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Posted: 16 years ago
sorry.......for late reply.but its fav.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Prags..awesome yaar..
Loved it...so sam is planning to bunk the class...good...
superb update
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Posted: 16 years ago
sayani and pragya.....awesome updates yaar
amazing, wonderful
loved them.....
thanks for the PM
continue soon......
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sajan_forever

sorry.......for late reply.but its fav.

its ok thnx
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome updates ppl.........continue soon........m waiting....
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Posted: 16 years ago
thnx dhrishti anjali and khushi
will upadte soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

hey my next part here it goes
samrat and gunjan go to sam's place
sam: tum yahan rukko tab tak main ready hokar aata hoon
gun: theek hai tab tak main naashta banati hoon tumhe bhook lagi hogi
samrat moves closer to her and says"wah chashmish meri kaafi fikar hoti hai tumhe"
gun: tumhari fikar nhi karungi toh kiski karungi?
sam:tum fikar kar hi nahi sakti
gun: kyun?
sam: main karne hi nahi dunga
gun: or woh kaise
sam: tumhe hamesha apne paas rakhke
gunjan blushes
gun: acha baba ab jao warna college ke liye late ho gayege
sam: college jayega kaun?
gun: hum
sam:pagal ho kya ? itna acha din main waste nahi kar sakta aaj main college bunk karne ke mood main hoon
gun: par
sam: par war kuch nahi main abhi ready hoke aaya
sam leaves
gunjan makes gajar ka halwa
sam gets ready and cums down
sam: toh kya banaya hia tumne
gun: gajar ka halwa
sam: wow toh wait kiska kar rahi hoon chalo khate hai
they sit to eat
sam loves the dish
sam: wow chashmish mujhe nahi pata tha tum itna acha khaana bantai hoon
gun: ab pata chal gaya
sam: ha
gun: samrat
sam: ha
gun: mujhe college jana hai pls
sam : theek hai jao jo karna hai karo mujhse baat mat karo
gun: acha baba sorry main college nahi jaungi. pls mujhse naraz may ho
sam: thats like my chashmish
gun:par yaahan hum karenge kya?
sam: kuch bhi
gun: kuch bhi kya samrat
gunjan is standing and samrat cums closer so gunjan moves back
gun: samrat
sam: chashmish
gunjan points towards the wall scared samrat waha cockroach
samrat turns
gun: nahi hai and she runs samrat als oruns after her
sam: acvha toh mujhse hi hoshyaari
they run run and go to sams room
where gunjan falls and gets hurt
sam: sambhal ke
gun: ahh
sam: kya hua zor se laga kya (going 2wards her)
gun: samrat bahut dard ho raha hai
gunjan was on the floor
sam: kuch nhai hua main abhi theek kar dunga rukkko
gunjan tries to get up but cant
so sam picks her up

gun: samrat main chal lungi

sam: gunjan chill

he makes her lye on the bed and then gets pain spray and puts it on her leg where she got hurt

gun: thnx samrat

sam: kisleye ?

gun: sab ke liye

sam: yah mere pyaar hai chashmish

and they smile

sam: acha gunjan tumhe shopping zyada pasand hai ya movie

gun: kyun ?

sam: ab bolo gi

gun: hmmm…………….. movie

sam: theek hia ready ho jaana hum movie ke liye jaa rahe hai

gun: kya ?

sam: tum hamesha shocking mode main kyun pooc jaati hoon chashmish as if main pata nahi kya kar raha hoon

gun: acha theek hai tum jao main ready hoti hoon

sam: kyun main yahan nahi reh sakta

gunjan's eyes widen

gun: samrat

sam: maazak kar raha tha jaa raha hoon

gun: par mere paas toh aur koi dress nahi hai

sam: aisa ho nahi sakta

he takes put a box and there is a black salwar in it

sam: kaisa laga ?

gun: bahut acha

sam: toh pehn loo mai abhi aaya

gunjan blushed

she changed and came down samrat was just starring at her

gun: aise kya dekh rahe hoo ?

sam: yahi ki meri chasmish kitni sundar dekhti hai

gun:toh dekhungi naa tmhri choice ki dress jo pehni hoon

sam: wah chashmish aur romantic

gun: tumse hi sekha hai

they laugh

gun: waise hum kaunsi movie jayenge

sam: woh ek surprise hai

gun: surprise

sam: surprise ke naam se itna surprise hone ki zarurat nahi hai

gunjan blushed

thay go but not to a movie hall

a movie without a movie hall

they gone to a place where no one was there

sam covers gunjans eyes

gun: smart plss kholo

sam: pehle destination aane do uske baad khud khol dunaga

sam opens gunjans eyes

and gunjan sees a open park

where there is this bid projector

and a small bed (I am inspired from dostana )

gun: samrat yeh sab kya hai/

sam: main agare movie hall le jaata toh hum akele nahi time spend kar pate so yeh sab sirf tumhare liye

gun: samrat tum kabhi nahi sudhroge

sam: tumhare hote huye toh kabhi nahi

kk I think this is too long so ppl pls cont

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Posted: 16 years ago
wow pragz
awsum update
loved it
thanx 4 d pm and waiting 4 d next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
it was...........

BRILLIANT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SUPERB!!!!!!!absolutely superb....... I loved d idea of d projector and bed......yea yea i kno dat u took it from dostana..........I loved it der too......... a few things made me smile rather a grin........like were sammy says "chashmish aur romantic" to which she answer " tum hi se seekha hai" and den d 1 in were sammy is dis close to gunji and she says " wahan cockroach and wen he turns around shes like nahi hai.......hmmmmmmmm so ur very naughty and humorous haan...............I like such ppl.............
Love Adya.......
Posted: 16 years ago
hey pragya nice stor dear!! i read it in all 1 go!
loved it really cont soooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnn

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