on the dresser and looks for painkiller in her purse...she takes the medicine and a glass of water to Sujal.....she hands him the medicine and water.......

Kashish: Sujal....tum yeh painkiller le lo phir coffee pine ke bad...you will be ok..

Sujal smiles at her but doesnt take the medicine...rather he opens his mouth...

Sujal: tum hi khilado...i'm sure tab dard khud ba khud bhaag jayega...

Kashish puts the medicine in his mouth and makes him drink the water....she bends down and kisses his forehead....

Sujal: lo...jaise socha tha bilkul wahin hua...sir ka dard to gayab hi hogaya jab tumhare honton ne usse chua..

Kashish smiles at him and slowly taps his head with her hand..she puts the glass on the table than goes to the washroom..Sujal looks at the washroom door and smiles...he picks up the phone and orders coffee...after 10 mins Kashish comes out wearing knee length jeans skirt with white shirt while drying her hair..Sujal looks at her and smiles...

Sujal: lagta hai tumne mujhe marwane ki planning kar li hai...

Kashish: ab maine kya kiya...

Sujal: ab tum itni hot lagogi to mere jalne ke kitne chances hain...tumhe andaza bhi hai is baat ka...

Kashish: tum kya keh rahe ho meri kuch samaj me hi nahi aa raha.....jalne ke chances?...

Sujal: ab jaan log hotness se to jalte hi haina...tum nahin samjogi...

Kashish: muje samajna bhi nahi....

Kashish sits down infront of the dresser....starts to comb her hair.....somone knocks on the door....Kashish looks at Sujal....he gets up to open the door.....the waiter brought them their coffee and breakfast....Sujal takes the tray from him and gives him tip....he brings the tray inside placing it on the table...

Sujal: jaan tum shuru karo me fresh hoke aata hoon...

Kashish: thik hai jaldi aana......

Kashish gets up and takes out his clothes.....then hands them to him...

Sujal: thanks jaan...main bas abhi aaya 10 minute me...

He takes his clothes and goes to the washroom... she sits on the sofa and starts to prepare breakfast......she makes strong black coffee without sugar and milk for him....then starts to read newspaper while waiting....he walks out of the washroom wearing grey jeans and black high neck shirt......

Sujal: Kashish...tumne abhi thak nashta shuru kyun nahin kiya?dekho thanda horaha hai

Kashish: its ok......yeh lo tumhari black coffee....tumhe iski ab sabse jyada zaroorat hai....isi peete hi jo abhi thoda sa hangover hai woh hi utar jayega..

Sujal sits beside her...then takes the coffee with a smile...he takes a sip.....it makes him feel better...he looks at her..

Sujal: thanks jaan...wake me yun lagraha hai jaise hangover utar gaya..

Kashish: Sujal....tum yeh puri coffee ka cup pee rahe ho aur uske bad hi tumhe breakfast milega...

Sujal: poori?woh bhi milk aur sugar ke binna...mujse nahin yeh saara piya jayega..

Kashish: peeya jayega...aur jaan maine bahot pi hai...infact black coffee meri sabse favorite hai....ab main madad karti hoon sab ho jayega.....

Kashish takes the glass from his hand than closes his eyes with her hand....than makes him drink all the coffee by holding his cup in her hand....he finishs drinking it then opens his eyes and looks at her...a smile appears on his face...

Sujal: maine aaj se pehle itni meethi coffee nahin pee...tumhare chune se is coffee ka taste hi badal gaya..

Kashish: koi baat nahi ghar chalne ke bad ek din isi haath se karele ka juice bhi pilaungi...tab tum aise hi kehna thik hai..

Sujal: tumhare haath se to zeher bhi meetha lagega...phir woh to sirf karele ka juice hai...

Kashish: muje tumse ab koi baat nahi karni...

Sujal: arre...ab maine aisa kya kehdiya ke aap humse baat hi nahin karna chahti..

Kashish: tumhe kya lagta hai ki main kabhi tumhe zeher de sakti...tum na mujse baat hi mat karo...

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: arre jaan main to sirf tumhe example de raha tha...tum thodi na muje zeher dogi...achcha i'm really sorry...dubara nahin kahunga...promise

Kashish: ab to pakka tumse baat nahi karungi....mujse sorry bhi kehne lage ...

Sujal: oops galti hogayi...achcha ab nahin kahunga promise...lekin muje itni badi sazaa mat do...agar tum mujse baat nahin karogi to main kaise jiyunga..

Kashish: aur tumhe kya lagta hai main tumse baat kiye bina reh sakti hoon..

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: nahin...kyunki main tumhe apni baaton se itna irritate karta ke tum muje daant deti..

Kashish: lagta hai wahi honewala hai Mumbai jake....ab tum jaldi se apna breakfast pura karo...phir hum chalte hai aaj tumhari shopping karne...

Sujal: meri shopping?...lekin muje to kuch nahin chahiye...haan tumhari kar sakte hain...

Kashish: meri ho chuki hai....aaj main tumhari karnewali hoon.

Sujal: acha theek hai...jaise tum chaho...chalo breakfast karlete hain

Kashish: ya sure.....

They eat their breakfast...after finishing they leave to go shopping

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After sometime they reach the shopping centre and go into a shop to look at clothes for Sujal...Kashish drags him to the casual clothes section...he just looks at her...

Sujal: Kashish...hum yahan kya kar rahe hai...tumhe pata haina ki main aise kapde nahin pehanta..

Kashish: janti hoon ki nahi pehente lekin ab se tum pehnonge...kyunki main aaj se tumhari shopping karnewali hoon...

Sujal: oh...to ab muje yeh bhi karna hoga...

Kashish: Sujal yeh to kuch bhi nahi.....abhi to bahot kuch baki hai...

Sujal just looks at her....raising his eyebrows...

Sujal: chaliye...jaisa aap chahen...

Kashish walks towards the racks searching for clothes...She spots casual t-shirts on a table on the opposite side of the rack ...Kashish chooses red one then looks at him...

Sujal: aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Kashish: red aur blue...

Sujal: hmmm...i think blue zyada better hoga

Kashish: thik hai to hum blue lete hai...

She puts the red one back and picks up a blue one....

Sujal: actually i think red aur bhi zyada achcha hoga

Kashish: thik hai to main red wali ko pay karke aati hoon....

She was about to go when he stops her...

Sujal: Kashish tum blue hi lelo...tumhi ne kaha tha na ki blue mujpe acha lagta hai

Kashish: you know what.tumse jyada confused insaan maine aaj tak nahi dekha.....ab main blue aur red dono hi lene wali hoon ...lekin usse pehle tum ise try karne fitting room me ja rahe ho..

Sujal: kya!...fitting room...Kashish i hate going into fitting rooms...yeh thik hi honge

Kashish: Sujal....fitting room se kaisi nafrat...ab chalo jaldi se jao ....main yaha bahar tumhara wait karti hoon...

After some time she manages to convince him...he goes into the fitting room...15 minutes have passed but there is no sign of Sujal...she gets tired of waiting so she goes into the fitting room and knocks on the door....

Sujal: who is it?

Kashish: Sujal...main aur kaun....now open the door...

Sujal just opens the door and she steps in...

Kashish: tum itni dair se andar kya kar rahe ho...

Sujal: woh muje ek private call karni thi...isliye dair hogayi...

Kashish: private call...kisse....do apna mobile muje...

Sujal: arre Kashish samja karo...private hai...arre Kashish...

She manages to take the phone and looks through it...she checks the dialled numbers and sees that he had tried to call her 6 times...but her phone was on silent so she didnt pick up......Kashish looks at him in surprise....

Kashish: Sujal.....tumne muje 10 mins me 6 bar miss call kiya...kya koi kaam tha...

Sujal: ofcourse...tabhi to call kiya...muje is t-shirt ke liye jeans chahiye the...

Kashish: ohh...tumhe jeans chahiye....tum do mins ruko main abhi dhudhke aayi....

She turns around to go when he quickly holds onto her waist and pulls her back in his arms whilst closing the door....she is surprised and looks at him....

Kashish: Suja kya kar rahe ho...chodo muje....koi dekh lega...

Sujal smiles and looks at her while gently moving closer to her and her back hits the door...

Sujal: to dekh lene do...tum koi ghair thodi na ho...meri biwi ho tum

Kashish lowers her eyes....

Kashish: lekin tumhe to jeans chahiye thi na Sujal...

Sujal moves his hand closer to her face whilst gently caressing her cheek...

Sujal: tumhe kya lagta hai maine sirf jeans ke liye tumhe bulaya...woh to ek bahana tha...

Kashish looks into his eyes...

Kashish: bahana?,,,

Sujal: hmmm...bahana...

He gets lost in the intensity of her eyes...gently he moves forward and kisses her cheek...she closes her eyes....while she was still holding shirts......she leans back further pressing her back to the door as he moves forward....... He looks at her and holds her waist pulling her into his arms...he moved down and gently kisses her shoulder whilst moving his lips across her neckline...her heartbeats increase and she starts to lose sense of everything around here except the feel and presence of Sujal..she feels in as if she is in a trance whenever Sujal is close to her...she moves her hand on his back.....the shirts from her hand slip and fall to the ground.....the noise of the hangers hitting the ground bring both of the lover birds back into reality.....Sujal moves back and looks at her...he sees that she is really embarrssed about what happened between them just moments ago.......

Sujal: woh...main uthata hoon...

He bends down and picks up the shirts and passes them to her while changing the topic........

Sujal: yeh shirt theek lag rahi hai Kashish?

Kashish just doesnt say anything and takes the shirts from his hand ....she puts them on the side....without saying anything goes into his arms....Sujal looks at her a smile appears on his face...he gently wraps his arms around her...

Sujal: woh...i'm sorry...thoda zyada hogaya...muje pata hi nahin chala..

Kashish holds him more tightly....

Kashish: I am sorry Sujal.....

Sujal: Kashish...tum sorry kyun kehrahi ho?

Kashish: meri waje se tumhe khud ko control karna pad raha hai....

Sujal: tumse kisne kaha hai yeh...aisa kuch bhi nahin hai...tum kyun is baat ko lekar hamesha upset hojati ho...maine kaha na muje tumse koi shikayat nahin hai

Kashish: thik hai ab se upset nahi hongi........ab khush..

Sujal: bohat...ab chalo muje ek sweet si smile do..

Kashish looks up and smiles at him....he bends down and kiss her forehead........

Kashish: achcha ab tum ruko main jeans leke aati hoon..

Sujal: theek hai...main yahin pe rukta hoon...aur sunno...i love you

Kashish: I love you too...

She leaves with a smile while Sujal watches her go with a smile.....after 5 mins she comes back with 2 pairs of jeans........she knocks on the door......Sujal opens the door and sees Kashish holding 2 pairs of jeans

Kashish: yeh lo.....main bahar tumhare liye kuch aur dekhti hoon.....

Sujal: theek hai....main abhi try karta hoon aur phir tumhe dikhata hoon...

Kashish: hmm...lekin pehle red wali....

Kashish closes the door and goes back outside.....she is looking around and chooses a few shirts n ties..Sujal comes out wearing the red shirt and jeans.......she is lost in selecting clothes that she doesnt notice....

Sujal: Kashish...kaisi lag rahi hai

Kashish turns around and looks at him.....continously staring at him....he looks at her in surprise.....then waves his hand infront of her which brings her back to reality,,

Sujal: kya hua...kahan kho gayi?

Kashish: yahi ki kash tum muje panch saal pehle mile hote...

Sujal looks at her confused....

Sujal: paanch saal pehle?...woh kyun

Kashish: panch saal pehle agar tum muje college me mile hote to tum mere BF hote ....aur sari university ki ladkiyaan mujse bahot jalti...

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: paanch saal baad behtar nahin hai...kyunki ab main tumhara husband hoon aur mujpe tumhara poora haq hai

Kashish: I think tumhara option jyada better hai.....tum isme bahot achche lag rahe ho.....koi college me jate ladke ki tarah......ab tum change karlo main in sabki payment karari hoon...

Sujal: theek hai main bas abhi aaya...

Sujal goes back to the fitting room....after sometime he comes back out with the clothes...they go to the checkout and pay for the things......and leave.....

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After having lunch Sujal and Kashish were sitting at a cafe drinking coffee... Kashish looks at Sujal...

Sujal: kya baat hai...kuch kehna hai?

Kashish: muje kahi jana hai.....tumhare saath...

Sujal: haan to batao na...kahan jaana hai tumhe...

Kashish: woh yaha pe ek church hai.....jaha pe kehte hai ki agar aap apne pyaar ke saath jao to aapka pyaar beimtihaan badhta hai....aur main waha pe kabhi nahi gayi kyunki mere pass koi aisa nahi tha jise maine kabhi dil se chaha ho....lekin aaj main waha pe tumhare saath jana chahti hoon....tum chaloge na mere saath Sujal....

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: isse badi khushkismati mere liye kya hogi Kashish ke tum wahan pe mere saath jaana chahti ho...hum zaroor chalenge...pehle tum coffee khatam karlo...

Kashish: thik hai Sujal......aaj main bahot khush hoon Sujal......

Kashish looks at him than she holds her cup .....she looks at the streets of Paris while sipping her coffee...

Sujal: aur jaise ke maine vaada kiya hai...main tumhari zindagi ke aane waale har pal ko khushiyon se bhar dunga...

Kashish looks at him then puts her cup down....She holds his hand while looking into his eyes....

Kashish: I love you...

He gently places his other hand on hers.....holding them tightly...

Sujal: i love you too jaan...

Kashish: Sujal ab chale.....isse pehle ki andhera ho jaye...

Sujal: haan chalo...

They pay the bill and leave from there in a cab....after 20 minutes they reach a church...they pay for the cab then Sujal holds Kashish's hand.........they walk inside the church together..... Kashish sits down on the front pew closing her eyes while holding on to his hand....she was praying while Sujal was staring at her... After sometime she gently opens her eyes and looks at him...she realizes he was staring at her instead of praying...

Kashish: aise kyun dekh rahe ho....

Sujal: kuch nahin...bas tumhari masumiyat me kahin kho gaya tha...

Kashish smiles at him...

Kashish: tumne kya manga Sujal....kyunki yaha pe sabki khwaish puri hoti hai..

Sujal: maine to kuch nahin maanga kyunki jo muje chahiye tha zindagi me...woh to muje mil gaya hai...

Kashish: woh to main bhi janti hoon lekin kya uske alawa aur kuch nahi chahiye Sujal...

Sujal: muje aur kuch nahin chahiye...maine bhagwan se tumhara saath maanga tha lekin unhone muje tumhara saath aur pyar dono diya hai...ab muje iske alawa aur kya chahiye hoga...haan main bas yahin dua maangta hoon ke meri Kashish ki har khwaish poori hojaye..

Kashish: tumhe pata hai Sujal maine kya manga......maine aaj yaha pe yeh manga ki main apni pichli zinagi puri tarah se bhul jana chahti hoon....main zindagi me tumhare saath aage badh ke tumse beimtihaan mohabbat karna chahti hoon....bina kisi darr ke.....sari had par kar ke...tumse pyaar karna chahti hoon.....Sujal meri yeh khawaish puri hogi na...

Sujal smiles at her and places his palm on her cheek...

Sujal: zaroor hogi Kashish...aur agar bhagwan ne tumhari is khwaish ko poora nahin kiya to main is khwaish ko poora karunga...meri zindagi ka maksad hi tumhari khushi hai to mein tumhare har sapne har khwaish ko poora karunga...muje poora yakeen hai ke ek din humara pyar saari mushkile durr kardega...aur tum apne saare dard bhool jaogi...

Kashish: aaj main is jagah inke samne tumse kehti hoon Sujal ki maine tumse jitna pyaar kiya hai utna maine kabhi apne sapno me bhi nahi socha tha......aur meri zindagi me maine agar kisi ko is hadd tak chaha hai to tum woh pehle aur aakhri insaan ho jo is Kashish ki zindagi me hai.....aur hamesha Kashish ke saath ek hi naam juda rahega uske Sujal ka......jise ab koi alag nahi kar sakta kyunki Kashish to bani hi hai sirf Sujal aur uske pyaar ke liye......

Sujal smiles at her and then hugs her tightly...

Sujal: aur tumhara Sujal tumse yeh vaada karta hai ke aaj ke baad woh gumm aur takleef ko tumhe chune bhi nahin dega...aaj se tumhari duniya me sirf aur sirf khushian hongi...pyar hoga...bas...

Kashish: I love you Jaan so much....more than myself..

Sujal: and i love you...yeh Sujal sirf aur sirf apni Kashish ke naam pe jeeta hai...meri har saans tumhare naam se chalti hai...

Kashish: bahot achche se janti hoon ki kitna pyaar karte ho....woh bhi paglo ki tarah...

Sujal: ab kya karun...tum ho hi aisi ki tumse sirf normal tareeke se pyar nahin kiya ja sakta...tumhe pagalo ki tarah bhi chahun to woh bhi kam hai...

Kashish: aur muje bhi koi aitraaz nahi tumhara mere pyaar ke liye pagal hona....lekin Sujal abhi ke liye to chodo....koi dekh lega..

Sujal: to dekh lene do...waise bhi upar waala hume har pal dekhta hai...jab unse koi darr nahin to logon se kya darna...

Kashish: lekin koi kya sochega ki church ke andar....

Sujal: jaan church ke bahar bhi to tum yahin kehti ho...to yeh batao ke main kaunsi jagah pe tumse romance karsakta hoon?

Kashish: hmmm......bedroom me...

Sujal smiles and lets go...

Sujal: theek hai...ab tumne kehdiya to taiyaar rehna...

He just winks at her...

Kashish: ab chale....ki yahi rehne ka irada hai..

Sujal: irada to kuch aur hi hai...matlab main abhi samjata hoon...chalo

Sujal holds her hand and takes her towards the candles...some of the candles were lit already and placed on the side...

Kashish: ab hum yaha kya kar rahe hai.....hume bahar jana tha ...

Sujal: haan...lekin usse pehle hum dono milke yahan candle jalayenge...hum is church ko apne pyar se roshan karenge...so would you like to light the candle with me?

Kashish: puchne ki zaroorat hai...

Sujal: haan hai...agar tum na jalana chaho to...

Kashish: kabhi aisa ho sakta hai ki tum kuch kaho aur main tumhe mana karoon.....

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: nahin...aisa to nahin ho sakta...

He stands behind her while placing his head on her shoulder and one arm around her waist...he holds her hand with the other and takes it towards a candle stick that was already lit...she holds the candle whilst he holding her hand and they lifted the candle to the unlit candle stick...he turns his head towards her and smiles at her...Kashish also turns head and looked at him....she lowered her eyes and than moved her hand.....they finally lit the candle and than thy put that on the side..Sujal then gently let go of her and moved back...

Sujal: hogaya...ab hum ja sakte hain

Kashish: hmmm...chalo...

she turned around facing him...she looked down and holds his hand in her while locking her fingers with his..He just smiles and then locked his fingers with hers too...she just looked up and he passed her a smile...they both then walked out of the church hand in hand...

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Two more beautiful days pass with the love between Sujal and Kashish growing every passing second...within these 2 days......the love birds have visited many different places all around Paris.........their relationship grew stronger as each day passed...it was now 7 pm...Sujal and Kashish were in their hotel room resting after a long tiring day...Kashish goes straight to the washroom to freshen up whilst Sujal sits down on the sofa...he was talking to some one on the phone for the last 20 minutes...

Sujal: are all arrangements completed....ok thats great we will be there roughly an hour maybe less...thank you so much...bye...

Kashish walks out and comes to sit beside him on the sofa and turns on the tv...he takes the remote and switchs the tv off...

Kashish: kya hua....tumne TV kyun off kar diya..

Sujal: kyunki ab tv dekhne ka waqt nahin hai...ab jaldi se taiyaar hojao...hume kahin jaana hai

Kashish: kahi jana hai matlab...Sujal abhi muje packing bhi karni hai...bhul gaye hume kal wapas ghar jana hai...

Sujal: muje achchi tarah se yaad hai...aur don't worry packing bhi hojayegi...hume hotel se subah 11 baje check out karna hai to tum fikar mat karo...

Kashish: thik hai batao to sahi ki kaha jana hai..

Sujal: woh to main nahin bata sakta...its a surprise

Kashish: surprise...batao na kaha jana hai....taki muje taiyaar hone me pata chale...

Sujal: uski fikar tum mat karo...aaj tumhara dress me select karunga...to chalen?

Kashish: kaha?,,,

Sujal: tumhare closet me...dress select karna haina...

Kashish: Sujal...ple batao na kaha jana hai..

Sujal: ahaaa...itni asaani se to nahin bataunga...ab chalo na dair horahi hai...

He looks at her and gets up from the sofa...she keeps staring at him...he holds her hand and gently pulls her up...then leads her to the closet...he lets go of her hand then starts going through her clothes...she smiles at him..when he picks out a beautiful white cocktail dress for her and looks at her with a smile...

Sujal: yeh waala perfect rahega...ab tum change karlo

Kashish takes the dress and looks at him with a smile......

Sujal: jaan...thoda sa patience...bohat jald pata chal jayega...agar me tumhe batadunga to surprise thodi na rahega

Kashish: lagta hai tum sach me nahi batanewale......koi baat nahi main taiyaar hoke aati hoon..

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: ok...main yahin pe tumhara intezar karta hoon.. Jaldi aana

Kashish goes to the washroom to get ready.....15 mins later she opens the door and steps outside...........Sujal who is sitting on bed looks at her......she was wearing white cocktail dress with red earrings and red brecelet........

she has a red clutch bag....red heels....... and her hair was straight open ...Sujal looks at her and was completely mesmerised... as she was looking gorgeous...he gets up and moves towards her...he stands infront of her and bends close to her ear...straightens her earring....and whispers...

Sujal: your looking gorgeous tonight...

Kashish: thanks jaan......

He just moves back and stands there whilst still staring at her...he finds it difficult to move his gaze from her

Kashish: Sujal ab dair nahi ho rahi...

Sujal came back to his senses...

Sujal: haan...woh main...main abhi jaane hi waala tha

Kashish: jaise tum hamesha kehte ho.....tum chalo main tumhare kapde nikal deti hoon...

Sujal just smiles and then follows her...she passed him his clothes......he goes to the washroom...after 15 minutes he comes out wearing a black suit with a red shirt...

his hair is gelled and he was wearing his favourite perfume which she loved...he walks to the mirror to check if everything looks fine...then he turns to look at her...

Sujal: chalen?

Kashish: ya sure...if you are ready..

Sujal: i'm ready jaan...bas tumhe ek cheez ki kammi hai...

Kashish turns around and looks at the mirror checking herself.........Sujal just smiles and walks upto his bag...he unzips it and takes out a beautiful embroided red shawl...he moves up closer to her...stands behind her wrapping the shawl around her shoulders...

Sujal: now your looking perfect...

Kashish wrapps her hands on his while looking at him through mirror....

Kashish: Sujal..yeh..

Sujal: tumhare liye ek chota sa gift...us din maine carnival me dekha tha to mujse raha nahin gaya aur maine le liya

Kashish: bahot hi khubsurat hai bilkul tumhare pyaar ke rang jaisa........

Sujal: mere nahin...humare pyar ke rang ke jaisa...aur khoobsoorat to yeh hai par tumse bohat kam...

she turns around and goes into his arms closing her eyes.......he is surprised but wraps his arms around her.......He gently runs his fingers through his hair...

Sujal: kya hua jaan?

Kashish: pata nahi...

she holds him tighter..Sujal tightens his hold on her...

Sujal: i love you...

Kashish: I love you too ...

Kashish moves back and looks at him...

Kashish: chale..

Sujal just smiles and lets go of her but holds her hand into his...

Sujal: chalo...

They leave the room...walk to the lift and go to the ground floor...they walk to the exit.......she sees a limousine parked outside and Sujal walks towards it...but she stop...

Sujal: kya hua...chalna nahi kya?

Kashish: haa chalna hai lekin yeh sab....Sujal aakhir hum ja kaha rahe hai..

Sujal: tum sawaal bohat karti ho jaan...ab humari aakhri shaam hai paris me isliye kuch special to hona hi chahiye...isliye aaj maine bohat hi special intezaam kiya hai...ab chalen?

Kashish: sure...ab ek bhi sawaal nahi karungi..khush..

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: bohat...ab chalo betho...

The driver came out and opens the door for them...Kashish sits in...Sujal follows her...the driver closes the door.....then drives off...

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8 p.m

The car stop...Sujal smiles at Kashish...the driver comes out and opens the door...Sujal steps out and hold out his hand for Kashish...she holds his hand and walks out.......she gets amazed by the beauty of the place...they were near River Seine which was lit up....the whole river was decorated with lights.....many boats were sailing across...Sujal holds her hand and starts to walk......whilst she was looking around...they reach the edge of a private boat house...Sujal steps on and turns around.....holds his hands out for her........she looks at him......slowly puts her hand on his........he smiles at her while tightning his hold on her hand.......he gently helps her to step in..They walk inside hand in hand......Sujal leads her to the deck........the railings were lit up with small lights whilst the whole boat had been decorated with red and white rose petals..there was a table for 2 in the centre....it was set for a perfect dinner under the stars....a candle lit in the centre... around it were a bunch of roses...

Kashish: Sujal....Thanks for this beautiful date ....

Sujal: your most welcome jaan...aaj ki shaam hamare pyar ke naam hai...isliye maine socha aaj kuch special intezaam hona chahiye..

Kashish: aur jo intzaam tumne kiya hai woh bahot hi khubsurat hai aur is shaam ko main apni sari zindagi yaad rakhungi...

Sujal: tabhi to maine yeh sab kiya hai taki tum aaj ki shaam kabhi na bhool paao...ab dinner kare....

Kashish: yes sir....

Sujal smiles at her and leads her to the dinner table...he moves the chair back for her......She sits and he walks to his side and sits down also......he picks up the bunch of roses and hands them to her...

Sujal: some beautiful roses for the most beautiful woman in the world...and my life...

Kashish smiles at him than takes the roses from his hand..........she bends down and smells the roses while closing her eyes...........he is staring at her looking at her innosence.....Kashish opens her eyes and looks at him...

Kashish: Thank you for the roses..........

she takes one rose from the bunch and puts it in her clutch bag....

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: your welcome jaan...ab chalo dinner karlete hain...isse pehle ke thanda hojaye...

Kashish: ya sure.......

They start to have dinner........the menu is all her favorite dishes.........she looks at him in surprise....he smiles while serving her the food............they start to eat ......she eats a little then looks at him...

Sujal: kya hua jaan...aise kya dekh rahi ho?

Kashish: i dont like my food.......

Sujal just looks at her...

Sujal: kya...tumhe achcha nahin lagga...tum chaho to hum waapis jaake hum kuch aur kha sakte hain..

Kashish; muje woh chahiye..

Kashish points at his plate.....Sujal looks at her confused...

Sujal: lekin meri plate me bhi wahin hain jo tumhari me hai

Kashish: muje khana hai to wahi....warna muje nahi khana....

Sujal just smiles and then lifts his plate and hers too...he exchanges the plates and places his infront of hers...

Sujal: ab to khaogi na tum?

Kashish: khilaoge nahi..

Sujal: agar aap kahengi to hum aapko khila bhi denge...muje koi aitraaz nahin

Kashish: Sujal tumne mehndi ki raat mujse kaha tha ki tum muje apne haath se muje khilaoge....main aaj bhi us din ka intzar kar rahi hoon.......

Sujal gets up and moves his chair placing it beside hers...he picks the plate and takes some food in his hands and takes it near her mouth...

Sujal: to aaj main tumhara intezaar bhi khatam kardeta hoon...mun kholo

She smiles at him and than opens her mouth....he puts the food in her mouth....she takes spoon from his hand...and gets some food placing near his mouth.....Sujal just smiles and opens his mouth...she feeds him......he holds her hand and gently kisses it...

Sujal: jaan...tumhare khilane se khaane ka swad hi badal gaya..

Kashish: agar aisa hai to main to tumhe roz khilane ko taiyaar hoon....lekin badle me muje kya milega...

Sujal: tum jo mangogi woh tumhe milega...ek baar maang kar to dekho..

Kashish: kisi din soch ke mangungi....

Sujal: hmmm...muje intezar rahega...lekin abhi ke liye main tumse promise karta hoon ki aaj ke baad me bhi tumhe apne haathon se khaana khilaunga

Kashish: aur muje pata hai ki tum apna vaada kitni sachchai se nibhate ho......

they continously feed each other.......After they finish...Sujal gets up from the chair and looks at her...she looks at him confused...he smiles and holds out his hand for her...

Sujal: Kashish...would you give me the honour to dance with the most beautiful lady in my life..

Kashish: maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha Sujal ki tum mere pati ho....aur jiske liye tum hakk se keh sakte ho uske liye izzat nahi mangi jati...

Sujal holds her hand in his and gently pulls her up to her feet...he places his hand on her waist whilst holding her hand in the other...pulls her close and looks deeply into her eyes.. she looks in his eyes and lowers her gaze while wrapping her hands around his neck....... He moves closer to her and kisses her forehead..they start to move to the rhythm of their hearts...Kashish moves closer and rests her head on his shoulder........while she moves her hand and holds his hand........she looks at their hands than she locks her fingers with his........He smiles whilst enclosing his fingers with hers and gently moves her hand towards his face and kisses it... Kashish looks up and holds his face....and kisses him on his cheek.......

Kashish: I love you jaan.......

Sujal: i love you too...

He keeps looking at her intently when he feels some drops of rain hit his face...he looked up then towards her with a smile as the rain became heavier they begin to get wet in the rain...Kashish looks down and feels embarrsed as she is wearing white dress......she looks at him and tries to cover herself with the red shawl......

Kashish: Sujal...barish tej ho rahi hai....hum andar chalte hai.....

She starts to walk towards the room when she feels his hands tightening on her waist...he pulls her back into his arms whilst running his hands along her waist...he moves his face towards her and gently kisses her on her cheek...

Kashish: Sujal....woh....woh barish ..ho rahi hai...

He doesnt say anything...continues to look at her...he gently moves the shawl down from her shoulder and kisses her shoulder...he moves towards her neck and kisses her on her neck with passion whilst tightening his hold on her waist again..she closes her eyes and feels the moment.....she moves her hands towards him holding his coat.......she doesnt know but everytime, she cant stop him or herself....she just wants the time to be stop.......He gently moves back and opens his eyes as he looks at her...her eyes were closed and her lips were trembling...the drops of rain on her lips looked like dew on rose petals...he gently places his fingers on her lips and runs his fingers along her lips feeling the drops of rain...he starts moving closer to her......her heartbeats start to rise...he goes closer to her lips whilst his fingers were still on her lips...he gently moves his hand down and kisses her cheek...she opens her eyes and looks at him....she lowers her eyes and moves back.....she turns around and walks towards the edge of the rail holding it.....while her eyes were num..He just looks at her then walks towards her standing behind her...he places his hands on top of hers whilst he gently placing his lips on the back of her neck...

Kashish: Sujal....

Sujal: hmmm...

Kashish: Sujal woh....woh muje andar jana hai ...kyun..kyunki..

Sujal: kyunki kya?

Kashish: kyunki muje bijli ki aawaz se darr lagta hai aur abhi kisi bhi waqt ho sakti hai....

He gently moves closer to her ear and whispers...

Sujal: main hoon na tumhare paas...tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga...mere hote darr tumhe chu bhi nahin sakta...

Kashish: Sujal...wapas nahi jana kya..

Sujal: aaj raat hum yahin rahenge...andar chale...tum bheeg gayi ho...kapde badal lo isse pehle ke tumhe sardi hojaye...maine sab intezaam kar liya hai..

He lifts his hands off hers and moves back...he gently moves her shawl back up covering her shoulders then takes off his coat and places it around her...Kashish looks at him than starts to walk inside.....she looks back as he was still standing there looking at the sky with his hands open enjoying the rain...She just smiles seeing him then walks inside...after 5 minutes he comes inside and she was still in her wet clothes...

Sujal: Kashish...tumne abhi kapde kyun nahin badle?....oh mean batana hi bhool gaya tha...wahan bed side drawer me tumhara night suit pada hai...us din maine mall se liya tha...tum change karlo me bahar wait karta hoon..

Kashish: thik hai....

She takes out her clothes from side drawer and turns around....She looks at him....he walks outside closing the glass door.......Kashish walkes towards the door.....she looks at him sitting on the rail looking at her........she smiles at him while closing curtains..After sometime she changed and opened the curtains...he gets up and walks towards the room whilst running his hand in his hair to get rid of the water...he walks inside the room...

Sujal: Kashish...tumne change karliya hai to tum so jao...raat kaafi ho chuki hai...

Kashish: Pehle tum to change karlo....phir hum dono bhi so jayenge.....aur main bahar hoon....ab barish bhi ruk gayi hai...

Sujal: lekin Kashish...bahar thand hogi...main manage karlunga...man washroom use karlunga...choti hai par itni bhi nahin ki main kapde na change kar saku..

Kashish: its ok...main bahar hoon.....tum bhi bahar aajana....jab tum change karlo tab....

Kashish leaves the room while closing the door behind...Sujal watches her go and smiles...he gets his clothes from the drawer and gets dressed..after he changed he was about to go out when he sees her from the glass door...she was standing looking at the city whilst holding onto both her arms with her hands......she looked slightly cold...her hair was flying with the cool breeze...Sujal tries to something to give her but her shawl was wet as was his coat...when he looks at the bed sheet...he pulled it off and walks outside holding it and wraps it around her...

Sujal: Kashish...maine kaha tha na ki bahar thand hogi...

she puts her hands on his which are on her waist.......

Kashish: nahi to..aur waise main aise hi kuch dekh rahi thi.....

Sujal: kya dekh rahi thi tum?

Kashish: yaha se kitna khubsurat lagta hai na yeh Paris aur uski roshni....aur kal to yeh sab piche chut jayega....sach kahoon to muje yaha se jane ka mann nahi ho raha Sujal.....

Sujal just smiles...

Sujal: Paris ki to yeh pehchaan hai...thats why it is known as the city of lights...and love...main khud yahan se nahin jaana chahta...tumhare saath yeh ek hafta meri zindagi me sabse zyada khubsurat raha hai...lekin i promise,hum yahan dubara zaroor aayenge...ab to is jagah se ek rishta ban chuka hai...

Kashish: janti hoon main.......lekin phir main chahti hoon ki wapas hum hamare ghar jake ek nayi zindagi shuru kare...hum apne sapno ko sach kare.....aur waise bhi hamara ghar aur tumhara SK hamara intzaar kar raha hai...

Sujal: jaanta hoon...aur kal woh intezar khatam hojayega...hum kal se apni ek nayi zindagi ki shuruaat karenge...aur har sapne ko hum milke pura karenge...aur main tumse vaada karta hoon ki main har mod par tumhara saath dunga...

Kashish: I love you Sujal..

Sujal: i love you too Kashish...

Kashish: ab andar chale...bahot raat ho gayi hai

Sujal: hmmm...chalo...phir kal hume waapis bhi jaana hai...

Kashish: main bhi wahi soch rahi thi....chale.

Sujal: haan chalo...

They start walking towards the door...and go inside,Sujal closes the door behind them whilst pulling the curtains close them..He turns back and looks at her sitting on the bed pulling blanket ....He smiles then sits down beside her after taking off his shoes...he looks at her for a moment then lays down...he stretches his arm on her side,placing it on her pillow whilst looking at her... she looks at him and smiles while lying down.....she moves her head on his shoulder and snuggles herself in his arms while putting her hand around his neck..He smiles and places his other hand around her waist while moving forward and kissing her forehead...

Sujal: goodnight angel...

Kashish: goodnight jaan....I love you,,,

Sujal: i love you too jaan...

Kashish closes her eyes while pulling the blanket on them......Sujal watches her sleep in his arms... after some time,he also falls asleep..holding her close...

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey Kashish and Summi,

Thanks for another mind blowing parts....it was great as always.....the romance of the part is one of a kind.....I love Sujal's revenge...how romantic......it was just gr8......I wouldnt mind lieing to my hubby if tht is how he is gonna repay me.....sooo sweet and sooo romantic....and Kashish is right...girls are smarter than boys......but in love hubby's are even more easier to fool....another shopping trip..and for sujal....I can just see him in casual clothes...OMG soo hot I cant believe it.....also the fitting room romance is soo great......also the church scene is awesome........Sujal is getting more and more romantic....cant even control himself in front of god.....not tht I am complaining......then the night scene at the boat....wah kya kismat hai Kashish ki.....(sry I am bad at hindi).....sooo very romantic...poor Sujal again he has to wait for his wife....not tht he minds......but still poor guy.......well thnks for the part once again.....cant wait to read more.....the next parts should be even better I am pretty sure........best wishes

Luv

Mira

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome part!!!
Thanks for the PM..
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how cute!! enjoyed reading this...i love their love:D:D
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Posted: 16 years ago
I was a great awesome part. Sujal innocently saying sorry to Kashish was very cute & Kashish ki hakk wale line & Sujal saanein aur dhadkan wali was very heart touching. Beleive it or not i was crying reading it. Plz contd soon. Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 16 years ago
mindblowing part .....morning scene was good kashish bohot chalak haii hann khud nahi peeti aur phele dusru ko pilati thi aur ab sujal ko bhi pila di....den shopping wala scene very nice fitting room bedroom ban gaya tha superb scene......church scene amazing tha....den woh date superb sab cheez perfect rain bhi perfect tym pe chalu hui it was very yummy maza aagay......waiting fr next part .... update soon........luv aarti.....

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