The Unsolved Mystery(AR) EPILOGUE PG-101 02/05 - Page 32

Originally posted by: aRohAAnGeL

wow!! its getting super intresting.....for a minute i thought armaan could be the killer..!!

Originally posted by: flaming_saphire

hey.... it was a awesum part. thanksssss....😊

dont know wat 2 say.

day by day it is gettin more interestin. i'm glad 😳

cant w8 4 da next part.

plz continue sooooooooooooooooooooooon. will update by thursday.......😊

n thnx 4 sendin da pm. u r welcome.....😃

Originally posted by: mouni_roy

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hey

that was fabulous part and also very interesting plzz cont soon i cant wait 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: mudi

tht was just outstanding

it was superb

Originally posted by: znbhusain

OMGGG! Fantastic part. This was one was definitely a fabulous part.

Its getting really very interesting now. Also, thankyou so much for continuing, Pinky! Thanks a ton.

Ridz should tell Armaan the whole thing. The letter, photographs and all. Ahhh! I hope this gives them a clue that the killer is all the same, follows the same pattern.

thanksssssss a lot for your lovely comment......I'm glad u liked it......😊

P.S. Am really sorry, Pinky but am going out for vacations for one month and will return on 23rd of July so till then i would not be commenting or reading your FF but PLEASE keep PMing me the parts and the updates. I will read them all once i return.

Thanks again!

Its perfectly fine.......enjoy your vacations😊

Originally posted by: lilsunshine_rav

hey sweety... i totally loved your laga chunari mein daag... i read it all at once a couple of weeks ago.. might i add a great job on that..... thankssssss a lot......😊

coming to this... fantastic storyline... brilliant characters... and well.. totally justified each n every part... kudos to you... now cont soon and pm me if you can.... xxxx will surely pm you......glad to know you liked it so much.........😳

Originally posted by: aarora

hey amazing update honey..luvd it..continue soon..
thanx fr PM..
luv ya..

Originally posted by: cutie_yachu

hey pinky me back phew jst came back frm exm gosh yaar i thought to comment warna tu to maar hi dalegi hehehe jst kidding i knw u wont aise hi chalo abt prt tumne to dara hi dala yaar mujhe doubt ho raha hai on som1 lts see if he would be gona be lts wait n watch poor ridz she ws hell scard bechari kitna dara diya use bhagwan jane wht gonna happen now nd ar also alwys der fr her gosh nd he killd tht girl also thy wre late ye mystry to or complicated hoti ja rahi hai kya hone wala hai u knws cont soooooooon
thnks fr dpm
luv yachna

Originally posted by: karan''''s archita

hey!!!!
nice part
coninue soon

with luv!!!!!!!!

RECAP:

Ridz gets an envelope having her pictures.She gets a letter claiming another murder.Armaan-atul conversation.Ridz tells armaan about the murder.Everyone gathered in hall & the manager is telling about serial killer.On the other hand ridz tries to save another murder but is unable to do so.

PART 8:

Manager(continues): Yes this is the way elissa was killed.Before I disclose the murderer's identity I need to tell you all to not to be scared.He'll be caught very soon.This fashion show is very important.We have already taken lot of money from sponsers. And now to disclose the murderer's identity we have some proofs & facts to believe that the murderer is from India & is supposed to be known as a 'serial killer'.He has killed 2 models there & now seems to have come here.He follows the same pattern of killing models.We found drugs from the blood test reports of the two models in India.He is still on loose but wont remain for much time.

There was a stunned silence with everyones eyes popped out.Manager looked curiously from one person to another.People were looking at him as if he was an alien.He actually wanted no one to run away when a madman is present in their premises attacking people.Finally muskaan spoke up.

Mu: tum pagal ho kya???(realizing she was speaking hindi & many didn't know hindi she changed her language).How do you expect us to stay here????How can you keep your show going on when everyones life is in danger????

Ma: please don't panic…..we'll catch him really soon…..I told you we have taken money from sponsers.We can't stop this show at any costs….

Ra: do you mean your bloody show is more important than people's lives???To hell with your show….We all will go on a strike….

Everyone raised their voice against the show.The manager was so scared that he nearly had an attack.However he balanced himself & calmly continued.

Ma: You all are forgetting that you have signed a contract….This is just not a small show…..You know how big this show is…..Big show means Big money……If you don't co-operate you'll be dragged to court & the money you'll need to pay can never be filled in your check book.I need not remind you that you all can be sued.

Again people fell silent.No one knew how to argue.Yes its true they had an contract which said they couldn't leave the show because of any reason.No one could say anything further & just gave disgusted looks to manager.However as the silence spread the manager gave a triumphant smile knowing that now no one would think about leaving.

Ma(continued): now you all need not worry.There will be full police protection.As soon as the murderer is caught you all can be relieved but till then I request you to not to trust people around you.You never know who is friend & who is foe.Just do your work & keep practicing.Better keep your profile as low as possible.I'm glad media is not allowed here.They'll be given entry only on the last day of the show.Guards keep your eyes & ears open.Check every single person.If any of you get messages or calls from any unknown or private numbers do inform the police soon.If you have doubts or changes in someones behaviour around you do come forward.Another important thing is we have information that tonight the killer might attack someone so everyone be careful.We hope the information is wrong…..

NO ITS NOT…..

Somewhere from behind someone shouted.All heads turned behind.Far away someone was standing carrying something in hand.As the person came closer people realized it was armaan & he was carrying a girl in his arms.Armaan's eyes were full red with anger.Muskaan screamed as she realized the girl armaan was carrying was riddhima.Everyone looked shocked.RM & Atul,sonia rushed to armaan.They saw ridz lying unconscious in his arms.Muskaan was already in tears.Then armaan spoke to clear things:

Ar: fikar mat karo woh zinda hai…..sirf behosh hai….

At this everyone gave a sigh of relief.But armaan didn't stop.He placed ridz body on a near by sofa & went to the inspector.

Ar: You did get warning that tonight there will be another murder……than why didn't you do anything to help it???

In: I did take measures….

Ar: NO YOU DIDN'T…….THERE HAS BEEN ANOTHER MURDER…..THE GIRL HAS BEEN KILLED IN ROOM NO.301….WHERE WAS ALL YOUR SECURITY WHEN THE GIRL DIED????

In: everyone was stationed on the ground floor as all the models were supposed to be here in the hall….

Ar: THAT'S WHERE YOU ARE MISTAKEN…..THE MURDERER IS MORE SMART THAN YOU……GO & LOOK AT THE GIRLS BODY……WE DON'T EVEN KNOW WHO SHE IS BECAUSE HER ENTIRE FACE IS COVERED IN BLOOD……

In: please relax…..you can't shout like this on an inspector in front of so many people….we'll go & see….I agree its our fault if another murder happened but you need to check your tone…..

Everyone went upstairs except armaan's gang.

Mu: armaan yeh sab???riddhima ko kya hua????

Ar: khoon dekhkar behosh ho gayi….usse hamesha se khoon se bahut zyaada darr lagta hai…..woh jab itna sara khoon ek saath dekhti hai toh sehen nahi kar sakti…..main usse kamre mein le jaata hoon tum log jaakar uss ladki ko dekho…..pataa nahi bechari kaun hai…

Armaan carried ridz to her room.He slowly placed her on the bed.He took a glass of water & drank it.Than he sat on the floor holding her hand.He removed a strand of hair that was near her eyes & slowly placed it behind her ears.He knew if he sprinkled some water on her eyes she would be awake but he wanted her to rest.As soon as she'll come back to senses she'll be worried again.Lot of commotion was going outside.People were going back & forth in the passage.Armaan wanted to know who was the girl who died.But he couldn't leave ridz & go alone.He didn't know how to ask someone about what's going outside.Just then RM & sonia came in the room.Muskaan was in tears while rahul was comforting her.Even sonia was quite sad.They all came to ask about ridz health but muskaan kept crying continuosly.Rahul went & sat on the floor with armaan & asked sonia to take muskaan to gallery & give some fresh air.Rahul sat sadly in front of armaan.

Ar: kya hua muskaan ko??

Ra: woh ladki…..woh actually muskaan ki dost thi….uska naam liza hai….

Ar: par itna jaldi kaise pata chal gaya ki woh kaun hai….jab humne laash dekhi toh woh itni buri haalat mein thi ki pata hi nahi chal raha tha ki woh kaun hai….sharaab ki bottle ko iss tarah uske chehre parmaara gaya tha ki pura chehra bigad gaya tha...

Ra: jaanta hu par identity ho gayi…unhone ladki ki saari cheezein dekhi….aur list bhi check ki ke kaunsi ladki missing hai…sirf liza missing hai…...aur woh room bhi liza ka hai….aur sabse badi baat uska cell milla jisme kissi private number se message tha ki aaj uska aakhri din hai…..tum jaante ho liza ridz ki bhi dost ban gayi thi?

Armaan was surprised.If she was ridz friend than armaan was scared as to how will ridz react to this.Ridz is already too scared & now on knowing one of her friends was attacked she would really panic….He didn't know how will he break this news to her.

Ra(unaware of armaan's sudden change in expressions): waise woh log itne ache dost nahi the……woh sirf hi-bye type friends the…..par fir bhi bura toh lagta hai na…..waise tum aur ridz uske kamre mein kyu gaye????

Armaan was caught off guard by the question.He didn't know what to answer.To his luck muskaan came back.Her tears were dried but she was very much depressed.

Mu: rahul mujhe room mein jaana hai…..main ab yeh sab aur nahi dekh sakti……

Rahul nodded understandingly.He told bye to armaan & left with sonia & muskaan……Armaan thanked his stars but knew he had to come up with an answer before anyone again asks.He couldn't tell anyone about ridz being the target & moreover he himself didn't know how ridz knew that a girl was being murdered in Room no.301.Just than with another knock the inspector came alongwith a doctor.He bought the doctor for a check on ridz.His this behaviour seemed to lessen armaan's anger little.The doctor checked ridz body & her BP.Her BP was low.He injected some medicine & asked armaan to take proper care of her.

In: Mr.Armaan….we would like to ask you a few questions regarding the murder for investigation……If you could please accompany us out???

Armaan nodded.Although he didn't want to leave ridz but he knew this was important.And now that ridz looked sleeping peacefully due to the medicines he agreed.They went to the inspectors office.The whole passage was silent.Everyone had retired to their rooms.

IN THE OFFICE:

In: firstly can you tell me what you & Ms.Riddhima were doing on the 3^rd floor when you both were supposed to be in the hall….

Ar: I accidently met riddhima.She was running upstairs & when I asked her she told that someone is being murdered in the room & began running.Even I started running alongwith her.Than she opened the door of the room & everything was dark & silent.I switched on the lights & we saw liza's body in a pool of blood.Riddhima is scared of blood & screamed & fainted after seeing the scene.I bought her down as I couldn't leave her alone in the room.

In: so you knew the body was liza's???

Ar: no I couldn't recognize it…No one could have….rahul just told me….

In: interesting…can you tell me where did you exactly bump into Ms.Riddhima??

Ar: I had retired to my room…..I had some work……then I was coming down when ridz bumped into me on 1^st floor stairs….

In: what sort of work???

Ar: sorry I cant tell you that….its personal…..

In: Mr.Mallik….you can't keep anything personal from us…We need all the information we can get to find clues….So tell me why did you retire to your room??

Ar(annoyed): because I wanted to give a surprise to ridz…..she's been stressed day & night….I wanted to do something for her that would keep her happy…Hence I went to my room to check on my parcel & all things I had ordered.I was going to surprise her tonight so its obvious I would do it when no one is around.

In: fine…..and do you have any idea how did Ms.Riddhima know about the murder happening in the room??

Ar: I'm afraid you'll have to wait till tomorrow morning….I cant help you with it….

In: Ok…thankssss for all your help…..we'll talk to Ms.Riddhima tomorrow…..

Ar: but you'll talk to her in front of me….As it is she is too stressed.I don't want her to be scared or stressed when you are interrogating her.

In(smiling): seems like Ms.Riddhima has a true lover to protect her.Yes all the interrogations will be done infront of you.You may leave now.

Armaan went to his room but then remembered he had to go to ridz room to check on her.As he went up he heard some noises from the room beside ridz.It was anjie's room.Armaan didn't want to do eavesdropping but atul's voice made him stand there.

At: anjali please samjho meri baat…..tum jaanti ho ismein kuch galat nahi hai…..

An: please atul main tayyar nahi hoon….tum bas yahaan se chale jaoo….sahi waqt aane do fir hum baat karenge…..

Armaan couldn't believe his ears.Anjali was actually crying.He could never imagine a headstrong girl like anjali could cry.Maybe atul was right about her.There is indeed something more to their story.But what was atul doing at this time in anjali's room??Why was anjali crying??What were they talking about?

At: theek hai anjali…main tumhaara intzaar karoonga….main jaanto hu woh din zaroor aayega….bye.

Armaan quickly went inside ridz room.He didn't want atul to have any wrong impressions.Atul's footsteps passed away.Armaan turned around to see ridz sleeping peacefully.He was afraid how will she react when she'll get up?How will he handle her?How will he tell her about liza?Just than armaan spotted something.There were footprints of a muddy boot on the floor.That meant someone had come in this room.But who & why?

Okay here is the 8^th part……I don't feel it is worth & some scenes are actually boring but I couldn't create a happy environment after a death na??However AR romantic scenes will come in next part.And ofcourse more tragedies & suspenses as the story moves forward.Next part will have all elements:romance,scariness,more shocks for ridz.Please comment/criticize….😳