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nhhk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

GOOD JOB! keep going! Ur the first ff that got me into it...more mayur tho plz...:P

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heena

@heena.damor

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

hey nice work dear........continue soon..........

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Lipsa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Hi
Lovedpart3.Awesome work.Loved especially the concept of reauditions N they too compulsory.Hey gunji a & sam ko pair banna na plz.Next update ke liye we'll be waiting.update soon.Pm me ok
Luv
Lipsa😊

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Hi dost !!!

3 chapters at a time. Its like ice-cream treat 4 me 😊. Just loved the entire part. Yeh Sheeeeeeeeeeena to sach mein bahut badi pagal insaan hai. Samrat ko phasa rahi hai.

Poor Samrat, stuck btw Sheeeeeeeeeena & Gunjan. Btw 'Butterflies'???? NICE ONE !!!!! 😳 😳 😳 Good thinking of sending Samrat straight to mayank for some love advice. 😉 😉

& thanku soooooooooo much 4 bringing back Miss Aha. Was missing her alot. Ab mazaa ayega re-auditions mein. I hope Sajan r together this time. & loved the music room scene.

'Chuk chuk gadi'!!!!! 🤣

& so sweet of Dia !! I wish she was like tht in the original track also.

Awesome chapters. Haa........writing stuff mien thoda problem hua tha, i mean while reading, but thts fine. Understandable !!!!

Vinu

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Priyanka

@demi lovato

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

😊 hi guys, i updated the part and thanks for critisizing vinu, i really want all of ur suggestions, thanks a billion, nd lipsa sorry if i won't pm u as my net is nt properly working.

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Priyanka

@AMMY LUVS RIDZ

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Awesome start.....wow yaar three parts at a time!!!!!!!!thank u soooo much........i really loved it........rv scene was hilarious.....marjaani🤣please pm me.......update soon 😳

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nanchie sharma

@mayur-ki-diwani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

it is awesome blossome yaar 😉

pm me whenever you update it

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

wowowow i love your part 3 plzz contuied soon

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: demi lovato
😊 hi guys, i updated the part and thanks for critisizing vinu, i really want all of ur suggestions, thanks a billion, nd lipsa sorry if i won't pm u as my net is nt properly working.

Hey dost !!!

Read ur 4th update !! It was awesome yaar !!! Loved how both Tamanna & Aha r handling the auditions & keeping her mouth shut. 😉

"Morena Dose ke saath saath Excel Dose bhi dena padega". LOLZZZZ 😉 Very good idea. Iski to sakht zaroorat hain. Mayur scene was also very gud !!! I love them sooooo much & apna Benji to kamaal ka cupid hai. 3 cheers for Sajan!!! 😉😆

Hey 1 little suggestion, plz dont use this green font. Its thoda difficult 2 read as u cant see it properly.
Waiting 4 ur nxt update. !!!!

Vinu

PS: BTW, whats ur name dear??? 😊