*AR*Tere Liye Meri Sansen*NEW* Part-17, Page-90* - Page 28

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Posted: 17 years ago
hey mona....
sorry 4 late reply...my pc is not working....i will catch up soon...pls do continue to pm me when u update...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Am so sorry for the late comment Mona Sis. but u knw my papers r going on so am busy as well.
But oh well, loved the part. Really enjoyed each and every moment.
And yaaaaayyyy!! AR confession...Loved it.
Superb going.
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Posted: 17 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.................... thats all i have to say... brill........ lv ya rav .xxx
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Posted: 17 years ago
SO SORRY..i know i m relly bad 4 not updating...i feel so bad to keep u all waiting..but dont worry march 10 is coming...stay in touch....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Hey Guys...My Exam are over so I decided to update.....

Part- 7

Precape: Ar going shoping together on ridz's request…as she have a party to attend tonight….AR shares some cute moment in the car…..

As they reach the mall armaan got out of the car and being a gental man he opend the door for ridz….ridz was surprised by his action but didn't said anything..

Armaan: ridz tum jaao..main park kar ke aata hun….

Ridz: ok

With that said ridz made her way toward the mall..and armaan went to look for parking….he found a parking easily …after parking he made his way toward the mall….as he went inside he was lost…..there were lots of people and he couldn't spot ridz….so he decided to call her….he dieled her number….

Armaan: hello…ridz…where are u??i cant see u in this crowd….

Ridz: laughed to her self…armaan come up to the second floor….

Armaan: and where is that at..???ridz u should have waited for me…I don't come shoping to such places…so now u need yo guid me around the mall…

Ridz: ok…do u see any reception around u…

Armaan: ya..so what do u want me to ask them??

Ridz: ask them where is the elevator??

Armaan did as he was told…he made his way toward the lady….

Armaan: excuse me???

The lady turn around…she was very young…with blue eyes….and hair down….and armaan being armaan….

Armaan: hi sexy…

Ridz was shocked by his such behaviour…..she thought how dare he say that??idiot….she didn't know why she was feeling so unsecured when armaan talks nicely to other girl…

Armaan: your eyes are really pretty….may I know ur name beautiful???

Lady: hi…handsome…u ur self has very sexy eyes….

Armaan: thank u….

Lady…my name is maria…and what's ur's sexy…..

Armaan: armaan….and for u ammy….he said with his sexy smile…

Ridz coudnt take it anymore…she thought…isne itni sweetly to kbahi baat nahi ki mujse…..or uss bhootni se……wait abhi dikhati hun use….she disconnected the phone….and ran downstair..with her angry eyes she spoted armaan leaning closer to maria….

Ridz(thinking): look at the way he is leaning…seems like he is about to kiss her….u better no mr.armaan malik…..with that she walked toward him angry….she reached toward armaan and stand there looking at them…..

Ridz: armaan…??she said patting him on his shoulder…

Armaan: said without looking…what…cant u see I m talking here???in harsh voice…

Ridz: got really pissed….and said…armaan…..what u think u r doing…

Armaan: cant u see..im talking are u blind or something..now get lost…

for the first time felt like crying by someone's harsh comment…..ridz being the girl who would slap a guy across his face if he talk to her like that…she didn't know what was wrong with her…she was confused at her self..that why was she so hurt by him harsh talk….with ters in her eyes….she ran out of the mall without even saying anything….

Armaan not noticing who he just told to get lost…got back to maria..who was looking at the mall's exit door…..

Armaan: what's up sexy???

Mariam: ammy I think that was not nice..that madam was crying….

Then it struck him that it was a girl…his thought went straight to ridhimaa..

Armaan: how did she looked like???

Mariam: she had a very preety dress on..and she had green eyes….

Armaan understood who she was taking about….cursing him self..he ran out of the mall himself..

Armaan(thinking): OMG…ye main ne kya kardiya….how did I just say that to her..and she was crying…idiot..

Armaan ran toward the parking lot…thinking she might be there….he ran toward his car but found no clue of her…

Recape: what would happned now??will they realise the new feeling they have for each other..??

Sorry for late update…I know the update is smaal…but I didn't wanted to let u all waiting..my exams are over….but I m scared for the results…hope I pass….well hope u all like the update….leave ur comment..and suggestiong…the promo will be coming up in other updates but not this one….Thank u all for reading my FF…

❤️MONA

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Posted: 17 years ago
Great part Mona .. sweety .. cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Awesome promo Mona... hope this is not a dream... continue soon... eagerly waiting for the next part...

hey sorry for late reply....actully i had exams so couldnt come to IF....well u will find that out soon....
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Mira..

Updated my comment on page 32! Sorry again for the late comment, my throats hurting soo badly and my body is aching =( But good luck again for your exams!

no worry hun..checked ur comment on page 32.....i hope u feel ok soon...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: DMG4EVER

Great part Mona .. sweety .. cont soon

thankc hun...glad u liked it..i know it was a small update but sorry i m a lil buy still...thankc...
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: arvanu

hey mona,

awesome promo,dear!!!it was the most beautiful and magical confession i have ever read in any FF.........cant wait to read the update.........do continue soon and thanks for the pm!!!!!!
-surbhi😊

hey surbhi....thankc 4 ur comment...ur welcome....i have update the 7th part....hope to seeur comment soon....
❤️MONA

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