FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 16

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Posted: 16 years ago
awww...............Prem felt sharam I think for the first time................I wonder how he will feel about it...............would he be happy...............sad...............or angry about the new feeling.........I wonder.....hmmmmm..........................cool I suppose he will now try to change himeslef for Heer.............can't wait to see Heer ignoring his advances😆😆😆..................it would be like fireworks...............once again loved your update............👏👏👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovely update.
prem is totally a spoil brat ,but heer is very sweet.
cont.soon.
tc.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Loved thee updatee.........fab !!......do continue soon !!

Alpha.
xx.
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow....prem is the ultimate bad boy isnt he?....lol....but atleast he feels a little ashamed for being drunk in front of heer....cant wait to read how he'll start woohing her....*wink*
thanx for the pm....i started grinning like a mad woman when i read u updated...lol
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Posted: 16 years ago
lovelyyy ... !! clap* clap*
good job !!
continue soon ...!!
plz can u update the nxt part a little longer.. ! 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi
it was beautiful, i just loved it
thx update soon😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
Finally caught up with your amazing FF :D it's going great so far; I love the story! Keep on goingggggg.
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Posted: 16 years ago
See I'm not worried about commenting first this time...because ha ha ha...I already got to read ths update before EVERYONE ELSE! 😃

(can you tell how happy that made me? 😛)

Anyways....I loved the beginning with Prem getting so distracted by Heer while he was "eating" I wrote that in quotations cus he actually wasn't eating! 😆

Although reading about THAT girl made me very......*shudders* I don't have words to describe how that made me feel, we'll leave it at that!😛

Ahhhh idiot! *shakes head* you never NEVER go in front of a girl drunk, although in this case I'm happy cus he will realize that he's doing something wrong.....or oooh actually I'm glad he went in front of her drunk because then at least she knows about his bad habits! 😊

Continue soon, I'm dying for that jealousy angle! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hai Zahra,
Once again thanx a lot for ur PM.
How sweet is that initial part where Prem forgot everything around him immersed in Heer's thoughts & even abt his food.😆
Party at the Guptas - Well, well, why do I feel so eager to read abt it?Why do I get a feeling something's gonna definitely brew between this lead couple then - not anything major but definitely something small - a spark to ignite a fire within them???😉😉 Bcos already someone's feeling all nervous abt her attending the party & that too none other than the cool headed,flirtious,Prem Juneja!
Mallika???😡So, Prem's gone to her to take his mind off Heer?
That kitchen scene was very cute. Someone's feeling ashamed to have come up home in such a state.Well, it would be nice to see if he's changing himself for her.
Once more, a wonderful update.
Waititng for the next update.
Vrinda
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: eternal.beauty

i guess i m the third 1 to comment

hey amazing gr888 update...................prem is totally a spoil brat , need women fr every night🥺😡 but heer is very sweet.................but can u just make ur update l'll bit longer................i knw tht u hv othr wrks too but if possible thn try too do tht
hey me hvng 1 doubt bout the teaser u hv gvn, it ws about prem-heer naa................😕
aqsa

Hello Aqsa!! Thank you!! Yep he is a bit spoilt isn't he- used to getting what he wants! The next update is definantly longer, I didn't have time that is why I made it shorter! And yes the teaser was about Prem and Heer! Love Zahra xx

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