FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 16

awww...............Prem felt sharam I think for the first time................I wonder how he will feel about it...............would he be happy...............sad...............or angry about the new feeling.........I wonder.....hmmmmm..........................cool I suppose he will now try to change himeslef for Heer.............can't wait to see Heer ignoring his advances😆😆😆..................it would be like fireworks...............once again loved your update............👏👏👏

lovely update.
prem is totally a spoil brat ,but heer is very sweet.
cont.soon.
tc.

Loved thee updatee.........fab !!......do continue soon !!

wow....prem is the ultimate bad boy isnt he?....lol....but atleast he feels a little ashamed for being drunk in front of heer....cant wait to read how he'll start woohing her....*wink*

lovelyyy ... !! clap* clap*

hi

Finally caught up with your amazing FF :D it's going great so far; I love the story! Keep on goingggggg.

See I'm not worried about commenting first this time...because ha ha ha...I already got to read ths update before EVERYONE ELSE! 😃

(can you tell how happy that made me? 😛)

Anyways....I loved the beginning with Prem getting so distracted by Heer while he was "eating" I wrote that in quotations cus he actually wasn't eating! 😆

Although reading about THAT girl made me very......*shudders* I don't have words to describe how that made me feel, we'll leave it at that!😛

Ahhhh idiot! *shakes head* you never NEVER go in front of a girl drunk, although in this case I'm happy cus he will realize that he's doing something wrong.....or oooh actually I'm glad he went in front of her drunk because then at least she knows about his bad habits! 😊

Continue soon, I'm dying for that jealousy angle! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Hai Zahra,

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

i guess i m the third 1 to comment

hey amazing gr888 update...................prem is totally a spoil brat , need women fr every night🥺😡 but heer is very sweet.................but can u just make ur update l'll bit longer................i knw tht u hv othr wrks too but if possible thn try too do tht

hey me hvng 1 doubt bout the teaser u hv gvn, it ws about prem-heer naa................😕

aqsa