*reserved*
Edit:
Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry ....kaan pakar ke sorry🤔 🤔.... i took a very very very long time with it this time .... though i read it the day after u posted .... but here i'm with my long due comments ...
i'm gonna go scene by scene...
firstly rahul comes back to reality .... but it happens too soon .... i wanted to see what happened that night after muskaan broke off the engagement ... like when did rahul realise that it was a huge mistake and actually grasp the gravity of the situation that the wedding is off .... coz its a huge event ... both the families must have reacted stongly coz it was an arrange marriage ... i wanted to know how muskaan didn't change her decision atall.... how much rahul actually tried ... how finally, in the end he gave up...
next, i have a question, did u clarify as to why muskaan had to get married to rahul .... if it hasbeen, then my bad .... coz, i really want to know what happened, that to in details ....her mental dilemma when she got married and how she came to terms with this change in her life ...
now my favourite non-RM moments .... specially armaan-rahul phone convo in the night and muskaan trying to overhear ... atul-rahul convo in the hospital .... and armaan at his own mischievous self ... and changing topic at top-speed when ridzi caught him redhanded .... usual armaan😉 ...i prefer this armaan than the origianl one ...😉
lastly the entry of another "ladka" ....Arush
"Dr. Muskaan..." He asked her to bend down. When she did .."Yeh uncle tumhare kya lagte hain?" "Mere friend hai..aur ab tumhare bhi..sweetoo! " She pulled his cheeks..
"Hmmm..dal main kuch to kala hai..pata laga na hi padega..😉" He whispered.
"Kya??" Muskaan asked.
"Kuch nahin..byeee..." and he ran away..
"Arre..Arush!!""
hmmmm ..... smart bachha ..... was there any specific reason u introduced him .... well, he is just introduced and i don't have anything to say about him.... lets see how u develop his character and how he plays a role in RM story 😊...
now, finally, tan tannnnaaaaa ......my favourite RM moments 😳.. this is where you never ever stumble ....its always always perfect ....
now my yummmy moments:
"Rahul looked so embarassed..his cheeks red..how did she always know everything..why was she always right..he gave a half smile..and went to his room too..he sat in front of the mirror..ruffling his wet hair..and
when he looked straight..Muskaan was standing right behind him with a towel in her hands..
"Main kar dun..."☺️[ awww, this was so romantic, i can even see him sitting in front of the mirror]
He remained silent..which meant a yes.
She dried his hair...."Kabhi to meri baat sunn liya karo.."☺️☺️
"Hmmm.." Was all he could answer.
When she was done..she started walking towards the door..he wanted to stop her..but he didnt know how..and why....so he just let her go..she turned to look at him..and left." [go go, grab her hand]
next!
muskaan thinking about rahul and his proposal before going to sleep that night ...well obviously she cares ... obviously she loves him ...
next!
" ......."Nahin.." She replied sleepily.
"Muskaan main teen tak gin raha hun..uth.." He counted as slow as possible..but she didnt get up. "To tu nahin uthegi?"
She ignored him.
"Theeke phir.." He flung her in her arms..with the bed-sheet rolling on the sides. "Yehi saza hai.."☺️ [i wish i get to see this in real life, AC kharab karne ka idea itna mast tha.... i love how rahul sometimes hesitates with muskan, but sometimes, aise haq jatata hai ki, just ☺️]
Muskaan's sleep vanished in mili-seconds. She put her arms around him for support. "Rahul..ullu da patha..kya kar raha hai..chod mujhe.."
"Chod dun..??" ☺️☺️[MY MAN]He took away half his hand. She screamed in his ear. "Chilana band kar !!!"
She became quite. They both looked at each other...for seconds..he took her to the room..and put her on the bed..and put the bed-sheet over her..She hadnt taken out her hands off him...They continued to look in to each other....[ and finally the famous RM eyelock ... this always works]"
next!
"They shared an intense eye-lock. When they got out of the trance...
"Muskaan...ab thoda hatna..mujhe neend aa rahe hai.." 😉😉He lied down beside her.
"Oyye..jaa mere kamre main..tu yahan..nahin soyega.."
"Kyun..ye mera kamra hai..main to yahin sone waala hun.." He pretended to yawn..and then sleep.
"Rahul..jaa yahan se..warna main marunge...... [ i would have preferred he stayed for the night ....it would have been naughty and funny...but maybe next time!] "
at sanjeevani, things don't usually get that romantic as much as it does in their home😉 ....
yet these stuffzz were so cute ....like
Rahul almost dropped the phone.
"What? You scared me! Mujhe laga Muskaan hai na.."
"Tu Muskaan se itna darta kyun hai yaar? "
"Main nahin darta..." [rahul sach me muskaan se darta hai 😉😉.....hehehehe]
and again
"Oh no..ab ye humare beech kaunsa ladka aagaya..Shit man..mere love life kabhi seedhi nahin chalegi...." [poor soul! always scared about muskaan] He walked around the hospital to search for her..chanting gods name..that Muskaan stays away from him..and there he saw her through the window..she was smiling..... "Oh..no..this is the end..bye Muskaan....." [😆,particularly brilliant]
all in all .....satisfied to the core ... u always always always make me happy ...
and i know u r hell busy with ur 12th ... yet u take time out and weave this wonderful story ... thats amazing ... big round of applause👏
finally!! did it !! it took me 3hrs to write...yet i did it!! ...am so happy😃😃...
Edited by anastasia21 - 16 years ago
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