Twisted Luv Story *note* pg 98 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Kiran_1

God Milind still doesn't learn

Awesome part

Hasn't someone told Prachi 2's company 3's a crowd if they haven't they need to, LOL

Who is Milind the arrogant mean jerk in college or that caring and generous guy from the shop

Continue soon and plzzzzzzzz pm me when u update

Originally posted by: sam78

very nice update.

Originally posted by: azam12neelab

Hi prachi, is that yr real name?

just catched up with this ff and must say it is one excellent ff for a 14 yr old to write!!!👏

loved the whole concept, a very fresh type story line!

you express and describe each update very simply and that is wat is soo good about this ff!

i loved the relationship that you have portrayed of neev ,ayesha and prachi, there are the bestest of friends who would stand up for each other anyhow!😳

the way neev proposed to ayesha was very sweet..thank god prachi helped him otherwise he wouldn't have done so in the next 5 yrs to come!😆😃

now coming to milind, love his attitude but then again didn't like wat he said to prachi...make them become friends soon, show him the fun loving side of prachi

plz cont soon very eager to read more about this ff!!! plz pm me when u do update!😃

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

Hey Prachi

I didnt realise that you had updated. both part 2 and 3 were great

Aww Neesha are too cute for words

Glad Prachi slapped Milind he deserved it

Great work keep it up!

Could you please PM when you update

Prachi that day didn't attend the college. Ayesha too was with Prachi at home. Suddenly the doorbell rang, Ayesha opened the door, their stood a person with a bunch of white roses.

Person – may I talk to ms Prachi Shah?

Ayesha – ya. Prachi come out.

Prachi – ya I am miss Prachi shah.

Person – this is for you.

Giving her the flowers he left.

Prachi – wow so beautiful flowers! By the way who sent this?

Ayesha – I don't know. I guess Neev must have sent this.

Prachi – ya I am for sure.

Prachi was delighted and forgot what happened in the college.

NEXT DAY…………

Prachi and Ayesha went to college and as usual Neev was waiting for them at main gate.

Prachi – thank you Neev.

Neev – thank you. But for what?

Ayesha – you sent her white roses.

Neev – what? I have sent her white roses? But I didn't.

Gatekeeper – Prachi beta yeh aapke liye.

The gatekeeper was an old person and Prachi respected him a lot.

Prachi – not again. Ayesha phir se white rose.

Ayesha – uncle kis ne diya aapko?

Gatekeeper- Milind ne diya hai. Aur ek letter bhi diya hai.

Neev – show me please.

Gatekeeper gave him the letter and began to read it.

"Dear Prachi,

I am extremely sorry for my behavior. I truly apologize. Please be kind enough and forgive me I know you have a big heart. Please forgive me. I am sorry."

Prachi was now feeling a bit embarrassed. She now began to have a soft corner for Milind. She had a crush on him few weeks ago.

Ayesha – pehle galti karo aur phir maafi mango. Mujhe nahi lagta he is true.

Neev – I feel this time he is not fake. What you think Prachi?

Prachi – I don't know. Let's move inside the college.

As soon as she stepped inside she saw everyone in college holding white roses.

And top of that Milind was standing on the roof holding the mike. He shouted from there, "Prachi please forgive me".

Prachi was stunned. She looked at Ayesha and Ayesha said," if you think you can. But still I don't trust him".

Neev – c'mon Ayesha. Prachi you forgive him.

Prachi – I also feel he is true.

Milind – do you forgive me or not?

Prachi – yes I forgive you. Come down.

Milind came down and joined the trio.

Milind – if you have finally forgiven me then friends. (Extending his hand)

Prachi – ya friends.

Milind – Neev and Ayesha you two also forgive me. I want to be your friend also.

Neev – it's ok. (Hugging him) now you are our friend.

Ayesha too said it friends but in heart she was disappointed.

The bell rang. It was class time and four of them were in the same class. So Neev and Milind Prachi and Ayesha sat together and enjoyed their class.

Prachi in heart was felling for Milind.

Milind used to follow Prachi in the college. He used to chat to her for hours on mobile. He used to give her flowers and many other things while Neesha's love was also blooming.

Then suddenly an important announcement was made.

Ms saha-: students as you know 14^th July is approaching. It is the prompt night that our college celebrates every year. This time also the prompt night would be celebrated. The responsibility for the prompt night would be given to four candidates. Those are Prachi Shah, Ayesha Sarin, Neev Shergil and Milind Mishra. You four have to plan the function. The required fund will be provided by the college dean itself. Best of luck guys.

Everyone was delighted and they shouted with joy.

Ayesha – wow Neev. I would like you to b my partner.

Neev – yes definitely.

Milind – Prachi would you like to be my partner for the prompt night?

Prachi – yes I will.

Neev and Ayesha thought that both were in love. In fact the whole college knew it. Prachi was deeply in love with him while Milind also loved her.

Ayesha – well you two (Milind and Neev) come to my home. We'll discuss together about the prompt night.

Milind – ok

Neev – ok.

Ayesha – well now Prachi and I would like to go home. Bye guys.

Prachi – bye Neev. Bye Milind.

AT AYESHA'S HOUSE

It was around 4:00pm in the evening when the doorbell rang. Prachi went to open the door. It was Milind with some flowers in his hand.

Milind – hi. (Handling her the flowers)

Prachi – hi Milind. But why did you bought these flowers? I mean we are friends and there is no need of any formality.

Milind – acha baba agli baar se nahi launga. First time tumhare ghar aaya hun isliye laya tha. Andar nahi bulaogi?

Prachi – oh I completely forgot. Come inside.

Ayesha was sitting on the couch.

Milind – hi Ayesha.

Ayesha – make yourself comfortable. I'll get you some coffee.

(Just then the doorbell rang and Ayesha went to open the door.)

Ayesha- I am sure this is Neev.

(And indeed it was Neev)

Neev – hi sweetheart.

Ayesha – hi come in. I'll make coffee for you.

Neev – oh.

Ayesha – I'll catch you after two mins.

Neev – hi Prachi. Hi Milind.

Milind – to Neev kuch socha hai prompt night ke baare mein?

Neev – sochne ka kaam Prachi ka hai.

Milind – to Prachi kya socha hai?

Prachi – maine socha hai kyun na hum salsa dance organize kare?

Neev – good idea.

Milind – haan badiya hai.

While Ayesha came with 4 mugs of coffee.

Ayesha – tan tana Ayesha 's special coffee for you all.

Neev – thanx . Prachi ne salsa ke baare mein socha hai. What you think?

Ayesha – absolutely fantastic.

Milind – kyun na hum dress code rakhe? Like black for boys and white for girls?

Prachi – good idea but I think black for boys and red for girls.

Neev – ya definitely.

Ayesha – mujhe to shopping karni padegi kunki mere paas nayi red dress nahi hai.

Neev – cool mujhe bhi black suit lena padega,

Ayesha – Prachi tum bhi lena nayi dress.

Prachi – no yaar I'll wear the red suit only.

Milind – suit noways. You need to wear the designer outfit.

Prachi – I am sorry but I'll not be able to afford it.

All sat quiet for sometime because the three of them were rich but Prachi wasn't. Neev trying to change the topic.

Neev – so song selection kaun karega?

Ayesha – tum zyaada mat socho Prachi hi songs select karegi.

All four burst out laughing. They cracked jokes and laughed, mainly they were enjoying their selves.

Around one and half hour had passed.

Neev – mujhe to bhukh lagi hai.

Ayesha – I too feel hungry.

Prachi – wait I'll cook the food.

Neev – no need. I don't want any experiments. I'll get it from restaurant.

Prachi jerked him and said "tumhari Ayesha mere haath ka hi khana khati hai".

Ayesha – mera chineese khane ka mann kar raha hai.

Milind – haan neev let's go. We both will get the food.

Prachi – Milind let Ayesha go.

Ayesha blushed and said no-no you go.

Milind – c'mon Ayesha if you wish you can go.

Neev – please now come with me.

Neev pulled her and they left. Milind and Prachi were alone at home.

Neev was on his way and asked Ayesha. "kaunsi movie dekhogi? Tasveer8*10 ya delhi 6"

Ayesha – movie? I thought we were going to the restaurant.

Neev – no there are two reasons. Firstly I want to spend the time with you and secondly I want Milind and Prachi also to spend their time together.

Ayesha – what? I don't think Milind is suitable for Prachi.

Neev – c'mon I like him and Prachi loves him a lot. I feel Milind also loves her. He follows her and even college guys also like them and they call them MICHI. Believe me.

Ayesha – I believe you. And hope Milind gives Prachi all the happiness.

Now it's already 6. I have booked two tickets for delhi-6.

Neev and Ayesha watched the movie while michi was alone at home.

AT HOME…………

Prachi knew about Neev's plan. Bu she forgot where will Milind go. She was happy and nervous as she was alone with Milind.

Milind – Prachi I am feeling hungry could you cook something?

Prachi – ya wait for 2 mins. I'll cook maagi.

Prachi went to cook maagi while Milind went to Prachi 's room. He saw everything her pictures. Her certificates and most importantly her diary.

He was surprised to see the diary. He saw his and Prachi's pictures collection. Prachi wrote in her diary that she loves Milind and cannot express her feelings". Milind was happy that she was in love with her. He heard Prachi's footsteps and closed her diary immediately.

Prachi – what are you doing here?

Milind – oh I was looking at these pictures and certificates. Well who is this lady?

Prachi – she is my Badi ma and he is my brother Saket.

Milind – Prachi may I ask you something?

Prachi – ya.

Milind – do you love anyone? (She was stunned)

Prachi – what? Why do you wanna ask?

Milind – just tell yes or no?

Prachi – yes.

Milind was coming closer and closer while Prachi was moving backwards. She stopped at the wall. Milind said," I know you love me and I also love you".

Prachi was quiet for a moment then said."I love you Milind".

Milind said that he was deeply in love and he would be happy if Prachi comes to his life.

.He hugged her tight. He slowly pulled her face making her look at him, and he saw nothing more then love for him...Slowly kissed her cheeks. Slowly kissed the tip of her nose. He softly kissed her on her soft lips, which parted inviting him further. Soon the soft kiss turn into a passion both unable to resist. Soon they lost each other in the passion and whirlwind.

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Originally posted by: y_tanuja

very well written 👏so mich and troop would do salsa good to see all happy .cont soon