LOVE FOREVER-FF PART27..PAGE141 *PM LATER* - Page 41

Originally posted by: bubblygurl

Awesome update ruchiji!!!! ....you're amazing..!! keep it up..!

Originally posted by: shrishti gupta

Lovely update!

Originally posted by: thejazzgal.s

😊😊😊wow....ruchi kamaal ka update tha yaar...........gunjan aise kaam bhi kar sakti hai..hmmmmmmmmmm...dikhne main bholi bhali seedhi saadhi ........nupur looking fab.......aur nxt updt main mayank ke compliments bhi de do yaar...woh bahut tadap rahi hai.....👏

aur aur aurrrrrrrrr...nxt part jaldi jaldi update kar do yaarr......zyada intezaar mat karao yarrr......loved it..muuahhh!!

Originally posted by: bharathi aram

awesome yaaar!!!!loved it...update mre~!

Originally posted by: debby

Aha.. your update too was as fresh as the spring flower I am sure Nupur looked like.. 😊
But it was a bit short na? Make it longer next time.. I just started reading and it got over.. that says a lot for how interesting this part was. Continue asap Ruchi! 🤗

awesome ruchi {if its ur name} i loved ur part do continue soon will be waitingggggggg!😊

its okay!!!better late,than never right???btw,great part!!!do cont. soon!

Ruchi I am new here so I read ur FF ( from start ) today .....


I liked it 👏

nice to see Mayank on the hot seat ....

I liked seeing Mayank as a Jealous guy
here are some of my fav dialogues ...

guy; dekhne ke saath saath sunta bhi nahin kya

nupur; mujhe laaga tha ki yahaan sirf students ajeeb hai par yahaan par tu principal he mentally upset hai

mayank;see the time and talk to me , and if you dont have it i can show you.

nupur; tum kisi ko samjha bhi sakte ho? waise bhi tumse samjhoge toh jo aata woh bhi bhool jaounge

mayank;aaj sooraj kahan se nikla hai?

nupur; sarcastically tumhare bahut yaad aa rahi thi toh soch tumse mil loon

nupur; kyun aaj kal gents first ka fashion hai

nupur ; by god mayank..yeh frame mein laagne ke sooch rahe ho...yeh khaane ke liye hai

mayank; aapko maaza aaya aur mera dimaag khali ho gaye

wonderful; scene :-

mayank bends a bit and lifts her up in his strong arms.......he carries her to her room

nupur closed her eyes in mayank's arm as she was not over with nausea

but mayank's case was totally different.......he was continously gazingat nupur's calm and serene face

I also liked the scene where Samrat tells Mayank about Nupur taking care of Gunjan after their mother died . (that was amazingly written )

It was touching where Nupur say she is missing her mother and Mayank hugged her .

Originally posted by: hemasharma36

awesome ruchi {if its ur name} i loved ur part do continue soon will be waitingggggggg!😊