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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: disco_diva
gr8 part dear countinue soon

thanks,i will continue soon

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: x!reema!x
hey nice part..
hope AR meetz soon!!
continue soon n thanx for the pm!!

ya even i want AR to meet soon,i will continue soon

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#53

PART-4
ridhz:hi,riddhima gupta(giving her hand to the person in front of her)
guy:hi,vivek mishra(checking her out)
ridhzi be careful,his looks are definitely not good thought warning her self)
ridhz:can i show my collection now(trying to divert the topic)
vivek:ya sure(still have a grin on his face)
(after showing her collection)
ridhz:so how do u like my collection?
vivek:they are ok,ok,i mean we wil talk all about these,may be tonight
(ridhz felt like to give a a tight slap across his face,how dare he talk to riddhima gupta like that)
vivek:ok,take my no. and order will be urs ofcourse
ridhz:this is our portfolio,if u like,call us?(keeping her patience and saying this she got up to go,but vivek caught her hand)
vivek:hey,wait a min,cant we talk....
(when he is about to continue ,ridhz bangle brokes due to the force he is pressing her hand,there a small cut happens,when ridhz narrow her eyes,vivek leaves her hand and she goes out from there)
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In riddhima's house at dinning table
padma:riddhima!kya hua?(seeing her hand)jab se aaye ho,kuch bol rahi ho,kya hua?
ridhz:maa,kuch nahi(no way,u can lie to her,mom knows me more than me😕)ek idiot ne mera haat pakda aur mera kangan toot gaya
(shashank gets up from table angrily)
shashank:u dont need to any job or look after any shop,over n out,all the time i am saying u to get married and now see,its out of limit,i will agree to the ppl who came to see u last week(ridhz gets up from table and goes to her room angrily)i will first close that shop,i think its ou mistake that we have given what ever they eant
padma:plz aap aakar khana kijiye,aap ki tabiyat karab ho jayegi
shashank:let her first agree to the marraige then i will eat
(ridhz is in tears in her room thinking her parents believed in her only to this extent and when she hears the last sentence)
ridhz:OK,GO N EAT(shouted angrily still having tears)
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armaan:muskaan,i need to say to u some thing
muskaan:what armaan in this late night
armaan:u will be so happy and ur father will be on cloud 9
muskaan:what armaan(asked curiously)
armaan:first u sit here and close ur eyes
(as she sat and closed her eyes,armaan about to take the cheque he brought,her cell ring flashing as ''rahul callin'')
armaan:muskaan,i only need one minute
muskaan:i will just say him to call later,plz
(muskaan comes back and closes her eyes again saying him to go on)
armaan:muskaan,do u imagined me as ur husband any time for one minute or one second(asked cooly)
muskaan:this is what u want to say,let's leave it armaan,our marraige is fixed and it is going to be in europe,i want to inform u but u didnt even came to watch me from last month
armaan:what i should do to change ur decision,if i now had 5 lakh cheque atleast u will marry me?
muskaan:u always think,but u never do
(armaan decides him self that it is no use to say her about the cheque he bought bcoz the trust she should have on him is not there,so he also want to live his life with the aims he had,he should not change for others)
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shashank:ridhz,u might be angry on us but u should think of our responsibilities too(riddhima is biting her nails to ignore it she started increasing the tv volume with out saying any thing)plz talk some thing ridhz,first switch off the tv,do u think i like to scold u?
ridhz:MAA,first say him to say sorry to me,he scolded me with out a reason(she shouted talking to her mom in kitchen keep her dad infront😆)
shashank:ok,zidhz,sorry,ab khush
ridhz:some body has done some thing to me then y will u scold me,every time u link my marraige and shop(with the feeling anger inside and tears out side)
(shashank seeing her daughter crying,hug her started saying)
shashank:In life till an extent parents will be there for u to support,after that?(he asks her for which she remains silent)after that the support should come from out side,from ur husband
ridhz:what if he supress rather than support me
shashank:listen to me ridhzi
ridhz:i am not angry on u dad,its that we lived until now independently,done things independently just like any other,only bcoz of a idiot u said to close my shop,i have to change my career,thats hurting me most
shashank:may be bcoz of that idoit u can achieve ur goals,y dont u think like that
ridhz:thanks,if that happens,i will agree
shashank:if that should happen,u should first marry na
ridhz:but i dont like ppl who do standard job dad,they are like one job,small sight,children,retirment plan etc etc....URGH😒
shashank:shall i say that u want time to think
ridh:huh??(y is that,y cant dad say that i reject him,what ever)
shashank:we should say some thing na,plz riddhima once think about atul

atul:he had completed MBA and doing job,perfect example for the person ridhz mentioned about whom she wont like😆
(ridhz goes to her room and lies on her bed once again talking to her self)
ridhz:riddhima,once think about atul(repeating her father's word)think,think
(riddhima imagine the whole situation while thinking and talk to her self)
SMILE~NOT BAD🥱
HEIGHT~SHORT BUT OK😆
TOUCH~O__K__😕
final test,if i KISS.............NO(suddenly open her eyes😲)
OK,its not that irritating(convincing her self)
adjust hona padta hain,sab ke liye shah rukh,salmaan todi na aata hain(😆,its me)
ridhz:OK(shouts from her room)
(every one in house feels happy shahsank wants to inform them immidiately,padma is ready to start rasam)
nikki:IDEA,lets arrange marriage in europe,i have seen it online,we will go by cruise
ridhz:hello,there is no hurry in marraige,ok
padma:riddhima beta,if every thing is fine then only we will arrange marraige(placing her hand on her face feeling happy)

p.s.next part pakka AR meeting,i am really sorry itna likhne ki aadat nahi haina,my hands are really paining.plz if any one who are reading silently comment karo,my slogan is ''aap comment nahi kar rahe hain toh aap so rahe hain,chaay piyo,aur jagoo''😆 dont get offended,i will say always some
bakwaas😕
swetha😊

Edited by bary - 16 years ago

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#54

updated comment guys,pms tommorrow,power cut,sorry

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Angie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#55

awesome part i am really hoping for ar meetin next part so make sure its long pleaz and thanx for pm and update soon if i was in ridzz spot and vivek broke my bangles first of all even dared to touch me i would slap him right there lol

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: loyalkashion
awesome part i am really hoping for ar meetin next part so make sure its long pleaz and thanx for pm and update soon if i was in ridzz spot and vivek broke my bangles first of all even dared to touch me i would slap him right there lol

isnt this part is big😭😆
k i will try next time
even i will give a slap but ridhz na,she dont want to create a scene
thanks,update soon
swetha

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: rathika
this is godavari movie-telugu

shhhh😆 ya u r correct,i love that movie
do u want me to pm u?

Edited by bary - 16 years ago

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Sai Prasanthi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#58

That was a nice part Swetha.. so you are taking them to Europe... great going.. continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!

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swetha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Prasanthi
That was a nice part Swetha.. so you are taking them to Europe... great going.. continue soon and thanks alot for the PM!

ya,i hope it get better,thanks,will continue soon

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aishwarya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#60

hey swetha...nice part..

Vicky seems evil..n he hurt Ridz also....i don thnk she shud wrk wid him..

Armaan finally got sucsess..bt Muskaan..dusnt trust him..feel sad 4 Armaan..i think Armaan was ryt if sum1 dusnt lyk u ..u cant chng 4 her..n RM are a sweet couple anyway..

Ridz agreed 2 meet Atul..bt i'm sure she wont lyk him..n is she gonna marry him..omg..no i hope AR meet soon..!

Srry 4 d shrt comment

Thnx 4 d PM

Update soon

-Aish